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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 19:57:04 No.7278484 View Reply Report Delete

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I've got this idea for a fantasy book in my head that i wanna share with someone. Would any of you guys care to listen.

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 19:59:07 No.7278494 Report Delete

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>wanting to discuss plot

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 19:59:28 No.7278497 Report Delete

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>Fantasy
No

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:02:28 No.7278508 Report Delete

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>>7278484
this is a public forum, you dont have to ask fucking permission just do it

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:03:31 No.7278513 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>7278582 >>7278684 >>7278707

I dont have a real storyline in my head. But the basic premise is about 3 very distinct races of beings. One of the three is a race of red skinned, horned humanoids that i loosely base off of Germanic cultures. The others arent as well developed in my mind yet. Im also gonna have ghosts and demons play a role in this. And the gods of this world are going to be more akin to celebritys than deities.

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:07:37 No.7278529 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>7278582 >>7278644 >>7278661

The races all have a patron goddess to go along with them and the goddess's all interact with they're races on a regular basis. Some of them even take concubines.

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:09:45 No.7278538 Report Delete

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I also want to implement a anime esque super power like Hamon or Nen that some characters will be able to use.

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:10:30 No.7278544 Report Delete

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Stop tarnishing Morrowind with your shit ideas

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:13:22 No.7278560 Report Delete

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sounds terrible tbqhwy

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:18:13 No.7278582 Report Delete

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>>7278513
>>7278529
>>7278538

Sounds like something I would come up with in math class during middle school. Try harder because stories like this end up failing miserably and are generally cringe worthy when it comes to plot and character design.

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:24:38 No.7278617 Report Delete

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How old are you OP?

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:29:53 No.7278644 Report Delete

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>>7278529
>>7278538
Work on your grammar, read more, then write your story. Read lots of fantasy and out-of-genre lit and you'll be better able to come up with something good.

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:34:39 No.7278661 Report Delete

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>>7278529
Why would different races share the same pantheon?
This always confuses me in high fantasy.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:41:49 No.7278684 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>7278693 >>7278700 >>7278705 >>7278795 >>7278902

>>7278513
suggestions for the other two races:

Dark skinned humanoid beings of low intelligence but legendary strenght. their language is mangled and brutish, they form some sort of thuggish underclass.

A scheming race of rat-like creatures characterised by their boundless greed and their proclivity to deceive. They are bankers and control the other races behind the curtains.

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:45:15 No.7278692 Report Delete

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>>7278661
Because the gods are real.
The one good thing about TES is the highly developed mythology, real Campbell "Masks of God" type stuff.

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:45:24 No.7278693 Report Delete

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>>7278684
lol

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:46:49 No.7278700 Report Delete

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>>7278684

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:48:46 No.7278705 Report Delete

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This sounds kinda like a shitty Warhammer-esque premise
>>7278684
kek

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Tallis !!y+12CeFwYOo Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:49:57 No.7278707 Report Delete

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>>7278513
You were told to fuck off.

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 21:16:20 No.7278795 Report Delete

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>>7278684
Slow down there fraulein

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 21:19:29 No.7278804 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>7278816

How is this an idea for a story?

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 21:24:40 No.7278816 Report Delete

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>>7278804
Nerds often confuse story for setting.

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 21:44:16 No.7278902 Report Delete

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>>7278684
holy shit fucking lol'd

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