>>7278697this actually has very nice prosody. the last clause ties it up metrically in a way so subtle that makes the rhyme seem almost ironic, if not accidental, which latter virtuality of affect is a remarkable feat considering the overbearing awareness of the author with which contemporary readership approaches fiction—the author is so viscerally present in this text and yet we are still in doubt as to if he whether or not he intended to rhyme rain and hurricane in a work of prose. i applaud john green for this passage.