>>25262014let me tell you exactly why my story is poorly written, although you probably already realized this
no real story direction
completely changed what the story kinda started out as
Anon's personality is everywhere, even though that's technically possible in real life, but not really believable
most of the jokes are forced
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every post, something different happens, meaning the pacing is too fast
the overall vocabulary is lacking, thus repeating words become a common thing
a lot of the stuff is cringy, but the reason because its silly, nutty, a bit random, and just straight up stupid at times. It can lead to a negative experience, but I believe this part is a bit subjective
there, I pointed out most, if not all, of the major problems with my story. Its not hard to point them out either.
If your intention was to make me feel bad and stop writing, you're not doing a very good job. I'm still going to have fun and write just for kicks.
Don't act dumb
