>>2262624It's messy but it is actually an attractive female face which isn't always an easy thing for people to achieve. And its not fucking anime horseshit so, +1 interwebs points.
Division between chin and neck is too harsh. Clavicle is too harsh and looks like a line. Match up eye level and center nose and lips. Flip canvas horizontal to see how off things are. Be more decisive with your shadow shapes both in tone and in form.