>>77053615It's fine compositionally, kind of reminds me of Glen Keane(renaissance Disney) with the face somewhat. You don't seem to have full mastery of the craft but you don't need to be now, you seem to have a grasp on how to illustrate things in a basic manner.
I think where you struggle maybe is the concept itself. If she's in a post-apocalyptic fantasy/sci-fi world wouldn't some of that be evident in her design? I'm not saying she obviously needs to wear tech or anything since she seems to be a traditionalist, but it's a bit generic as is currently. She needs some sort of more defining characteristic. You seem to like scars on her so why not play that up? You could have more scars on her torso or maybe some torn up clothes. A unique hairstyle would also help maybe.
Like, for example
>>77015378 is not very well made (sorry to that dude), but from the little things in their messy design and what they say about the character, there's elements of being iconic or unique. It's a Frankenstein girl but with it's own elements mixed in to make it stand out.
Your work is very much well rendered so far, you just need to consider your theme a bit more in your design. This could be as simple as adding some graphics to the cloth or even as drastic as changing her head shape. I think it's an idea with potential, I get Samurai Jack vibes from the premise. As for a name, "Yamato" is typically a good one for the strength of the Japanese spirit, that could work as a name.
