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Uh, work like this needs to be super clean to be effective, and all of this is sloppy, I would work a lot on your inking techniques and developing a surgen's hand. Also I would recommend putting more thought into gesture and composition. Try and capture some emotion and movement. Cause I can't read either in anything you posted. I Recommend finding life that fits what you are going for, like maybe jellyfish, spend tons of time drawing them. Then use that information to better imply movement in your shapes.
