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Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 17:41:08 No.2257664 View Reply Report Delete

What should I do to improve upon this?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 17:47:48 No.2257669 Report Delete

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Make the fill actually meet the edge of the line so there is no white in between the two.

Get some taste in gems Garnet>all

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 17:51:41 No.2257678 Report Delete

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1. Learn to draw better.

2. Learn to paint better.

3. Repeat one and two over and over for several years.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 18:12:05 No.2257702 Report Delete

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Don't draw defective gem.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 18:18:44 No.2257709 Report Delete

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>>2257664
You lines could be a bit better quite a few noticeable messups

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 18:46:17 No.2257731 Report Delete

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erase it.

draw anything else.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 18:46:18 No.2257732 Report Delete

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>>2257664
Don't trace.

Don't trace from shitty cartoons.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 19:50:32 No.2257795 Report Delete

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Show her tits, that's what anon says... And while at it, turn her hand outwards to improve readability and smooth the eye for more sensuality.

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