The sharp, eroded, rugged ends of the font look great as is, but now that you've added a black "shadow", the ends get rounded and look mushy.
If I were to change it, I'd draw the "shadows" by hand with similar rugged brushes with black.Well, anything but those rounded strokes.
I'd change the font and color for the "FOR A" text. Blue, maybe? Or white.
Finally, I'd add a stripe/rad brush stroke behind the "NUKLEAR SILVER"
>>239436this too
