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Anonymous Tue 20 Oct 2015 22:22:26 No.239359 View Reply Report Delete

Need Critique. Working on this for school I'm stuck and I don't know what to improve on. I don't know what to do with all of the blank space.

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Anonymous Tue 20 Oct 2015 22:31:43 No.239360 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>239363

Doesn't look enticing or appetizing. Looks like there should be a toothbrush or a router there instead of fruit. Start with warmer colors.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 20 Oct 2015 22:44:30 No.239361 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>239363

>>239359
I would change the font and make that thick line much thinner. Perhaps you can also move the text to the middle. The bokeh in the background doesn't look entirely good, perhaps if you use warmer colors like that anon suggested it will improve the appearance.

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Anonymous Tue 20 Oct 2015 22:59:04 No.239363 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>239366 >>239460 >>239538

>>239360
>>239361

Made the colors warmer. Removed bokeh. And changed the font to a serif to give a more natural organic look.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 20 Oct 2015 23:09:13 No.239366 Report Delete

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>>239363
the warmer colour definitely helps and the new font definitely looks better

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Anonymous Tue 20 Oct 2015 23:42:54 No.239369 Report Delete

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Anyone into wheat? Maybe incorporated into the logo somewhere.

Are the kiwis, apple? Part of the same layer? Size seems a little disproportionate to me.

Kind of an odd combo too, do they even grow in the same areas?

The word harvest makes me think more of crops/grains/vegetables, but fruits, not as much..

Nice improvements so far tho.

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 20 Oct 2015 23:46:42 No.239370 Report Delete

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>>239359
Add some old granny in the bottom right emaciated begging for our handouts/support

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Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 00:27:47 No.239372 Report Delete

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>>239370

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Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 13:14:40 No.239449 Report Delete

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Make the margins between the edge and fruit the same as the text and the edge on the sides. Also text is harder to read while centered.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 14:35:35 No.239460 Report Delete

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>>239363
much better IMO, maybe try with a black font?

also, why "supporting" rather than "support"? I'm no editor/copywriter, but "support" seems more natural to me.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 20:47:20 No.239538 Report Delete

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>>239363
Doesn't it bother anyone that the baseline is capitalized?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 07:03:37 No.239624 Report Delete

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>>239538
You're not the only one, I promise.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 20:45:57 No.239739 Report Delete

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>>239460
>also, why "supporting" rather than "support"? I'm no editor/copywriter, but "support" seems more natural to me.

Because it's referring to the market. "Support" would be correct if OP wanted to address those who are reading.

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