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Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 08:28:10 No.2258276 View Reply Report Delete

Hello. Today I made this sketch and I want to start coloring it soon. But before that I'd like some feedback. I think her right arm is slightly strange and I cant seem to figure out why. How can I improve it? Anything else?
Thanks

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 09:02:07 No.2258285 Report Delete

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Perhaps if I make it tilt back a bit more? Making the dagger pointing upwards?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 09:09:07 No.2258287 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>2258293 >>2258295

>>2258276
What is it suppost to be?
"Her" face looks horrible and does not relent to the body. Plus the hands are badly drawn.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 09:17:03 No.2258293 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>2258304

>>2258287
She's a witch elf from the warhammer unniverse. She is supposed to be beautiful, but still have a sinister elvish look.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 09:18:58 No.2258295 Report Delete

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>>2258287
And perhaps you could say something a little more speciffict than: ''Her hands look horrible''. How could I improve them? I'd appreciate if you'd show me.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 09:33:09 No.2258304 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>2258306

>>2258293
Make her facial features less angular and pointy while keeping the V shape so the face. Girls generally look better the less detail they have on them.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 09:39:11 No.2258306 Report Delete

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>>2258304
Will do. Keep tuned for update

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 09:47:16 No.2258312 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>2258323 >>2259572

>>2258276
Sycra?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 09:56:15 No.2258321 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>2258335

How's this?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 10:01:53 No.2258323 Report Delete

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>>2258312
Never heard of her before

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 10:20:45 No.2258334 Report Delete

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Try one without 6 trillion lines

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 10:22:12 No.2258335 Report Delete

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>>2258321
>that jaw
when will they learn?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 10:24:35 No.2258337 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>2258395

Did I figure it out?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 11:18:11 No.2258373 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>2258375 >>2258381

Here's an update if someone's still lurking. Let me know if you want to keep getting updates. If not, just let the thread die

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 11:23:48 No.2258375 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>2258376

>>2258373
Ok, the legs/body os good. But please redo the face and the hands. Especially the face. The jaw line is fuckin horre dous. Just erase the whole head and do it again. Position the dagger so it doesnt overlapse with the arm, so creating a nicer silhouette.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 11:25:16 No.2258376 Report Delete

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>>2258375
is* horrendous*
God my typing today

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 11:35:54 No.2258381 Report Delete

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>>2258373
Face is atrociously asymmetrical

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 12:14:43 No.2258394 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>2258397 >>2258457

Here's an update. I like her face though

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 12:24:42 No.2258395 Report Delete

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>>2258337
the right shoulder is too far away from the rest of the body, it's like the whole limb doesnt belong to it, so start with that, ale the angle of the whole right arm is a bit of and should be a bit more behind the body... if you understand

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 12:27:18 No.2258397 Report Delete

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>>2258394
Make the chin sharper but not sycra sharp and fix that right arm
its the left one from your view

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 12:34:33 No.2258404 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>2258423

After stripping the line art layer. Needs a bit more contralst in ceratin areas, no?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 12:36:40 No.2258405 Report Delete

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I'm also very unsure on exactly how to fix her arm. Should I make her elbow slightly bigger, making it pop forward a bit? Or perhaps make it slightly bigger towards the hand? And thanks for the feedback so far, I really appreciate it

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 12:51:42 No.2258421 Report Delete

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Also, should i lift her a bit higher in the picture, and draw a bit more of her legs? Or is it fine that her head is more towards the center?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 12:55:31 No.2258423 Report Delete

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>>2258404
Merge everything to one layer, it will help you immensely when painting.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 13:31:36 No.2258457 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>2258468

>>2258394
>I like her face though
this is why you suck.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 13:39:28 No.2258468 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>2258481

>>2258457
please elaborate. Is it because I made a error? Or because she is not cute enough? thanks

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 13:49:40 No.2258481 Report Delete

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>>2258468
well I made ''a'' error with my spelling

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 15:15:49 No.2258549 Report Delete

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Final update for today. Thanks a lot for the critique and pointers! Goodnight

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2015 15:54:56 No.2259569 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>2259585 >>2260567

Her left wrist is bent to far
Physically it gets harder to keep a tight grip on something with your wrist bent that far inward

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2015 15:58:04 No.2259572 Report Delete

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>>2258312
First thing I thought.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2015 16:13:58 No.2259585 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>2260567

>>2259569
This

Also it would make it more dynamic if the left hand's blade was pointing more towards the edge.

In that pose right there, it makes no sense for her to hold the daggers almost aligned with the viewer. Doesn't look like she's close enough to get an attack in, and her facial expression doesn't even show she's attacking at all, therefore, that pose right there is disconnected with the scene it represents.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 00:15:20 No.2259961 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>2260567

The hand with the knife looks too much like a rectangle with fingers too big, and the one on the right is totally twisted up, you'll need to fix the wrist and hand on that one.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 18:06:57 No.2260567 Report Delete

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>>2259569
Excellent point. Will fix it

>>2259585
>>2259961
Got it.

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