>>7277941It's pretty full of them tbh.
>Sound of footsteps wereUse was instead of were because "Sound" is the subject
>My thoughts wasThoughts is plural, so you gotta use were.
Those are the only two grammar errors I saw. A couple of spelling miustakes like "silet", should be "silent", or "thouse" should be "those. And there's a bunch of missing punctuation. Like there should be an apostrophe on footsteps here: " the echoing repetitive footsteps sound getting louder", and in "couldnt". Also, a bunch of missing commas in your adjectives, and some of your descriptions don't really make sense. I don't know what any of this means:
Not trying to be a dick or nothing, just proofreading it.
