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Vampire/Monster Thread #8

Anonymous Tue 27 Oct 2015 11:25:31 No.25239677 View Reply Report Delete

Thread for all your vampire or otherwise "classic" monster needs. Originally intended for humans/Equestria Girls but all blood sucking and spooking is allowed.

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You let the previous one die overnight, you faggots.

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 23:26:47 No.25257598 Report Delete

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Remember kids, if dress horse says love me.

YOU SAY YES.

twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law

twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law Wed 28 Oct 2015 23:36:42 No.25257718 Report Delete

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>>25257498
>It was your standard, humble go-to joke. It was never supposed to be an actual relevant response.
>Anyway, the truth was it went better than alright.
>It’s just guesswork on your part, but you doubt many first dates end with watching the sun come up.
>You’re hoping Nightmare Night was all your imagination, that you will knock on Fluttershy’s door and she’ll be there, sick as hell, but alive.
>Because…
>You glance over at Rarity again.
>”Almost there, darling,” she says, misreading your look. “It’s just at the end of the block.”
>… you’re starting to like this.
“So, will her parents be there?”
>”I do not believe so,” Rarity answers, before starring off into the sky. “You know, in all the time I have known my friends, I do not believe I have ever met any of their parents.”
>Yeah, you know the feeling. Sometimes, you wonder if you’re living in one of those Chinese cartoons where everyone is in middle school and has their own apartment.
>Still, once you reach the house, you motion for Rarity to knock on the door. If someone is home, they probably know of her, even if she hasn’t met them.
>She doesn’t question it, immediately releasing your arm and skipping ahead two steps to rap daintily, eschewing the doorbell.
>”Too noisy,” you can imagine her saying. “It just lacks that essential human touch.”
>After a minute, Rarity knocks again, slightly harder.
>There still isn’t any response.
“We might as well go, I guess.”

twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law

twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law Thu 29 Oct 2015 00:07:07 No.25258095 Report Delete

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>>25257718
>You both know she won’t be answering the door.
>”But the animals,” Rarity whines softly. “We cannot just –“
>Right.
>You step up beside her and pound the door with you fist.
>Nothing.
>Not even barking.
>Well, you don’t know if she actually has a dog, but you expect to hear something.
>From what you’ve heard, there should be dozens of critters scampering around. At least one of them should react to the noise.
“Well, what now?”
>Maybe there’s a spare key hidden in one of the bushes. If not, maybe you can rely on some good Hollywood staples. You take a step back and look to both sides of the house. The fence is low enough to climb without too much difficulty, and you might get lucky with an unsecured back door. Fluttershy seemed like the kind of trusting soul to leave her… front… door... totally… unlocked.
>”Shall we?” Rarity asks, waving a hand towards the open door.
>Deep down, you knew that would happen as soon as you started looking for a more complicated solution, and so you feel no embarrassment at all as you walk through the doorway.
>The smell immediately hits you, sending you back out the door gagging.
>You had expected something – the usual pet smells – but not this.
>Not the sickly sweet stench of rotting flesh.
“I think we’re too late.”
>You cover your mouth with your arm as you speak, trying to keep the smell out.
>It doesn’t work.
>You can *taste* it.

twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law

twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law Thu 29 Oct 2015 00:29:10 No.25258350 Report Delete

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>>25258095
>”Nonsense, it has not even been two –“
>Rarity’s attempt to enter the house fares no better than yours, leaving her retching as she retreats to the street.
>”Impossible,” she gasps. “Whatever is in there smells like it has been dead for days!”
“Weeks.”
>A little over a month, you suspect.
>With a heavy heart, you walk back into the house.
>You can’t just leave.
>She deserves better than this.

end for tonight
have a decent outline for the overall plot now, though - much like our cast - I doubt most of it will survive to the end unscathed. Still hoping for more responses to >>25244391 to flesh things out.

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twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law Thu 29 Oct 2015 00:34:52 No.25258425 Report Delete

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>>25258350
And pastebin for the new story here:
http://pastebin.com/M3qS4AE6

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 00:39:40 No.25258477 Report Delete

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>>25244391
Horror with a twinge of humor. Think Evil Dead 2.
Canterlot High? PHOTO FIINNIISSSHH because she's determined to catch this crazy shit on her camera, with whats his name as her sidekick. The foal with the camera. (plus nobody ever writes about Photo Finish)
Butterstutter's sire was Scoots who was turned by Spitfire (the latter doesn't have to show up).
Keep it classic supernatural. Werewolves and Igor and so on.
CMC Junior Investigators a GO! Scoots uses them to keep the other super-misfits in line as she'll expose them to the outside world and they'll be obliterated by angry townsfolk
Worst Ending? Fluttershy because they try to bring her back and instead of slightly apologetic vampire they end up with a completely mindless monster (think nosferatu) that just wants to feed and turn everyone

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 01:15:37 No.25258907 Report Delete

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Bump

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 04:24:32 No.25260226 Report Delete

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>>25258907
page 10?

TIME FOR PANIC!

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 06:02:59 No.25260638 Report Delete

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Going to work boop

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 08:28:07 No.25261109 Report Delete

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Boop

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 09:06:17 No.25261230 Report Delete

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>>25260226
At the Disco?
.....I'll just see myself out.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 10:08:18 No.25261530 Report Delete

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>>25261230
Please do.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 11:32:09 No.25261939 Report Delete

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Bump

twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law

twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law Thu 29 Oct 2015 12:53:18 No.25262378 Report Delete

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I think I can accommodate most of the suggestions so far, in one form or another. For example, Photo Finish as head of the Paranormal Photography Club, Trixie as head of the Occult Studies Club, and Sunset as the only one who actually knows a damn thing. Not entirely sure about making the CMCs monsters, but we'll see how that goes. I've already done that once and I'd hate to repeat myself, after all.

Anything else?

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 13:30:09 No.25262532 Report Delete

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>>25239677
NOW THATS WHAT I CALL EDGY

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 14:09:58 No.25262807 Report Delete

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>>25250804
>>25250505
I know this is super late, but I just want you to know that we'd never be separable.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 14:45:53 No.25263097 Report Delete

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City

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 15:19:19 No.25263311 Report Delete

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>>25261230
Carlos, tu perra

mi negro

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 17:05:25 No.25264090 Report Delete

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>Trixie as head of the Occult Studies Club

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 17:33:12 No.25264395 Report Delete

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>>25263311
checking your dub dubs you dirty spic

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 18:32:30 No.25264943 Report Delete

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For Academic Purposes

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 18:45:34 No.25265055 Report Delete

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>>25264090
>DXD in Equestria

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 19:22:48 No.25265416 Report Delete

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Anybody have any monster comedy green they could link?

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 20:41:47 No.25266162 Report Delete

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Marathon

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 21:25:16 No.25266638 Report Delete

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It was a mash.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 22:16:02 No.25267180 Report Delete

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bump

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 22:20:34 No.25267220 Report Delete

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>>25266638
A MONSTAH MASH

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 22:27:42 No.25267270 Report Delete

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>>25266638
>>25267220
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AxcM3nCsglA

twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law

twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law Thu 29 Oct 2015 23:07:47 No.25267691 Report Delete

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>>25258350
>You have a fairly good idea what you will find inside, and it shouldn't be how Fluttershy is remembered.
>"Anon! Wait!"
“I have to do this, Rarity.”
>You don’t want to. In fact, between the stench and your nerves, it’s a wonder you don’t run screaming all the way to your own home, but you can’t. You can’t let anyone find out what Fluttershy did.
>You owe her that much, at least.
>There isn’t much time to spare. The wind does nothing to sweep away the stench; it simply *spreads* it.
>A few of the neighbors are starting to look suspiciously towards the house. One even cuts the motor on his lawnmower and approaches slowly.
>Everyone knows something is wrong.
"There... might be someone inside that needs help!"
>Someone is going to call the police. In fact, one of the onlookers pulling her phone from her purse right now.
>You can't let them find her victim.
>Fluttershy wasn't herself; it wasn't her fault.
>"Don't touch anything!" Rarity calls out as you charge in. "Please!"
>You immediately bash your shin against something thin and wiry.
>"What was that!?"
"Don't know!"
>The house is pitch black. With all of the lights off and curtains pulled tightly shut, the only illumination is the afternoon sun shining through the open doorway.
>It's just barely enough for you to find what's left of the light switch. More of a hole in the wall, really.
>Common sense tells you not to touch the bare wires, and for once you listen.

twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law

twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law Thu 29 Oct 2015 23:31:33 No.25268004 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>25268305 >>25268426

>>25267691
>"Anon!?"
"I CAN'T SEE ANYTHING! THE LIGHTS ARE BUSTED, SO I'M GOING TO TRY FOR A WINDOW!"
>After a few more bruises, you stumble into a wall. You follow it, feeling blindly for a curtain or other hint of a window. It’s only a few feet before you feel cloth.
>You pull at it - nothing. It doesn’t give. Fumbling around the edge, it’s not hard to figure out why.
>Grabbing on with both hands, you heave with all your strength, tearing the curtain free from the wall in a hail of staples, nails, and torn duct tape.
"... the hell...?"
>The tape you knew about, but the rest seems a little excessive just to keep the light out, even for a vampire.
>"ANON!?"
"Found it!"
>The light pours in, revealing shredded furniture and - from the outline - what you assume are cages beneath heavy cloth.
>Her pets.
>That would explain the lack of noise. If she covered the cages, they're probably all sleeping.
>Or does that only work on birds?
>Whatever. It's not important right now.
>You shrug mentally and look around the room. Empty tubes of sunscreen have been thrown haphazardly in one corner and a wide-brimmed hat hangs from a hook by the door. Stains mar the carpet and discarded clothes litter the floor, enough to remind you of your bedroom.
>Aren't girls supposed to be cleaner than this?
>But no body, no sign of the person she killed.
>You have to go further in.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 23:57:13 No.25268305 Report Delete

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>>25268004

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twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law Fri 30 Oct 2015 00:08:55 No.25268426 Report Delete

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>>25268004
>The stench – and the destruction – grow more and more prevalent the deeper you go. Light fixtures have been torn from the ceilings, piles of filthy clothes and sheets cover the floor. The kitchen walls are covered in rotting food – it looks like the entire contents of the refrigerator had been hurled about by a localized tornado.
>You tear down the curtains as you go to give yourself enough light to see, but it slows you down.
>Sirens are wailing in the distance; your time is running out.
>You don’t even know what you’ll do with the body once you find it, but that’s fine. You’ll figure it out then.
>There are only a couple more rooms to search – the first is an immaculate bedroom, clearly untouch for weeks. There’s one window high on the wall, the curtains pulled open and sunlight streaming through.
>Her parents’ room, you assume.
>The last, then, must be Fluttershy’s.
>It would… it would make sense for the body to be there, as much as the idea disgusts and pains you. Considering how you felt when she was feeding on you, though, it’s probably the first place you should have looked.
>You shudder just thinking about what you might find, about what she might have done.
>Slowly, you push open the door and look inside.
>Nothing is as you expected.
>No body, no blood. The bed is made, the clothes are all out of sight – presumably neatly put away.

twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law

twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law Fri 30 Oct 2015 00:39:31 No.25268718 Report Delete

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>>25268426
>To say it’s not as you expected isn’t quite accurate – more like, it’s exactly how you would have expected Fluttershy’s bedroom to look like, not what you were assuming it to be after seeing the rest of the house.
>The only thing that really stands out is a small pink book set on the pillow.
>Her diary.
>What else would it be?
>Hesitantly, you reach for the book.
>You shouldn’t, but all of the answers will be there. You just know it.
>Who turned her into a monster, who she killed… how she actually felt about you… things you need to know.
>Your hand is hovering over the cover for who knows how long. You have to know.
>”Please don’t.”
>FUCK!
>You nearly jump out of your skin as you whirl around.
>”I’d really rather you didn’t read that,” Fluttershy mumbles softly, her eyes avoiding yours. “It’s… personal… you know…?”

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 00:50:15 No.25268798 Report Delete

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>>25268718
FUCKING PLOT TWIST. NIGGA WHAT.

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twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law Fri 30 Oct 2015 01:05:46 No.25268918 Report Delete

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>>25268718
“You’re alive!?”
>You’re so happy, you could almost cry.
>This is impossible, but –
>She shakes her head sadly, and you have the feeling she’s sad for *you*.
>Fluttershy shifts uncomfortably at your silence – her eyes flicker up to meet yours.
>She’s been crying. She still is.
>”Please,” she begs, just like she had begged you to let her die with dignity, “please don’t read it.”
“Of course I won’t.”
>The sirens are cut off suddenly and Fluttershy’s head snaps around to stare at the window.
>You have to get out of here.
>”You have to get out of here,” the girl mumbles, looking back to the floor. “The police will ask you a lot of awkward questions if they find you here.”
>The window is the obvious escape route – and you’re halfway to it when you realize how pointless that would be.
“People saw me come in, so they’ll be asking awkward questions anyway.”
>”But –“
“Anyway, it doesn’t matter. You’re alive!”
>You hug her – and touch nothing.
>”No,” she sobs quietly. “I’m not.”

end for tonight

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 01:17:54 No.25269013 Report Delete

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>>25268918
are you taking lessons from Autistocrat?

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 01:34:57 No.25269157 Report Delete

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>>25268918
You are an absolute dick
Please bring me more

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 03:14:00 No.25269831 Report Delete

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Whole

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 04:28:29 No.25270193 Report Delete

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jump

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Brump

twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law

twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law Fri 30 Oct 2015 09:29:01 No.25271283 Report Delete

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>>25269013
The last story just didn't really have enough tension for these kind of cliffhangers. This one will be different. Besides, cliffhangers promote speculation, and speculation helps the story. if someone's ideas are better than mine, I'll go with those instead

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 10:10:41 No.25271487 Report Delete

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>>25271283
I simultaneously love and hate your cliffhangers, man. Looking forward to another solid ride.

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 11:27:40 No.25271990 Report Delete

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Waiting

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Owl

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 13:57:50 No.25273031 Report Delete

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Winnie the Pooh

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Boop

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 16:54:47 No.25274345 Report Delete

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Played

Insanebow Dash

Insanebow Dash Fri 30 Oct 2015 18:16:45 No.25274926 Report Delete

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>At work
>Finally have inspiration to write
Well fuck me sideways.

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 19:08:11 No.25275395 Report Delete

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>Might as well be Halloween thread
>No one posting spooks

AutistAhoy

AutistAhoy Fri 30 Oct 2015 20:31:18 No.25276148 Report Delete

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Autistocrat here, will be on to write in the next 2 hours or so. I felt as if the last bit of story was a little hard to follow so I've been re-approaching the story whilst lurking the thread.

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