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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 02:04:09 No.2265337 View Reply Report Delete

Quoted By: >>2265418 >>2265717 >>2266347

Its not done but could I get a critique on what I have so far?

Im just slightly unsure of its quality and i would love some outside insight

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 03:40:20 No.2265418 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>2265427 >>2265435

>>2265337
Well, there is some freaky tiling going on with the textures.

The volumes are nice, and the colours and values seem realisitc.

The snow placement is really random right now. Look at some mountains and figure how how snow would really settle/ a more interesting way of showing that

Remember to introduce some warms to foreground, don't leave it all cool.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 03:46:48 No.2265427 Report Delete

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>>2265418
Thank you! yeah its a custom brush so i dont really know how to get rid of the tiling shit

Anonymous

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 04:04:43 No.2265435 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>2265453

>>2265418
i edited it a bit for the weird texture how does it look fixed?

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 04:34:55 No.2265453 Report Delete

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>>2265435
the tiling is still visible on the snowy areas on the right. try to fix it up a bit more

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 11:03:56 No.2265717 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>2265723

>>2265337
honestly I don't mind the tiling, it just changes the way i view the work.

that said, I'm not sure what you'll have in the foreground but if this is going to be sky+mountains+trees+lake it's just going to be Bad Digital Bob Ross. nothing wrong with learning/doing landscapes, but you can still make them your own.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 11:12:09 No.2265723 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>2265792

>>2265717
okay so two things after looking at it some more.
1.) if it is going to be a landscape maybe do 2 versions, 1 with and 1 without the tiling. i dunno maybe i'm weird but i dig the tiling.

2.) your shadows are a bit inconsistent, most noticeably on the far right mountain. but all of the shadows look sort of like you said "oh i need a shadow here" and just sort of threw it in.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 12:53:24 No.2265792 Report Delete

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>>2265723
>08:12:09

Thank you so much for the replies and stuff. Yeah i actually noticed the bob ross resemblance thats why the image has bob in the name haha. But yeah the shadows ill fix up. The forground is actually gonna be sci-fi with either a crashed x-wing in the brush or a spaceship docking station. So thats what im gonna do tonight on it

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 19:25:33 No.2266347 Report Delete

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Its so fucking bad, just fucking end your life
>>2265337

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 19:26:39 No.2266349 Report Delete

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>>2266347
hey fuk u

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