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Equestria Girls: Secrets Beyond the Stars

Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 07:50:01 No.25250100 View Reply Report Delete

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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/293792/

"Canterlot High is a mysterious place, with varying degrees of individual and unseen stories. When a mysterious stranger arrives and sets her sights on Flash Sentry, the girls quickly learn she has a dangerous secret. By that I mean she's an alien sent by a galactic council to see if humanity is worth bringing in, but despite this simple idea she decides to try to find the source of the magic and use it to conquer the galaxy, with Flash Sentry at her side as her reluctant king."

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 16:04:36 No.25263623 Report Delete

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>>25258516
They should try breaking the dome itself.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 17:12:38 No.25264193 Report Delete

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>>25263623
That might be really painful.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 17:19:05 No.25264256 Report Delete

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>>25262763
Shining Armor searched through the forest, the morning sun beaming down on him as he sat atop tree limbs, looking for any signs of a camp. He makes the mental note that, after this whole thing blows over, he should join the army. This tracking stuff was easy! "A-ha!" He shouted, spotting the smoke from the girl's campfire. Leaping off the tree, Shining began heading to the source... well, he would once he felt the feeling in his legs once more.

At the mentioned camp, Twilight, Rarity, Applejack, and Rainbow began training while Sunset, Fluttershy, Pinkie, and Spike went to investigate the dome, the events of last night bringing in more questions than answers.

"Perhaps it's semi-permeable?" Sunset thought aloud.

"Semi-what?" Pinkie asked.

"Semi-permeable, it means it's only letting certain objects in or out. It usually refers to a membrane-like object." Spike explained.

"Wow, you really are getting smart." Sunset admitted. "Now I REALLY want to see that IQ test she mentioned."

"Is that just because of the magic or has she been giving you other things too?" Fluttershy asked. "Because your coat's got a lot more sheen to it."

"So, wait, what about the dome? Why aren't we asking people to come help?" Pinkie interjected. Sunset took out her phone and shook her head.

"I posted a message for help an hour ago but it got deleted. I'm guessing Inapan's filtering them?"

"How? She hardly knows anything about our ways." Pinkie countered.

"What about that big guy? He sounded really upset with Twilight for messing with that panel..." Fluttershy chimed in.

"Maybe they've had this problem before, and bui-OOF" Spike suggested as the group ran into an invisible wall, Pinkie having stopped mere inches from it.

"Found it!" Pinkie shouted happily as the rest of them adjusted themselves.

"Yeah, thanks Pinkie..." Sunset mumbled and backed away.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 18:03:03 No.25264665 Report Delete

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>>25264256
Pinkie is a moron.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 18:32:00 No.25264935 Report Delete

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>>25264665
She's different.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 19:35:12 No.25265542 Report Delete

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bump

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 20:27:11 No.25266021 Report Delete

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>>25264256
I like this running gag of Twilight testing Spike's IQ.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 20:40:27 No.25266145 Report Delete

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>>25264256
Oh so they are gonna break it...

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 20:43:20 No.25266179 Report Delete

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>>25266145
They'll certainly try.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 21:43:15 No.25266815 Report Delete

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>>25264256
I wonder do you think Tested is cruel enough to hold one of the Mirror 8 hostage at gunpoint?

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 21:52:40 No.25266906 Report Delete

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>>25266815
She has a gun pointed to the entire world, of course she would.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 21:59:40 No.25266970 Report Delete

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Inapan and Tested are amazing villains they both seem like decent girls until you realize the fun one is really crazy and the calm one is really cold.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 22:12:54 No.25267143 Report Delete

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>>25266970
They are the most adorable but also the most unnerving. They don't bother being subtle about anything, even Tirek had subtlety. They are so upfront with their demands and the lengths they are willing to go to get them that you can feel the fear that the mirror 8 feel.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 22:16:55 No.25267187 Report Delete

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>>25264256
"How'd you know it was there, though?" Fluttershy asked, the group backing up.

"Nevermind." Sunset dismissed, backing up and staring at the almost-glass-like object separating them from the outside world.

"Well, we know that there is a dome, and that we're stuck. I guess we head back now?" Spike asked.

"Now we have to see if it's penetrable." Sunset begins. "Pinkie, you brought Twilight's power tools, right?"

"Yep!" Pinkie took off her bag and unzipped it, revealing a power drill, Shimmer's Sledgehammer, a buzzsaw, and a welding torch and mask. "Thinking back, a lot of this stuff is pretty dangerous, why does Twilight carry it with her?"

"Magic can be pretty dangerous too, Pinkie." Sunset grabbed the hammer, to start off small. "The only difference is that most people can't buy it in stores." She hefted up the hammer to her side, smiling brightly as she rubbed it against her face, lovingly. "Ah, the memories."

"You mean the time you threatened to destroy the portal?" Fluttershy asked, unnerved.

"Of course not! I had a life outside of Equestria too you know." Sunset set the sledge on the ground and spat on her hands, rubbing them together and picking the weapon back up once more.

"Now I'm just plain worried about you." Spike confessed, backing up to let her swing.

"Here goes nothing!" She said, swinging the hammer into the dome. In a split second the girls could see cracks on the dome's surface, which then quickly reformed backwards, the cracks returning to the source and sending Shimmer's Sledge flying into a nearby tree, embedding it. The group took a moment to stare at the dangerous weapon that had been tossed aside like a plush toy, and how deep it was stuck within that tree. "I... uh... well. I think it's safe to say nobody would have predicted that."

Whilst Sunset went to collect her dangerous keepsake, Fluttershy was up next, holding the cordless drill.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 22:22:34 No.25267235 Report Delete

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>>25267187
Your jokes are pretty good. I like that continuity nod to the first film.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 22:33:16 No.25267320 Report Delete

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>>25267187
She better wear protection. She could get really hurt once thing reformed.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 22:55:52 No.25267570 Report Delete

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>>25267187
Why not have Rainbow do it or Twilight? Both can survive massive injury.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 23:36:20 No.25268052 Report Delete

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>>25267570
They need to train too, and they're all the way back at camp...

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 23:39:27 No.25268089 Report Delete

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>>25268052
Oh right I forgot.

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 00:17:34 No.25268523 Report Delete

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I'm heading to bed guys, you can keep speculating and making suggestions.

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 04:02:19 No.25270073 Report Delete

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>>25268523
night

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 07:11:43 No.25270693 Report Delete

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Bump

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 10:55:50 No.25271776 Report Delete

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>>25268089
Who then?

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 10:59:50 No.25271807 Report Delete

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Good morning anons.

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 11:28:05 No.25271996 Report Delete

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>>25267187
Come on Pinkie, you probably carry around fireworks with you.

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 11:47:12 No.25272125 Report Delete

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>>25271996
Pinkie loves her some portable explosives, that's true.

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 11:53:56 No.25272181 Report Delete

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>>25266970
>>25267143
Tested was originally just going to a complete clone of Inapan, but after people kept comparing her to Maud the whole Twin Sister thing became apparent, and she turned into her own, adorably terrifying monster. That said, Inapan is still my favorite of the two.

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 12:39:24 No.25272519 Report Delete

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>>25267187
"Are we sure this is safe? Shouldn't we have some kinda protection or something?" Spike asked.

"Maybe you're right... give me a second." Pinkie dashed off, Sunset returning to the group with her sledgehammer in tow. Before she could say anything, Pinkie returned with a suit that consisted of pillows and one of Dash's old bike helmets. "Here, this should work!"

"It's better than nothing..." Spike confessed, Fluttershy breathing a sigh of relief and putting on the suit of pillows. She turned on the drill and tried to force it through the shield. While it seemed to be drilling a hole, the group cheered! ...That is until Fluttershy pulled back and revealed the drill bit had been ground down to a fledgling nub.

Pinkie and the powersaw was next, she wearing the same gear that Fluttershy had worn. She dug the saw into the dome's surface and sparks flew too and fro. When she pulled the saw away, its teeth had been shorn off, leaving nothing but a flat metal disk.

Finally, Sunset had the welding torch and mask. The predictable result would have been that torch didn't work, or that it shot flames back at them, but neither of those things happened. Instead, the dome was pierced.

"A-ha!" She said, continuing to burn through the dome in the shape of a rectangle. While she worked the rest of the group would notice the dome resealing itself as she moved along. "There!" She said, getting up and turning off the torch. "To freedom!" She stepped towards where she'd cut through and... ended up with a face full of dome for her efforts.

Back at camp, Applejack continued to better her skills, trying to find out what constituted as a "living thing" and which didn't. As one of her fingers sprouted from an ant, a hand from a mossy rock, a leg from a large tree, and an ear from a passing bird, Applejack was growing tired of this exercise.

"This is pointless." She announced, Rarity rolling her eyes. "We should be out there saving Flash, or helping the city, or both!"

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 13:23:03 No.25272823 Report Delete

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>>25272519
Gonna check this out shortly.

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 14:21:20 No.25273168 Report Delete

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>>25272519
Why is FS breaking it apart?

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 14:28:53 No.25273207 Report Delete

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>>25272519
Use magic on the dome.

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 14:48:54 No.25273333 Report Delete

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>>25273207
More than likely this won't do much and just wear them out, requiring them to recharge and possibly drawing attention from the sisters.

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 16:12:23 No.25273958 Report Delete

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Bump

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 16:12:45 No.25273961 Report Delete

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>>25272519
"Applejack, we can't help them if we don't know what we can do. Besides, they're fine, Inapan is interested in the Portal, not them. Sunset Shimmer can call Flash at any time and ask him for an update, we have gotten rid of that lumbering brute they had working for them. All we have to do is wait until we have a chance to enter the ship, take Flash, and destroy it from the inside-out."

"Yeah, but then we'll have two furious super-villains trapped on Earth with no other goal in life than revenge."

"Fair point." Rarity thinks. "But there's the chance we could make them good, like with Sunset Shimmer and Twilight."

"But we didn't get the sirens... I wonder what happened to them." Before they could continue to speculate, a rustling in the bushes interjected and the girls entered fight mode.

"Wait!" came the voice of Shining Armor. "It's me, Twilight's brother!" He didn't seem to notice the extra limbs everywhere, at least, not before Applejack could remove her mask.

"Shining Armor? What on Earth are you doing here?" Rarity asked.

"I came here to warn you that something's happening with the aliens and Principal Cinch." The two girls looked at one another, then at him, incredulously. "No, it's true! We need to talk to Twilight!"

"Let's humor this ludicrous idea of Principal Cinch betraying mankind to further a minor, petty revenge against us, and Tested going with it rather than just shooting her... how would you know?"

"I was there! It was in her office, after she'd blackmailed me into helping her. I thought Tested would kill her too, but they began talking!"

"Tell me..." Principal Cinch started. "What do you know of Twilight Sparkle? And why is she so important to you?"

"You tell me why I should care what you think." Tested growing upset her threats of violence weren't getting through to her.

"Because what you know about her pales in comparison to what I do. She used to work under my thumb, as my most diligent and intelligent student."

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 16:49:48 No.25274303 Report Delete

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>>25272519
Maybe AJ can try using her powers on something outside the portal?

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 16:55:28 No.25274351 Report Delete

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>>25273961
I would say they could destroy their ship and banish them to Equestria, but unlike the Sirens I don't think that sending them to Equestria would really stop them from rebuilding at least some of the tools they used to capture Flash and threaten Earth.

So it would actually be a very bad idea.

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 17:00:18 No.25274390 Report Delete

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>>25273961
>Trying to reform Inapan and Tested
Is this really possible? They do care for one another and Inapan cares for Flash as well.
But at the same point they were also far more ruthless than nearly every other villain, being considered crazy (by our standards) which I believe no other MLP villain so far has been.

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 17:46:53 No.25274713 Report Delete

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>>25274390
I've been flirting with the ending of Inapan being declared criminally insane and trapped in an Earth Asylum while Tested and Grunt will be sentenced for crimes against the galaxy, he having been given a plea bargain while the sisters swear their revenge.

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 18:07:12 No.25274846 Report Delete

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>>25274390
Why would they bother even taking the risk? They crossed the moral event horizon, they are too dangerous to be trusted.

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 18:21:55 No.25274986 Report Delete

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>>25274390
None of the enemies our team has faced were terribly evil in the first place.

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 18:27:38 No.25275049 Report Delete

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>>25274986
With possible exception of Principal Cinch, who has no redeeming features.

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 18:30:12 No.25275079 Report Delete

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>>25275049
She was probably far more despicable than Tested and Inapan (who have redeeming features), but she is also far less dangerous than those two. The fear is moreso what they are capable of if they decide to go back to their old ways

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 18:44:38 No.25275214 Report Delete

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>>25275079
So the worst case scenario, in your mind, is if Cinch gets her mitts on the alien tech?

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 18:48:03 No.25275234 Report Delete

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>>25275214
Nah, I don't see her as caring all that much or knowing how to use it. I also see her as a nuisance that the sisters will want to get rid of.

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 19:38:33 No.25275708 Report Delete

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>>25273961
"She has studied under me for only three years, yet she is smarter than any member of my staff, or any student in the country. She has outplayed the state champion at chess, has solved formulas thought impossible, and discovered and harnessed the power of magic with her own home-made devices. You may think of yourself as a higher mind than her but she is equal, if not superior in every single facet."

"So you've called me here to gloat? To talk about how, as the teacher, human minds are the best of all the galaxy's?"

"No, I called you here because she's forgotten a few key pieces of her equipment that may serve some purpose to you." She opened a filing cabinet and removed a group of blueprints. "These were items proposed for various members of the college she wished to apply to. I kept copies for myself, for record-keeping reasons of course. Before she could get the chance to send them out, the... Friendship Games happened." She frowned unhappily, crushing a print in her hands. "I never understood her obsession with the paranormal, but now I know, of course, she knew better than I... take these plans and perfect them."

"Why are you helping us?" Tested asked, skeptically.

"Because she is no longer my student." Principal Cinch sat back down and watched as Tested looked over the plans, both of them not knowing Shining was peering through a crack in the door.

"And that's all I know." Shining explained.

"That's... worrying." Rarity confessed, grabbing him by the arm. "Come on, what are you waiting for?!"

In the ship Inapan stared at the blueprints and plans set before her, the universal translator working fervently. "Sister, how are the clones coming along?"

"Flash is completed and waiting for programming. Sunset Shimmer has formed some anomalies. The genetics prevalent to her equine genomes are causing unusual mutations. Should we keep working on the project or abort it?"

"We keep going sister. These girls are anomalies in and of themselves."

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 20:18:52 No.25276037 Report Delete

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>>25273961
You need to more clearly break the two scenes. I didn't know you moved to a scene with Cinch at first.

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 20:21:58 No.25276056 Report Delete

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>>25276037
Sorry, scene breaks are a lot easier on FIMFiction, what with the line that lets you cut.

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 20:22:32 No.25276059 Report Delete

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>>25273961
She should also say "what I know" rather than "what I do".

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 20:26:18 No.25276099 Report Delete

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>>25275708
She isn't just evil, she is fucking retarded. She reminds me of that guy who in Die Hard who got killed trying to reason with Hans Gruber and get John McClane to give up. You know, the guy who sipped the coke nervously before he was killed?

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 20:37:28 No.25276206 Report Delete

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>>25276099
Except that guy was Stupid Good, wanting to stop the killing on both sides. Cinch is trying to pull a Lawful Evil and depending on how this pans out she might succeed.

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