Anonymous
Insanebow Dash
I don't even know how to continue my story. Anon banged everyone and yet... I want to do more.
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>>25072942 >Octavia >not best lycanthrope U wot m8?
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>>25073023 You still haven't given us that tender finale with Fluttershy that you promised.
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>>25073050 Oh yeah that was a thing.
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I just want a succubus story.
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>>25073297 >I want to get my dick wet, but I also want to live. Anonymous
>>25072942 Is there like a list of "classic" munsters that the thread is open to?
>>25073297 There was hand-made's Lilith story a month or so back
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>>25073385 I mean mostly stuff like vampires, werewolves, skeltons, zombies, succubi,etc. There was one story of anon being a monster hunter and another of like, slasher film Friday the 13th type of thing I think. I haven't been reading everyone's story but generally those are the parameters. What'd you have in mind?
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>>25073525 Ain't a writer sadly. Just looking for ideas of what pics to look up for the occasional small dump like I did above. Though it might help another writer that could come along.
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>>25073598 Well it was originally just vampires but expanded to include other monsters as well. Actually, the original picture to start it all... with the prompt being "Ve vant to suck your cock, Anonymous!"
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>>25073598 And a nice dump it was.
The theme of this general is monsters, but it really leans more towards the horror genre and those types of monsters than towards monstergirls.
Anonymous
damn, was hoping autistocrat would have some green up
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>>25074533 Haven't read his. What's it about?
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>>25074754 anons a monster hunter that Luna called to help with some strange things going on in canterlot
He left it off with a werewolf turf fight last thread
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>>25074849 Oh fuckin sweet
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What happened to Stoker's thread? Did it die?
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Stoker !gJVaD2Z9z6
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>>25076872 It was nearing its end anyway at 460-something posts.
Here's the new thread, since you asked.
>>25077370 Anonymous
>>25073023 We still haven't had our Fluttershy round two with tender loving leading up to hard fucking
Anonymous
>>25073023 There's always Chrysalis. I can't imagine that the Legend of Anon's Cock wouldn't reach her eventually. Like maybe the very next day after or during school?
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>>25079714 He's already done CMC one year/ Mane7 the next, so even though the Mane7 extracted promises of at-will rights to Anon dickings, it would make sense for Chryssy and/or the Royal Sisters to show up next year. I think from his qualms over screwing the CMC (it's been a while) that Anon is already graduated from CHS, so fucking the principal shouldn't be an issue.
It would be an amusing shakeup to the 'chicks show up on Anon's doorstep hungry for his cock on Halloween' formula to have multiple groups show up. Whether the royal sisters or Chryssy showed up first would be interesting. (And to make it a group, Chryssy could bring a friend. I dunno who; FlufflePuff seems like a poor pick. Maybe she's trying bonding with Dean Cadence? Maybe she's fuckbuddies with Cadence and Shining?) Since they're all authority figures, I guess Mayor Mare could come by, but I feel like it would get silly fast with her involved. I want silly feelsy stories about Anon fucking cute girls senseless, not the mayor trying to literally whore him out as a tourist attraction once she gets a taste. I can just picture her sending a trio of auditors to evaluate his skills and then setting up a rope queue for a line to form to his house, and that seems like a stupid direction to take a story I've been enjoying so much.
>>25078713 I forgot it was supposed to get so hard towards the end. Unf. I wonder how durable Anon's bed is; with RD, Sunset, and I think Twilight on it, it might not be appreciated for those two to go at it so hard they break the bedframe. I recall Dash proved Flutterbuns was a squirter, but it'd be hilarious if she ended up shrieking loud enough for Rarity and AJ to complain about being woken up.
I think Anon is gonna go in for some tender goodnight loving, and accidentally rouse Fluttershy into full, semiawake consciousness for the most brutal animalistic fucking of his life. Even if he doesn't pound her hard enough to bruise both their pelvises, she'll probably do it.
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Bumping for>Green
Insanebow Dash
>>25079952 >Was gonna end it after the Fluttershy part God dammit now I have ideas on how to continue it.
Also Neither Rainbow Dash or Fluttershy are squirters. They just came that many times. Probably impossible but this is a fucking harem story about human horses.
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>>25073023 you did younger, same age, so do someone older like the principals and Cheerilee and Chrysalis
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>>25069899 >It has little to do with how much (or little) you care about here, but instead an instinctual reaction on your part. Something is wrong - no one wears a smile like that and truly means it - so you try to comfort Rarity however you can. >Words are impossible, in part because of the movie, but mostly because you don't really know her well. >Or at all. >A scant handful of shared classes over the years has given you little insight into how she thinks. Truthfully, you have nothing to go on except that she had a crush on you for years and tried to get over it, but... can't. >That leaves physical reassurance. >That's okay. >It works. >The next time your eyes meet, her smile has returned to normal - small and earnest and satisfied. >And, perhaps, fragile. >Watching Rarity, you lose track of the movie, as does she. The girl tries to keep her eyes on the TV, but every so often they flicker over towards Fluttershy. >Every little moment or sound from the other girl seems to trigger it, from Fluttershy shifting around to curl her legs up under herself to her screaming when xenomorphs attack - and such things become more and more common as the movie comes to an end. Each disturbance draws a harsh look from Rarity. twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25081423 >You hadn't noticed anything like that earlier, but you hadn't exactly been looking for it during the other movies. >Now, it's all too obvious - to you, at least. >But of course, she had been sitting with Dash and Pinkie before. >Both take their movie watching seriously. >If Fluttershy wasn't so damned cute, you could easily see how it could be annoying. >As the movie comes to a close with Dash cheering wildly from the floor, Fluttershy slips free of your arm. >"I should check on Applejack," she says out of the blue. "What are we watching next?" >Seems premature; the credits haven't even started to roll. >"Stay," Twilight says with a shake of her head. "You've done enough, Fluttershy. Let me change her bandage this time." >The girl starts to argue, but you grab her hand and pull her back down onto the sofa. >You have the feeling that she *let* you. Anonymous
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>>25081588 Delicious green
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so we've got about 2 hrs before Autistocrat checks in, what do we do while we wait?
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>>25082522 What would you do if your waifu was the monster you feared the most
Triple Nigger
>>25081103 The ride never stops, my friend. Glad I could contribute.
Update tonight.
>>25082522 Post ponies?
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>>25082592 But anon, I already want to fuck human Applejack.
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>>25081588 "Besides, it's your turn to pick, right?"
>Most of the other girls have gotten to have some input on the movie selection, but Fluttershy's contributions have been limited to calling the people in Cannibal Holocaust monsters. >"Well, I don't really have anything in mind," Fluttershy answers, trying to stand again. "You all can decide while I'm -" >"No," Twilight firmly answers with a shake of her head. "I - I got this!" >Fluttershy moans softly as Twilight leads AJ out of the room, the sound tapering off as she sinks back down into the sofa's cushions. >"Well, do we *have* to watch something...?" she asks after a few moments. Anonymous
>>25082739 >"Well, do we *have* to watch something...?" Orgy imminent
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>>25082739 >>25082813 Rolling for CON
my body is ready
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Insanebow Dash
>>25082640 I'll write tonight. Fluttershy is next fellas. I hope you enjoy the direction I take it.
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>>25083873 By 'update tonight,' I meant I'll be posting more Femanon & Shota Crusaders.
Nice to know we'll have more from you though.
TheAutistocrat
Brief summary of the last threads events in my story.> Anonymous a hunter hated by all and loved by none. > You're called up for some crazy business going down in canterlot. > After fighting an out of place butcher vampire and his daughter you're briefed on everything going down. > After some shenanigans and hijinks Luna yells at you to go and save Sunshit and Twilight. > You do it. > Now you were about to bunk down at a temporary homestay only to find yourself in the middle of a werewolf turf war.
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>>25084027 Oh baby
Im ready
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>>25084027 HE HAS RETURNED!!!!!!
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Looks like it's time for some tactical bumping action
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>.... >.... > Darkness and silence gripped your senses. > Were you dead? > How could you be dead!? > You still haven't lived a full forty years of debauchery and being yourself! > Wait a minute... > A loud howl of pain rattled your senses. > Snapping open your eyes you come face to face with the Giant. > Save he was rearing back, howling in pain. > Two silver knitting needles jutted from his ears, a trickle of blood running down both sides. > Ah... > The other wolves seemed shocked that you had managed to harm their leader. > You were shocked too. > When did you even pull them out? > With a grunt of anger the Giant glared down at you. > He swatted you away, sending you through the air like you were nothing. > With a grunt you slammed into the ground before the pack of wolves, each one turning down to look at you. > The Giant reached up and pulled the needles away, letting them drop to the ground. > His gaze fixated on you, filled with a fury you hadn't seen before. > You were boned... > You try and get up, only to be pushed back down by one of the wolves. > They were stepping in now? > That was totally not fair. > The wolf holding you down shrugged. > You make a mental note to kill him specifically if you survived this later. > The Giant lumbered over to you, looming over all bodies. > "Ah WAS going to let you die fast." > "But now I'm going to take it reeeal slow..." > He gestured with his claws, the moonlight reflecting off of them. > They looked more like swords then claws... > You clear your throat. > You had nothing to be honest. > With a snarl he bought his arm back.
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>>25084735 Now would be a good time for you to step in, 'Bloom... How hard is it to tear off a Giant's arm?
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>>25084735 Hamlet: o fuck
(EXIT STAGE)
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> "STOP!" > God? > The Giant stopped, the ferocity fading from his face. > Turning around he lowered his arm. > The others watched as he turned his body away from you, standing before some thing else. > You try and peer past him, but the wolfs grip was holding steady. > That coupled with your wrecked shoulder was not going in your favor right now. > "Baby..." The Giant grunted. > Oh good lord! > He stepped out of the way, sauntering around in a wide circle. > Applebloom stood on the path, with only a teddy bear printed bathrobe on. > The Giant looked absolutely endeared, completely forgetting his rage. > "Ah was wonderin' when ah would finally see you." > Applebloom stepped back, trying to hide her welling fear. > "Remember the barn huh? Ah'ma finish what ah started." > She seemed scared upon hearing that. > This idiot. > Why didn't she just run!? > "Look at ya' still as small as when we last talked..." > Ok this was getting ridiculously creepy. > "L-let my family go..." > She shot you a brief look. > "And that new guy." > Phew. > "Hmmmm, sure. But only if you leave here and join mah pack, we need a breeding bi-" > Shuffling behind you caught your attention. > Turning around you saw Applejack slowly picking herself up. > She glared at the wolves through a bruised eye. > They hadn't even noticed yet, too caught up on the conversation going on in front of them. > AJ got up on one knee, her naked body exposed. > Nice.... > But current survival was more important than miring a well-toned, tight body. > Still though. > Niiiice... > One of the wolves to the far left sniffed the air. > He whirled around, spotting AJ getting up. > He let out a roar, moving forward to take her out. > And in the blink of an eye, he was gone. > What!? > You look around, seeing him no where in sight. > Then suddenly... > He let out a howl, catching everybody's attention. > You peer up with many others, seeing him getting carried into the night sky by something unidentifiable. > Oh
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> Your mind raced to list off things that could do that. > But the Giant beat you too it. > "You tricked me!" > With a roar he rocketed across the path, clearing distance between him and Applebloom shortly. > AJ was on it within a second though. > Being much faster than you gave her credit for she was in her wolf form, already shooting past the confused wolves and taking him down. > Damn... > The wolves looked ready to spring forward but something dive-bombed from the air. > A blue blur snatched one of the other wolves up like a fish. > What was going on!? > The Giant held AJ at bay. > "You idiots!" > She snapped for his throat, but he managed to keep her back. > "It's a harpy! Don't just stand there waiting to get snatched up!" > The wolves dropped to all fours and ran for the house and forest. > A lighter snarl caught your attention. > Whipping your head back to the brawl you saw a smaller wolf fighting among the two. > She kept the Giant distracted while AJ fought him directly. > Hm, it was times like this you wished you were a little less useless. > A gleam caught your eye. > Ah yes. > The shotgun. > You had forgotten about it in all the commotion. > You stroll over and snatch it up. > Taking down some of the stray pack members could help a little. > Oh look at that. > The ones that headed for the forest were already running back in the clearing, tail between their legs. > What could scare a werewolf? > You peer among the darkness, seeing a figure sauntering from the woods after the wolves. > Huh... > Turning back to the farm-house one of the wolves crashed through the back porch. > A still wounded Big-Mac stepped through the hole after him, keeping an arm over his stomach. > He pointed behind you. > You whirled around and pulled the trigger. > The wolf jumping at you went limp mid-air, his body falling at your feet. > Hm, having allies was something you could get used too...
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> You peer back at the figure just beyond the woods. > What was that? > "ENOUGH!" > The Giant snatched up Applebloom by the nape of her neck. > Tossing her back he let out a roar and snatched AJ up. > Holding her in the air, he roared triumphantly. > Pulling her into a bear hug he pulled it tighter and tighter until a cracking began to come from AJ's back. > She let out a pained whimper. > Big Mac moved to help, but already found himself falling to the ground. > Of course.... > You sprint towards the fray. > Your legs pumped as fast as they could, your speed whipping up the raincoat around you. > Skidding to a stop, you aim down the barrel. > And blow away at the Giants legs. > He let out a surprised yelp, dropping AJ. > She fell to the ground, squirming in pain and screaming silently. > You grabbed the barrel of the gun and swing it like a baseball bat. > The stock connected with the crippled Giants mouth, sending him reeling back silently. > You follow up with a blow to the ribs, then one overhead. > Stopping the onslaught you shoulder the gun, holding the stock end up. > You had too... > Kind of as a fuck you. > You pull it back as far as it would go. > Stomping one foot down you sent the stock full force connecting with the wolfs face. > A loud crack echoed throughout the night sky, causing Big Mac and Applebloom to cringe. > The limp body of the Giant fell to the ground, silent.
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> Ah! > OW! > You drop the totaled gun, falling back on your behind. > The shoulder pain began to set in, no longer repressed by your adrenaline. > The life of a hunter was not a good one... > You hold it tenderly, trying to stop the pain somehow. > It wouldn't kill you or even cause you to faint but damn! It hurt. > It felt like the wolf was biting your shoulder all over ag- > Fuck... > You were bit.... > You > Were > Bit... > You get up despite the pain flaring in your shoulder. > You had something to remedy a werewolf bite, they took at least an hour to set in. > But you would have to move fast. > You glance back at the diminishing pack of werewolves. > Most of them were gone, snatched up and sent god knows where. > Two lay at the feet of the figure, more than likely dead. > Ignoring it you turn back to the writhing AJ with a wince. > She seemed to just be getting over the pain. > Wordlessly she pointed to the right of the farmhouse. > You whirl around and run towards where she pointed. > You hopped over the body of the Giant. > He was done now. > Suddenly his hand shot out, gripping around your ankle like an iron clamp. > No he wasn't. > Before you could do anything else, you found yourself flying through the air. > Suddenly you slammed on the ground, bad shoulder impacting first. > Among all of the pain you managed to groan out a 'wonderful'. > His hand slid away from your ankle, slowly sliding under himself. > The Giant began to pick himself up again, ludicrous amounts of saliva dripping from his maw. > "Dinner time..." > Welp, you were officially terrified beyond all belief.
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>>25085326 inb4 Harpy ex machina
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> You glance down at his legs. > Which were already healing from the shotgun blast. > Enhanced healing eh...? > Explained why he wasn't pissed about the cheap shot AJ had gotten on him earlier. > Speaking of which... > She was still down. > So was Big Mac. > and Applebloom was still watching, obviously not capable of helping. > Which was okay, you were fine with that... > "Ah like you." > Uhg, his voice sounded like someone took a bunch of gravel and rubbed it in his throat. > And his breath... > So rancid you thought you were going to pass out. > He was looming over you, his eyes directly above yours. > "Ah've got to say you're quiet persistent in ruining mah night." > "First yer gonna' try an' keep me from mah waifu." > "Stop Apple seed." Aj managed to groan out. > Glancing back at her you saw she was human now, hardly able to keep herself standing. > "You're sick, deranged ah would say." > Apple Seed leaned away from you, glowering at her. > "And what do you know lil' miss Annie." > Woah... > AppleJack glared at him, that comment hitting close. > Then... > She began to cry. > "Y-You used to be my favorite uncle!" > Apple Seed shrugged. > "Used too, then you and yer Grandma went an' kicked me out." > He stood to his full height, towering over the both of you. > "Ah win again like always and then when ah go an' kill Big Mac and yer Granny ah'm" > "Laaaaame!" > A scratchy voice echoed throughout the night air. > Before he could do anything a blue blur zipped down and nicked him on the face. > Apple Seed sent out a wild swipe, stepping away from you. > "Yer annoying too Dash!"
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> Another blur and he sent out a swipe again, barely catching it. > "Hahaha! Can't catch the Dash!" > This girl annoyed you deeply. > Which was strange considering how annoying and obnoxious you were. > Maybe you two could get along and start and annoying club. > Something titled PETA or something... > Blood loss and the current pain your body was racked with might be the reason why you were thinking of starting an annoying club with a harpy under the name PETA. > Or that could just be you. > The blur rocketed down and bounced off of Apple Seeds back, sending him lurching forward. > With a frustrated roar he whirled around and grabbed for empty air. > You would laugh if you could. > You struggle to pick yourself up, using your good arm as leverage. > "My,my,my~! What have we got here?" > This voice echoed among the air aswell, more ethereal than Dashes, which sounded like it came from up above. > "Some egomaniac who thinks they can hurt my friends?" > The voice cooed, it was strangely soothing, like a lullaby. > "I know right?" Dash said from up above. > "Maybe I should step in and teach him a lesson, Hmm Dash?" > "Be my guest dude, He's kind of lame anyway." > Dash laughed from somewhere up above. > "Yeah, this dude ain't worth my time." > "Would you two get on with it?" AJ shouted, getting increasingly more impatient. > Apple Seed just growled lowly. > "Yer all almost as annoying as him." > Was he pointing at you? > Say something everyone's looking! > You smile under your mask triumphantly. > Got em'. > "Alright Darling if you insist..." > A mist crept around the area, engulfing the farmhouse. > The veil of mist soon became a blanket, becoming so thick you could just barely see AJ and Apple Seed. > He grunted sniffing the air. > "Yer silly little tricks ain't gonna work on me batface." > You peer down, seeing one of the knitting needles just beyond the distance.
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> "Ah, ah, ah Darling no name calling. I'm not using this to scare you, you filthy little sub-creature." > Why was that voice so soothing? > The mist suddenly cleared away, disappearing in a gust of air. > Granny Smith, Big Mac and Applebloom were gone. > A pale white girl sat on the farm-house roof, staring down at Apple Seed. > Something predatory lurked behind her eyes, focused on him. > "Helllooo~" > "Rarity how come you took so long!?" AJ shouted. > What? > She frowned, learning back and placing a hand on her chest. > "Applebloom said that Big Macintosh was here, I HAD to get dressed for the occasion. > And dressed she was. > She wore a pale blue dress that hung tightly to her form, more vibrant colored crystals on both sides of her curved hips. > Mmm. > If you weren't writhing in pain right now you would totally hit on her. > Wait a minute... > That was the girl you had seen earlier, when you tried to sneak into the school. > Funny how that works. > "Shut yer trap vamp trash." > Rarity's eyes flashed angrily for a brief second. > Then she took a deep breath. > "Pure bred thank you very much, that is what you are to refer to me as." > "Whatever." Apple Seed grunted. > You began to crawl towards the knitting needle. > Better safe than sorry... > The two argued, their babbling fading into background noise. > This must be how Luna felt when you spoke.
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>>25082813 >Orgy >not bloodbath TheAutistocrat
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> You grab the needle and slip it into your coat. > By now they had stopped arguing. > Rarity was off of the roof, standing before Apple Seed. > AJ stood across from them, slowly changing back into her wolf form. > You could leave now... > No-one would notice. > They would be too busy fighting to do anything anyway... > You focus on AJ watching as she got ready to brawl. > You hadn't noticed it before but she was different. > Her form leaned away from wolf and more towards human. > She looked like what you imagine a furry would look like in real life except less creepy and autistic. > Aside from that and the fact that she was a monster she was a trooper. > You had no long how she had managed to fight for this long... > Probably for family. > You hadn't felt that feeling in years... > You look at the area around you. > Well... > You've come this far. > You check your watch. > 1:23. > You had gotten bitten maybe half an hour ago. > 30 minutes. > 30 minutes left to take down an overpowered, giant of a wolf with regenerative abilities way beyond any other Werewolf you've fought. > Eh, you could do it. > You glance down at your hand. > With a knitting needle... > Maybe not... > Luckily you still had AJ and Rarity on your side. > Who may or may not let you live after this was over, depending on if THEY were evil. > You hoped not, fighting the pure determination that was AJ did not bode well with you. > Apple Seed chuckled darkly. > "Ya'll really think you can take me?" > Aj flinched away while Rarity smiled. > "Well, I've got to keep my dress clean so I'm afraid we'll have to finish this shortly Darling." > That confidence was dangerous. > You step closer to the fray, catching both girls attentions. > AJ seemed shocked while Rarity gave you a look over. > She smiled and turned back to Apple Seed. > "Let's get this over with shall we?" > AJ growled in agreement. > You look between the two and cough, holding up the knitting needle.
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> You all stood in the night silently. > For once in this hectic night you could hear the crickets chirping. > You fiddled with the needle, rolling it back and forth between your fingers. > Dash finally revealed herself, perching ontop of the farm house. > Two large, cyan wings replaced her arms, and strange bird talons replaced her feet. > Sitting down cross-legged they both began to shrink and disappear, gone as fast as she had appeared. > With a roar Apple Seed swept at Rarity first. > With a smile akin to the ceshire-cat she disappeared in a cloud of screeching bats. > Huh, you could've swore that was a myth. > The bats took into the night air, most likely to regroup. > AJ shot forward, latching onto the back of his neck. > With a roar Apple Seed worked to get her off. > Seeing your chance you lung forward and plunge the needle deep into his abdomen. > He let out a surprised roar, forgetting about AJ briefly. > He glared at you, bringing his hand down in an over-head swipe. > You dodged to the right. > He followed up with his right arm. > You lean back, dodging under it like a limbo stick. > AJ crawled her way up his back. > He tried to throw her off, letting out a desperate howl. > You reach over and pull the needle from his stomach. > While he was distracted you shiv his side repeatedly. > You loved fucking with people. > Torn between attacking the two of you he tried to swat you both off. > AJ held strong while you just leapt back. > Sliding forward, you begin to shiv his side again. > Rarity reformed in front of him. > Pulling her broom up in a half-assed manor she brought it down over his head, sending him crashing into the ground. > You reach down and pull out the needle. > AJ had him by the scruff of his neck, making it even harder for him to move. > He began to claw pathetically at the ground whimpering in pain.
TheAutistocrat
> Rarity leaned against her umbrella watching apathetically. > You lean back and let AJ finish up the work. > With a final rough pull of her head a crack echoed through the night air. > And with a final whimper Apple Seed was down for good. > AJ threw her head back and let out a long howl of victory. > You weren't done yet though. > The needle so saturated with blood it was impossible to hold, so you just dropped it instead. > You turn and try to walk away before any of the girls could do anything. > But they had other plans. > "Where are you going?" Rainbow shouted from the roof. > You stop, going rigid. > Turning around you could see the girls all staring at you, Rarity and Rainbow amused, but Applejack upset. > "Hide your stuff better Anonymous~!" Rainbow taunted, holding up some of your hunting plans. > Shit... > You looked back and forth between the girls, seeing who would make the first move. > You stopped on Rarity, finding her exceedingly more enchanting. > It was something in her eyes... > You just wanted to serve her until the end of time... > She smiled softly. > You didn't care about your shoulder. > You didn't care about your aching body. > You didn't care about the prospect of changing. > You just wanted to listen to her. > "Go ahead Darling, take a cat nap." > Do it for her. > You comply, dropping to the ground and fading out of consciousness. > You could hear footsteps approaching as the world faded. > Nighty night....
TheAutistocrat
That's it for tonight, tell me what you guys think about the story so far. Or not, I don't want anyone too feel obligated.
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>>25086234 This is good keep up the good work
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>>25086234 I think I really liked the 4 posts I've read, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest after I hash out some campaign notes
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>>25086234 We eagerly await more.
Anonymous
>>25086234 But the werewolf bite...
Anonymous
>>25085858 Can't it be both?
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>>25086234 Damn it, i want to know what happens next
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>>25082640 >>25083943 Okay, just remembered you guys and dragged my sorry ass back out of bed. Working on it.
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>>25086221 >mfw the lame 6 are responsible for Anon becoming a werewolf Rarity is worst girl once again.
By the way, whatever happened to the other monster hunter Anon story? You know, this one
http://pastebin.com/AXpxfVpq Anonymous
>page 9 >>25090084 >>25090806 Interruptions
Interruptions everywhere
Gonna get a couple posts out because I said I would, and then go to bed and worry about the rest tomorrow
>>25090883 Seriously? Wasn't Anon helping the Apples to not, you know, die?
Really need to read Autistocrat.
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>>25091627 You know what, fuck it. I thought it was Friday when I said I'd update tonight, and I did try to keep my word anyway, but now I'm just too angry to make this bit come out right, and without it the prewritten piece lacks context.
Shotas tomorrow night. Not gonna get to the lewds for another week or two at this rate.
>>25086166 >manor Manner.
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>>25092190 Thats a lewd skelly
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>>25082739 >Her voice is a near-whisper, but it still brings Twilight to an abrupt stop, only one foot still in the room. The suddenness of it almost causes AJ to lose her balance, hanging on to her friend as she is, but she has enough presence of mind to reach out and brace herself against the wall. >"Um, what exactly did you have in mind?" Twilight asks, looking over her shoulder in concern. >"I was thinking, well, it was just a thought, but *is* late -" >You check the big clock on the wall and silently disagree with Fluttershy. Three in the morning isn't late. >More like real fucking early. >"- so, maybe we should all go home? Or at least me, I mean, if the rest of you are having fun -" >"None of us are in any condition to drive," Twilight cuts her off with a shake of her head. "I'm afraid we'll have to spend the night here." >Shit, right. >You expected that, you knew it was coming, but you haven't the faintest clue where they'll all sleep. >Should that thought of that earlier and actually looked for those sleeping bags. >"I hate to contradict you, darling," Rarity responds - quite cheerfully, despite what she just said, "but *one* of us has not had a *thing* to drink. Anon, would you be a dear and give Fluttershy my keys?" TheAutistocrat
Due to a change of schedule I will be on around 1:30 to write as well as 10 tonight, Triple Nigger can also be my spell check for major mistakes that I miss now.
Insanebow Dash
>You awaken from your sleep >Wait, was that a dream? >You felt exhausted though >Wait, why were your wrists bound? >And why the fuck was there an iv in your arm? >After your eyes adjusted a bit to the moonlight lit room you find that you were in some type of stone looking room >Only opening was at the top where the full moon was seen >RD:"Hey girls! He's awake!" >Looking to your left you see Rainbow Dash in her vampire get up >And almost instantly from the shadows of the room, the rest of her five friends show up in their costumes as well >TS:"Poor poor Anonymous. Just believing that some females wanted to have sex with you for no other reason then they were horny. How naive can you be?" >You could feel your pulse rising and a cold sweat break out >RD:"You are at our coven Anon. You remember last year right? When for some reason some girls showed up dressed as vampires came to get banged by you? >From those shadows that you were unable to see clearly came out AB, SB, and Scootaloo >Donning their vampire costumes as well >You struggled against your restraints but to no avail >Fuck fuckity fuck fuck fuck fucking fuck >R:"You understand correct Anonymous? That these costumes aren't just for fake. You know what we are. Why don't you say it?" >No, that's bullshit. They couldn't be >That makes no sense >You barely whisper it >PP:"*Giggle* You got us Nonny!" >SS:"They weren't. Until magic came into this world and changed it." >Where the fuck was she? >The voice came... from behind you >SS:"You know that vampires can feed off of any energy the body has? Including sweat, blood, and even semen." >She rubbed your face with her hand >SS:"And you were quite the meal for us."
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>>25093644 >Sunset laughs before coming around face to face with you >You looked at both her blood red eyes and her extended fang like teeth >SS:"Just accept it and let it happen Anonymous. Life will be much simpler that way." >You struggled once again against your restraints >?:"It seems you brought a meal to be shared between us. >Wait... that voice! >Principal Celestia was a vampire too?" >PC:"And you left me out from your meals with this one prior. But that can be forgiven." >This time, out of almost thin air appeared Celestia, Luna, that one dean from crystal prep and another woman you've never seen before >L:"We are pleased to see you've already had him prepared for us. Good work you all." >You had to assume they were the head vampires >Considering how the others lightly bowed their heads to them "What the fuck? Even you too Principal Celestia? Vice principal Luna?"
>Luna glared at you >L:"Why is the food still talking to us? I thought you would have him sedated for this?" >TS:"We had a better idea than devouring him." >RD:"Yeah! Why not keep him here and just milk him of his nutrients when we can?" >L:"Fools! Do you know how dangerous a human can be if left alive after finding out our truth? No. This one shall be feasted upon then thrown out like all the rest." >The rest? "How many? How many people have you killed?!"
>PC:"Oh Anonymous, you should be concerned with your own life. Instead of those already deceased." >She walked towards you and rested her hand upon your chest right where your heart beat was >Suddenly you hear Fluttershy's voice in your ear >FS:"Wake up Anonymous." >Wha? >Suddenly the moon changes to sun and bathes the room in sunlight >The vampires all turn to ash >And the only one left standing before you, is Fluttershy >She slowly closes the distance >She moves her mouth to your neck >And you wake up Insanebow Dash
>>25093781 >The sun was shining from the curtains directly in your eyes >Oh what a wonderful way to wake up >You try to move to the blinds to close them but fail >You look down >You woke up covered in bitches >Must of forgot to turn your swag off >Holding you tightly to your right was Fluttershy who was looking at you with half lidded eyes >She whispers >FS:"Good morning sleepy head" "Morning."
>You try moving your left arm but it is also being held >By Sunset and Twilight >God damn you weren't getting up any time soon >Around the bed was the rest of the girls >You thought you were laying on a pillow but it was actually Applejacks ass >Rainbow Dash was laying near the foot of the bed with her head right next to your cock >She must of tried waking you with fellatio >Nice >Your right hand begins to move >Fluttershy holding on to it slowly begins moving it >To her nether regions >God dammit you just woke up you could not handle this much sexual tension in one room >Fluttershy finally presses your hand against her pussy >FS:"You know, you promised me you would come back for me and do me again. I'm holding you to that promise." >You move your hand and begin to lightly finger her, not trying to wake the girls >She seems to not care as she's letting out full moans >A light smile comes on her face >As loud as she can she "yells" >FS:"Oh Anonymous fuck me!" >Not quite a yell, but loud enough to wake the girls in the room >Fuck >Sunset is the first to stir awake and sees your hand already in Fluttershy >She gives you a flat look >SS:"And I was sleeping so peacefully dreaming of Anonymous hoping I'd get the first round. Only to be shown up by Fluttershy." >Sunset grabs your left hand and moves it down to her nether region >SS:"But I guess I can cum in second." >You feel your cock gripped >It was Fluttershy who began to stroke you off >Nope, not having a massive orgy >Not this early in the morning you weren't >You forcefully get up out of their clutches "Good morning girls!"
Anonymous
>>25093781 Oh thank fuck.
>>25093366 I wouldn't call swapping manor/manner a major mistake; they're both words, so it's just a mixup of which homophone to use. I caught that one while scrolling and thought I'd chime in, but if you like I can record any similar errors when I catch up on your story - probably tomorrow; today I need to update the shotavamp story, handle a few life things, and work on something /tg/.
...fuck, even when I'm offering to help I'm correcting people. Sorry.
twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25093306 >You fumble for the keys, but can't quite find them - or pockets. >It takes an embarrassingly long time for you to remember that you'd put on some pajama bottoms. The keys are still in your jean's pocket, just... well... that happens to be on the floor in your bedroom. Not here. "I - um - don't have them on me."
>Rarity continues to stare at you, though she adopts an expression of infinite patience. It's not quite patronizing, but close enough to make your cheeks burn. "They're in my other pants."
>An amused curl of her mouth is the only change in her expression. "Forgot I changed."
>Rarity gives a polite little laugh at your explanation. "They're in my bedroom. On the floor."
>She pulls herself up and kisses your cheek. >"Fluttershy, you heard the man," she says once her lips have parted with your face. "Feel free to go get them." >The girl looks fearfully towards the hall, where Twilight and AJ still stand, and lets out a low groan. >"Enter a boy's room uninvited? I *can't.*" She shakes her head after a second, more for herself than in response to Rarity. "I just *can't*." "Um. I don't mind."
>That's all it takes. >It's hard to identify exactly what changes about the girl, but those four words are enough to make a difference. >She still looks uncomfortable and unsure, but gives another little shake of her head. >"I'll... I'll stay." Anonymous
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Anonymous
>>25086221 Autistocrat update your pastebin you ultra faggot
TheAutistocrat
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>>25094731 I did It's just part 1 they posted, here's part two:
http://pastebin.com/Ury4hS6J >>25094184 It's good man, don't feel obligated to but you're the one that notices them the most and I would like it if you could tell me which ones are wrong, I usually notice them before hand, but with Green text it's a little bit harder.
>>25090883 >>25086520 :)
I'll go ahead and write a little bit for now, and then do a big chunk of the story tonight when I get home.
TheAutistocrat
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>>25086221 > Where were you? > What was going on? > You peek from under your covers. > You were at home... > Yes, you had school tomorrow. > But something was wrong. "Mooom?" You call out.
> Your voice was shrill and cracky, on the verge of puberty. > Multiple posters and figures of heroes and horror monsters decorated your room. > Off in the corner was a TV covered in stickers of lasers, heroes, and horror monsters. > You slid out from under the covers, hoping out of your bed. > Reaching into the nightstand on the side of your bed you pull out the bright yellow flashlight from the drawer. > Today had been a crud day already. > First Rocket and his boys took your money for the new SpudNik comic. > Then your mom and dad got in a fight, something about the courts or something. > And you tried to cook your own dinner, only for it literally blow up in your face. > And it's not like you could go to the hospital, your dad didn't want you too, yelling about something outside. > So you just threw one of the halloween masks you had on, the pain of the burns surprisingly not stinging. > You thought you looked cool. > You wore a green and black hero mask, from the first comic book of the hero Clover. > You peer out into the hallway, shining the light down it. > Something moved just beyond the light. > You step out gingerly, acting as if you hadn't just seen that. "Mom!? Dad!?"
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> You creep down the hallway. > A creak sounded throughout the hallway, causing you too flinch. > What was that? > You steady your breathing and continue on. > It was just like that one episode of the Power Posse where the giant space rhino they were hunting got loose. > Yeah, you were Captain Crusher and you were hunting for the space rhino. > You keep the flashlight steady, making a right down the hall. > Behind you was the living room. > Straight ahead was your parents. > Why weren't they answering? > And what was that moving down the hallway earlier. > Whatever, the door was right in front of your cracked open slightly. > You clear your throat, getting no response. > Nothing... > You move forward. > You really wished you had Captain Crushers power gauntlets right now... > Reaching the door you push it open tenderly. > Shining the light in on the bed you freeze. > Some creature loomed over your parents. > It was on top of your dad, moving its head as if it were ripping into something. > The sound it was making reminded you of whenever your dad ate chicken wings. > It suddenly froze. > Turning around slowly you found two, inky black eyes staring into your own. > And then... > It screeched. > You jolt awake a brief 'O' flashing before your eyes. > You were in a barn now, the hay everywhere and smell of it told you that much... > Most of it was pitch black though, shrouded from your view. > Looking around you saw that you were in front of your RV. > You suddenly went rigid. > What time was it? > You try and move forward in order to cure yourself. > Only to be stopped by a force around your chest. > Looking down you saw rope keeping you tied to a chair. > What? > Just a few feet in front of you was a square of moonlight, creeping in through an opening in the barns roof. > Then. > AJ stepped into the moonlight. > She was human but her glare still felt predatory. > You test the ropes. > Too tight.
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> Aj glared down at you, putting her hands on her shapely hips. > "No can do Mister Hunter." > Oh for fucks sake. > "Save your own hide maybe, Ah knew something was up with you when you first came in." > You groan, throwing your head back in exasperation. > "Admit it, you came down here to hunt me an' my family didn't ya'?" > What. > You didn't even know she was a Werewolf until you got here. > Realistically you should have realized this earlier, if you had, you wouldn't be in this situation right now... > "You're lying." > You freak out in the chair, every muscle in your body hoping to beat the shit out of this chick. > "Ah didn't want too snoop but mah gut told me something was up with ya'." > "Damn AJ, looks like nothing gets under your nose." > You crane your neck up, seeing Dash entering through the barnyard roof entrance. > She landed down gently next to AJ, her arm and feet taking place of the talons and wings once more. > She didn't wear much except for a sports bra and black basketball shorts, which really complimented her athletic runners body. > Which you weren't currently miring because you were pissed beyond all belief. > "No!" > "NO!" > You scoot the chair forward, just barely hitting the moonlight. > As you came in contact you suddenly lurched back, feeling a crawling sensation under your skin. > AJ and Dash moved forward instantly, pulling you out of the moonlight. > "You got the wolf in you now, though many of your kind don't know it because you're all shoot first questions later, if you can fight it long enough you can still cure yourself." > She frowned, letting go of your chair and reeling away. > "But Ah don't think you're capable of it... My family never was." > You groan, seeing your situation getting increasingly shittier. > Dash stretched letting out a yawn. > "To be honest I don't think you can... Uhhh no offense." > You smile cynically.
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> Think... > Think... > This girl was stubborn, even more stubborn than Luna. > You needed to do or say something to gain back her trust. > Thiiink.... > You suddenly get a stroke of brilliance. > The two shot each other quizzical looks. > AJ glared at you. > "Don't use my friends as a scape-" > AJ stopped, letting her arms drop. > "Yes..." > "Oh Applejack how long are we going to be here?" > Two tender hands were placed on your shoulders. > Rarity leaned forward coming into your view, her bosom pressed against your back. > Normally while you would be thrilled, the two fangs slowly revealing themselves were making you anything but. > "Hello there Mister Hunter~!" Rarity chimed. > "NO!" AJ shouted. > Rarity shrugged and pushed you into the moonlight. > As soon as you came in contact with it a crawling sensation overtook your entire body. > Thoughts of multiple meats and animals flashed through your mind, some part of your brain wanting all of it. > You shout into the night sky as the three watched. > Your vision began to blur, the moonlight becoming much more attractive. > Eat. > Hunt. > Destroy. > You try and fight your binds, the sensation of crawling turning into a steady burning. > "Ah remember what happened when mah parents trusted you guys!" > She turned away, ignoring your screams. > Rarity folded her arms over her chest, watching with amusement. > Dash seemed to find this awkward, turning around and placing an arm over AJs shoulders.
TheAutistocrat
> You could feel multiple bones snapping and popping, making way for the new body. > You couldn't let it happen. > Think of something else. > Get your mind off of the wolf waiting. > You think of different celebrities, games, and movies. > You count and recite the ABCS back words. > You think of a retirement plan. > Anything to get your mind off of the increasing pain. > But those thoughts began to stray, turning back to hunting, meat, and killing. > AJ turned back to you, watching you squirm in your chair. > "Ah got a deal for you, if you can give me one good reason, and It's going to be hard, why we should help you at all, then shoot." > The other two watched you expectantly. > Among all of the pain, you find yourself at a loss of words. > AJ just sneered. > "Last time my family trusted a hunter, he killed both of my parents and tried to kill the rest of us." > "If you can give me ONE good reason why you're nothing like them, then go for it." > She crossed her arms. > "But like ah said, it ain't going to be easy." > How come Twilight and Sunset knew who you were when these guys didn't? > You could feel your fingernails elongating. > You couldn't fight this much longer. > This needed to be ended now. > The moon was so beautiful... > So pretty.... > No! > Then... > You let out a long howl...
TheAutistocrat
That's it until 9-10 pm tonight.> No idea.
Anonymous
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>>25095823 Can't wait for more
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>25095834 Oh sweet lord I'm pumped
Anonymous
>>25095834 Anon must overcome the bloodlust, and then point out to Apple
Jackass that shit like this is why people call them monsters.
It's the only way.
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>>25095834 Relate the fact that your parents were killed by monsters just like her parents were killed by monster hunters. Point out the hypocrisy, she's stubborn so she's gonna need an emotional blow to get anything through to her
Anonymous
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AutistAhoy
Autistocrat from my phone here, will be on shortly.
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>>25100613 No clue. For now I'm assuming everyone is on break. Not that I care much. I have too short an attention span to keep up with too many stories, so I eagerly await your posting.
Anonymous
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>>25100613 I'm still wondering where the other monster hunter Anon went. His story was great.
Anonymous
TheAutistocrat
Starting shortly, had some issues backing me up.
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>>25101731 Eagerly waiting.
Anonymous
>>25100613 >where are all the other writers? Not sure if I count, but I'm sorting out some shit. Gonna get on when I can and hammer something out.
Triple Nigger
>>25101900 Namefagging is hard.
TheAutistocrat
>>25095823 >Aj suddenly pushed you forward, moving you from the moonlight and back into the darkness. > The pain and thoughts began to slowly disperse. > The parts of you that changed stopped mid-transformation and began to turn back. > Which was painful as fuck because... > POP > SNAP > CRACK > Your bones were the most affected link. > You let your head drop, exhausted from the ordeal. > Your chest heaved as you breathed heavily, trying to get as much air in your lungs as possible. > "What did you just say about my brother?" > AJ leaned down and shook your shoulder, her strength rattling your brain. > Good lord, if you didn't live the life you lived you would have said that was the most painful thing you've ever experienced. > IF > You loll your head back up, trying to keep it straight. > Everything in your body was dead, completely numb to the world. > Dash and Rarity watched with interest as AJ glared at you. "I..."
> You pause, just saying that took a lot from you. "I helped..."
> "SAVE YOUR OWN HIDE!" > Do something brain. "No! Shut up for a second you thick hic!"
> "Oh, how rude." Rarity muttered. > Rainbow snickered. > "Guess he's got some bite in him." "When Big Mac was down I dragged his ass all the way down to your house, just to get him safe."
> "You're lying." "If I was couldn't you smell it or something?"
> Check and mate. > "No, that's not how it works." > Nevermind. TheAutistocrat
"Okay... Okay! Listen, I know it's hard for you to work with a hunter and all, but think how hard it is for me too help you guys, I've been fighting against you lot all my life, not with you!"> AJ straightened. > "You're just a psychopath with a couple guns, Ah don't think ah could trust you." > Think of something... > "Yeah right." Dash muttered. > "Twi and Flutters may not get into our world as much but we three delve heavily into our world, some really nice people were killed with extreme prejudice just because they were 'monsters'." > You shift slowly. > Dash continued. > "How do we know you're not gonna kill us all as soon as we turn our backs." > Bring it up? > Yeah. > Rarity chuckled. > "You must have some dirt on us too know that, and no. Neither of those ladies have ever mentioned you." > Wow, that hurt emotionally. > Like it made your heart do a flip. > You're running out of options here. > You're starting to panic there buddy. > Yes, this is quite apparent. > "Luna and Celestia proved where they stood." > The girls traded looks before AJ nodded. > "They killed a hunter."
TheAutistocrat
> This night just kept on getting better and better. > What did they mean by killed a hunter? > Exactly what they said Anon. > Well shit. > Your jaw hung open, no words being able to form to describe the disbelief you were holding. > Rarity rolled her eyes. > "Don't worry Darling, it wasn't in cold blood." > You turn to face her. > She gave you a soft smile. > "She had come down to Canterlot to hunt us, she was targeting our family and friends." > "She tried to get in the school and just kill us all in a mass shooting, regardless of civilian casualties." > She sat down on a hale bay and folded her legs. > "You can see why we take hunter so personally, our friends and families were threatened." > Her eyes flashed an angry red briefly. > "SHE Tried to attack Sweetie Belle." > Rarity began to check her nails. > "It was bound to happen eventually, Gilda was a very brash woman." > Ah... > You had heard of that hunter. > She was a good hunter yeah. > But a terrible person. > You and her worked on a Ghoul case a year ago. > She had nearly killed a bunch of kids just to kill the damn thing. > You frown. > "They shot her, simple as that." Rarity sighed, leaning on her hand. > "They certainly weren't happy about it, but we knew we could trust them after that." > "So Anon." Aj started. > "How do we know we can trust you?"
TheAutistocrat
> You sigh. > You weren't getting out of this. > Not alive or even human to be real. > So you had to know. > "They're...fine." > No they weren't. > AJ folded her arms over her chest. > Giving in she let out a sigh. > "Big Mac isn't waking up and Granny Smith isn't healing, both of them are barely hanging on." > "Can't, not everyone here is educated on our world." > "No you can't." > "....." > Rainbow and AJ shared a look. > AJ nodded, Dash heading behind you and opening up your RV. > You couldn't finish this without at least helping the others. > They were too nice for that. > Plus maybe if you helped, karma or some divine being would intervene and save your ass. > Though AJ had you doubting them a bit. > Shortly after Rainbow stumbled out with the jars and the shaker. > One of the jars radiated a green energy. > She placed them down on a nearby hay bale, examining each one. > "Uhh, you sure this stuff isn't gonna like... blow up?" > If you wanted it too blow, you would have them use Orc blood instead of ectoplasm. > AJ looked you over, studying your every move. > You didn't care either way, you just wanted this night to be over with. > "... Rarity, could you grab a bowl..." > Rarity complied without saying anything, leaving the barn for a minute and then re-appearing. > The next few minutes where the most tense and silent minutes of your life. > AJ mixed the bowl while the other two girls watched curiously. > Dash slowly crept behind a large stack of hay bales while nobody was looking. > AJ stopped at the three minute mark and looked down at the bowl.
TheAutistocrat
> "Well?" > She shoved the bowl in your face. > An orange glowing glob of goo stared back at you. > The heat radiating from it fell over your face, bathing you in a warm orange light. > Some of the light fell over your shoulder, the tingling sensation of healing already falling over it. > This shit was hard too come by, so it pained you greatly to have her make this... > AJ seemed to feel it's power too, her black eye already gone. > "Y- Wha-" > She and the other two girls looked you over. > AJ and Dash jumped. > Dash pulled open the barndoor while AJ ran out, holding it at arms length. > Rarity on the other hand sat in the barn. > She looked you over and hopped off the hale bale she was sitting on. > "I guess you're not so bad after all..." > She sauntered over and leaned in front of you. > You could see her rather defined cleavage pushing towards your face. > Now you could mire. > She reached past you and undid the ropes with a flick of her hand. > Leaning away from you she sauntered away, joining the other two. > You get out of the chair, nearly falling forward into the moonlight from your injuries. > With a grunt you right yourself. > Turning around you stagger to your RV, pulling open the door and nearly falling over. > Dragging yourself up the steps you stop at the Drivers seat and wheel, leaning against it for support. > You needed to get away from here... > You stagger over to the table and reach under it, pulling out some black pin-up curtains you place them on the RV's windows. > Getting in the drivers seat, you start up the RV. > Your gas was already half-full... > Pushing down on the pedal as hard as you could, the vehicle lurched forward, coming to life. > The barnyards door splintered away instantly, giving no resistance. > You ignored the moonlight coming in through your windshield. > And you somehow managed to ignore all of the sensations following after.
TheAutistocrat
> You drove like a bat out of hell away from the farm-house. > Your vision blurred as the burning and changing came back. > Your breath became labored, making this all harder to do. > No matter you had somewhere you could squat at... > You push past the doors, coming into the Asylums check-in room. > It was safe here now, you had already exorcised it. > Moving out of the moonlight you fall forward onto your knees. > You drag yourself up, gripping the corner of the right hallway. > Staggering forward you stop in front one of the asylum's cells. > You grab the handle and pull the door open. > Your head pounded... > It no longer needed moonlight... > Moving into the cell you drop on all fours. > You felt the urge to howl and just run around. > But you ignored it. > You reach into your coat and pull out a small vial of sky blue liquid. > You had used this once before to combat a werewolf. > It was an extract from some plant that could cure ailments like Lyncathropy. > You got no answer, being used to that. > You lift your mask and hold the vial to your lips. > Tilting your head back, you took a big swig. > You fall to the ground, dropping the vial. > Your whole body began to convulse and shake. > Hallucinations of monsters and people danced before you. > Your mother and father... > Wolves. > Ghosts. > Vampires. > A girls voice sounded softly throughout the air, followed by the chime of a tinder box. > A women in a ballrooms dress twirled past you. > Suddenly a loud slam and a twitchy creature stood in front of you. > It looked like a demented amalgam of Luna and Celestia. > Dropping down on four arms it crawled towards you like a spider, repeating your name over and over again. > Just before it made contact.... > Your vision faded.
TheAutistocrat
> Your eyes fluttered open slowly. > Uhg, that night you had... > You lay on your back, arms and legs pointed out like a star. > Next to you was a shattered vial, having long served it purpose. > You stare at the dusty, old ceiling. > Yeah.... > You remembered everything from last night... from the turf war to the crazy ass trip you had. > Which reminded you... > You pick yourself up with a grunt. > That demon lestia... > Or Cuna... > Cuna sounded better, like a kind of fish. > That demon Cuna reminded you that Luna and Celestia wanted to get you working at the school today. > Which... > What time was it? > You weren't late were you? > You peer down at your watch. > 4:50 AM. > Good, you were supposed to meet them there at 5:30... > You weren't exactly looking forward to this. > Plus... > You sniff yourself, reeling back. > You smelled like wet dog, blood, mucky water, and sweat. > You would need a shower first... > You looked around the room you were in. > Aside from a bunk bed there was nothing else in here... > And you doubted the water worked... > You move forward, your body stiff and sore from yesterday. > Thanks to the glow of the goo though, your shoulder and bruises were completely healed. > Still didn't keep them from aching to all hell though. > You move out into the hallway and move into the main entrance. > You didn't plan on coming back here, this had been a final resort because you hadn't had anywhere else to ride out the wolf. > You step out of the doors, greeted by night sky and morning dew. > Heading down the hill slowly you sigh. > At least Sunset still thought you were cool. > Reaching the foot of the hill you move over to your RV, still moving slowly on account of your stiff body. > Moving up the steps you plop into the drivers seat. > You start up the RV. > Time to see the girls...
TheAutistocrat
All I'm going for tonight, starting to yawn and I don't want to start slipping up every post.
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>>25102822 Damn, cant wait
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>>25093931 Kek
Semen demons can never allow one to recharge
Anonymous
>>25087094 Someone say "blood orgy"?
Triple Nigger
>switch to one tab away >phone reloads page when I come back I sure do love typing my post out twice. Argh.
>>25101900 >>25101905 Fucking damn it. Tomorrow. Again.
I'll at least provide some edits before I sleep:
>>25102012 >"No! Shut up for a second you thick hic!" Hick.
>>25102123 >You must have some dirt on us too know that >>25102405 >If you wanted it too blow >>25102553 >This shit was hard too come by To, not too.
>>25102123 >She sat down on a hale bay and folded her legs. >>25102553 >hale bale Uh
Hay bale?
Just as an aside, it always bugs me that stories never specify what kind of hay. Alfalfa? Wheat? Grass? Plain ol' straw? >>25102659 >No matter you had somewhere you could squat Could use a comma after 'no matter'
Anyway, that's the small stuff. I'm gonna get nitpicky from here down.
>>25102659 >It was safe here now, you had already exorcised it. That's a compound sentence - both clauses are independent, so it needs more than a comma separating them. A semicolon or dash would work instead, since shoehorning in a conjunction would mess with the flow.
>>25102785 >You didn't plan on coming back here, this had been a final resort because you hadn't had anywhere else to ride out the wolf. Same story. Wouldn't lose anything by separating this into two sentences, or you could just swap out the comma for a semicolon or what have you.
>>25102220 >You and her worked on a Ghoul case You and she. Rule of thumb there is that if it fits without one of the pronouns, it's good. Just using "You had worked with her" works fine too, and sounds better IMO.
I didn't notice most of those until I went looking for fixes - just 'hick,' 'no matter,' and one of the 'too's. Want me to record anything I notice when I read the pastebin and catch up to the turf war?
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Why does technology hate me today
I just want to post and go to bed and figure out what went wrong in the morning
Thirty minutes is too long to spend unfucking my phone for one goddamn post
>>25103831 I believe I did.
Though since I'm still being an insufferable nerd, orgy doesn't necessarily reference sex exclusively, just wild and unrestrained indulgence with connotations of passion.
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>>25092190 H-HUMAN? YOU KNOW THERE AREN'T ANY PUZZLES BACK THERE, RIGHT?
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>>25103841 Thanks man, If there is one thing I'm looking to improve upon it is my writing.
I may be home earlier possibly around 8 or 9 tonight.
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>>25106300 Oh yeah forgot, Yes please, I know that there are some mistakes in there, little hard for me to notice them.
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page 7 recovery
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>>25110137 So, you like-a the undead?
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Rising from the grave
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It was a mash.
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>>25112221 Wow, there's more TwiLich than I thought out there. Didn't know based JargonScott had done so much.
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>>25113470 That undead twi is cute
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>>25114275 Id fuck that trixie
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>>25114706 You'd fuck any Trixie, anon.
Which is the right answer TheAutistocrat
Going to start writing right after my shower.
>>25114706 You're not alone Anon.
>>25113470 That's the most adorable little brain muncher I've ever seen.
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>>25102785 > You had no idea where the hell you could even park. > Your RV took up at least four different spots. > Welp, fuck the students and teachers who planned to park here today. > Flicking the engine off and hopping out of the RV you take a deep breath of the fresh air. > This town wasn't so bad. > Well, once you got past all of the gnashing teeth and bloody claws. > Most of the students and facility were already here, there cars taking up various spots. > Heh, plebs only had one spot to their own. > You had four! > The right-back wheel of your RV suddenly burst, causing you to nearly jump out of your skin. > Okay. > You could fix that. > You watched as the tire died. > It let out pathetic sputters of gasping as it slowly sunk to the ground. > Maybe not... > You would have to shill out for another one. > You look at the money clip. > You had maybe about four-hundred and twenty one dollars left. > So close, you would need to spend a dollar. > You parked in the back, trying to keep your presence more conspicuous. > Eh, it worked for you... > You head towards the school. > Your first job, you wandered what it would be? Anonymous
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> Stepping past the back entrance doors you found yourself in a stretching hallway. > Hm, you didn't remember coming through this way last time. > How'd you get in last time? > You're Baxtor leach, the local school janitor. > Something's been fusing around in the air vents and they wanted you to check it out. > You check the stalls. > It came from here most of the- > The bathroom ceiling suddenly caved. > Some man dressed in flashy clothing and a green mask let out multiple swears and curses. > He slammed into the ground, letting out a groan of pain. > The strange man looked you over silently. > Suddenly he rushed forward and sent a hay-maker into your face, knocking you down. > He pulled out a marker and began to doodle on your face. > You tried to get up and do something but he socked you in the face again. > Darkness greeted you this time. > Oh yeah... > Welp, he had four weeks paid vacation now, it was totally worth it. > You check your watch. > 5:21 > Hm, where were you even supposed to meet them? > Welp, you would figure it out. > You usually did in the end. > Layout... > The rear parking lot was right across from the football and baseball fields. > You came to a stop at a right and left break in the hallway. > Left was headed towards the fields so you went right. > After walking down the bland hallway for about three minutes you come to a double door. > Pushing past it you find yourself in another hallway, this one filled with lockers and wooden doors. > The doors and lockers had multiple halloween decorations adorning them. > Black and orange banners and streamers hung overheard, making a stark contrast to the white polished floors. > Your Loafers tapped against the ground softly. > This school was impeccably clean for a public school. > Luna and Celestia may be better at their jobs than you thought. > Suddenly you were tackled from the side.
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>>25115456 > You parked in the back, trying to keep your presence more conspicuous. Less conspicuous?
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>>25115640 Yeah, thank you.
> Greentext man, it's a pain to work with. I'm just going to proofread my posts before I put them out, may be slower but the quality should improve.
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>>25115635 >You're Baxtor leach, the local school janitor. If 'Leach' is his last name, it should be capitalized.
> Something's been fusing around in the air vents Fussing? Might want to consider a different word, because neither of those makes much sense to me. Bumping maybe?
>halloween Should be capitalized, and
>Loafers shouldn't.
>>25115658 Either way. Most anons would probably prefer speed, but writing without errors is more satisfying. I like to triple-check for errors when I write - once when I finish writing the post, once when I select/copy it, and once when I paste it into the post form. Probably overkill.
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> You tucked into a roll, throwing the body off of you. > Though that little stunt left your whole body aching in pain. > Halting your roll, you jump up and take a defensive stance. > Only too see some puff ball of pink hair sitting on the ground. > She rubbed her head slowly, muttering 'ow' over and over again. > Where had she even come from? > Her backpack lay across the floor, all of its contents spilled out. > You reach down and pick them up, watching her slowly. > She leaned back, letting you get a good look. > She was a light pink girl with darker shaded hair. > It was possibly the craziest do' you had ever witnessed, jumping everywhere but staying styled at the same time. > Welp... > You look over the papers, most of them consisting of strings of numbers and letters you didn't even understand. > You hold them out, catching her attention. > She looked at you then gasped. > "Who are you!?" > She jumped a good ten feet in the air, causing you to reel back. > Was this a monster? > "I haven't seen somebody like you here!" > In a blink of an eye she was all over you, lifting your coat and pinching at your suit. > "You've got such a neat style, I like all the black, my sister likes to wear black too, she's also into purple,blue,blackagain." > The words began to melt together, her speech getting increasingly speedier. >"sheoncefoundaturtlethatwasgreenwithblackspotsanditwasfiguredoutotbeasnappingturtleand-" > Was this girl a zombie? Because she obviously didn't breath. > You reach up and push her away, taking a step back. > She stopped talking and gasped again. > "Waitaminute!" > Really? > "You're supposed to be coming with me!" > What? > "I know that style~! My friends told me all about you last night." > Her blue eyes seemed to be brighter now... > "You know, the Apples?" > No... > Oh no... > It became apparent to you that nobody else was in the hall. > The girls eyes were intensely bright now, nearly glowing.
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> You reach into your coat for your handy-dandy stake. > Or anything to defend yourself with really. > Grabbing around you realize you had... > Nothing... > Ah... > Still empty handed from the fight with the wolves. > You know, it was shit like this that led to people having doubts. > Suddenly you grab hold of a small box. > Pulling it out you hold it up triumphantly. > The girls eyes stopped glowing. > She seemed all innocent again... > "I'm not a demon silly, I'm Pinkamena Diana Pie." > Huh, maybe that was just paranoia sett- > "I'm a Djinn." > You jump back, holding the shells at arms length. > Either way if you did what you were about to do... > It would most likely just kill you. > But that was more reassuring than dying by a monster. > Especially after the night you had. > "Oh Mister Hunter don't worry, I'm not gonna hurt ya'." > Suddenly two hands were placed on your shoulders. > How the hell did she get behind you? > She hopped onto your shoulders. > With her legs firmly planted on your head she let out a chuckle and tapped on your head like a bongo. > "Go Mister Hunter, GO!" > This... > You pry her legs off and tilt your body back. > Her weight disappeared, leaving you be. > Good, maybe she would hit the ground hard. > You turn around with a shit-eating grin. > That turned to a frown when you realized nothing was there. > "I thought you would be more fun than this Mister Hunter~." > You look up, seeing her playfully grinning down at you from the air. > Oy vey... > How come nobody has walked in yet? > You look down both ends of the hallway. > It was as empty as the dickens. > That made no sense but you cared not because this girl WAS PISSING YOU OFF! > "Why would I eat you? You're on my side Mister Hunter." > Oh, at least that was cleared up.
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> You know, like after you got your ass kicked ten ways to Sunday. > Pinkamena suddenly frowned. > "Though, you did hurt my friends." > "They were just scared Mister Hunter." > That name was getting pretty annoying. > Pinkamena smiled. > "Then you can call me Pinkie~" > She frowned again. > "But why did you have to go and hurt my friends, they-" > "Well yeah! That's why they're hurt, AJ feels reeeally bad about what she did!" > Huh really? > Did she think you were cool now? > "Well she said that she was really glad you helped out, Granny Smith and Big Mac are fine now because of you!" > Neat... > Maybe something could be salvaged from that... > You really didn't know what a Djinn does. > You had heard of them among the Hunter community but never actually fought one. > Any Hunter that did, didn't live to tell the tale. > And most of them lived in Arabic regions, there were like none in murica'. > Save for this one... > You would have to play your cards carefully, from what you had seen most of these girls pull off. > They were very dangerous. > Pinkie hovered in the air briefly. > With a wave of her hand her backpack and papers came to life, surrounded by a light blue aura. > The papers jumped into the bag. > The bag then hopped into the air, strapping around her arms. > "Follow me~ The girls are already there." > Oh... > You comply, watching her hover down the hallway. > Wasn't she scared of someone seeing? > Last you checked this was still a very busy school. > So why was no-one coming down the hallway?
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>>25116090 she did some monster magic shit didnt she
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> Oh well. > What bothered you more than that was the fact that this girl looked so... > Normal. > She wore a flashy outfit that consisted of a tiny blue jacket over a flashy shirt with some sort of magic girl on it. > Her purple skirt seemed to flap in some un-felt wind around her, revealing her.. > Leggings. > Damn, you had hoped for a little less. > And too top it all of, she wore some blue boots. > Big boots... > Big, jiggly boots. > You weren't really focused on the boots anymore if you couldn't tell. > Her rack was almost as big as Fluttershys. > Pinkie stopped just at the end of the hallway. > It led too... > Well... > Nothing. > You didn't know how to describe it but nothing was there. > As in. > Nothing. > No stark whiteness. > No pitch blackness... > Nothing... > You look at the other end of the hallway. > It looked the same, like a regular hallway. > What? > You turn back to the nothingness. > "Give me a sec." > Pinkie put her fingers to her head, pressing against her temples. > Snapping her eyes shut she let out a concentrated groan as she focused. > At least, you think she was focusing. > She looked constipated above anything else. > You didn't feel like laughing. > Man, where did your soul go? > You blamed all this fighting, it was slowly wearing you out. > Suddenly a blue fire burned at the edge of the hallway and nothingness. > You peer at the blue fire around the edges. > The same fire danced one the tips of Pinkies fingers. > Suddenly, in the blink of an eye, the fire burst outwards. > It consumed the nothingness. > It cackled and popped for a brief second before the fire dispersed. > In the place of the nothingness was now a forest. > "Wheew! That's always a doozie!" > What just happened?
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> You step forward into the forest gingerly. > It wasn't like the forests you're used too. > Where you dabbled in fear and survival among these areas. > Here, it felt safe. > Serene even. > Huh... > You hadn't felt like this in years. > A narrow path led past the vibrant flora and vegetation in the area. > Overhead some birds chirped while the clouds hung high in the sky. > The sun peaked through some of the treetops, spreading sun spots over the both of you. > "No idea! TwiSci knows more about it than I do." > You would have to ask about this. > This was some high-level magic here. > Like, Harry Potter shit. > "Come on!" > She hovered down the path, pushing past two low hanging branches covered in purple flowers. > Welp, you were in her world now. > You trail after her, admiring the scenery. > So many nooks and crannies but you thought of them as none other than that at the moment. > Not a hiding place for a monster. > You walked down the path until you heard the sound of rushing water. > Pinkie pushed past some thick shrubbery, leaving you alone on the path. > "Hey guys!" she shouted just beyond the bush. > You shrug and push past it as well. > It was harder than it looked to be honest. > Felt like you were fighting a tide. > Finally making your way past the bushes you stumble into the clearing. >Ah... > Everybody from Luna and Celestia to the seven girls stood in the clearing. > AJ looked at you briefly before glaring. > The others seemed pissed that you were here too. > Save for Luna and Celestia who just sat back and watched. > They sat on lawn chairs, a tree stump and a game of chess in the middle of them. > The others were... > Well they had stopped what they were doing just to glare at you. > "Anonymous!" AJ shouted. > Oh boy
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> She lumbered over to you. > She snatched you up in a hug, nearly crushing your spine. > Good lord! > She lifted you into the air, the bear hug making you feel lightheaded. > She put you down, the girls watching as you crippled to the ground. > "Ah'm sorry..." > Huh? > "Ah'm so sorry... You were helping... Applebloom told me the whole story." > Well that's fucking wonderful after all the shit you had gone through. > You give a thumbs up, wincing in pain. > Ah'm so sorry Anon, Ah really can't say it enough!" > That came out so pathetically you almost considered turning away and walking off right there. > You cough awkwardly and place your hands on your hips. > Some of the girls snickered while Twilight and Rarity rolled their eyes. > You stand to your full height. > AJ had her hat back, cool. > She wore a yellow and orange plaid shirt that clung to her frame. That was toppled off with a pair of tight jeans and cowboy boots. > Neat. > She and Rainbow had been the only ones to change outfits. > Dash simply wore a t-shirt with a pair of cargo shorts and a pair of sky blue sneakers. > She looked juuuust on the verge of dyke galore. > "Ah, so Pinkie did find him after all." Rarity said. > She moved to the edge of the clearing. > One of the trees roots rose from the ground, forming a seat for her. > She sat down and crossed her leg, folding her arms as well. > "I sure do hope having a male in here doesn't throw off our dynamic." > Sure would! > You got so many girls, you were drowning in them. > Not really, but it was glad to know you were coming back. > Something about this area just made you feel better. > AJ suddenly stopped her groveling and perked up. > "How did you fight the wolf?" > Luna flinched, turning her attention on you. > "What was that Applejack?"
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> "Well Anon was bit tryna' help us." > "The turf war?" Celestia asked, moving her Queen across the board. > Heh, she was so boned, you never moved the Queen like that. > "Yah." > "I thought you didn't want any help with that." Twilight muttered. > "Ah know ah said ah didn't want help, But he was kinda' thrown into it outta nowhere." > "Wait, Anon was bit?" > You tried to get AJ's attention by waving your arms. > "Yeah." > Luna glared at you, reaching for her pocket. > "Are you a little hungry right now Anon? Be honest." > You tug at your collar. > "How?" Celestia asked, shifting for a more defensible position as well. > Wow, you were really not trusted huh. > You hold your hands up to make a point. > You wave them back and forth. > Luna and Celestia relaxed, leaning back into their chairs. > Luna moved one of her pawns with a sigh. > Sunset finally spoke up, cutting the silence. > "Well, I er... I'm sorry Anon." > For what again? > Oh yeah. > You whirl on her, a smile plastered on your face. > "Well I knew you could help!" > What? > "When we fought that Poltergeist you handled it so well, and I thought that you could help AJ out." > She nodded at AJ. > "She wouldn't take it from any of us." > "Shimmer, Ah would hit ya' if he didn't actually work out." > "I know." > Well then. > Leaning away from that, you move to the edge as well and plop down, expecting a root to pop up. > It didn't. > You let out a grunt as you slammed, rump first into the ground, eliciting a giggle from the girls. > Even Fluttershy seemed to like you a little bit more. > Whatever... > Rubbing your back side you turn back to the others. > Time to get some answers.
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"So uh... I got some questions."> Luna got up and stretched, the chess game disappearing. > First you would have to ask about this. > But not from them. > You look over at Twilight and Pinkie. > Twilight smiled brightly. > "Oh no..." Dash muttered. > "Welp buckle up girls, she finally gets to explain it..." AJ sighed. > Sunset let out a long groan and sat down, one of the roots popping up for her. > Fuck you too. > Fluttershy sat down on a root as well, crossing her legs and waiting patiently. > Pinkie Pie hovered off somewhere, muttering about cupcakes or something. > Twilight swept her arm through the air. > When she finished the gesture, a chalk board appeared next to her. > "Okay, I'll start off with the basics." > Time moved slower here... you caught that much. > Luna and Celestia let Twilight rant, opting to just stay out of it. > She had multiple numbers drawn out on the board. > Rainbow yawned and let her head drop. > Fluttershy hummed to herself quietly, garnering Rarity's and Sunsets interest. > AJ sat next to you, snoozing under her hat. > Pinkie was still off wherever she had went. > Twilight kept on talking, using a pointer to emphasize her words. > You slowly look over at Fluttershy. > Damn her chest was crazy. > It was like two beach balls in a towel. > If those were guns you would be dead. > If- > "Don't you understand now?" > Twilight was inches from your face, blocking your view. > The others were jolted from their half-awake states. > Twilight clapped her hands. > "Goood then you can help me perfect the method." > You frown. > "No?" > "Not even a little?" > "Did you really understand what I was saying Anonymous?" > "No?" > "No as in-" > "SHUT IT!" Dash shouted. > "She and Pinkie are basically using their freaky magic to create this place!" > Twilight frowned. > "It's not freaky. It's necessary." > "Don't start again." Sunset groaned.
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>>25094256 Where are you handsome~?
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>>25116992 Wrapping up the last bit of ending #1 and waiting for TheAutistocrat to finish for the night.
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> You lean back. > This seemed to make the others girls uncomfortable. > Twilight nodded. > "We're here and there at the same time, basically-" > "Don't say basically Darling, basically is basic, last time you said 'basically' we sat there for an hour listening to you lecture about the 'basics' of a spell." > "Welll... I..." > Twilight seemed rather flustered. > "Quiet!" She simply spat. > You smile and shake your head. > Looks like you would have to avoid asking questions around her. > You turn your focus to Luna and Celestia.
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>>25117106 Going to be done shortly Twi, got about three or four more posts, glad you're back.
>>25115731 Yeah I did prefer speed, but checking ain't a bad habit.
I'ma just be careful with the story from now on, gently caressing each word instead of manhandling it until a story bursts forth in a frothing hot mess.
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>>25117185 >gently caressing each word instead of manhandling it until a story bursts forth in a frothing hot mess. l-lewd
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> Luna started first. > "We think that not only are the students in trouble but the problems originated within our school." > "We would usually have found out the source of the problem by now, but whatever it is. It's really good at hiding." > You scratch the back of your head, trying to wrap your head around this. > Whatever was going on here was big but not big enough yet. > Otherwise every other Hunter would be down here. > So this thing knew about Hunters and their habits yeah... > Hmmm... > The girls decided to go back to what they were doing, as school still had a bit time before it would start. > Celestia and Twilight began to talk as Luna took a spot next to you. > "I'm surprised you helped AJ, you didn't even know who she was. You thought she was just another monster." > Luna looked you over. > "Maybe you were the best choice above all others." > You stop mid-sentence, seeing that she was completely serious. > Your heart pounded. > This was scarier than any monster you had fought before. > Luna, the Lunar Lunatic thought you were cool. > And she had such a cool name too. > You cough, turning away from her. > "Not really..." > You turn back to her. > "Most other Hunters would have either killed everyone there with no qualms or ran away. You actually helped out a group of Werewolves, why?" > You tap your legs, finding this conversation getting more awkward. > You didn't really do these kinds of things often. > In fact the closest you've come to doing this is when you were alone, trying to tell yourself that you were better. > Luna chuckled and shook her head. > "Well, I'm sure that whatever it is, we can take it." > She slugged your shoulder. > Holy fuck that hurt. > You rub it and mutter 'ow' under your breath. > She got up and joined her sister and Twilight. > You watched as they spoke, probably trying to come up with something for this whole case.
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> Then Twilight pulled out a paper with a circled 'A' on it. > Maybe not... > Pinkie had finally come back, carrying a tray of cupcakes in her arms. > The girls all gathered around, talking about different things as she held them out. > Sunset suddenly poked her head out of the group. > "Come on Anon, don't miss out on these." > You shrug and get up, walking over to join the others. > Hopefully your smell wouldn't get in the way of their food. > Taking one of the cupcakes you look it over. > It was a chocolate frosted, triple layered cupcake. > Halloween themed sprinkles decorated the pink frosting on the top. > You pull your mask up past your mouth. > Unwrapping the cupcake, you lean in to take your first bite. > Then the ground began to rumble. > Pinkie let out a shout as she dropped the tray. > The others let out surprised yells. > Celestia and Luna glared at the area around them, getting into hunter mode. > Sunset joined them shortly after. > She was a good student. > You tried to move closer to the girls but found the cupcake slipping from your hands. > It splattered across the ground, the pink frosting stopping just short of a glowing green crack. > The hell? > You lean in, poking it. > "Anonymous step away from that!" > The crack suddenly burst open. > The world rocked and tumbled as you flipped through the air. > Smashing into a tree you let out a groan before sliding to the ground.
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>>25117447 I swear if you stop here.
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> "Twi what's going on?" AJ shouted. > The wind began to howl, the treetops rustling up above. > The sun was suddenly blotted out, a red moon taking its place. > You pick yourself up, staggering towards the girls. > You fall forward on Fluttershy, startling her. > "Oh, it's just you..." she muttered. > She helped you right yourself. > "I think someones breaking into here!" Twilight shouted back. > The cracks began to envelope the forest, forming all around the trees and bushes. > "Pinkie!" Dash and Rarity shouted. > Pinkie was on the ground unresponsive to the others. > Shortly after Twilight let out a yell, falling to the ground as well. > The lush scenery began to wilt and die all around you. > Fluttershy let out a squeak before pressing against you. > Ehhhh, you weren't complaining. > "Sister what's happening?" Luna shouted. > "No idea!" > The dying scenery suddenly crumbled away. > You and the girls found yourselves in a nearly pitch black throne room now. > At the head of the throne room was a hooded figure, two glowing green eyes peering out from under its hood. > It pointed at your group. > Torches suddenly lit up all around you, bathing you in green light. > "Stop..." The figure said, it's distorted voice echoing all around the air. > "Digging." It finished. > With a flick of its wrist everybody found themselves pinned to the ground. > The figure stood up and held its blackened hand to the air. > An axe appeared in its hand. > It let it drop and gripped it with both hands. > Trudging over to you the figure peered down at you. > "No more..." > The last thing you heard was Sunsets and Lunas screams of protests.
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That's it for tonight, thank you Triple for the review by the way man.
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>>25117591 daaaamn you and your cliffhangers
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>>25094256 >”Good.” >You can almost swear Twilight was sighing in relief as she ambled out of the room with AJ, but why? >Rarity is right – Fluttershy hadn’t had a single alcoholic drink all night (that you’re aware of) – so it doesn’t make sense. >As you stare into the distance and try to wrap your head around this enigma, Fluttershy whines softly. >Shit, what is *she* worried about? >Like you had earlier with Rarity, you instinctively react to Fluttershy’s distress, this time turning to face her and putting both arms around Fluttershy in a bear hug – a move that catches her completely by surprise. Poor girl nearly falls over into your lap. >It doesn’t seem to work, though. The girl’s eyes remain glued to the hall and her whining only stops when she runs out of breath. “I’m sure Twilight can take care of her just fine, Fluttershy.”
>”Yeah,” Dash sneers from the floor. “She’s just changing AJ’s bandage. Shit, even I could do that!” >”Get into a lot of axefights, Dashie?” >”Yes, Pinkie. Absolutely. Axefights.” >”Wow! I didn’t know our school had a team for that!” >Neither did you. >”Dude, no, I was joking.” >”Awwwww.” >Aww. >Before you can fully accept this new feeling of loss that has suddenly appeared in your heart, a hand cups your chin and gently pulls your head back. >A pair of blue eyes gaze down at you. >”Well, Anon?” Rarity asks, shifting slightly – she must be up on her knees to hover over you like this. “What shall *we* do now?” twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25117884 >The first thing to pop into your head is that it can’t be easy for Rarity to kneel like this on the sofa. The overstuffed cushions aren’t exactly a stable foundation, plus they slant down towards the back. >She gives another little twitch, and that brings a new thought – if you were facing the other direction, you’d be motorboating her right now. >”Yeah, what *are* we gonna do?” Dash asks, the sound distant and muffled. >It’s somehow hard to hear the girl over those two blue pinpoints hanging over you. “Um, another movie, I guess?”
>Not really anything else to do, though you can probably find a deck of cards somewhere if you look hard enough. >So, yeah, not really anything else to do. >”Do you not think that maybe it is time to go to bed?” Rarity hints with a flat smile. >Well, you *are* pretty tired, and that booze probably didn’t help any, but you don’t want to be a bad host. >Okay, too late for that. Probably crossed that line when you were planning to murder them all. >But it’s not too late to not be the worst host. “I’m good for another.”
>”And if *I* am not?” “You can sleep in my bed?”
>She smiles slightly at that. “I’ll be out here, watching movies anyway, so –“
>”Then so will I.” >You shrug slightly. “Well, Fluttershy, how about you? Wanna sleep in my bed?”
>The girl lets out a little scream and shakes her way free of your grip. twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25117904 >Oh. >Right. >Twilight set this whole thing up to get her laid. >That’s why she’s so scared. >Grabbing her like that and inviting her to your bed? >Sounds a little rapey, even to you. “I didn’t mean, um…“
>”He didn’t mean it like *that*,” Dash snorts, helpfully butting in. You doubt she actually *meant* to help, but since you couldn’t think of a way to explain yourself, you’ll take what you can get. “Shit, he even offered it to Rarity first, so it’s not like it fucking means anything.” >She laughs at her own joke. >Such a cunt. >Rarity hisses wordlessly at her friend, releasing you so she can fling a toss pillow at the athlete. Which she catches easily, of course. >”Thanks! I needed that!” the girl laughs, dropping it beside herself. “I’m starting to get tired too, but don’t worry, I’ll just crash here.” >She grabs the remote and turns off the TV, throwing the place into near darkness; the heavy curtains over the windows offer just enough light in to give some definition to the vague shapes that now fill the room. >”My bad!” >After some painful sounding thuds, the overhead lights click on thanks to Pinkie. >”What if the rest of us aren’t tired?” she asks the athlete, who has already started spreading out the blanket she had been using as a headrest. >”Yeah, no,” Dash answers without even looking up. “If *I’m* tired, then the rest of you must be sleepwalking.” >Huh. >That *does* explain – twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25117942 >No, wait, no, it doesn’t. >But close. >”Actually, sleep is sounding like a pretty good idea right about now,” Twilight adds, supporting a limping AJ with one arm. “I mean, Applejack…” >She keeps talking, but years of field experience tell you it’s safe to ignore whatever she says. >You’re way more interested in the way Fluttershy is cowering, her eyes darting between her friends and the door. >She must *really* not want to sleep over or something. >Weirdly, the longer Twilight talks, the more relaxed Fluttershy is. She usually has the opposite effect, with people tearing their hair out if she goes on too long. >” – and so –“ >Whoops, that’s the cue to start listening again. >” – AJ *really* should be resting in a bed right now.” >”Yeah, Ah wouldn’t mind that none. Feel like Ah done a full day’s work down in the fields.” >“Well, fine!” Pinkie sighs, tumbling over the back of the loveseat to fall on its cushions. “I *guess* we can pick this up in the morning.” >Pick up…? >Shit. >You really should pick up everything. >The place is a mess, between all the plates and bottles and fucking hatchets scattered everywhere. >What if your parents come home early? >How the hell will you explain the mess? >And on that note, how will you explain the six girls? >Eh. >Fuck it. “Bedtime.”
>One-by-one, the girls nod their agreement – or may simply be nodding off in Applejack’s case. twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25117958 >While you’re out of the room getting a handful of clean t-shirts for the girls to sleep in (because “None of you *dare* ruin those outfits by sleeping in them!”), they figure it out. Somehow. >AJ gets your parents’ bed – apparently yours is too filthy or something – along with Twilight, to look after the injured girl. You expect Fluttershy to argue, but she nods reluctantly. Dash is happy on the floor, which leaves the loveseat for Pinkie and the sofa for… um… >The girls just glare when you lay down on the sofa. “What?”
>”Get up,” Twilight sighs. “We can’t kick you out of your own bed. Not after intruding on you in the first place.” “But –“
>”We insist,” Rarity adds, putting her hand on your arm. “But the sofa isn’t big enough for you and Fluttershy.”
>Your bed really isn’t, either. >Fucking twin size. >”We’ll figure something out.” >They don’t give you a chance to argue, shooing you out of the room so they can change. >Though, really, it’s more like shoving you down the hallway and locking you in your bedroom. You’re pretty sure one of them is standing guard over the door while the others slip out of their costumes. >As if you’d sneak a peek. >It would be insulting if it wasn’t true. >You wait a minute after hearing the last set of feet walking away, then stick your head out into the hall. >It’s pitch black. >You waited too long and they’re asleep, or about to be. >Damn. twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25117978 >Well, whatever. >In your room, with no one around to distract you, everything hits at once. >After everything you did today, after preparing to fight for your life, followed by watching all those movies and drinking all that alcohol, you’re barely able to move. >You’re way too tired to think of an appropriately wacky hijinks to use to peak in on the girls and whatever slumberparty shenanigans they’re doing now. >It’s even too much effort to straighten out the horrible mess Twilight made of your bed. Crazy girl. >Without a second thought you flip off the lights, making your way through the piles of dirty clothes by the soft glow of the streetlamps outside, as you do every night. >As you do every night, you think about getting some blackout curtains. >That’s the last thought to run through your mind before sleep overtakes you. >It’s still dark outside when you wake. >Which is impossible, because there is no fucking way you slept through the entire day, and nothing short of being murdered could wake you up before noon. >Your bed shifts and creaks slightly as someone puts their weight on it. >Someone not you. >Shit, someone’s about to get murdered. >Hopefully not you, but that doesn’t seem likely. “Um…”
>”Sorry,” Fluttershy quietly murmurs as she climbs up onto your bed. “I tried to stay away, but I couldn’t.” “Nowhere to sleep?”
>Her pink hair waves gently as she shakes her head. >”I don’t sleep. Not at night, anyway. Not anymore.” twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25117995 >She crawls on top of you, propping herself up on her hands and knees. >The weak light shines off her hair and exposed skin – far too much skin – as she hovers over you, almost but not quite touching you. >Almost touching, but you doubt that will last much longer. >Her bare breasts are hair’s breadth from your chest. >They’re larger than you expected. >Huh. >Where was she hiding those things…? >”You’re staring,” she whispers into your ear as she lowers herself onto you. “You’re naked.”
>Staring is to be expected. >“I sleep naked.” “But, you…”
>”I know, shut up.” >She kisses the side of your neck once, twice before pulling away. >”I wish you hadn’t invited me in,” she says sadly, “because I don’t think I can stop.” “To horny to control yourself?”
>”That too.” >She sits up and rips your shirt off. >Literally. >Rips it to shreds. >”I’m really sorry about this.” >Fluttershy gives you a sorrowful smile, displaying far too much fang. >Shit. >”Don’t worry, I promise this won’t hurt.” >You try to jerk away, but she’s suckling on your neck before your body can react. >She’s right. >It doesn’t hurt. >Quite the opposite. >Someone moans happily, and you’re pretty sure it’s not you. >Relatively sure. >But you do groan when she pulls away from your neck and kisses your lips. >”You taste nothing like Applejack,” she whispers softly. “I hated doing that, but I was so thirsty and she was bleeding and I don’t know how Twilight didn’t notice the bite on her thigh, but –” Anonymous
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>>25118005 my dick is ready
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>>25118005 “Better?”
>”Better?” “Do I taste better than her?”
>Shit, you haven’t even gotten to stick your dick in her and you’re already whipped. >”You can’t even imagine the difference.” >She kisses you again. >You taste your own blood on her lips and tongue. You don’t care. >”I really am sorry, though,” she gasps when her mouth parts with yours. “I hope you don’t mind too much.” “I wouldn’t mind if you drained me dry right now.”
>Though you’d definitely regret it in the morning. Except you wouldn’t be alive in the morning, so problem solved. >You keep that thought to yourself, though, which makes Fluttershy’s giggling pretty confusing. >”Pinkie Pie told me you’d say that,” she explains when she sees your confused look. “They know you’re a vampire?”
>Fuckers. >You should have known. >”They don’t have a clue,” Fluttershy giggles, leaning down and licking the side of your neck. “I’m pretty sure she was thinking about something else.” >She reaches down, slipping a hand under the waistband of your PJs and giving your cock a little squeeze. >Oh. >That. “Um…”
>”Don’t worry, I don’t plan on draining you dry,” she giggles again. “At least, not your blood. As for the other –“ >Another squeeze. >”- we’ll see.” >The lopsided smile she flashes you says otherwise. >It also reminds you to ask if those fangs are retractable, because you’re going to be getting a blowjob from a monster tonight. >”Soon,” she promises, her lips tickling the side of your neck. “Soon. I’m just so thirsty.” Spatula
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>>25100613 Sorry, I swear I'm not kill. The amount of real-life motherfuckery that has gone on recently is pushing my salt levels to maximum, and I have been to busy to update. However, I should be relatively stable for a while, so I promise an update tomorrow, I haven't given up my story, nor do I intend to
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>>25118242 >The moment of pure bliss passes far too quickly, but when she sits up, Fluttershy’s smile is so wide you can’t even feel any regret. >“You should have stopped drinking earlier,” she giggles, putting her hands on your chest and pushing herself upright. “I think – I think I’m getting drunk. Though, I don’t know if it’s the alcohol, or *you*. No one has ever tasted like this before.” >She giggles again, staring down at you as your blood drips from her mouth. >You watch it fall, watch it trail down the gentle slope of her breast. “Maybe you should get a bib.”
>Or not. >This is kind of hot. >New fetish unlocked. >Fluttershy looks down in confusion to see what you’re talking about. >”Oh.” >Another giggle. >”Oops.” >And another. >”I shouldn’t waste food, should I?” “Probably not, if you want enough blood left in me to maintain an erection.”
>If you even have enough left *now.* >As she licks herself clean, you find out that you do. So does she, as the thin cloth of your PJs does absolutely nothing to hold back your beast. >”I’ll be more careful,” she laughs, adjusting herself over the tenting of your pants. “Just one more sip.” >As Fluttershy bends down again, you hear the soft click of the door handle. She doesn’t. >She doesn’t see the door cautiously swing open, or the deep blue eyes that go blank at the sight of her in your bed. >She doesn’t see the exact moment with all hope and light and laughter are lost to her friend. >She doesn’t see her sad little smile. >She doesn’t see Rarity turn and slowly walk away. This is the first ending. Sad, but Good, as our intrepid hero is with a girl who loves him. As much as the undead *can* love, I mean. Tomorrow, I shall continue this story through to the Bloody ending. Don't worry too much about Anon, since he lives. And the girls win. The majority of them, anyway. You might not want to read it. Triple Nigger
>>25117185 I caught a couple more things reading it, but it's a busy night and I gotta squeeze out something resembling an update. I'll probably start from the beginning tomorrow or Tuesday and just keep a .txt recording fixes; I'll let you know when it's done.
>>25117566 >>25117591 I
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>>25118005 unh
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>>25118890 >spoiler Like hell I'm going to not read something you wrote, sempai. Mildly disappointed in Rarity's fate here, though... no threesome option?
I've learned the hard way that they seldom work, but that's what fiction is for.
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>>25118890 Lookin forward to more mang
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>>25119395 get used to it Triple, Autistocrat has a habit of leavjng massive fucking cliffhangers.
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>>25118890 Bumping for this
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>>25117566 waiting for more.
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>>25118890 I loved it
, though I would have liked anon to end up with Rararara and Flutterpire, and am psyched for the other endings.
Good to see you writing again, mang.
I missed reading you and writing the thread synopsis of your stuff. TheAutistocrat
>>25117566 > If you opened your eyes you hoped you were in heaven at least. > Which was unlikely considering who you were but it wasn't worth a try. > You crack open an eye, being greeted by a ceiling fan. > Is this heaven? > This was kind of a weird heaven. > Could be hell. > Damn, you had hoped for heaven. > Some shuffling to your right caught your attention. > Rarity suddenly popped into your view, followed by Pinkie and Celestia shortly after. > "Huh, he's fine after all." Rarity muttered. > What were they talking about? > You felt odd... > Empty... > "Anonymous..." Celestia snapped her fingers in front of your face. > "Listen... you were killed in the magic realm." > What? > "Buuuut, we managed to save your body..." > AJ suddenly lumbered into view, looking you over. > "Ya' sure he's gonna be fine?" > What were they gassing on about!? > You sit up, getting annoyed with their cryptic babbling. > They had you laid out on the desk in Luna's office. > The girls watched you stagger to your feet. > Something was wrong, like something was missing. > Woah, head rush... "What even happened?"
> You run your hands down your face, trying to recall what had happened. > You were in some magic realm... > Then you were suddenly being attacked. > It had all happened so fast... > Rarity grabbed your shoulders gingerly and helped you take a seat. > Twilight cleared her throat. > She had a blue blanket wrapped around her body. > AJ was doing her best to comfort her. > "A witch broke into our realm, she managed to kill you before Pinkie and I bought us back." > Que? > "Anon... she has Luna and Sunset." Celestia growled. > Oh boy. > Twilight stood up. > "Not only that Anon, when she killed you in the realm we couldn't get everything back." > What did she mean? > "She has your soul." Anonymous
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>>25125522 checked with the force of a thousand sp00ks
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>>25125522 lol, time for maximum panic!
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>>25125522 Contributing to the spook train
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>>25125789 >>25125614 >>25125599 >>25125569 First my browser shout out on me and I'm starting to rewrite, but you're putting me in hysterics.
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>>25125818 >inb4 he learns how to perceive senses from both his body as his soul at any time. >inb4 he eventually learns how to call back and send out his soul in a fashion not too unlike astral projection >which he then uses to look at Fluttershy's hooters while she's in the shower. TheAutistocrat
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"Oh really? That is suuuch a shame."> "Wha-... Anon that's your soul." > So? > You laugh, getting nothing out of the others. > Clearing your throat you straighten up. > "Ah... Really?" > You had made a deal with a gremlin about a year ago. > He could have your soul in exchange for a weapon to kill some world-eating demon. > Afterwords, you had went back and forced the punk to give it back. > Wasn't easy, Gremlins were greedy as hell. > You shrug. > Still... > This wasn't to be taken lightly. > Whoever this witch was still had leverage over you and the girls. > Luna and Sunset needed to be rescued. > But... > Celestia slammed her fists down on the desk, jolting you up. > "Go get them back now!" > This bitch. > You've had just about enough of her. > She glared at you. > The others tensed up, seeing something about to go down. > You gesture to your dirtied clothes and torn coat. > Celestia let out a long sigh. > "Then what can I do mister know-it-all? We can't leave yet because of this stupid school system, if I excuse any more people or leave myself they will dig, bad enough Luna's missing." > "I've got a lead!" > Pinkies voice chimed from all around, catching everybody's attention. > Suddenly the file drawer next to you shot open, Pinkie sticking her head out. > She spat out some papers and shot you all a toothy smile. > "That witchy face was using some realll weird magic." > Pinkie pulled herself out of the drawer, shaking some papers out of her boots. > "So?" Celestia grunted. > "So??? I can still feel it here!" > Twilight suddenly perked up. > "Oh... Oh that is good Pinkie!"
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>>25125522 Wait. Pinkie invited Anon into her magical realm? A magical realm with magical tree roots that only react to females? I didn't put it together until now, but holy shit! He's lucky he got away having only lost his soul.
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>>25126045 I don't get it what do you mean ?
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>>25126045 >>25126128 No, don't tell us immediately. Just give us a hint. Is it from Greek mythology? Roman? Prussian folklore?
Japanese television? TheAutistocrat
> "If Pinkie can still sense the magic then take a guess what that means!" > You look around the room, checking your watch silently. > "Ohhhh!" Rarity suddenly clapped her hands together. > "That is good~!" > "Yeah, right?" Pinkie said with a wave. > You still had no idea. > "Umm, a little explanation for the slower ones girls?" > Celestia suddenly perked up. > "Oh, I get it now." > "If Pinkie can still sense the magic here, than that means that someone either connected with the witch or the witch herself is here." Twilight leaned back in her seat. > "Simple stuff really." > Ah.... > Looks like things would be looking up after all... > "Okay... I wan't everyone investigating. You girls will go for the students, I'll go for the teachers." > You wave your hand. > "Ah, you're getting a very special job Anonymous." > "No, this job will make sure you have eyes and ears all over the place. > Oh boy what could it be!? > You slap the mop down. > After you and the girls came up with a game plan Celestia threw you a janitor jumper and a baseball cap. > Had too look the part to play the part. > You've felt like there was a janitor Anon before... > Oh well. > You were all supposed to gather as much info as you could and get it together by the end of the school day. > Celestia's words, not yours. > So here you were... > You dip the mop in the bucket of water again. > First period was in session, the girls were in class, Celestia was in her fancy ass office. > And you were here, mopping floors. > At least you still got to wear the loafers. > Your hunting outfit was currently in the school wash, namely used for sport outfits. > You sniff yourself, reeling back. > Still didn't get a damn shower yourself though...
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> You check your watch. > 7:58 > Uhg, you still had a bit before the classes would let out. > You were told lunch time and in between classes were the best time to keep your ears open. > Maybe you could get some info if you went to one of the restrooms. > Maybe hit up the lost and found on the way there. > You pick up the bucket and shoulder the mop. > Turning down the hallway you make a hard right. > It was decorated like the hallway you had seen when you entered the school. > Except for the fact that this wasn't leading to some crazy magical realm. > You walk down the hall for a bit before making another right. > You stop in front of two beige doors. > Pushing past the one labeled 'boys' you slide into the bathroom. > The mirrors were to your right, facing the stalls and urinals. > You drop the mop and bucket at the entrance and head into the very last stall. > The biggest one. > Plebs would have to use the smaller ones. > HAH! > You look around the stall absentmindedly. > Why did you even come in here? > You didn't need to do anything. > Oh yeah, you were going to slack off. > You pull out some of the toilet paper. > Wrapping it around your leg you begin to make yourself into a mummy. > The fun kind, not the 'destroy the world' kind. > The bathroom door creaked open, catching you mid-transformation. > Someone lumbered in and turned on the sink. > Maybe you could get some dirt. > Maybe it was one of the little punks who knew what was going on. > Perfect! > You kick open the stall door and hop out, bringing your fists up. > Big Mac stood at the sink, wearing a blue and red stained apron. > He looked at you before quirking an eyebrow. > You look down at the TP wrapped around your body. > He slowly gave a thumbs up. > Suddenly the door swung open again. > A kid with long shaggy hair trudged in. > He stopped at the first end of the sink and turned it on.
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> Giving the two of you an annoyed look he went back to his own business, washing off his hands. > He wore a long black trench coat over a white t-shirt and black cargo pants adorned with chains. > He stomped one of his combat boots once, glaring at the two of you. > "What?" he said, throwing his arms out. > This kid was really edgy... > Big Mac rolled his eyes silently and went back to washing his hands. > He pointed to his apron. > You stared at it for a second. > He nodded. > There's the slang coming up again, Celestia told you not to do that. > Big Mac shook his head while smiling. > Eh, whatevs. > You had more important business to attend to. > Two more people came through the bathroom door, a kid with over-sized glasses and overalls and a kid reeking of pot. > The kid reeking of pot adjusted his beanie before washing his hands as well. > Something was up. > You look in the mirror, specifically at the edgy kid. > His eyes flashed green briefly. > Big Mac looked you over than realized. > He glanced back at the edgy kid and began to finish up. > Suddenly the nerdy kid spoke up. > "That the guy Mom told us to take care of?" > The stoner nodded. > "Yeah, she said he wouldn't go down easy." > Big Mac backed away from the sink, taking a spot next to you. > "Mother will be very proud of us." The Edgy kid said, stepping away from the sink. > Oh for fucks sake...
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That's it for now, I'll either be on sometime tonight or tomorrow around 5:00 PM eastern to continue.
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>>25126551 >His eyes flashed green briefly. Oh shit what is he ?
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>>25126661 Changeling, duh.
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>>25126128 >>25126169 /tg/ has led to expect magical realms and animated plant tentacles to go down a certain way
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>>25126692 But aren't changelings supposed to be well adjusted in order to get some of that sweet loving ? This fag just seems like a walking edge
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>>25126692 OBJECTION!
A 'changeling' as they are called, are actually a kind of sccumbus/incumbus. demons that live off of lust and physical loving. An actual changeling is a type of faerie that steals children from their cribs and replaces them with a changeling child.
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>>25127349 From what I've read, the changeling child is sometimes actually other races, like giants or elves, so that the parents get a kid with different genes than the family -in many cases, a boon. This leads to race mixing and the idea is that both races come out for the better for it.
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>>25126045 'Magical realm' is a /tg/ euphemism for fetishes.
>>25126661 >>25126692 Probably just some kid ensorcelled by the witch.
>>25126708 There's always the Wakfu parody animation if that's what you're into.
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>>25125931 Soul reaver green when?
Never, I'll be told to fuck off to /v/ ;_; Anonymous
>>25131061 soul reaver is goat mang
havent played in years tho, need to see if i can find a copy again
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>>25131141 1 and 2 were on Steam for cheap last time I checked
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>>25131466 well shit
I didnt know that, thanks anon
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since we need some discussion till writefriends are back
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>>25132016 If you've seen a bunch of horror, but haven't watched Cabin in the Woods I cannot recommend that enough. It's an okay movie if you aren't familiar with horror, but if you're a fan of the genre then it becomes fucking magical.
If you just want a fun spooky story, check out Trick r Treat. Watch the original, released in 2007, and not the sequel. It's a fun group of short stories that are Halloween themed.
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>>25132253 those sound like fun movies
im gonna have to check those out
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twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
The true ending for my green will have to go up tomorrow. It's taking longer than I expected.
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>>25126551 Gosh, Anon can't get a break in this green. Everyone treats him like garbage, but expects him to pull miracles.
Anyway, look's like Chrysalis is in the scene. Looking forward to the next part.
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>>25133801 lookin forward to it
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I'm sorry, my green is taking too long today, I'll finish writing and post tomorrow. Don't hurt me please
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>>25133801 >Fluttershy feeding on Rarity I will take this as a good sign
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>>25136590 Page nine, on the other hand, is rather alarming.
G'night folks. Thread better not be dead when I wake up.
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>>25136323 Maybe a little bit of hurt
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>>25139096 Id fuck that flutters
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>>25133801 That pic is kinda hot
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almost time for writefriend to come back bump
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Okay, so I wrote something. It's not really in greentext though because that doesn't suit my style of writing. There is also no "Anon" in it because that also doesn't fit my style of writing. Do you guys mind if I post it here since it has a vampire, a ghoul and a dark elf in it and thus kind of fits with the thread?
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>>25142325 i dont mind, more the merrier
cant say about the other anons tho
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>>25142347 Alright, I've got chapter one done as of right now. I'll post as much as I can per post. Going to don a name and a trip too. Also keep in mind that this is the first bit of fiction I've written since my last attempt back in 2009 so I'm a bit rusty.
"When Waking Worlds Collide"
- Chapter 1 -
In a college town about eighty thousand strong there was a recluse who hid himself among the students only to come out at night. In an apartment nestled among a smattering of middle and lower class luxury he lived there with another who was on the actual lease, and another who wasn't. Nobody suspected a thing about these three and their coterie, getting by in this world of darkness. Where life was a sham and escapism was plenty, they lived there in a state of life and yet something other than that, working on their own dirty little secrets and schemes.
Candlelight bright on this moonlit night, a thaumaturgist and a madman worked on a spell that may perhaps open a portal to somewhere that was preferably not Hell. One wanted to escape his kindred curse, brought on by the sins of his forefathers, generation after generation, made to engorge upon the luscious red liquid because Caine slew Abel so many centuries ago. Another, an elven maiden from a faraway land in another place and time which originated in the dreams of a dead god, wanted to perhaps bring the madman and his ghoul, whose name was on the lease under one of a dozen or so aliases, to a part of her world where they may learn of a way to exploit the blood of another clan as a means of altering the curse of his and his forefathers. The ghoul herself was keeping watch, a buxom and tanned beauty of Asian and African descent, to make sure there were no burglars whose bodies needed to be disposed of posthumously like before. Thankfully, there were not.
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>>25142432 As the clock hand struck midnight and the witching hour approached, a stroke of genius and a sliver of blood touched upon a pagan altar of otherworldly nature, bringing forth a doorway to another dimension. With essentials in tow, be they blood from the local bank, some bread and cheese, a change of clothes or other miscellany, the madman, the elven maiden, and the ghoul made there way into another world. It was dark in the meadow clearing on a moonlight night much like the one they spirited away from before, but something was different this time around.
Instead of the hues of orange and gold that may have signified the shady acres of the Rift as the maiden had planned, there was what appeared to be bright colors and saturated hues, with Christmas reds and greens midst an orchard or two. In the distance one could see a homestead, perhaps a farm of some kind. Clearly the spell had gone wrong or the stars had aligned just right in a way that had not been conceived that night. Regardless the coterie made haste to be certain of their surroundings as to be certain there was no dangers from hunters, kine or lycanthropic, that night.
"Are you certain that was the right combination of reagents?" the madman said to the thaumaturgist.
"Chris, I told you, I don't know if that was right or not. Can't exactly get void salt where you're from, remember?" the maiden replied.
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>>25142448 "Juni thinks we ended up in that place with the cute little horsies that big brother likes to watch." the buxom ghoul of Asian and African descent with bright green eyes and chestnut brown pigtails down past her waist remarked.
Upon hearing this Chris smirks hard and laughs harder in a booming voice reminiscent of a hyena crossed with a special needs child of some kind.
"I want to fuck a mare! I want to fuck her there! I want to fuck a mare in her derriere! I want to fuck every mare, under the sun!" he shouts in a sing-song kind of tune one might attribute to an American Idol reject.
"For the love of Azura..." the cobalt-skinned elven maiden with the red locks reminiscent of molten steel said in an exasperated tone, as she put her hands upon her face, covering her torchlight embers in the pitch-perfect dark eyes, hiding her near-xenomorphic face as if to shy away from the aforementioned Prince.
"I want to fuck a mare in the open air, as I hold on to her derriere!" the raving lunatic continued while spinning, arms outstretched and face pointed at the midnight moon, "I want to fuck every mare, under the sun!"
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>>25142463 "Big brother can't be in the sun anymore though or he'll turn into ashes." remarked Juni with a smirk on her youthful face of caramel and emerald.
"That's only if the curse of Caine holds true here." Chris retorted as he straightened up as if to fly right. "Seeing as I still appear to be in the MMN that may be the case."
"I don't know how you Malkavians put up with that constant droning." the elven maiden said as she looked sternly at him.
"My madness has saved you from ending up in some kind of Sparta-like scenario time and time again Amana dear." he replied in a gentle tone. "Let's hope it not only continues that but leads me to doing it with a mare or three. Preferably a pretty pink one with birthing hips and a fertile womb. Yeah, that will be fun for the whole family, am I right?"
"Big brother always had the biggest hard-on for Pinkie Pie." Juni said with a giggle reminiscent of mirth, whimsy and maniacs dancing like they've never danced before.
"You can have all the mare pussy you want, provided that little bit of thaumaturgy you picked up from that Tremere down the street works in this world." Amana stated with an exasperated tone that makes one think of a lover who wants to see other people while still dating you because she has a thing for cuckolding and orcs. "Me, I'll take a stallion or three." she continues with a sly, deviant grin fitting of a dark elf sorceress with a body built for breeding, bedrooms and hermaphrodite porn.
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>>25142483 A rustling in the bushes removes the rambling coterie from their zoophiliac revelry. Turning around they see a somewhat apprehensive mare with a shiny orange coat, blonde locks and glaring green eyes.
"Who or what in tarnation are you and what are you doing here in my orchard making all this ruckus?" demanded the country mare in a fierce tone.
Swooping in through one swift silent motion the Malkavian made a motion to make his moves on the mare. Kneeling down to meet her in the eyes, he almost six feet and she about three, Chris smiles a firm, wide grin and locks eyes with the pretty mare with the apple marks on an apple bottom.
"Greetings and salutations. My apologies for disrupting your rest with our reverie this evening." he said in a seductive, striking tone while he sweetly stroked her mane. "My name is Chris, the brunette is Juni and the redhead is Amana. We've arrived in your world on a sheer stroke of luck and we would wish to do nothing more than make the acquaintance of your fine, lovely people, this fine, lovely world, and your fine, lovely self. Might I have the pleasure of knowing your name?"
Stammering and blushing the mare gulped as she looked into the kindred's eyes, entralled by his unearthly charm and the seductive stroking of her golden locks and strong, sturdy back. "A-Applejack" she replied, as that was all that she could get out.
"What a name, what a lovely, lovely name for such a pretty little mare." replied Chris, continuing to gaze into Applejack's eyes with his piercing power of Presence and his heavy petting. Making that deal with the Brujah of Santa Monica years ago seemed to be paying off at this point. Granted, there was now at least one or three more Kindred with the dreaded Dementation discipline, but this power helped a man who never even got laid when alive indulge in the pleasures of the flesh after his death.
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>>25142496 "Perhaps you would be kind and gracious enough to let us stay somewhere warm tonight?" Amana chimed in, she herself no stranger to speechcraft, seduction, or mind-altering Illusion magic as she cast a cantrip upon herself to strengthen her silver tongue with silky smooth tones reminiscent of thick sujamma cream on a scrib jelly and saltrice tart.
Absolutely enthralled and a bit drenched all Applejack could do was nod sheepishly, with open mouth and winking clit. She lead them to the farmhouse where the rest of the Apple family lie sleeping sound, old Granny Smith letting out a bit of a snore as the cunning coterie were lead to her room. Stiffling a yawn Juni laid down to sleep on the bed as Amana silently made her way to the room of one Big Macintosh under the guise of a Chameleon spell that caused her visage to meld with the background, and another that muffled her footsteps like a pillow to the face of a lobotomized con artist.
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>>25142511 Sitting on the other half of the bed was a softly smiling Chris stroking the silky gold mane of one seduced and silent Applejack, even further enthralled by the strokes of his undead hands that his embrace made akin to smooth velvet around firm ice. Under his siren spell she didn't notice the coldness of his touch, but given that it was just about cider season she appreciated the stroking and the smooth massages of this horsefucker from a dark world another place and time away.
It didn't matter that they didn't end up in Skyrim but given that Equestria had even more powerful magic than Earth they could still end up there another day and another time. For now though it would be enough for the coterie to enjoy the pleasures of the land of Equestria and perhaps find a way to bring the three worlds into one tantalizing fold. The plotting and scheming of the self-professed "motherfucking mad Malkavian of Butte County" continued on as another personality moved his hands slowly down towards Applejack's seductive, sexy apple bottom.
Shivering in delight as he massaged her hindquarters she smiled, looking up at him shyly. He returned with a sweet smile, Chris continuing to stroke and massage like a seducer of some kind as his ghoul slept silently, dreaming her own devices of faux incest and gorging on Turkish delight. So it was for their first night in this world while an excited Amana paid visit to Big Macintosh like a silent succubus, strengthing his sleep with a Sleep spell of her own as she massaged his pony pecker into a state of plumpness for her to enjoy.
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>>25142526 And that's all I wrote for chapter one. I'll probably write more some other time. I do have some memory problems though so I might forget.
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Nevermind getting started now, managed to get her out.
>>25134660 That's always how I imagined Hunters would be treated to be honest.
>>25128789 >>25126743 >>25126692 >>25126661 :)
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>>25126551 >Well this wasn't good. > The three boys closed in. > The Edgy kid wave his hand, a green energy encircling it. > The door became enveloped in the same energy, glowing softly. > "Alright boys, door is sealed." > "Excellent!" The Nerdy boy exclaimed. > "Grooovyyy..." The Stoner said, slouching against one of the stalls. > You shot a look at Big Mac who just glared at the trio silently. > Turning back to the boys you clear your throat. "Okay, before you kill us very, very, very brutally. I would love to know why at least."
> The boys shared looks before turning back to the two of you. > "Fine, I guess... " Edge spat. > "Our mother knows who you are Anonymous, and she doesn't like your digging one bit." > Well that still didn't answer anything. "Well who's your mom?"
> The nerdy kid looked like he was about to answer but Edge pushed him away. > "Shut it, it's time to die now!" > Well if you didn't think he was autistic before, you were convinced now. > The nerdy kid pulled out an inhaler. > You and Mac watched silently as he took a puff of it. > The Stoner and Edge watched in amusement as he blew out a blood red puff of smoke. > Suddenly he jerked forward, falling to his knees. > What? > Letting out a pained cry he slammed his fist on the ground. > It began to expand, the muscles pushing against his skin and rippling his hands. > His clothes tore as his body expanded, gathering muscle at an exponential rate. > Oh... > Oh no... > You put your hands on your head, realizing what he was. > Not a fucking Hyder. > As if your day couldn't get any worse. > The Nerd began to laugh, his voice becoming distorted as he continued to gain muscle. > Hyders were the worst kind of people. > They were regular people yeah, teachers, students, homeless, anybody. > But they were basically addicts to this wonder-drug that a couple of vamps created YEARS ago. > You had broke up the operation just last year. > Or you thought, this kid was still getting some somehow. TheAutistocrat
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> Basically they were the roid-users of the monster world. > The roided out nerd let out a boisterous yell, earning excited claps from Edge and The Stoner. > You back away, looking for something to defend yourself with. > The Bathroom was luckily pretty big. > The boys were still a good twelve feet away from you, despite three of you in the room. > Next to you were three stalls, starting with the biggest at the end. > You and Mac were against the wall, away from the door across the room. > A window was above the two of you that maybe you could fit through, but Mac wouldn't ever be able to get through. > The Stoner smiled at Mac, his smile stretching across his face. > "Brooo check this out." > His jaw dropped down, unhinging. > Letting out a screech he tossed his head back and threw out his arms. > The bathroom lights flickered, briefly putting you in darkness. > Edge just turned around and waved his hands at the door. > "Okay boys, Muffling spell is up. Get as loud as you want!" > Oh A shape-shifter and a Warlock. > Wonderful... > There was only one thing you could do here. > Big Mac turned to you slowly. > ..... > "Really?" > The Stoner rushed forward. > He was fast! > A blur tackled Big Mac, taking them both to the ground. > The Hyder roared and lumbered forward. > He ran like some demented Gorilla, using his fists as leverage. > The ground was easily crushed under his fists. > You run into the stall next to you, the biggest one. > Locking the door you whirl around and look into the mirror. > Okay... > Okay... > Think... > The Hyder's fist burst through the stall door, sending painted wood splintering everywhere. > You scream. > Looking in the mirror, you could see two angry eyes glaring at you from the newly formed hole. > The Hyder reached up and ripped off the stall door..
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> You drop down and pull yourself into the next stall, slipping between the negative space under the walls. > You got away just as he entered the stall. > He let out a frustrated roar, rattling the remaining stalls. > You pull yourself through the second area, finally getting yourself in the first stall. > You pull yourself up by gripping the toilet seat. > The sound of splintering wood echoed throughout the bathroom. > He was already making his way through the second-stall. > You reach up and grab the top of the stalls. > You listen to the sound of brutish grunts and splintering wood. > Hold on... > "Come here little man!" > Hold on... > "Must eat!" > Hooold it.... > CRACK! > You jump up, hoisting yourself over the stalls wall. > You landed on the Hyder's back. > He let out a surprised grunt, reaching up for you. > He was so stacked with muscle it gave him a hunched back. > He wasn't grabbing your skinny ass. > You laugh at the struggling Hyder. > Suddenly you hopped down, pushing past the destroyed walls. > You slid to a stop at the end. > The Hyder was already turning to face you, rage over-taking his every feature. > It was times like this you had monsters girls to help out. > A blur flew past your face. > The Stoner slammed into the last, intact stall. > He let out a groan before sliding down. > Big Mac stood to his full height, glaring at the Stoner. > The Hyder let out a roar, pounding his chest. > Mac glared at him. > You step back, seeing what was about to happen.
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> Mac ran forward, the apron kicking up around him. > The Hyder slammed his fists into the ground, sending up what was essentially saw dust at this point. > He leapt off of the ground. > Mac jumped into the air. > They both collided mid-air, instantly falling into a power struggle. > You moved forward for a cheap shot on the Hyder. > Suddenly a green blast hit your shoulder, causing you to reel back. > You look down at your shoulder for a second before looking back at Edge. > He turned his attention back to the door. > "Get up you idiot!" he hissed at the Stoner. > "Hhyehhjbah..." The Stoner responded. > Hah! > "What?" Edge asked. > "What gay ass show is that?" > Oh this kid was going to die. > "Stop gassing on about dumb shows and die Geezer!" > He popped off a blast of green energy at you. > If it was anything like the last one it wouldn't do much. > But you weren't taking the chance. > You dodge the blast. > You snatch up one of larger splinters on the ground. > To the neck outta do it. > Then you'll see who's gasping like a Geezer! > You rush Edge, holding the splinter like a knife. > He rolled his eyes and flicked his wrist at you. > The ground suddenly disappeared, the world turning to a blur. > You slam into the mirrors, shattering them under your weight instantly. > Was crying acceptable? > Nah, a groan was though. > "Hah! Mother was wrong, you're pretty easy old man." > Edge laughed loudly. > "Hah, I get it, cause' we're in a bathroom. You're pretty funny guy." > That wasn't even a joke. > Edge shrugged. > "Shame we gotta kill ya' though. You would make a good servant." > The Stoner stumbled to his feet, holding his head. > "Geez..." He moaned. > "Kill that fool." Edge demanded. > "Yeah, yeah. I'll get to it in a sec... Fricken jerk over there gave me a headache." > Edge rolled his eyes. > "Well forget the headache! Kill him. I'm busy casting spells."
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> The Stoner glared at him. > "Who put you in charge!?" > Edge reeled back. > "Mother did, mello out bro, did you miss your daily doobie?" > Stoner sighed and ran his hands down his face. > "Yeah, Yeah I ate my dealer... and my current girlfriend, the munchies dude, they're a pain." > He turned to you slowly, his smile growing wider. > "I'm feelin' em' now to be honest." > Edge smiled darkly. > "Well, eat on brother. Mother says she ain't cooking tonight anyway." > "Awesome!" > Crap, you had too get it together. > The Stoner rushed forward, his jaw unhinging. > Now! > You grip onto the nearest sick. > Leaping up, you shoot out both legs. > They connected with the Stoners chest, sending him back with a surprised gasp. > You whirl around and grab the nearest object you could find. > A jagged piece of glass, about the size of your hand. > The Stoner rushed forward again, unaffected by your last deflect. > You whirl back around, sending the mirror piece across his face. > With a shriek he fell back, gripping his face. > "Hey!" Edge shouted. > You bring the shard down on the back of the Stoners neck. > He let out a pained shriek, bobbing down and popping back up. > He reached for the shard frantically. > Edge dropped the spells to help the Stoner out. > You simply pushed the Stoner back, sending him into the broken stalls. > He tripped over a thick piece of broken wood and fell back, throwing his arms out for balance. > He failed, his panicked screams becoming gurgles as the piece was pushed fully through. > "You dick!" Edge shouted. > He whirled around to take care of you. > You simply sent a knee to his gut. > Warlocks were the same as humans, just more magically inclined. > He doubled over. > You grabbed his long greasy hair and reeled his head back. > With all of your strength you heave it into the intact sink. > The force of his head connecting with the sink ripped it from the wall, sending a small spout of water from the pipe.
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> Egde was out like a light. > You step back, looking at the forming puddle of blood. > It mixed with the water, quickly taking the bathroom floor. > You were not cleaning this up. > He would be fine. > The Stoner managed to get back up. > He glared at you through pained gurgles and spouts of blackened blood. > You shrug. > He attacked first. > His arm rocketed forward, stretching away from his body and towards your face. > You leap back. > It connected with what was left of the mirror. > You rush forward. > He was still distracted with the mirror smashing into his hand. > You leap up and cock your fist back. > Shooting it out, his head bobbed back. > He slowly turned to you, still gurgling on the broke mirror piece. > His eyes rolled in the back of his head before he fell forward. > You watch him fall, pocketing your hands in your jumper. > Well then... > That was anti-climatic.... > The Hyder suddenly roared, catching your attention. > Big Mac had him in a head lock, somehow keeping him pinned. > Right... > He was still left...
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> You crack your fingers. > Moving onto your neck you sigh. > Yeah.... > You weren't getting involved with that. > Time to put up a 'do not enter' sign and get Celestia down here. > You grab your bucket and mop, Mac still struggling with the Hyder. > He glanced back at you. > Rolling his eyes he wrapped both arms under its neck. > Positioning himself he suddenly threw his body back, sending the Hyder flying over his head. > The Hyder rattled the entire building as his body slammed into the ground. > Damn... > Mac got up from the ground, dusting himself and his apron off. > He nodded. > That wasn't really surprising. > "With mah family." He simply grunted. > He lumbered past you, pushing past the door. > You look around the destroyed bathroom. > The shattered mirrors, the splintered stalls, the destroyed ceilings, sinks, and tiles. > The destroyed sinks pipe still spouted water onto the floor. > The last intact stall suddenly fell apart, nearly causing you to jump out of your skin. > The bathroom door suddenly flung open. > Celestia stormed in. > "What's going on in here, I'm getting complai-" > You turn back to her. > The dangling light overhead fell to the ground, shattering instantly. > You lean against your mop, watching as the kids filed out into the hallways. > Luckily Celestia had come up with something quick. > And she must've been respected in order for it to work. > She had managed to convince the other teachers and janitors that the three boys you dealt with had destroyed the bathroom themselves with sledgehammers and cherry bombs. > Eh, they bought it. > So she was 'expelling' them personally. > Realistically she was interrogating them right now. > Her eye had been set on that pair of pliers she had... > Oh well, not your problem. > From now on it was basically chill out and do your job until after school. > Then it was time to do your real job.
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> A lot of colorful people you didn't even know passed by. > Most of them ignored you but some would stare or wave. > You didn't really bother to wave back, already tired after today's events. > You and Big Mac managed to get off scott free. > Luckily the police weren't getting involved as per Celestia's request. > You think it was just no-one wanted to investigate three potential psychopaths, one of which was naked when he was found. > Hehehehe. > And the other two had inappropriate things drawn on their faces. > Hehehehehe... > No-one even suspected you... > But oh well, if no-one was going to dig you had no reason to be worried. > Someone tapped your shoulder, snapping you out of your thoughts. > You turn to your left, seeing Rarity giving you an amused smile. > "Now Anonymous, that is no way to greet a lady." > Rarity frowned. > That was right was it not? > "Such a shame, ill-manners don't do any good for you men in the end."' > She flipped her hair. > "I heard you had a little run-in earlier hmmm?" > She waited, expecting something more. > "Ahem... annnnd?" > "Really~!?" > "Because I heard from Applejack, in great detail that her brother had helped you." > You flinch. > "Anonymous, you really can't remember it that way." > You think back. > You flip off of the bathroom stall, sending a kick into the Hyder's face. > He was done already. > Jumping in the air, you spin around and whip your foot across Edge's face. > He rocketed into the mirror bouncing off. > You jump up and combo him mid-air, screaming 'Wombo combo' the entire time. > Finishing him off, you drop down with the gracefulness of a cat and dart towards the Stoner. > Kicking into a flip you knock him into the air.
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>>25144361 oh anon, you smartass you
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> Rarity eyed you with a hint of amusement. > "Mhhmmm..." > You wave a hand in the air. > "Not much, just got some hints here and there." > "Same deal, we can't find anything, even with our feminine charm." > Pinkie suddenly appeared in the hallway of students. > She grabbed a beefy guys leather jacket and pulled him down to eye level. > She shouted something too which he just shook his head. > With a disappointed look she darted off, looking for her next target. > "Mhmm... well some of us have more finesse than the others..." > You let out a long whistle. > Rarity rolled her eyes and leaned against the wall. > "Still though, in all seriousness these are my friends in danger." > You turn to face her, looking her over. > "Promise me something." > Uhg... > Were you really about to do this? > "Promise that you'll save my friends." > "Nah-ah-ah~!" > You frown, getting annoyed with her already. > "Make a promise that counts." > You lean back, letting go of your mop. > Rarity smiled. > "Pinkie Pie has this promise she likes to make. I'll show you how to do it." > She ran through the steps, somehow keeping a straight face and an air of professionalism. > You chuckled as she did it at some parts but you took it seriously for the most part. > Well as seriously as you could. > "Okay, ready?" > The bell suddenly rung, causing Rarity to jolt. > She frowned before turning back to you. > "Well then, this will have to be done later." > You put a thumbs up, blinking for a brief second. > And she was gone... > That was creepy... > You look around at the now empty hallway. > staying silent for a brief second you sigh heavily.
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> This... > Was.... > Boring... > You sigh and adjust your cushioned chair. > All day, you've been looking for something to do. > You weren't allowed to clean the bathroom you and Mac had fought in. > Apparently a reconstruction crew would have to be called in for that. > Oh well. > So you decided to bunker down in the schools library and start reading. > Yeah, what did that lead too? > Absolutely boring... > You throw the book in the ever-growing pile behind you. > Boringness... > With a groan you throw your head back, staring at the library ceiling. > You had to be a student or teacher to use the computers. > You had already made your way through most of the books, finding them increasingly more boring than the last. > Adventures in far-away lands just didn't cut it for you. > You had already traveled to hell, Valhalla, and Olympia before. > After that, books descriptions of mythical lands just seemed...dull. > You tap your fingers against the chairs arms. > At least this chair was comfortable... > More comfortable then anything else you've sat or slept in... > .... > You washed your body, letting the shower wash away the grime and smell from the last two days. > And a couple months... > Why hadn't you done this before!? > This felt awesome! > Was this what a normal life felt like? > Boredom and showers? > It was kind of nice. > You turn the water off, wrapping a towel around your wait. > Pushing past the blue shower curtain you step out into a locker room, multiple other showers and lockers lining the wall. > Your clothes were more than likely done by now. > You walk past a couple of lockers before making a left. > You came to a stop in front of a washing machine that was roughly the size of the front of your RV. > It was massive yo. > You pull open the door with considerable effort and pull out the clothes inside. > There were some lost and found clothes in here as well. > You pull out your rain coat. > Examining it, you frown.
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> You stick your fingers through the holes in the shoulders. > On top of that, it was still stained with blood, cut in certain areas, and over-all worn out. > You toss it behind you, shifting through the lost and found. > There was a surprising selection of coats in here. > Most of which actually managed to fit you. > Convenient... > You had a large black trench coat, a dark green dress coat, and a lighter shaded black sports coat by the end of it. > Your choices were the right ones. > You fold the clothes up and stand up. > Time to walk around aimlessly until lunch time. > Maybe get jumped in the bathroom again? > That surely sped up your day earlier. > You head out of the locker room and stop in front of a janitor cart. > Wheeling it down the hall you begin to whistle to yourself. > It helped pass the time.... > You continued like this until the next bell rung. > The students poured out into the hallway this time. > Oh yeah. > You check your watch. > 11:56 > Lunch time. > Welp, you weren't doing anything. > And Celestia would still be busy with those kids. > Time to go out for a lunch break. > You push past your RV door, trudging up the steps. > Whistling to yourself, you wave around the folded clothes. > Making a 360 you toss them onto your table. > Que!? > Something was wrong... > Your place looked... > Cleaner? > Think... > You had saw something... > Something. > Pink. > Oh no... > "Anon!" Pinkie shouted. > A weight tackled into your back taking you down. > You roll over and get your hands under Pinkie. > She was like a dog! > "firstmeandfluttershywereboredandwedon'teatschoollunchsowedecidedtogetwithourbestfriendanonymousand-" > You got one of your hands free, clamping it around her mouth. > What was that even a reference to? > Oh well. > You push her off, removing your hand slowly. > Looking away from her, you saw Fluttershy, sitting at your table booth. > Oh...
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That's all I'm doing for tonight.
To be completely honest I know the stories moving along at a snails pace right know, but either tomorrow or the day following after it's going to speed up real fast.
I also welcome the new writefag overlord to the table, Recluse.
>>25136323 Welcome back.
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were pretty dead tonight
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>>25145085 Cant wait for shit to hit the fan
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That's it. I don't have the time or energy to promise updates, I don't know when I can write. I really don't like going back on my word, but at this point I just can't do it. I may occasionally drop a comment, but it will be under the name of Anon. Besides, these threads have planty of green. What you really need is more artfags.
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>>25072942 Are there any good vampire fanfictions that are either finished or regularly updated?
I've read Nosflutteratu, but I need more!
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The Watchmen cometh again
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Insanebow Dash
I need to write today. I'm gonna write today.
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>>25151593 Good to know. Get to it.
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>>25151773 Currently in classes right now. I'll write later.
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>>25151803 Lookin forward to it
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>>25148872 My Roommate is a Vampire isn't bad. Bon Hadescream is awesome.
>>25145324 I forget, did you ever say what Fluttershy is?
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>>25152341 Fluttershy is a siren
twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
Know what the best thing is about a rambling writing style? I can always find supporting evidence earlier in the store for a brand new plot point that would otherwise be a total ass pull.The ending needs one more round of editing, but I can't see how it won't be ready tonight.
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Since so many writefriends are getting on tonight, I'll just upload a good chunk of the story tomorrow and not tonight.
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>>25153313 Alright than, I'm fine with that
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Though, since no-one has even started yet.
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>>25145058 > Fluttershy timidly waved at you. > You wave back slowly. "Wait a minute!"
> You throw your hands up, stepping away from Pinkie. "What are you two even doing in here!?"
> Pinkie shot up, smiling brightly. > Was that a squee? > "The other girls are too busy making plans, I don't like it all serious." > She sounded like The Joker saying that last part. "Uh-huh... isn't it also your friend as well?"
> "Yeah, yeah. But me and Flutters don't really do fighting." > Pinkie shot past you, taking a spot next to Fluttershy. > Fluttershy jumped away as Pinkie crossed her legs and put an arm around her shoulder. > "We're two peas in a pod!" > You remove your baseball cap, scratching your head. "Uh-huh..."
> There was only one thing you could say they have in common. > You glance at their chests before turning away. "Well, just don't touch anyth-"
> "Welcome to fazbears pizza!" > The voice sent chills up your spine. "Hey!"
> Pinkie was already scanning your trophies. > "Wowie, you have some pretty cool stuff here!" > Fluttershy looked over your collection curiously as well. > Pinkie picked up the broken down, decapitated, teddy head. > "What's this?" > You step away from your seat, storming over to her. "A pain in the ass when we fought, put it back!"
> Pinkie whirled around and held up a rusted chainsaw. > "What about this?" "Pinkie!"
> She put it back, holding up the strange puzzle. > You rush forward. > Snatching it from her hands you place it back in the trophy case. "Don't summon him!"
> "Who?" > You sigh. "Look, the guy that came with the puzzle was the absolute worst to put down. Just please don't put me through that again."
> For real, the night you finally took him you were nearly torn to shreds. > "Okie, dokie!" > Fluttershy leaned back silently. > "Anon what is all this stuff?" she asked quietly. > You had hardly heard her to be honest. "Trophies."
> "Trophies?" Pinkie piqued. "Trophies of all my victor-"
> "Hi, I'm chucky!" "PUT IT DOWN!"
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> You snatch the scarred doll from her hands. > Fuck, you had this thing in stasis, took you forever to find a witch doctor... > The dolls head suddenly turned to you, a malicious grin forming on its face. > "I'm Chucky bitch!" > It struggled in your grip, it's strength actually surprisingly incredible. > "Let go of me you idiot!" > "I didn't serve in nam' for this!" > "Yeah, but I did serve your mother last night faggot!" > You hated this guy... > Suddenly Chucky burst into a blue flame, letting out a pain filled screech. > You drop him out of surprise, backing away from him. > The glow in Pinkie's eyes faded away. > She lowered her hand and gave you a toothy smile. > "Uhhh... sorry Anon." > You sigh, watching Chucky burn to a crisp. > One less reminder of your victories... > For some reason you had felt attached to that psychopathic doll. > Watching him burn just left a hole in your heart. > Oh well. > The screams died down as Pinkie and Flutters watched silently. > Where are you? > You sit up, studying your surroundings. > Something was up.... > You look down at your hands. > You could see straight through them. > What? > Last you remembered you were with the girls. > And then... > Well... > You died... > Gruesomely in fact. > No... > No.... > You are Anonymous that much is true. > But you aren't. > You are his soul. > Fuck! > That idiot went and got the two of you seperated, AGAIN. > When you got back with him, you would give him an earful. > Well rather, when you got back with yourself. > You were still you, just not in a sense. > The whole thing was rather incredibly confusing and tedious. > Sooo... > To differentiate between the two of you, you would do as you commanded last time. > You're SexMachine > And he's boring old Anon. > Fair trade-off considering you didn't have a body at the moment.
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> You get up, looking around the room silently. > You weren't even in a room. > You were essentially in a cave, with lanterns hanging overhead. > Down both ways of the cave was a wall of darkness. > Which somehow pushed against the lanterns. > Well... > Two choices. > You jump on the ground, splashing water around your loafers. > Felt real enough. > You would need new loafers that's for sure. > Where to go... > Where to go... > A cry of pain echoed down the cave, catching your attention. > You whirl around and peer down the cave. > Another cry of pain. > That sounded like Luna. > Another cry inclined you to go and investigate. > Time to get some answers... > You lean back in your checkered chair. > Pinkie and Fluttershy sat on the other end of the table, Pinkie smiling brightly while Flutters did everything to avoid your gaze. > She seemed like she wanted to ask you something but you weren't sure. > Kind of hard to tell with this girl. > For some reason you felt a tang of curiosity and excitement. > You shake it off. > You turn your head between the girls. > At the moment the parlor was pretty dead, filled with maybe two other groups of teens. > A single middle aged woman ran around, taking orders. > Pizza was more of a to-go food, but you felt like eating out. > Again... > Eh, it was good for the soul, just not for the body. > The three of you sat in silence, until the woman came and took your orders. > You ordered simple cheese slices while Flutters ordered the vegan special and Pinkie ordered... > Well, everything. > The Hippie and the Hippo. > You didn't say it to their faces though, you didn't feel like dealing with two, powerful, emotional girls. > You tap the table, looking around silently. > They shared a look before turning back to you. > "Waddya' mean?" Pinkie asked innocently. > You gesture to them.
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> Pinkie frowned while Flutters reeled back. > "That's kind of offensive Anon." Pinkie said with a pout. > What? > "We're not monsters!" > Flutters tried to yell, but it was so soft you would count it as normal speaking level. > Whatever. > "Then don't call us monsters." > Pinkie smiled, lightening the subject. > "Call us special~!" > Okay then.... > Pinkie seemed to forget the topic. > Fluttershy still looked hurt, she just turned away and stared at the ground. > Okay. > "Well, I wan't to be a party planner. And then move onto to something else that makes people happy!" > She wanted to make people happy? > That's a first. > You waited for Flutters but she didn't say anything. > Pinkie rolled her eyes playfully and pointed at her. > "She wants to run her own veterinary store. Her parents had one before it got shut down." > You frown. > "My Mother and Father couldn't keep up with the bills.." > Flutters sighed and turned back to you. > "We didn't charge much to help out the animals, we just couldn't stand to see the poor things in pain." > You wait for her to continue. > "We owed more money than we were making and then, we were shut down." > "I just want to get the shop back someday..." > She stared past you longingly. > Welp, you made a mental note of that. > So these two only wanted to help eh? > No, tearing, or ripping, or eating. > No destroying, burning, killing. > These were the first monsters you've met that didn't want to do any of the above. > Interesting... > "Two slices of cheeses, two slices of the 'Vegan Special' and a large pizza with everything?" > SexMachine...SexMachine, can do anything a SexMachine can. > You tended to ramble in times of nervousness... > You held the lantern up, lighting your way down the cavern. > It was much longer than it looked. > But the screams of pain were closer...
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>>25156527 Secret agent sexmachine
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> A crack of a whip sounded throughout the air. > Luna's scream followed shortly after. > Damn, you hadn't heard her scream that loud before. > Except for that one time you caught her shaving her legs. > You had learned that day that Celestia could do a back-breaker. > Fo-cus! > Right, right... > You put the lantern down, trying to keep your presence hidden. > Up ahead was a break off in the cavern. > You move ahead until you reach the break-off. > You peer around the corner. > Oh damn. > Luna and Sunset were chained up to the wall, arms and legs splayed out. > Red marks, bruises, and light cuts ran up their bodies and torn clothes. > A curvy figure in a robe sat in a large black chair with red cushions. > A... > Ah fuck... > You fall back a bit. > A Ghoul was currently going at the girls with a Cat o' nine tails. > He reeled his decaying arm back and whacked Sunset. > She let out a shriek, arching her body in pain. > Yeeouch... > It didn't look like any serious harm had been done to them yet. > To be honest... > The Ghoul whipped again, earning a pained cry from Luna. > The figure in the robe shivered, letting out a low moan. > You sneer. > Yep, this wasn't interrogation, it was fetish on display. > The hooded figure spoke up. > "You two are the best I've had so far. Such tough hunters reduced to mere quivering puddles of yearning in the presence of me." > What... > "Go on Luna, let me hear some more of those adorable screams." > The Ghoul whipped again. > This time Luna let out a grunt, trying to keep the figure from getting satisfaction. > Atta girl. > "Oh don't be like that." > Luna glared at the figure. > "When my sister finds you-" > CRACK! > Luna let out a long scream, nearly causing you to jump and give away your position. > Damn... > Luna's head dropped as the Ghoul reeled back. > "Enough." The figure commanded. > "Yes Mother." The Ghoul croaked. > It wrapped up the multi-ended whip, holstering it. > "Find the soul." The figure commanded.
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> The Ghoul saluted. > It turned towards the corner you were at. > Oh shit... > How to take down Ghouls. > Oh duh, that was easy. > Ghouls were essentially main-stream zombies. > Brain-dead dolts who were decaying and so stiff it was funny. > But there was a problem. > You couldn't do anything to him. > And if this figure was as powerful as you thought, they would be able to touch you no problem. > Your best option was to hide. > You creep back. > Couldn't hide in the darkness because of the damn lanterns. > It seemed like they worked against you... > You look around. > The cavern was essentially a straight hallway down. > You look up.... > The Ghoul came around the corner. > Scanning the area slowly he stopped seeing a dropped lantern. > He mumbled something before picking it up. > He began to walk down the way you came. > Phew. > You slowly drop down from the caverns ceiling, letting your grip on the overhead rocks slip away. > You drop down silently, creeping back to the corner. > "Oh this is wonderful. You Miss Luna have gotten yourself farther in than you should've." > The figures voice was distorted but definitely female. > "You should have just stayed out of the game for good girl, now look at the situation you're in." > The figure chuckled, earning hard glares from both Sunset and Luna. > "No, no, no. Don't stare at me like that girls, be happy! You don't have to fight feebly anymore." > "Besides..." The figure said solemnly. > "Once we take over this silly little town and its resource my children and I won't have to worry about you hunters any more." > Resource? > Suddenly a light enveloped the room. > A hunchback creature hobbled out of the portal. > "My beautiful and lovely queen, the Hunter Anonymous isn't dead yet." > Oh, looks like you did something right once for all. > Wait, she tried to kill you? Twice!? > "What!? But I sent my children after him, they have never failed before!" > The figure growled, causing hunchback to reel away in fear.
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>>25155945 Was the puzzle a Yu-Gi-Oh reference? If so, awesome!
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>>25157044 I'm assuming pic related
If it is, Anon should never let Twilight near that thing.
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> Suddenly she lowered her voice. > Reaching out a blackened hand she ran it gingerly down the hunchbacks face. > "I remember when I first took you from the crib Garold... Now look at you." > Suddenly she pushed him down, earning a terrified screech from the hunchback. > Luna glared at the figure while Sunset's gaze softened on him. > "Stay out of my way, I must find out what to do about this pest." > She moved towards the portal. > Turning back to the hunchback she sneered from under her robe. > It wasn't visually noticeable but you could feel it. > In an abstract way. > "Keep your eyes on these two, I still can't get a lock on, on the damn Hunters soul. Could be snooping around here for all I know." > The figure reached into the robe, pulling out a green gem. > She tossed it at the hunchback, pelting him on his head. > "Since you're a mere human you cannot see him yourself, this gem will allow you to. If you do catch sight of him at all, shout my name." > She stepped through the portal, closing it behind her. > The hunchback looked at the gem before huddling it close to his chest. > "Why do you accept that kind of treatment?" Sunset incquired. > The hunchback turned to her, genuinely shocked that she was talking to him normally. > "S-She only treats her children with respect... a human like me has no place in her kingdom..." > "You're human?" Luna asked. > The hunchback nodded vigorously. > "You don't look like one." She said. > Damn, that was cold. > "I...I was forced to grow in a box for her children's amusement. They would push me down hills for fun." > Luna's gaze hardened. > "Then why do you listen to her?" > The hunchback looked at the gem. > "She... is my mother in the end." > Welp, time to end this. > You straighten up. > Then the light of a lantern fell over you. > You turn around slowly, coming face to face with the ghoul. > The last thing you saw before he blew out the flame were his blackened eyes.
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> A tinge of fear poked at your chest. > Your RV swerved, earning an excited shout from Pinkie. > Damn... > Where did that come from? > "Are you okay Anon?" Fluttershy asked from your booth. > What was going on? > Something wasn't right.... > You duck under the Ghouls frantic grab. > Darting past him you pop back up. > He turned around silently, trudging towards you. > He was slow at least. > And he wasn't smart enough to shout or something for the hunchback. > Which was a blessing! > The Ghoul silently made a blind grab again. > You slip past him. > You needed something... > Something willing. > You could possess something, but it would have to be really stupid or... > Brain... > Dead... > You're an idiot. > You simply walk forward, walking straight into the Ghoul. > With little to no resistance you took over his body. > You jerk to life, looking around through the filmed eyes of the Ghoul. > Uhg... This was disgusting... > You could feel bits and pieces of your body falling off. > Were there friggen maggots in your gut? > EUGH! > You needed to get back to your own body now! > You shuffle around the corner. > Staring down the hunchback you silently stop in the middle of the room. > You hadn't been paying attention but there was a sizable collection of torture tools here. > Knives, flayers, scalpels, and more. > It's a good thing Sunset and Luna were just whipped for a couple of hours... > The hunchback reeled away upon your entrance. > "D-Did you find him?" he shakily asked. > Oh yeah, you were playing a roll here. > You shake your head, turning to the girls. > You wink at them. > Well, you thought you did. > This guy didn't have functional eyelids.
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> They continued to glare at you, held up on display. > If you had dat blood flow doe something would be on display as well. > Time to act, you were a drama kid back when you were actually in school.' > When you were twelve.... > You had this. > Nailed it. > Luna and Sunset shared a confused look. > The hunchback just nodded silently, refusing to meet your gaze. > You frown. > When you said his name he flinched, nearly falling over. > "Uh-uh-y-you said you would eat my brains remember?" > You could use this. > Your voice was so scratchy and creaky it was kind of hard to talk. > "B-but..." > He complied, scrambling to run over. > They were held up by wrist and ankle clamps, which he undid with a surprising efficiency. > The girls fell to the ground roughly, grunting in pain. > "Does mother want something with them?" > "T-Then why did you have me-" > "Yessir!" > Garold cowered away, hobbling off into the corner. > You walk up to the girls, staring down at them. > If only it was functional, the chance was right there. > You lean down, getting inches from their faces. > They glared at you, waiting for your next move. > "What is the meaning of this?" Luna demanded. > You roll your eyes. > Their defense dropped. > "Who-" > "Oh, it had to be you." > "I'm still not getting it." Sunset whispered. > "It's Anon..." > You wave a rotting hand at Sunset. > "You uh... You proud of yourself there Anon? How are you even doing that?" > The three of you look back at the hunchback, who watched you with curiosity.
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> "Something's fishy here..." he grunted. > "I'm treated like dirt but I'm not dumb!" > Oh boy. > He stared you down, fingering the gem in his hand. > You wouldn't be able to move fast enough, not in this body. > Neither would the girls, they were probably weaker than you were right now. > He suddenly dropped the Gem, stomping on it as hard as he could. > Which wasn't very hard considering his deformity. > "I can show you the way out." > He reached over and grabbed an empty lantern from the torture table. > "Why are you going to help us?" Sunset asked. > You roll your eyes. > "I'm tired of being held captive in this hellish nightmare, I can lead you out of here, but please, please take me with you." > Luna rolled her eyes while Sunset looked him over. > "Of course..." she whispered. > Garold flashed her a smile. > "Come on then, this way..." > He hobbled past the three of you. > Luna and Sunset turned to go after him, but Sunset suddenly fell. > "Dammit..." > "Get up." Luna commanded. > "I can't, my ankles screwed up." > Garold hobbled back and helped her up, using his hunchback as support he smiled up at her. > She smiled back. > She might be cooler than you thought. > "Come on then." > Luna snatched up a sickle from one of the tables. > "Anon are you going to grab something?" > You probably should. > "Nah?" > "How?" > You gesture to your decaying arms. > She shrugged. > The two of you followed after Sunset and Garold.
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That's it for tonight.
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>>25118890 If you were wishing a happy ending, stop reading here and just think that Rarity accepts what she has seen and moves on. Though painful, she is truly happy for her friends. Or if a sadder conclusion suits you, perhaps Anon becomes Fluttershy’s thrall and constantly hangs out with the girls. Rarity never gets over him or this betrayal, and it eats away at her until she ends it the only way she can. No one cries more at her funeral than Fluttershy. If saccharine is your flavor of choice, imagine that SciTwi discovers out a cure for vampirism and freed from her hunger, Fluttershy loses all interest in Anon. Freed from her vampiric hypnotism, he is able to be with Rarity. For those looking for a harem (or at least threesome), I suggest you fantasize about Fluttershy accidentally drinking too deeply and being forced to turn Anon to save him. In need of a new thrall, Rarity volunteers and everyone goes off to live happily ever after in a castle on the moon and have lots of hot vampire sex. >Shit. >No, wait, she was smiling. >Maybe this was planned. Maybe she was checking on her friend. >"Just one more sip," Fluttershy repeats. "And then..." >She rubs one leg against your crotch, finishing that sentence quite beautifully without another word. >"And don't worry about the noise." >The noise? Right, Pinkie said she was a moaner. There's no way you could ever forget something like that. twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25157638 >"Twilight brough earplugs for everyone." >Her tongue flicks lightly across your neck. >"She was *very* insistant everyone wear them." >That's right. >This was all planned. >But earplugs? >That's just weird, but so is Twilight. "So, Fluttershy..."
>She pauses, her fangs scraping the side of your neck. "Is this how you girls solved the sleeping arrangements? By having you sleep with me?"
>"What? No." >She pulls back slightly, just enough to see your face. >"Rarity offered to sleep on the floor," the girl giggles while running a hand through her hair to brush it out of her eyes. "She just didn't want you to know, because she thought you'd feel bad about it." >Rarity was right, because you do. A little. >Fluttershy frowns slightly, her red eyes shifting away to look anywhere but at you. >"I don't think I was supposed to tell you that," she mutters quietly. "Don't tell her I said anything." "I won't."
>Fluttershy smiles sweetly, lifting her head to look towards the door. >"Maybe..." >The word trails off. "What?"
>She gives a little shake of her head that sends her hair cascading back down over her face. >"Nothing." >Again, she brushes her hair back - she's still looking towards the hall with concern. >"Maybe I should tell her," Fluttershy says, mostly to herself. "I mean, tell Rarity she can have the sofa. Because… well…." >She shifts her weight and starts to climb off the bed. "No, you can't."
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>>25157643 >You don't want her to leave, but more importantly you don't want to tell her about the look in Rarity's face as she slowly turned away. Even if the other girl was happy for her friend, something died in her right then, leaving her eyes flat and dead - like the sea before a storm. >Or so you've heard. >"But -" "How will you explain the vampire thing?"
>Even in the thin light, you can see Fluttershy's lips are stained red with your blood. >Her eyes shift back towards the hall - towards her friends. >"I have to tell them eventually," she answers hesitantly. "They should know. After all, Twilight introduced me to... to *her*, so I should at least warn them..." >She whines softly, unsure what to do. "Stay."
>"I - I will," she sighs, closing her eyes. >You hadn't realized they were shining faintly until the red glow blinks out. >"I don't know what to tell them, anyway." >Thin streaks of red leak from the corners of her eyes. >"I'm a monster, Anon." "No."
>"Yes, I am! Do you know how badly I wanted to tear into your throat earlier?" >She's crying. >She's crying blood. >"Every time you touched me, it's all I could think about." "But you didn't."
>"But I wanted to!" "But you didn't."
>You put your arms around her and pull her back down. "If you had really wanted to, you would have."
>She sobs into your shoulder, shuddering slightly. twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25157663 >"I don't even know if I like you, or if I'm just too hungry to think straight," she whimpers. "I haven't fed in over a month, not since... since... the first time. But I -" "Why!?"
>"I don’t want to hurt anyone!" “It doesn’t hurt.”
>The opposite, really. >The pleasure is paralyzing. >Literally. >A more rational part of you thinks that’s intentional. >It stops the food from fighting back, after all. >”I know, I enjoyed it, too,” Fluttershy sobs, “but not hurting doesn’t mean it’s good for you! Just look at what I did to AJ!” “Ice cream isn’t particularly healthy, either, if I eat too much of it.”
>You hope that shudder is her trying to hold in a laugh. >It's not. >”Not quite the same, Anon,” she sighs. “One is something you eat, the other is… is…” “Something *you* eat. Same principle applies, Fluttershy. Just don’t take too much.”
>She nods slightly, unable to argue any further. It’s doubtful the shitty ice cream analogy actually won her over; more likely, it’s the hunger. >As her fangs dig into your neck again, your arms go limp and fall loosely to the bed. >Even if you had wanted to, you couldn’t move a muscle right now. >”Don’t worry,” Fluttershy whispers, pulling away from you just long enough to speak, “it won’t always be like this. You’ll get over the effect, eventually. At least, that’s what she told me.” >And then she’s nuzzling up to your neck again, slowly and gently feeding off of you. Anonymous
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>>25157638 damn it, you dump green while im busy
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>>25157677 >The euphoria sweeps your senses away. It's so pleasurable, you don't mind when your vision starts to darken. >She's drinking too deeply. >No, you trust her. She'll stop. >She'll stop, right? >Your heart is racing, your breathing rapid and shallow. >There's no way to stop her, no way to warn her. You can't move or even speak. >Just before you begin to panic – for all the good it would do - she pulls free of your neck. >"I love you, Anon. I love you so much, I don't know how I didn't realize it earlier." "Fluttershy, I -"
>She's feeding on you again before you can ask her to stop. >If she had waited just a second or two longer, you could have said something when Rarity pushes the door aside and walks stiffly towards the bed. >Maybe Fluttershy would have noticed her friend on her own. >Neither of those things happen. >Rarity doesn’t speak. She doesn’t demand Fluttershy explain why she’s in your bed. She doesn’t try to explain why she, herself, came into the room. She doesn’t scream or cry or wail or shout. Calmly, with care and devotion, she says one word. >Only one word, but in a way it explains everything. >"Mine." >Fluttershy jerks upright at the sound of her friend’s voice, her eyes wide with fear. >"Rarity! I –" >That’s all she gets out before the hatchet slams into her neck. Anonymous
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>>25157919 >If this were some movie or TV show, it would have decapitated her, but the reality of it is a dull camping hatchet with a head smaller than your hand isn’t capable of such things. >No, the actual effect isn’t as clean or kind. >It's the force of the blow more than the sharpness of the blade that buries the hatchet in Fluttershy’s throat and knocks her off of you. With a sneer, Rarity yanks it free. >Blood, dark and thick, slowly leaks from the ragged gash as the vampiress' hands fumble at the wound. >Fluttershy isn't really trying to stop the bleeding – not at first. >No, she just can’t believe what is happening, not until her fingers touch the torn flesh. >On her back at the foot of your bed, Fluttershy's eyes flicker up at her friend, pleadingly searching for… for *something*. >A reason or explanation, perhaps. >Something to help her understand this – this… this *mistake*. >She finds nothing. >Rarity’s face is blank, devoid of both mercy and hate. >Until it turns to you. >"Well, are you not happy, Anon?" Rarity asks with a hollow smile. "I came for you." >She reaches out with her empty hand and you try to scoot away. >Try. >You can barely move. >Fluttershy drank too deeply; only the adrenaline coursing through your veins is keeping you aware of your surroundings. >"Why aren't you smiling?" Rarity asks as she starts to climb onto the bed. "You should be smiling now." "Because you just fucking killed Fluttershy!"
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Anon really should have put that shit away when he had the chance.
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>>25157933 >She pauses and glances over at her friend. >And shrugs. >"I did no such thing," she giggles politely, daintily covering her mouth with her empty hand before turning her blank gaze back to you. "See? She is still moving." >She is. >More than you are. >One hand firmly wrapped around her brutalized neck, the vampiress is struggling to sit up. >Right. >Vampire. >An axe to the neck won't kill her. >Not unless it decapitates her, anyway. >Right? >"She's still moving," Rarity repeats with a lopsided smile. "Why are you *still* moving!?" >Rarity suddenly lunges at the other girl, hacking at her again with the hatchet. >There’s nothing you can do to stop her. >You can barely move and screaming at her to stop has absolutely no effect. >Honestly, you're not sure if your words even leave your throat. >But it doesn't matter; Fluttershy sees the attack coming. >She's not caught by surprise like before and, one hand still clasp around her neck, raises the other to ward off the blow. >It doesn’t do any good. >Her throat torn out by the first attack, Fluttershy can’t even scream as the blade cleaves through her thumb, leaving it dangling by a thin mess of sinew and skin, and plunges into her chest with a sound that turns your stomach. >It struck bone. >That sharp crack you heard can’t be anything else. >"Why do you do this, Fluttershy? Why do you *always* have to intrude where you are *not* wanted?" twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25157960 >Rarity tries to yank the weapon free, sending a spasm through Fluttershy’s body, but it’s stuck. >”Why do you *always* have to take what is mine!?” >With a savage twist, she breaks the axe free with a sound of squelching meat and fragmenting bone. >"Just stop moving and GO AWAY!" >She shoves the other girl backwards, sending Fluttershy tumbling off the bed. >This can’t be happening. >It’s a nightmare or something. >Has to be. >You’ll wake up and look over the edge of your bed and all you’ll see is your dirty laundry scattered around. >That’s why… that’s why there’s no blood anywhere, right? >And that’s not Rarity. It can’t be. >This is all in your imagination. >Like when you thought they were all vampires. >You take things too far, you know you do. >This isn’t – >”Are you thirsty?” Rarity asks suddenly, looking over her shoulder at you. “I think I am. Should I get you anything, darling?” >A twitching, bloodied hand paws at the foot of your bed, grabbing at the sheets. >This may be a nightmare, but it’s not a dream; this is really happening. >But she’s still alive. >Of course Fluttershy is still alive; that hatchet can’t kill her. >That doesn’t stop your heart from pounding furiously as Rarity turns back to her friend. >”I’ll get us some water, Anon.” >She crawls onto to bed, leaning across your legs and slowly raising the axe. >“But first –“ “STOP!”
>”Why?” “You… you don’t have to do this!”
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>>25157987 >”And why not?” “Because… because…”
>You don’t even know why she *is* doing this. >”I *have* to do this; can you not see that she is suffering, Anon? I never imagined you could be so heartless.” “She’ll get better!”
>”I truly doubt that,” Rarity sighs mournfully, reaching out to hold her friend’s hand tenderly. “If only that were true…” “She’s a vampire!”
>”A *what*?” >She turns her head to look at you incredulously. “A vampire.”
>”Oh, Anon,” the girl giggles, shaking her head in disbelief. “You really do believe that, don’t you?” >She turns towards you, crawling up the bed to lounge alongside. >It’s almost a nice moment, her body pressed against your side, her arm lying across your chest. >Would be better if that hand wasn’t clutching a bloody hatchet. >Even better if Fluttershy wasn’t… wasn’t… >You shudder as the vampire draws a ragged, choking breath. >It sounds painful. >”W-why…?” >The word comes out in a wet gurgle. >The hatchet shifts as Rarity tightens her grip, dragging a red streak across your shirt. >”I am *so* sorry about this, Anon.” “So you’ll –“
>”I’ll just take care of this and go get that water for us.” >She kisses your cheek before sitting up. >You try – you try with all your heart and soul – to grab her. To hold her. To give Fluttershy time to… to… it doesn’t matter what. >Just to give her time. A little more time. >Rarity gives a little gasp and looks down at your hand clutching her wrist. Anonymous
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>>25158011 >And she smiles. >”Do not worry, darling. I will be right back.” >She breaks your grip without even trying, sliding off the foot of the bed to kneel beside her friend. >”Rarity, why?” you hear Fluttershy ask again, stronger this time. >She’s healing. >Fuck yeah, vampire powers. >”I tried,” Rarity answers after a few seconds. “I really did.” >”But –“ >”Anon told me the most interesting thing. He said – oh, this is just too much – he said that you are a vampire. Such childish nonsense, isn’t it?” >There’s a bubbling moan in response. >”Oh, I agree,” Rarity laughs as if Fluttershy had told some joke only she could hear. “That is exactly what makes him just so attractive. But it *is* curious – the vampire thing, I mean. After all, you *were* the one who came up with our costume theme for this little get-together, and now I find myself wondering at they why of it.” >The long silence that follows chills you to your core. >You can’t see more than Rarity’s head and shoulders – she’s bent low over the other girl. >”I really did try,” she repeats sorrowfully. “I had every intention of following along with Twilight’s silly little plan, but then…” >Another moment of quiet. >”You should not have done that, Fluttershy.” >Metal glints in the dim light as Rarity raises the hatchet. “Rarity!”
>”One moment, darling.” “Wait!”
>”Just need to wrap up a little project,” she sings back. “I’m thirsty.”
>”Oh!” >She hops to her feet. twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25158028 >”I am *so* sorry!” she apologizes, biting her lip in worry. “I forgot about that. I’ll be right back!” >Leave the axe, leave the axe… >She takes the axe. >Shit. >Doesn’t matter. >She pauses at door, turning back and smiling at her friend. >”Don’t go anywhere, Fluttershy,” she half-sings. “You know how much I value our time together.” >If you can get to your door and lock it, buy Fluttershy enough time to heal… you’ve felt her strength firsthand, though you didn’t know what it was at the time. “Rarity…?”
>”Oh, yes! Right away!” >She practically skips away down the hall. >Now’s your chance. >You pull yourself to the edge of the bed and swing your legs over. You’re halfway upright before your head spins dizzily and your vision narrows. >That’s fine. >Just need to get to the door. >You can do this. >Slowly, you push yourself up and off of the bed. >It’s not that far. >You – >You’re falling. >The floor rushes up to meet you, but you can’t see it. >You can’t see anything. Then again, you’re not really conscious, not anymore, just have one last thought firing through your blood-deprived brain: Oh, shit. >A scream jolts you from your dreams of blood and fire. “Fluttershy…?”
>”Anon!? Oh, Anon! I am *so* sorry, Anon.” >What…? >A feeble groan escapes your throat. >”I should have known better than to leave you alone.” >A hand gently strokes your cheek. twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25158050 >”Just what *did* she do to you, Anon?” Rarity asks as your eyes flutter open. “I was so worried when I found you unconscious, with all this blood just *everywhere*.” >She’s kneeling at your side, one hand clasped to her chest in relief. >You can see both of her arms are covered in it up to the elbows. >In the darkness, it looks almost black. >You’re also fairly certain it’s not yours. >“It’s safe to tell me, Anon, she can’t hurt you now.” “What – what did you do to her?”
>”I am afraid I had to use some of your clothes to prop your legs up; remember, you need to elevate your legs during bouts of low blood pressure.” “What did you do!?”
>”I am sorry that ruckus from Fluttershy disturbed your rest. Perhaps I might need to gag her, because it was just so *grating*.” “What. Did. You. Do?”
>”Luckily our friends will not have had their sleep ruined, thanks to Twilight’s foresight,” Rarity sighs, looking over her shoulder to the sobbing noise behind your bed. “Even if they *do* hear something, we all know just how… *vocal*… Fluttershy can be, after all. They will just assume that Twilight’s plan succeeded.” “JUST TELL ME!”
>Rarity looks back towards you with a slight frown. >”She was trying to reach you when I came back, but I just could not let her hurt you anymore.” >There’s a whimper from Fluttershy. >”I had to stop her, Anon.” >Her sorrowful tone is perhaps the most disturbing part of this entire exchange. twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25158066 >”I *had* to, but she just keeps TRYING!” >She whirls around in a flash, slamming the hatchet down on something and drawing a sharp cry of pain. >”I just *cannot* believe you, Fluttershy,” she sighs and rolls her eyes. “Why can you not just go away and give us a little privacy?” >She raises the hatchet again. “Wait!”
>”This will just take a moment.” “But… but… the water?”
>”Oh, well this is just embarrassing, isn’t it? I seemed to have forgotten it again.” >She turns her head to smile sheepishly at you. >You see, I was in the kitchen and just happened to stumble across this.” >She picks up something off the floor and holds it out for you to see. >The stake you dropped. >”And I stared pondering your notion. What if she really *is* a vampire? Is such a thing even possible?” “Of course it is!”
>Rarity cocks her head to one side and stares up at the ceiling with her dead eyes. >”Well, that *does* explain a few things…” “Like how she could survive everything you’ve done!?”
>”Oh.” >She glances back towards Fluttershy. >”*Actually*, I was thinking about how she absolutely would not eat any of your cooking, but that makes sense, too.” >She giggles and holds up the stake. >”I never should have doubted you, Anon. You are *always* right, are you not?” >Shit. >She’s going to stake Fluttershy. “I’m really thirsty. Could you –“
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>>25157919 Shit here we go.
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>>25158115 >sell >ducking Android pls
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>>25158098 That last line got me all fucked up.
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Never stick your dick in crazy; that's the rule. Unfortunately, crazy doesn't follow the rules. Enjoy the ride, anon. I bet rararara can suck a bowling ball through CAT5 cable.
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>>25158087 >”This will not take but a moment, darling. Just have to wrap up a few things first. You spent so much time making this. I would hate for it to go to waste.” “Please!”
>”But – oh, very well. Anything for you, Anon,” she sighs and flashes you an unbalanced smile. “Just stay right there, Fluttershy; I am sure you will.” >She sets down the stake, but keeps the hatchet. “There’s no need –“
>”To take this?” she finishes, brandishing the weapon playfully. “I know, but…” >She leans in close, eyes shifting from side to side as if one of her friends will pop out of the shadows at any moment. >”… I have a confession to make. I am… am… I’m afraid of the dark, okay!?” >She blushes furiously, her cheeks almost the same color as her bloodstained hands. >”I know it is silly, but carrying it makes me feel safer.” >She kisses you and is out the door before your addled mind can respond. >The door… >No, even in your befuddled state, you know there’s no way you can get to it. >But Fluttershy – she’s just around the corner. >Maybe… maybe with your blood she can heal herself? >You don’t have a clue, but at least you can be with her. >It’s difficult, with your body barely following your instructions, but you manage. >You wish you hadn’t. >It’s obvious what Rarity meant – what she said about Fluttershy staying right there. twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25158493 Going to stop here for tonight. Despite working through it several times, the next bit still feels too much like edginess for the sake of edginess, despite being an obvious practical thing in yandere vs vampire combat. Thought I'd have the fix figured out by the time I got around to posting this part, but nope, it still feels completely wrong. I'll just have to sleep on it.
I'll leave you with the two songs I've been listening to over and over while working on this:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R8Gq64AklT8 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wA5CJrla26s Anonymous
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>>25158798 See ya soon fam.
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>>25158798 Vampire or Yandere?
Shit son you don't give us easy choices.
I'll take yandere dress horse. Insanebow Dasb
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My fucking head is killing me. If I have to look at this screen for any longer my brain is gonna commit sudoku. I'm updating in the morning.
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>>25158798 Why is it that the Rararara fics involving a damaged or deranged Rarararara give me the indefatigable boners? Why is it so hot when the classy ones are complicated?
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>>25158798 Well... This was unexpected. I'm enjoying it, despite being mildly disturbed.
You better give us that Blood Angels Scout Squad story after though.
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>>25163263 >Why is it so hot when the classy ones are complicated? It's the juxtaposition, and you're not alone in finding that hot.
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>>25164887 I don't know who that is, but I know that she needs my D.
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>>25164887 Diamond tiara is making me diamonds
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Not gonna be able to writefag tonight, got called into work.It's pretty fucking nice tbh fam
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Finally secured a device with a proper keyboard again, so I'll update sometime this weekend
>>25165418 >tbh fam Fucking triggered Anonymous
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We get some greentext with Spooky Skeletons in it
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>>25088851 Again
>>25097792 I-it's not like I want a chain-spoon, heretic...
Yeah, between this and the Homecoming thread my faith in Appulwaifu has taken a beating recently
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Didn't bother with a pic last time because page 10.
Now page 10 is back, and I have to go away.
>>25168251 For the stories we cherish
We bump in glory
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>>25159275 >Shit son you don't give us easy choices. Do you really think she'd let you choose?
>>25163802 >You better give us that Blood Angels Scout Squad story after though. I'll need appropriately Gothic names for the m6
such as Raritas , two additional girls and appropriate names
(because of how geneseed replication works) before I can start on Sanguinary Priest Rediklus's log concerning the Mystery of the Mutated Geneseed and the Brother-Sisters.
Space Marines aren't particularly imaginative when it comes to names. The girls are Marines, so the Brother part is obviously necessary. The Emperor ordains it so! But they're also female, so... Brother-Sisters! treppahcs
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>>25159275 What would a yandere vampire be like?
And Rarity is a better choice as well
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>>25170273 I shall get to work on it, just as soon as my Battul-Brothas and I cut our way out of a Tyranid's stomach.
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>>25158493 >The vampire’s entire face is awash with her sanguine tears, but that's not what makes your stomach heave. >Nor is it the way her eyes are clenched tightly shut, like she's trying to block out the pain. >It isn't working - a fresh stream of red leaks out from under her eyelids as you watch - but you don’t know how it could. >Fluttershy shudders violently as you approach, her limbs jerking oddly – wrongly – *sickeningly*. >Her left arm doesn't move at all. >There's no way it could, not below the elbow, anyway. >That part isn't attached anymore. >The little hatchet had no hope of cutting through bone - not that Rarity didn't try - however, it was apparently more than capable of hacking through the cartilage and ligaments of joints. >But not quickly or cleanly - it took effort. It took time. And... and it took many, *many* tries. >Very few of Rarity's wild swings landed where she intended. >You try to look away - you can't help it - but it's impossible. There is no “away.” Dark stains are splattered all across the walls and floor. >And over by the window… >Oh. >There's her arm. >The hand Rarity had held so gently is... >It's not a hand, anymore. >You avert your eyes – the *thing* that used to be a part of Fluttershy is harder to look at than the girl herself. >She’s in pain – that’s something you can understand. >But *that*? >You can’t. You refuse to. > As your eyes turn back towards Fluttershy, you can see that her wounds are scabbing over – no, *healing* – her dark blood hardening and turning into new flesh and skin. >Just not quickly enough. >She needs your help. >You drag yourself the last few feet, until you just can’t. >That's fine. >You can reach. “Fluttershy.”
>She twitches at the sound, though the movement is barely distinguishable from her constant shaking. “Fluttershy!”
>Her eyes flicker open to see your wrist held over her mouth. Fate dictates another delay, due to computer failure Anonymous
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Bump it up make it jam
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>>25172143 Bumping to continue this
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>>25170273 Sent-
>Brother-Sisters Whoops.
Oh well, Latin names are generic enough to be easily tweaked for gender if need be.
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>>25175084 Guten nacht, herr pterodactyl.
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I might move my werewolf story here. Unlike last year's Halloween, the threads don't seem as active. When my next thread dies (and if it's like the previous, it may die early) then I'll continue my story here.
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>>25175181 I don't think anyone would mind, most of the other write friends save for me(TheAutistocrat) and /tg/ have been pretty dead recently.
And once I'm done writing I'm going back to Ubermensch Anon for a bit so I may read the stories, but I'll be done with this thread.
So yeah man, a little more
> green traffic Would be nice
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>>25072942 [muffled john cena theme playing in the distance]
I've got a couple old stories to post.
http://pastebin.com/5YXQ4zPU This one is an anon x vamp Vinyl, based off of a prompt.
http://pastebin.com/1EWeSbUH Anon x vamp Derpy, no prompt.
Veen a while since they've made the rounds, but opinions are nice.
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>>25176272 Sugar lump rump?
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Hey I thought someone was going to do a story based on this
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Will be on shortly to start, got held up.
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>>25178738 So who would alucardnons father/mother be?
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>>25179731 Celestia I guess would be the mother I don't know who could be the father
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>>25157540 "Welp, glad you girls enjoyed the little lunch time."
> "Uhhh yeah! You're really funny Anon!" > Pinkie gripped your shoulders, gingerly pulling you out of the drivers seat. > Spinning you around she began to hum to herself. > Okay... > She stopped you suddenly, making sure you came face to face with Fluttershy. > She gave you a soft smile, hiding behind her hair. > "Thank you for the time Anon... I needed it." "Uhm, no problem. Least we could do until the, you know..."
> Inevitable fight. > You weren't nervous or worried about it at all. > But from the looks of the girls, Pinkies dullness behind her eyes and Fluttershy's apparent anxiety. > They were nervous... > She nodded with a sad smile. > She walked past you, giving a silent wave. > You turn and watch the two girls leave. > Pinkie bounding to school while Fluttershy followed with a reserved silence behind her. > Hmm... > You could get used to times like that. > But for now... > You needed to go see Celestia, she had to have some answers by now. > You adjust your baseball cap and hop out of the RV. > Locking it up this time you head back to the school. > It was about that time to take things semi-seriously now. "Are we there yet?"
> "For the last time Anon-" "SexMachine."
> "SexMachine..., be quiet." > You fold your arms over your chest, following after the limping form of the hunchback. > Luna had been a little worried this was all a trick at first but you proved her wrong. > You had to remind her of all the hunts you went on together, wasn't that hard anyway. > Though it came to a grand total of two. > Three if you counted this whole crazy shebang. > Sunset chatted with Garold as your little squad moved down the cavern. > You've been walking for what felt like an eternity. > Namely because this body was weak as all hell. > You would check your watch if you could. > But no, all you had was this dirty and torn outfit. > Funny how these kinds of things go down for a Hunter. TheAutistocrat
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> The outfit being this decaying body of course. > Your nose slowly came loose, falling off with strange squelching sound. > Luna sneered, repulsed by your body. > You blow her a kiss. > You had already explained the situation to the girls. > They had been skeptical of your story at first. > Then you reminded them of how things really went down in your world. > And they shut their traps real fast. > And the whole being you but not being you thing took awhile to explain. > But the lot of you were passed that now. > Garold was actually more helpful than you thought. > If it wasn't for him, you would've been lost by now. > In 'Mothers Spirit World' as he put it. > If this was a spirit world, then that explained why you were able to pick up the lanterns earlier. > Oh look, finally an exit out of this tunnel! > "Shhh!" Garold suddenly hushed. > Luna put an arm out, smacking it into your chest. > Some blackened liquid squirted over her hand, earning a suppressed gag from her. > Sunset and Garold packed into the wall closest to them, pressing flat. > You and Luna follow suite. > A creature moved just beyond the exit. > It stood at a sizeable height, it's muscled body stomping on the ground. > It held a club in one hand and a... > Oh... > It dragged a bloodied sleeping bag in the other. > Some poor girls raven black hair stuck out from the top of it, dragging the blood across the ground. > You put your arm out this time, keeping a pissed of Luna in place. > She glared at you, but let it go. > The creature lumbered off with a brutish mumble.
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> Sunset broke away from Garold, limping to the exit. > Peering around the corner she waited for a couple of minutes before gesturing for you guys to join her. > You peel yourself away from the wall, some bits and pieces of your skin peeling off and sticking to the wall. > Uhg, you just wanted to be back in your own meat suit. > Luna and Garold came up behind Sunset. > You stop just behind the group. > Woah... > What could only be described as an edgy teens fantasy lay before your eyes. > From here on out the tunnel expanded into a large clearing, networks of other tunnels leading through it. > Hanging from the rooftops were red pods, glowing with a warm light. > Some held silhouettes of bodies while others were empty. > Everywhere else that wasn't blackened rock had red crystals jutting from it. > Smack in the middle of the clearing was a large pool of green liquid, its glow washing over most of the cave. > Between the red and green the whole cavern looked like a nightmarish christmas set. > Huh... > The crystals looked like the one you had found in your pocket. > You might have to stay here a little bit longer... > You lean down, coming close to Luna's ear. > She perked up, whirling around. > "Really?" > You nod. > Luna nodded and turned back to the cavern. > "Okay... follow me. Their shouldn't be much of her children milling about right now." > Garold tried to lead but Sunset tapped his shoulder. > He flinched but relaxed. > "What are those things?" she asked pointing to the pods. > Garold frowned solemnly. > "Conversion pods." > "What?" Luna asked, moving faster than she should've. > Garold put his hands up feebly, trying to defend himself. > Luna rolled her eyes, stepping away from his pathetic form. > You just pocketed your han- > Grooossss.... your finger just snapped off.
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> He cleared his throat, as if just escaping deaths clutches. > Hah, with Luna he might as well have. > "She's been gathering people from around the town. She has her children kill them then bring their bodies back." > He turned back to the pods hanging overhead. > "We put them in there and then they get converted..." > "To what?" Sunset asked. > Garold frowned. > "I don't know." > "Some of her children said superior creatures, others said ghouls, most of them said food." > Heavy. > "But I'm not allowed to know anything about the pods." > A gust of wind blew through the cavern. > That was funny. > You guys were essentially underground. > "Because you cannot keep your mouth shut..." > The voice echoed around the cave. > It was distorted and... > Female.. > Well shit. > The gust of wind came from behind your group. > Your feet suddenly had nothing under them. > What just happened? > Luna was falling forward... > So was Sunset and Garold.... > What? > Your group hit the ground rolling. > Your decaying body began to tear and rip as you rolled down a hill. > The clearing spun, the pods taking residence in both the bottom and top half of your vision. > When you hit the ground you were missing an arm, had the other one torn to shreds, and had multiple cuts all over your broken body. > Luna struggled to pick herself up, snatching the sickle. > Garold got up first, helping up Sunset. > Uhg... > If you could feel pain it would not be pretty right now. > Luckily you were the not-so-friendly ghost right now. > In a Ghoulies body. > Wonderful how your life was being lived. > You were the last to get up, the bodies weakened state holding you back. > It was like you were dealing with tissue paper... > A green light appeared in front of you with a bang. > Shielding your eyes you peer out from under your arm. > A robed figure stepped from the green portal. > It pointed at your group silently. > Welp, it was nice being a douche while it lasted. > "Mother!" Garold squealed.
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> Where was this coming from? > The tinge of dread ran up your spine again, causing you to shiver. > Something was up. > You wave at the receptionist. > She waved awkwardly back, looking you over with barely hidden contempt. > What was she butt-flustered about? > Probably something you didn't remember doing. > You knock on Celestia's door. > You take a quick glance at the door on your right. > Lunas office. > Strange how weird it seemed that Luna wasn't here. > "Come in." Celestia groaned. > You push the door open, stepping through the door. > Whereas Luna's office was bland Celestia's was more comforting than Luna's. > White carpet, walls, curtains, lamps, basically everything in her office was a white with orange and yellow lines cutting through it. > You do a 360, letting out a long whistle. > You stop on Celestia who had a hand on her head, glaring down at a shot glass filled with a brown liquid. > Annnndd. > There it is. > A bottle of whiskey stood proudly over the shot glass. > "I know..." > She waved a hand at one of the abstract seats in front of her desk. > You take a seat, the springs under the chair bouncing. > "Nothing... they gave me nothing... I had to kill the shape-shifter before they admitted that they had no idea where their boss was..." > That didn't make sense. > Celestia shook her head, pouring herself another shot of whiskey. > "Nothing, they have families that they all live with, If anything, they kept in touch some other way." > Damn... > Celestia glared at you, a hand still pressed on her fore-head. > "Then what should we do? Since you seem too know so much about everything." > Celestia suddenly shot up, her large frame looming over you.
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> She glared down at you, tears welling in her eyes. > "I just wanted to stop, I wanted to live a normal life, I wanted to drop out." > She slammed her fist down on the desk, cracking the white paint. > The computer monitor and lamp jumped, nearly falling off. > "But she had to go and dig! Then she called you in and you dragged us back into this mess of a world you have!" > Your turn to be angry now. > You stand up, not nearly being as impressive as Celestia. > You lean forward, grabbing her shoulder. > She didn't put up any resistance as you pulled her in. > You pull back, pushing her away. > She stumbled back, falling back into her chair. > You take the baseball cap off, dropping it on her desk. > You let out a cynical laugh, plopping down in the abstract chair. > With a sigh you go silent, staring blankly at the floor. > Just from the corner of your eye you could see an ashamed principal eyeing you nervously. > You grip the desk and push off. > The room became one white molded blur as you spun around. > "Just-" > "Anon-"
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> She snapped her mouth shut. > You hold a finger up, the silence in the room hanging heavy. > "What do you mean?" > Here it comes... > Suddenly the feeling of a thousand knives stabbing your body shook your every sense. > Your nerves flared in pain as you jerked and spasm out of pain. > Dropping to the ground you claw at it trying to grab hold of something to steady yourself. > Your body convulsed and contracted, every muscle pumping itself at once. > You heard her chair scoot away from her desk. > "Anon!" > You let out a pained scream, Luna and Sunset backing away silently. > The robbed figure pointed a finger at you, a green beam trailing from your decaying form the her finger. > Suddenly, you were pushed backwards. > A brief glimpse of the collapsing ghoul caught your sight just before you hit the ground. > Ah, Soul realm equals real pain. > For your soul that is. > Your soul. > The soul that was separated from you. > Your... > Soul... > "What's wrong with him?" Sunset asked. > "She pushed his soul out, Anonymous is useless now... " Luna responded. > "Mother please!" Garold pleaded. > "Enough of your pathetic sniveling you ugly little creature, after I take these two broods back to the chamber, my children and I are going to make a lovely little treat out of you." > Garolds squeal poked at your pain addled mind. > it felt as if Bruce Lee punched you a thousand times. > And then someone dumped acid on you. > And pushed you down a hill. > It really, really, fricken hurt is what you were getting at. > "My Children gather!" > Just beyond your fading vision you could see figures shifting and moving into place. > "These HUMANS think they can play us like fools. They tricked your little toy into helping them and were snooping around like the back-stabbing rats they are." > Multiple sounds filled the cavern. > Howls, screechs, shrieks, screams, roars, dead laughter, and more.
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> The copious amounts of sounds filled your ears. > It pounded at your head like a jackhammer. > Where did they all even come from? > It was empty when you guys had entered... > The pods above you were the only thing you could see. > A shadowy figure reaching forward for help hung above you. > You stare blankly at it... > This was it... > This was the end of the line. > Whoever this was, was going to keep Sunset and Luna as trophies. > Hold your soul. > Kill the real you. > Probably kill the girls and snatch up Celestia. > And then kill everybody in this town for whatever purpose they wanted. > It was over... > The war is done and you lost... > You let your head fall back, accepting your fate. > No... > No... > A part of you was screaming no. > You didn't come this far just to quit. > You had fought worse, with way worse conditions. > No... > No acceptance, you would have to play the hero. > You slowly pick yourself up, going unnoticed by your group. > You look around you. > Werewolves, Zombies, Vampires, Ghouls, Orcs, Ogres, Harpies, Changelings, Shape-shifters, Skin-walkers. > It was all here. > And they all focused on your group. > None of them seemed to notice you. > And the robbed figure.... > "For years, years! They've hunted us for sport! No more my children, it is time for mother revenge! No more waiting! After we deal with these humans it will be time to awaken the converted and begin our storm for the towns Resource!" > Was too busy ranting too even notice you. > And what was a resource anyway? > Whatever. > You push forward. > Slipping past the girls you stand behind Garold. > Welp... Here goes nothing. > You step straight into him, the world fading away before coming back. > The first thing you noticed was that you were considerably shorter.
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>>25181469 This is getting intense
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> You look around, feeling your spine hunching up like never before. > Eugh, that was weird. > You noticed a bunch of other things.' > Cuts all over his body. > One leg is longer than the other. > The- > Ohhh... > Forget the monsters for a second, this guy had some juicy thoughts about Sunset. > No-one should be able to bend like that. > You clear his perverted thoughts out of your head, focusing on the situation at hand. > It was so easy to take him. > He might have been expecting you. > Or he was just plain stupid. > Either way you were in control now. > You look at the girls and back at the robbed figure. > That was... > Her name was Chrysalis. > She was apparently the Queen of Monsters. > But... > She wasn't the main reason why all of the weird things were happening. > But she was a part of it... A major part. > You mentally groan, finding no information on the main cause of the Canterlot events. > So useful this guy was. > But wait... > The robbed figure had something that could easily help you out. > All you had to do was get past... all of this. > "Where did Anonymous go!?" Chrysalis demanded. > She threw her hood back, revealing a pitch black woman with patchy green hair. > Emerald orbs scanned the area, looking among crowd of monsters. > "Oh well, he can do nothing to stop us now." > Oh... > Ohhhh... > This guy had great information. > Her whole plan rode on a single amulet in her possession. > "Kill him." > What was that? > You had zoned out. > One of the Werewolves lunged forward. > Oh shit! > You hop back, tripping over your own body. > Dammit Garold. > The Wolf snatched at the spot you had just been, tearing into the ground. > It threw away the dirt and turned to you, it's hungry eyes glaring at your own. > Sunset stepped in front of you, glaring back at the Wolf. > "Come and try it Fido." > Hah! > Welp. > Time to go back to being a douche. > You grab Sunsets leg and pull. > With a surprised yell she went down, slamming into the ground before you
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> "What the-" > You stagger to you feet and throw your weight into Luna, knocking her down easily. > Chrysalis quirked an eyebrow. > You've got to look the part to be the part. > Celestia's words echoed in your head. > Huh... for some reason you felt upset thinking about her right now. > Oh well. > You bow your head, refusing to meet her gaze. > You weren't worthy. > Chrysalis snarled in response. > Fuck, play the part. > You reel away, holding your hands up. > Why was it so hard to fake a sudden reaction? > Chrysalis's chuckle filled the room. > She touched down in front of you, sauntering past you. > "Yes... yes..., I guess you're not as stupid or useless as I thought Garold. Don't bother killing him..." > She glared at you. > "Yet... If you ever pull a stunt like this again Garold. I will make sure you starve to death." > "Step through the portal Garold. I'll be awaiting you shortly..." > You bow again and head towards the portal. > "Now girls... Back to our little game..." > Shit, you would have to figure something out now. > Or hopefully get rescued. > Celestia please. > Monster girls please! > Somebody needed to help! > Celestia stood over you, staring down at you silently. > You stared back, unmoving. > "Anon... answer me..." > You blink softly, every movement agony. > What the hell was that? > Celestia sighed and helped you up. > She propped you in the abstract chair on the left. > Sitting in the right one she leaned over and began to look you over. > "What happened?" she asked. > She frowned and leaned back, crossing her legs. > "You seem to be fine now..." > You slouch in your seat. > "It's going to have to wait." > "We've only got one more class period left Anon, I will send for them at the end of the class. We will meet up in the teachers lounge and discuss our next course of action there."
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> You tap your fingers on the round table. > Celestia stood at the counter lining the wall. > She poured herself a fresh cup of coffee before heading back over and sitting at the table. > She took a sip. > "Mhm." > She pulled out two sugar cubes from the glass holder on the table. > Stirring them in she took another sip. > You check your watch. > "Do you see the situation we're in right now?" > True... > Aside from an old, dusty TV, some tables, chairs, and some cute and funny posters around it was just you and Celestia in the teachers lounge. > It was kind of nice, a red rug decorating the floor while a over-head mural of a dragon and knight fighting loomed over the two of you. > Celestia caught you staring at the mural. > "Ah yes, one of my more... artistic students wanted to make a mural for us." > Interesting. > A flash of bright light briefly took the room. > You shield your eyes, catching Celestia not even flinching. > "Twilight." she muttered before taking another sip. > Twilight threw her book bag on one of the other tables. > Pulling up a seat she sat down at the table, looking between the two of you. > "What's going on?" > "I'll explain when the others get here." Celestia said between sips. > Twilight looked at you and you just nod your head silently. > She shrugged and grabbed her book bag. > Pulling out some textbooks and notepaper she set to work. > "I'm not a nerd, I'm just passing." > Twilight slammed the book shut. > Glaring at you she let the pencil drop. > "It helps me focus!" > "We already have a plan!" > Twilight gave a final glare before turning away.
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> "I'm scared..." > You perk up, turning to her slowly. > "What if we all fail..." she muttered. > You frown, turning back to Celestia. > Twilight gave you an uneasy look. > You look back at her and sigh. > She eagerly did so. > Not even five minutes in she was already muttering to herself and solving the problems her books provided. > You waited patiently. > It wasn't long before Rarity appeared, silently taking a seat. > Soon after Dash came in followed by AJ and Pinkie. > Fluttershy was the last to show up. > Your group took up the entire table, everybody shuffling to get comfortable. > You look around at the girls. > Nodding to Celestia she began to explain the situation. > With each word their faces fell further and further. > When Celestia finished they all looked completely devoid of any hope. > Until you tapped on the table, getting their attentions. > You look around the room. > You were in what could basically be described as the bathroom of all bathrooms. > A hexagon tiled floor was the first to grace your eyes, leading up you came to a pristine glass sink with a flawless silver faucet. > The bathtub was the same deal, glass with an incredibly clean faucet and shower-head. > Pink, fluffy rugs decorated the floors, followed by pictures of muscled men decorating the walls. > Gross... > You hoped Luna and Sunset were okay... > You sat at the side of the bathtub, finding Garold's body really awkward to work with. > What was about to happen?
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>>25093931 >Looking at your bed, you see that all of them thought it a good idea to sleep with you >Considering the size of your bed, you were suprised 8 people fit >They all began to stir awake from your outburst >R:"Anon, what time is it? A woman usually needs extra beauty sleep after such an *eventful* night." >You look to the clock "It's 7:30."
>AJ:"Ain't it a bit early on a Saturday to be waking all o' us up?" "Eh, I uh, just wanted an early start on the day. Ya know, all those post Halloween things I gotta do like the down my decorations and such."
>PP:"But nonny, you don't have any decorations outside!" >You give some nervous laughter >You need more time. >Dick and balls are still tired >Dick:"No more... please. Just let me sleep." >Balls:"You're chances of getting any of them pregnant right now is zero. Factories are shut down due to overdrive that was last night." >Yep, no condition "Do you girls have any clothes to put on?"
>R:"You act as if I never bring 9 pairs of clothes along with me to change whenever I need to darling. Of course we have clothes." >She carries around 9 pairs of clothes >Everywhere she goes "Okay... so why don't you all get changed?"
>AJ:"Well, I think I might be able to go another round. Clothes would just get in the way sugarcube~" >TS:"Oh come on Applejack, you can't be ready to go again after last night. Can you?" >AJ:"I'm fit as a fiddle and horny. I want another round." >SS:"Count me in on that! He passed out after our session!" >FS:"He also promised me another time. I'd like to hold him to that promise." >Twilight gives an incredulous look at the 3 of her friends >You give a grimace "Girls, I'm one guy. I'm tired. And I'm pretty sure my ability to get hard will be gone for the next like, 3 days. Can we just go eat breakfast or something?"
>AJ:"Oh fine Anon, but I'm cooking ya breakfast. Then we can continue after." >She winks at you TheAutistocrat
>>25182165 > You get up and hobble over to the mirror. > Pulling yourself up, you hop onto a stool. > Man, Garold was a fugly dude. > His face was uneven, drooping on one side. > His ears were crescent shaped, two noticeable indents shaping them in. > One of his eyes were lower than the other, explaining why your sight felt funny. > Scars of abuse were apparent all over his face. > On top of this he had a single tuft of brown hair. > If he hadn't helped you earlier, you would've assumed he was a monster as well. > Suddenly the bathtubs faucet turned on, steaming water already filling the tub. > A pink bottle of soap was suddenly knocked over by an unseen force, uncapping and filling up the tub. > What? > The door creaked open. > Chrysalis stepped through the door, letting out a yawn. > "Torturing those two sure is hard work. A queen must be clean before she purges the world of scum." > She removed her robe, letting it drop around her. > Sweet Mammals! > She had nothing on underneath. > Her curvy body was in full view, every inch of her black, but somehow smooth skin in view. > She stepped into the tub, letting out a sigh. > Some part of you... Garold was repulsed by the sight. > But the rest of you was insanely attracted to the sight. > You really shouldn't be though... > You should be thinking of different ways to kill this woman. > "Aren't you going to wash your queen Garold?" > Okay, skip the killing part. Luna and Sunset would be fine. > You shake the thought from your head. > What's wrong with you? > With a sigh she sunk into the bathtub. > You could see the sides of her shapely hips pressing against the glass. > Unf~ > "Garold!" Chrysalis demanded. > You comply, hopping off of the stool and scrambling over. > She placed a green amulet on the bathtubs side. > You would have to get it somehow. > But until then... > You pick up a sponge and dip it in. > Chrysalis watched you silently. > It would have to wait. TheAutistocrat
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Going to take a break for tonight. I'll be on tomorrow around 9:00 PM- 10:00 PM.
>>25182279 While you're on Insanebow, we're getting close to that cap man, we're about 100 posts away.
Pastebins updated here:
http://pastebin.com/skFa2NSN On a side note. I'm about halfway through with this story. Or almost done to be honest, I have two ways this story can play out and two ways it can end.
I may be done after the next thread is made, in which case I will be working on Ubermensch Anon again.
Okay, shutting up and letting Insane get it tonight.
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>>25182279 >Sunset looks disappointed that she couldn't ride the Anon train before breakfast >They all start to get out of bed >AJ:"Ow! Dammit Anon, my butt is sore cuz of you!" "Hey, you're the one who asked for it."
>You smile >She smiled back before heading out the doorway >The girls begin to file out of your room >Fluttershy is the only one still on the bed >Her hair was covering her face but you could make out a smile >Finally after they all left she went towards the door >And slammed it shut >And locked it >She looks up at you >There's a look of pure bliss on her face >Were her pupils... hearts? "Hey, Fluttershy shouldn't you go down and cook with them?"
>FS:"A pet doesn't leave her masters side. She belongs to her master." >She moves to her own bag and gets out a leash and collar >She puts on the collar and attaches the leash "Uh, What're you doing Fluttershy? And what do you mean by pet?"
>FS:"I'm your pet, master!" >She has her tongue out of her mouth >She has a big smile on her face "W-what do you mean Fluttershy? I never said you were a pet."
>FS:"Oh last night you claimed me. When we became one together. I want to be with you forever master." >This shouldn't please the dong >But it does >Dick:"Maybe sleep can wait..." >Balls:"We have produced enough soldiers to raid one more enemy base." "N-Now that's not necessary Fluttershy. You don't need a collar and leash. If you want to be my girlfriend, you could have just asked."
>FS:"Girlfriend? Oh no master. I don't want to be your girlfriend. I want to be owned by you." >She places the leash in your hand >FS:"Anything you want for me to do will be done without question. You're my master now." >You can't help but be baffled >Sure, you were expecting a relationship out of tonight with one of these girls >But this >This was on a whole new level >And you couldn't help yourself from liking it. Anonymous
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>>25182563 Petplay is a recently acquired fetish of mine
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>>25182563 >"we have produced enough soldiers to raid one more enemy base." Gonna steal her nukes and shit
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>>25186470 Man, you are pimping the hell out of that thread. This is the third or fourth different thread I've seen you include a link to the SS sexual thread.
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Bumping for some spoopy scary stories.
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Autistocrat here, not updating the story tonight. Namely because I'm trapped at work but I've also got to think of a way to move the plot forward, without straying too far into edge the story.
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>>25192861 bumping for Twiligh/tg/ame
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>>25193712 What time zone are you in?
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>>25172143 Where is muh green!
twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25172143 >The shaking stops as soon as she has something other than her own suffering to focus on. >Her gaze locked on your wrist, Fluttershy slowly bares her fangs. “Drink.”
>You can see the hesitation in her eyes. “It’ll help you heal, right?”
>"... it would kill you,” she whispers back, her voice thin and weak. "I already took too much..." “If you don’t, then you’ll die! You're a vampire! You can fight back!”
>"... I can't..." "She's not your friend, Fluttershy. You have to -"
>"No, I *can't*," she cries, bloody froth gathering in the corners of her mouth. "I tried, but I can't!" >She coughs violently, speckling your arm with dark spots. "You're a vampire!"
>"... a *newborn* who starved herself..." she moans, glancing over to your see your face. "... take it away..." "She'll kill you."
>”... and then... and then... there will be one less monster in the world...” >Her eyelids snap shut and she turns her head away from you. "You're not -"
>"I love you, Anon," Fluttershy sobs. "I don't want to kill you; I never wanted to kill anybody, but I have." "I... I love you, too."
>Do you? >You're not sure, but it's what you needed to say. >If you hadn't, you couldn't live with yourself. >You can only hope that it's what she needed to hear. "Fluttershy -"
>"... take your arm away," she groans, shivering slightly. "I can hear your heart beating... feel the blood pulsing through your body... I'm so hungry, Anon... take it away, before... twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25195724 "No."
>"... let me die with some dignity. Please..." >The way she begs tears at your heart. >"... please..." “But –“
>”… *please*…” >A new stream of tears makes its way down her face, gleaming bright in the darkness. >"... don't make me..." "I’m okay with it."
>"... because I will..." >You crawl forward, shoving your wrist in front of her face again. “Do it. You can just turn me, right? Make me one of you?”
>”... I hurt so much…“ “DO IT!”
>”… I’m so hungry…” >Fluttershy’s mouth opens wide, the long needles of her fangs coming dangerously close to your arm. She continues to cry, even as she starts to bite down. Your skin dimples as the tips press against your flesh. >"She just will not stop, will she, Anon!?” Rarity screeches, looming over you suddenly. “She would kill you to keep you from me!” >You jerk back in surprise, Fluttershy’s fangs leaving two thin scratches along your wrist. >”... I don’t *want* to…” “DO IT!”
>You shove your arm forward with the last of your strength. >Maybe – >”GET AWAY FROM HER!” Rarity’s foot slams into your shoulder, sending you tumbling. “If you want to die so much –“ >”NO, DON’T HURT HIM!” >As you fall, you catch a glimpse of Fluttershy lunging on torn legs, grabbing for the other girl. Anonymous
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Not today autosage!
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>>25196174 >She’s trying to protect you; trying to tear the hatchet from Rarity’s hand. >Trying so hard, you almost cry when her legs collapse under her. >Rarity simply – elegantly – steps aside, not even trying to fight back. She just lets the other girl fall, steps over her to reach you, and holds out a glass of water. >”Here, daring. I did not forget this time.” >When you don’t take it, she kneels down beside you and puts a hand around your back to hold you upright. >”Oh, right,” she says, holding the glass to your lips. “My apologies, Anon. I did not realize you were too weak.” >But you are. >You want to take it the glass. You want to slam it against her head. You want more than anything to get your hands on that hatchet. >You slowly sip from the glass as she tilts it for you. >There’s nothing else you can do. >”She tried to touch you again, didn’t she?” >You can’t answer; you can only swallow the water. She’s pouring too fast for anything else. >”Anon,” Rarity sighs, looking at you with pleading eyes, “you don’t have to cover for her.” >She sets down the empty glass beside you and gently lowers you to the floor. “I’m –“
>There’s no point; Rarity has already turned away. >She gently rolls Fluttershy onto her back. >”Are you okay?” >The other girl can only cry. >”Let me help you, Fluttershy,” Rarity sighs. “Please? Isn’t that what tonight is all about?” twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25197113 >She feels around on the floor for a second, ignoring her friend’s moaning. It doesn’t take her long to find what she is looking for. >”I really did try to follow Twilight’s plan. You know that, right?” >With a heavy-hearted sigh, Rarity places the stake squarely between Fluttershy’s breasts. >”…Rarity, please…“ >”Is it really so impossible for you to admit it?” >She shakes her head slightly, her purple curls bouncing from the gesture. >”… don’t hurt him…” >”I do not want to hurt *anyone*, dear, and I have absolutely *no* intention of doing so.” >And yet, she raises the hatchet. >”… he doesn’t –” >Rarity brings the butt of the hatchet’s head down on the stake, driving it into Fluttershy’s flesh. >The vampiress screams – how can she not? >The sound is deafening. “They’ll come, Rarity! You have to stop this!”
>”Who?” >She looks up from her friend, and looks at you curiously. “The others! They’ll have heard that and –“
>”I do not think so,” Rarity giggles at some private joke, though she does grab a dirty sock off the floor and roughly shove it in Fluttershy’s mouth. >She gives a little groan as Fluttershy’s makes a feeble grab for the stake. >”Why do you *always* have to fight me,” Rarity sighs, hacking at her friend’s remaining hand again and again. Unable to cut through the bones, it still does a wonderful job of shattering them, as well as severing the muscles and tendons that move them. “I am sorry, Fluttershy, but this really is for the best.” twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25197142 >She brings the weight of the hatchet down on the stake again. >It doesn’t budge. >”How curious,” the girl grunts, looking at the hatchet as if it is suddenly defective. “I thought these kinds of things were meant to be used to drive stakes for tents and the like.” >She sighs and reaches up to gently brush a hand across Fluttershy’s cheek. >”This may take longer than I had hoped. I am so very sorry.” >She raises the hatchet for another blow. “WAIT!”
>”Just one moment, darling.” “It’s the stake! I used a soft wood, so there’s no way it’ll get through bone. You might as well give up.”
>”Oh.” >She looks at the stake, at the thick blood welling up around the tip, and laughs at herself. >”How thoughtful of you to tell me.” >She smiles and pulls the stake free. “So –“
>THUD. “Stop!”
>”Soon.” >She brings the hatched down again. >THUD. >”Do stop thrashing about, Fluttershy. It is just so *undignified*.” >And again. >THUD. >”This will just take *forever*,” the girl sighs before dragging the dull blade across the long gash in Fluttershy’s chest. “Maybe I should fetch Applejack, as I truly haven’t the faintest how to skin something.” >She half-rises before shaking her head. >”No, no, that would be ludicrous. Darling thing needs her sleep; I shan’t disturb her now.” “Please! Stop! You’re just hurting her!”
>”Silly Anon, I would *never* hurt my friends.” “So Fluttershy isn’t your friend?”
>”Of course she is.” “Bullshit!”
>”Language, Anon.” Anonymous
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>>25197155 This bitch needs to die
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>>25197155 It honestly feels like Future Diaries now,
gg Twiligh/tg/ame, you deminded me of one of my favorite chinese cartoons
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>>25197155 “Just stop! How is *this* going to help!?”
>It’s pure sadism. >” If the stake cannot get through the ribcage, then I shall simply have to remove it.” >You can’t watch. Fluttershy begged you to let her die with some dignity; averting your eyes is the least you can do. >It’s also the most you can do. >Even if you can’t help her, you at least wish you could block out those horrible tearing noises and muffled screams. >The rhythmic thumping of the hatchet being put back to work is almost a welcome relief, because it means an end to the tearing. >The screams never stop, however. >They’ll never stop, you suspect, even after Fluttershy is dead. You’ll be hearing them for the rest of your life – and after. >There’s a horrible cracking sound as the first of her ribs shatters under the relentless assault, followed by a little squeal of happiness from Rarity. >”And that is *one* down!” >She’s not even trying to cut through them, merely smashing the axe into Fluttershy’s ribs over and over until they snap. >Quietly, you give thanks to whatever gods are listening when silence eventually falls. >You dare to raise your eyes. >Whoever or whatever gods they are, they are cruel pranksters, because it’s not over. >Rarity has dropped the hatchet – she doesn’t need it anymore. Not to break through the ribcage, nor to drive the stake. Fluttershy’s ribs… her… >Splintered bones and torn cartilage have been cast aside. >The hollow of her torso is open, her organs exposed, and her friend now grips the stake you had made with both hands. >She holds it over Fluttershy’s still and silent heart. >If it weren’t for the fresh tears running from her eyes, you would think her already dead. >You wish she was. >”Sorry, but I can’t give him up. Some things are too precious to share.” Anonymous
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>>25197811 I swear to God if you stop here twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25197811 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RuYC6U3LBRs >The stake comes down, piercing the vampiress’ heart. >Fluttershy doesn’t explode into a cloud of dust or burst of flame; there’s no screaming or howling, only a welcoming look in her eyes as they meet yours for a brief second before losing focus and growing dim. >Rarity doesn’t move, still kneeling at her friend’s side, still holding onto the stake as time stretches on. “Why…?”
>You don’t expect an answer, but it has to be asked. >”Because you are mine,” she responds slowly. “Even if I never made it public or… or approached you, you are mine, and I am yours.” “You killed one of your best friends because you were *jealous*?”
>”A lady is never jealous, Anon.” >With effort, she pulls her hands from the stake. >”Why would I be jealous? You are mine. I have been waiting *years* for you to realize it, but… but…” “Then you should have said something! Maybe asked me out on a date!”
>”I couldn’t,” Rarity answers, turning to face you. “A lady is never so direct.” >She has tears of her own flowing unchecked. >”I wish I could have; I wish I *had*.” >She reaches down and grabs your hands in hers. >”I wouldn’t have had the strength to do this if it hadn’t been for you,” she openly sobs. “If you hadn’t made the tools available –“ >You made the stake. >You left the hatchet out. >” – if you hadn’t told me what to do –“ >You told her Fluttershy was a vampire. >You told her how to drive the stake in. >” – you wouldn’t have had to if only I had the courage to confess my love for you earlier.” >None of that is true, not really, but… twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25198207 >“She almost killed you, because I was too weak to do what needed to be done!” Rarity cries, tears dripping freely. “I was only able to save you from her because you helped!” >Is that how she sees it? >“Now, if you will excuse me,” she mumbles, trembling slightly, “I feel a desperate need to freshen up.” >She lets go of you and stands, wiping her face with the old t-shirt of yours she’s wearing. >”Anon?” Rarity calls back, hesitating in the doorway. “What?”
>”I saved you,” she says, with a slight smile. “You should thank me.” “What…?”
>”It’s what you do when someone saves your life.” “I… I…”
>She did. >You would be dead now if she hadn’t stormed in. “Thank you, Rarity.”
>You look down at your hands. >She’s right. >Fluttershy’s blood is as much on your hands as it is on hers. >A part of you knows how false that is, but you can’t help but feel it is all your fault. >It’s hard not to, with her blood literally on your hands. And that's it. Epilogue later. Anonymous
>>25198248 Well done, friendo.
But here's the real question: who has the bigger tits, Rarara or Flutters? This will decide if what occured was a tragedy, or just natural selection working itself out.
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>>25198877 Busty yandere Rarity? Yes please. Anonymous
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>>25197811 Well, that escalated quickly
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>>25198248 MAN FUCK RARA CUNT PURPLE DRANK HAIR HAVIN BITCH KILLED MA WAIFU!!!!
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>>25182404 > You silently lift the sponge up. > She slid one of her legs out of the bath water, holding it up for you. > Your eyes narrowed in on the objective. > Zeroing in... > Briefly flashing arrows appeared in your vision, pointing to her legs. > You shake your growing insanity and the prepubescent 13 year old thoughts out of your head. > Need to focus... > Though this was a little weird. > Was this something that regularly happened to Garold? > You were guessing not, he didn't have any prior memories of this happening before. > And the uneasiness. > You could feel his weariness at the back of your mind. > But fuck that noise, cause' this was possibly your one and only chance of ever being this close to a girl. > Albeit a monster that tortured your friends and is currently plotting on taking over Canterlot. > But that didn't matter. > Something about her was so enticing. > Her emerald green eyes were two pools of shining gems, awaiting to be captured by a worthy suitor. > Ew... > She was turning you into a poet. > "Tell me..." > You silently continue to wash her leg. > She lowered it back into the tub, bringing the other up. > You eagerly move over, admiring her shining skin. > "Do you think me a fool Anon?" > What? > Oh shit. > You stop and turn to her silently. > Chrysalis smiled with amusement. > "Continue." she simply said. > A click came from the bathroom door, hanging heavily in the silent air. > "You know I can still see you hitchhiking in his body correct?" > You gulp, stopping again. > "Continue." She said, a heavier tone of malice behind her voice. > You comply, not wanting to piss her off. > Chrysalis leaned back, staring at the ceiling. > "Still, you're one of the more interesting of the Hunters. I have some lovely dirt on you." > You stay silent, twisting the sponge. > The amulet wasn't too far... > But Garold had these damn short arms and a hunchback too boot. > It was doing it discretely in this wrecked body that was the problem. TheAutistocrat
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> "Dead parents, Hunting since you were a kid, the choices you've made." > She chuckled. > You cringe internally, focusing on washing her body. > "Go on ask... I know you want to." > You clear your throat. > She smiled lazily. > "Because I need a play toy for the time being. Luna and her little ride along friend have gotten kind of boring." > You freeze. > Chrysalis laughed at your reaction. > "Don't worry your 'friends' are still safe, if you could even call them that." > You cough awkwardly. > She lowered the other leg, leaning forward. > Her cleavage was nearly right in your face, Garolds stature leaning you forward so you were just inches from them. > Nice... > No, not nice. > Not nice at all. > You needed to focus. > You shake your head, trying to clear the thoughts out. > It was like every time you looked at her, a haze would fall over you. > But you couldn't let that happen. > Not yet anyway. > Chrysalis shook her head with a smack of her lips. > "You must have more questions." > She raised her am. > "Wash." she demanded. > You stare at her blankly. > What were your options here? > Plus, in order to reach you would have to move closer. > To her and the amulet. > Which you were 99% sure would actually do anything in your hands. > Well, technically Garold was but still.' > You hobble over to her. > Silently you begin to run the sponge down the crevice of her pit. > The smell of lavender soap filled your nostrils. > Chrysalis silently shuddered, letting out a low moan. > Garold seemed to find that absolutely disgusting. > avi. > Welp, you would have to keep her talking. > And now would be a good opportunity to educate yourself on what exactly she had planned.
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> She gave a lopsided smile at your comment. > "I don't even know where to begin. I guess you could call me the mother of all things pure." > You quirk an eyebrow. > She nodded silently. > "My children and I are the purest forms in this dying world." > Your expression hardened. > "Oh don't look at me like that. You're acting just like the others." > Others? > As if reading your thoughts Chrysalis waved her hand. > The hexagon tiles folded away next to you, revealing what was essentially a bottomless pit. > You peer over the side of it. > Millions of scenarios played out in front of you. > But they all ended the same. > People failing. > Deaths, namely failed hunts. > You could see a beefy Hunter blasting some shots out of an overrun bus. > Off in the corner of the pit was a soldier, backing away from his fallen comrades. > "Oh you act like this kind of stuff doesn't happen everyday." > With a wave of her hand the tiles folded back up, covering the pit. > "Your kind does exactly that and more, but to each other! All of the time. Famine, war, illness. None of that takes place in the pure world of my children." > She glared at you. > "Wash." She said through clenched teeth. > You comply, scrubbing a little harder this time. > "Hmm, well you're not going to make it far anyway. So I guess I might as well humor you." > Uhg. > "Do you know what a Resource is Anonymous?" > "Hm, not as clever as I thought." > Mental middle finger. > "A Resource is simply the magical essence of areas. Basically every major artifact, attraction, or novelty has a Resource. I'll keep the explanation simple." > "Laughing even when you're going to fall, one of my daughters follows that sentiment." > Wait a minute... > Was she talking about- > "A Resource come from your kind."
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> "Despite your apparent shortcomings as a race and impurity each of your kind holds a certain magic about you, what you guys call a soul we call an essence." > For some reason you suddenly felt a little weirder. > "My children and I can't get our own essences. But you and other humans basically throw it wherever you please. Happiness is a little more than you think." > Oh... > "Different emotions breed different forms of a Resource. For example, this town is crawling with negative Resource." > Slowly catching on... > "My children and I have been working double-time to increase the negativity and grieving in this town, thus increasing the power of the negative Resource." > You could see where this is going. > "Be patient." She snapped. > Adjusting her composure she gave you a cocky smile. > "I'm afraid your time is up though." > The door clicked again, the sound meaning a little bit more than it should. > You begin to turn around slowly. > The bathroom door began to creak open, a fleshy hand gripping the side of the door. > "It looks like the Converted is finally awake. You have the honor of being its first meal." > You whirl back to her. > "It doesn't eat flesh you rambling buffon." > A brief flash on intense mania came from behind her eyes. > "It eats souls." She said gleefully. > Ah... > Out of the corner of your eye the fleshy hand grew into a flesh arm, nearly so big it couldn't fight through the doorway. > Chrysalis waved at you. > "I think I can take it from here~" > Welp. > Time to do what you do best.
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> You throw yourself down at the tub. > Bowing down you shiver and sob. > "Come in my child!" Chrysalis called. > Chrysalis quirked an eyebrow. > "What?" > "What are you-" > "Stop!" > Tears streamed down your face as you pathetically grip the side of the tub, pulling yourself up. > "Anonymous, stop this instant!" > You blow your nose into her hair, earning a disgusted shout from her. > She pushed you away from her, her surprising strength sending you to the ground. > Got it. > You hold up the amulet proudly. > A flash of green took your vision. > Think. > Luna and Sunset. > That's who you needed. > Luna... > You think back to when she first called you. > Sunset. > The memory of a dispersing poltergeist ran through your mind. > And just like that. > You were standing in front of them... > Wow, it actually worked. > Nice. > Luna peered at you through a black eye. > "You." she growled. > Luna let her head fall. > "Behind you idiot." she muttered. > Instinctively you duck. > The club swung by overhead, crashing into a spear rack. > The creature wielding the club grunted in frustration. > You pop back up and gran Luna's chest and Sunsets neck. > Heh... > And once more, a flash of green took your vision.
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>>25198248 Fuckin grand story m8, any chance of an alternate ending? Not complaining here, just curious to see what the other side of the coin could have been.
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> Omph. > A grassy, dry ground slammed into your back. > Sunset slammed down next to you, letting out a pained groan. > Luna silently flopped on top of you. > You push her off and hop up. > The three of you were in a forest. > You peer up at the sky, which was a warm orange. > Almost nightfall. > Lunas groan caught your attention. > You whirl around as fast as Garold possibly could and moved forward to help her. > Suddenly you jerked forward, clutching at your chest. > 'Out!' a voice commanded. > What the? > 'Out Anonymous, that's enough.' > You frown. > 'Yes you do, just leave!' > You release your grip on Garold, stumbling out of his body. > Falling forward you put your hands out instinctively. > Only to feel no impact. > Oh yeah, kind of a ghost now. > Thank god you weren't an echoer. > Yet... if you stayed like this you would be shortly. > You stand up, turning to Garold who was shaking his head clear. > Well what did this Einstein have planned now? > Garold held out the amulet. > He muttered something under his breath. > What was he doing? > Why was it pointed at you. > Ah fuck, he was going to steal your soul. > You turn to skedaddle the hell out of there but a green beam rushed from the amulet. > It connected with your back, causing you to throw your arms out in shock. > Suddenly the amulet flew from Garolds grasp, smacking into your back. > You rocketed forward, smacking into the ground. > With a grunt your head slammed into a nearby log. > Fuck that hurt... > Oh... > It hurt... > You pick yourself up, peering down at your hands. > They were no longer see-through. > You turn to Garold who nodded silently. > "We need to find help." he simply said, picking up Sunset. > You smile brightly. > You stroll over and pick up Luna. > She groaned in pain. > You peer out among the forest line. > Just beyond the line you could see your RV.
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> You sigh and lean back in your chair. > You balanced a pencil with one finger, flicking it across the room after a while. > Pinkie had her fingers pointed like a football field goal. > The pencil flew in between her fingers earning a chuckle from her. > Rarity and Fluttershy sat off at one of the other tables, playing chinese checkers. > AJ was on her phone, talking to either Applebloom or Big Mac, you couldn't tell. > Celestia sat next to Twilight, who was sitting in some large circle with strange markings, the tables were pushed away from her for more room. > Which was made out of tape courtesy of the rug... > Hey it worked if Twilights hovering was any indication. > Dash watched as you picked up another pencil. > "What is the point of this game?" > "It's finger football Dashie~!" Pinkie chimed. > "Pfft, play a real game, like soccer or football." > "I think that's because you're not really the football type." Dash muttered. > "Waddya' think?" > "Quiet." Celestia said. > "She needs to focus." > "Anonymous, for the sake of all that's actually tolerable please don't finish that." Rarity said. > She moved some pieces on her side of the board, earning a frown from Fluttershy. > "Have you ever played this game before darling?" > "No..." Fluttershy squeaked. > Celestia groaned. > "What is she even doing anyway?" Dash pushed away from your table. > "She's trying to get a lock on either Luna, Sunset, or his soul. She needs to concentrate though!" Celestia held up a finger. > You flick another pencil in between Pinkies fingers. > Aw, you missed your target again. > You glance at her chest and line the next shot mentally. > Maybe someday... > "Still, we need as much-" > "Aw Anon, now I've gotta fish it out." Pinkie pouted.
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> Pinkie worked on fishing the pencil out of her bra while you smiled serenely. > Dig a little deeper girl, just a little bit... > Rarity rolled her eyes and bought one of the game marbles up. > She flicked it across the room, the blue blur connecting with your fore-head. > Your head snapped back with a pained gurgle before you even knew what was going on. > "If you would kindly avoid taking advantage of a girls innocence." > Rarity folded her arms and leaned back. > "Besides, she's too good a girl for you." > Ouch. > You would say something smarmy or snappy back if you could. > But all you could do was sit there blankly. > She was stronger than she looked to be honest. > Should've been expected. > Suddenly Twilight let out a sigh. > Everybody turned to her as she dropped down to the ground, stepping out of the circle. > "All I'm getting in terms of progression, is that they're here." > "What?" Celestia turned Twilight around. > "Try again because they're obviously not." > Twilight sighed and pushed Celestia's hands away gently. > "Look, it's my friend too. I wouldn't quit unless I was absolutely sure, only thing I can tell you is that they're here, now." > "Impossible!" Celestia shouted. > AJ muttered something into the phone and pressed the screen once. > Pocketing it she stepped fully back into the room. > "Principal please, calm down." > "Only when I find my sister!" > You get up from you chair. > With an annoyed sigh you head over to the window. > A straight view into the schools courtyard. > You lean over and watch it silently. > By now the cars were gone, save for one Thunderbird in the parking lot. > A nerdy looking male teacher in formal dress was already headed for it. > Twilight and the girls got into an arguement with Celestia. > You sigh and rub your temples, their bickering droning into background noise. > Suddenly a shade fell over you. > You bring your hand away, staring out at the parking lot. > It was... > Night time?
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> With a loud bang a flash of green burst right next to the teacher. > A small green creature on all fours stood on top of his car. > It leapt forward, digging into his neck and taking him down. > All over the parking lot green bursts of light began to take the area. > A Werewolf sprinted out of one. > A Harpy flew out of the other. > A Wendigo leading two lumbering trees stepped out of another. > What was going on? > Just beyond the darkness you could see hooded figures, holding their hands to the sky with a swirl of green energy. > They continued to argue, ignorant to the sudden change. > Another flash of light and a horde of ghouls stumbled forward. > Everybody in the room stopped what they were doing, looking over at you. > AJ was the first to respond, peering out of the window. > She went pale instantly. > The others soon followed. > "What is the meaning of this?" Celestia muttered from behind the shades. > "Oh, this sucks..." Dash muttered. > You step away from the window. > Okay... > This wasn't good... > A banging emitted from the closed door. > Everybody flinched, peering over at it. > It banged again, the door bending inwards. > It was a thin, wooden door. It wouldn't hold. > You step forward to barricade it but it banged again. > Another bang and it splintered in various spots this time. > You rush forward to stop it. > But you were too late. > With one last bang the door flew inwards.
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That's it for now, will update either tonight around 11:30 PM or tomorrow around 12:30 AM.
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>>25203937 FUUUUUU-okay see ya soon.
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>>25203937 damn it, Autistocrat, you really know how to make an exit.
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>>25198207 Was anon usings a roofing hammer or a hatchet? Because I've never had a hatchet that couldnt cut through bone
twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25198877 Flutters, but they've got a bit of sag. Nowhere near as perky and firm as Rarara's.
Cut scene had Rara reaching into Flutters cleavage to retrieve lipstick and Anon asking just how much was stored in there. "Nothing else, I'm afraid. There is not much room, thanks to her wearing a minimizing bra." Cue Flutters squirming and whining in embarrassment. >>25203338 We got Good/Sad
Rarity walking away and Good/Bloody
Yanderara here. The Bad endings would be major rewrites.
Girls all know what Fluttershy is, and are basically offering Anon up as a meal was the primary one I had in mind. If you meant Rarity dying, that also falls under a Bad end.
Anon kills Rarity to protect Fluttershy, Fluttershy loses it because "killing is never justified". Attacks Anon because she's already a monster and a killer, so it's not like her soul can get any blacker. Possibly Anon kills her in self defense, possibly it goes another way. Alternatively, Fluttershy's attempt to protect Anon in this ending succeeds, but she accidentally kills Rarity (she falls on the hatchet, or Fluttershy can't control her hunger and drains her). She can't deal with being the cause of another death and begs Anon to help her die. They go out into the backyard and watch the sunrise together. Without her special sunblock. >>25205084 It's tiny, dull as hell, and being used by Rarity, who is crazy, but still not exactly strong or accurate, nor does she know how to use an axe properly (alternating angles). AJ wouldn't have had any trouble chopping through an arm or leg with it, though.
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>>25205274 >why Rarity couldn't cut bone Actually, that was bothering me as I wrote. I probably should have included something to explain it in the story, instead of just keeping that reason in my head. Would this work:
>AJ gets scraped by the hatchet. >Fuckin' pissed. >Slams it into the coffee table. >Rarity chastises her, tries to pull it out. >Can't. >Anon pulls it free with only a little difficulty. Won't exactly show what the hatchet is capable of, but it would show that Rarity is a weakling.
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>>25198248 The only conclusion I can draw from raras logic is that I should kill her and then commit suicide. It's the only just solution
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>>25205762 Sounds reasonable.
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AutistAhoy
Autistocrat here, not updating tonight but I will tomorrow. On a side note.
>>25198248 When are you posting again? I'm anxious to see how this is handled when it sets in man.
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>>25209616 Midday tomorrow, I think. Or later. Still working out the last bits.
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I want to see a green where someone (preferably Sunset) pretends to be a vampire for attention. Only, Anon doesn't buy in on it. The reason I want it to be Sunset is for her to say:>"Okay, fine! You caught me! I'm not actually a vampire. Just a unicorn that took on a human form."
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>>25211086 >School is out for the day and you're merrily skipping towards the exit when Sunset Shimmer grabs your shoulder. >"Whoa there, 'Non!" "NOPE, GOT PLACES TO BE!"
>You don't, except NOT HERE. >School is over; you'll be damned if you stay on campus a second longer than required by truancy laws or whatever the hell they use as a legal basis to keep your ass in the seat. >Sunset rolls her eyes, but matches your pace. >"Got a date or something?" she teases. "I mean, you don't, right? Because that would be kinda beyond what I can comprehend." "Nah, just porn."
>Not a bad idea, actually. It's been a few days. >"Okay, TMI, Anon," Sunset sighs. "I know I'm like, your only friend here, tranny, but -" "Don't call me that."
>"Why not? You're a transfer student, right?" >You take a swing at her, which she easily ducks, just like she has all those times before. "You know that's not what -"
>"Yeah, I know," Sunny laughs, jogging up ahead and holding the door open for you. "Ladies first!" "Anywhere else, and this would be considered bullying. You know that, right?"
>"Nope, it wouldn't! Because I'm your friend, remember? I'm allowed to tease you!" >She smiles as you jog past her. >Well, yeah, maybe she is allowed, but it's a two-way street. "Know what, Sunny? I think I'll go with some hentai today."
>You skip down the steps, followed closely by your friend. >"Ewww! Stop!" "Maybe something involving vampires or werewolves or something. I've always wanted to stick my dick in a mythological creature."
>"I'm a vampire!" "What."
>You spin around to see what kind of prank she's pulling now and nearly fall. >Momentum is a bitch. >"I said, I'm a vampire," Sunset repeats, looking away suddenly. "I mean, not that I'd even let you get close to me or anything, but, you know, just a for-your-information kind of thing, so -" "Bullshit. You're standing in the sun right now."
>She takes two steps back, until the shadow of the building hides her from the light. >"Um, sunscreen?" Anonymous
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>>25212020 "Not buying it. Now hurry up, if you're not going to let me go, then come over to my place. You said you'd help me go over those math problems -"
>"Wait, just let me..." >Sunset turns away, grunting wordlessly as she struggles to pull something out of her backpack - without taking it off. >"There!" >She spins around, a flashy pair of sunglasses covering her eyes, a collapsible umbrella in her hand. >"You're right, 'Non," Sunny smirks, pressing the stud on the umbrella... once... twice... okay, third time's a charm... no, it's just a piece of junk. >BAMPFH! >Okay, fourth time was the charm. "I know I'm right. You promised to help me, so don't try to get out of it now. Or, you know, just let me go home in peace."
>"No, I mean, you're right, I'm not wearing any sunscreen, that's why -" "And you're not a vampire."
>She pouts, but doesn't argue. >You don't have time for this. >Only three steps later, you can hear the clop of her heavy boots chasing after you. >"FINE!" she snarls, stepping up beside you. Still wearing the damned sunglasses and holding the umbrella to shield her from the sun. "But you BETTER clean up your room. If I see just ONE of your dirty magazines -" "Don't have any."
>"Why pretend, 'Non?" she asks. "You're the biggest perv I know." "And why would you think that?"
>Not that she isn't right... >"One, because you're a guy -" >Point. >" - and two, because you're you." >Match. "Meh."
>You shrug. "Still the truth, though."
>"I can't -" "Get everything off the internet."
>"Okay, nevermind," Sunny sighs, probably regretting bringing it up. Or being born. One of those. "I can believe that." "So are you going to give up pretending you're a vampire?"
>"I'm not pretending!" >You stop walking - she takes two-and-a-half more steps before realizing you're no longer beside her. "Well, I guess I can't let you into my house, then."
>"And why not!?" she demands, turning slightly and glaring angrily. "Because you're a VAMPIRE."
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>>25212263 >Sunny sighs loudly and pulls off her glasses - just so you can see her rolling her eyes, you suspect. >"Okay, fine! You caught me! I'm not actually a vampire. Just a unicorn that took on a human form." >You continue to stare. >After a few seconds of fidgeting, she collapses the umbrella and stuffs it into her backpack. >"Let's just get this -" "That's cool."
>She glances up, giving you a are-you-seriously-this-retarded? look. >"What now, 'Non," she sighs. "Oh, nothing. Just... "
>"What?" >You shrug again. "Well, I didn't have my heart set on vampires. A pony is fine, too."
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>>25212357 >"Well, I didn't have my heart set on vampires. A pony is fine, too." kek
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>>25212357 my sides ⊂ objects in orbit
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Alright, so I have some green in mind but have never written any green before. I've written in proper prose before but just not green. Of course I've read some and practically know how they are structured. But due to this being my first time; I'm welcome to any tips and suggestions any anons can give. I'd highly appreciate it.
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>>25213524 it would probably be best to just go ahead and post what you got and ask for ways to improve after people can see your writing
might wait till the afternoon to do it though because right now its kinda dead
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>>25213825 >pic irrelevant I don't prefer posting until the piece/scene is entirely written. It hurts when you get into a story/scene and mid-way through the writefag is kill. I have a bigger story in mind but what I'm thinking of writing right now is just a short; similar to that of a prologue. I'll see how well it is received and go from there. But due to real life reasons my ability to write is severely limited(even if it is positively received, I may not be able to continue the story); which is why I prefer not posting if I've not completed the story/scene.
"Que Sera Sera, whatever will be, will be."
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>>25214005 Well, pic may not be as irrelevant as I thought.
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>>25213524 >>25214005 It'd be welcome man and I feel ya when you say you don't wan't to die halfway through.
As for writing
>green It's basically a simplified prose to be honest, but you still don't want to skip out on any detail or character development. Also, it's a little tricky to catch spelling errors which is why you should check it thoroughly.
I just rush right in, Triple showed me why that was a bad idea, so all I can say is take it a little slower I guess? Though I have faith in ya Anon, you seem to be cautious about approaching this.
Anyway, more green would be welcome. We're almost at the cap and /tg/ still has an epilogue that is eagerly awaited so I'm going to back out until the next thread is made.
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>>25182563 >You look at her for a moment >She looks eager to do anything you want her to do >You lay back on your bed "Well, I suppose we could start you off with pleasuring me with your mouth, pet."
>You think that's how you're supposed to do it >She beams at your command >FS:"And where would you like my mouth master?" "Is there anywhere else it's needed? Around my cock of course."
>FS:"Of course master." >She moves over to where you were on the bed and gets on her knees >She pulls down your boxers to reveal your flaccid penis >She doesn't even take a moment she just begins to stroke and suck on it >She was trying her best to give a good blowjob >Despite probably being her second blowjob after last night >But of course you got hard once again >Now she was taking your cock in her mouth in a stride >She was trying to take as much of you in her mouth without gagging all the while slowly stroking you >She pulls herself off for a moment >FS:"Am I doing okay M-Master?" "Just fine my pet. But I'm going to need you to continue while turning around. I might as well get you ready for our next activity."
>She has a moment if suprise on her face before going back to the soft smile she had kept on >FS:"Of course Master." >She gets on the bed and turns her backside to you and begins to continue on the blowjob she was giving you >Before you lay her pussy and suprisingly, it was already dripping wet >You start with spreading her pussy open to take a good look at it >She still had the pussy of a virgin, just essentially without the hymen. >You begin to lick her pussy in long sweeps of your tongue >She begins to moan around your cock >You could feel the warmth of her breath on it >It felt even better now >You now start to try to insert your tongue into her passage >She tasted sweet >Kind of addicting >As was her aroma >You were going to enjoy this whole master thing. "Well pet, I believe we should continue on."
>FS:"O-of course M-Master." Insanebow Dash
>>25216469 >Her legs were shaking and were kinda red >She must have came from your expert tongue skills of yours >Because you totally had those >She got off of your face and stood >FS:"I um... I have something that might make this better master." "And what would that be my pet?"
>Shits gonna take some getting used to for sure >FS:"I um... I have a tail that I like to use from time to time." "You have a tail?"
>Wat >FS:"Y-yes. It's in my bag. Shall I get it master? "Sure, why not."
>She goes over to her backpack and pulls out a pink tail connected to what looked like a butt plug >Ohhhhh, dis gon b gud >FS:"I-i like to wear it from time to time. After taking care of animals some days I just want to be a pet myself. So I put my tail in. A-are you okay with this?" >Okay? >Nigga, this was great "Of course pet. But we're going to have to 'attach' your tail, are we not?"
>FS:"Of course master. Just um, be gentle please." "Was that a command from you?"
>FS:"O-of course not! I would never!" >She moves over to you with plug and a small bottle of lube and gives you them before bending over on all fours >You kinda understood what to do >Lots of lube >And taking your time >You first add the lube to the plug itself before moving over her ass >You lube up your finger before moving it around her ass, making sure to lather her accordingly >You apply more to your finger and push inside to try to lube the inside a bit >She lets out a gasp when you do so and begins to lightly pant as you finger her asshole >You remove your finger and start to press the plug against her ass >She curls her toes as you do so and seems to relax her body >As you slowly push, the plug begins to plunge inside >Well, she did say she's done this before >Also it wasn't too large of a plug >One of the smaller to medium sized ones >Slowly and slowly she takes more and more of it >Until with an audible *pop* it goes completely inside >Seeming snug inside Insanebow Dash
>>25216625 "Well, how does it feel my pet?"
>FS:"It feels wonderful. Thank you master." https://derpiboo.ru/331944 (for reference)
>She turns back towards you with her face red and eyes full of love >Those hearts were in her eyes again >She comes close and begins to kiss you >As you begin to have a tongue war with her you move your hand back and give her ass a squeeze >With your left hand, you begin to fondle her left breast as well >Out of all the girls she had the best rack and her ass was nice and plush >With her hands she moved down to your cock and began to stroke and fondle your cock and balls >You break free from the kiss with some saliva trailing "It's time we had our fun, my pet
>She bends over on the bed and gives her ass a little shake >FS:"Ready whenever you are. Master." >You move up behind her and slick your cock against her opening before penetrating her >Yup >Still as tight as last night >Which means you gotta take the slow and steady approach >You begin with the small thrusts just trying to wiggle all the way inside >She begins to let out light moans >FS:"Remember master, I'm yours to do whatever you want with. I can take whatever you wish for your sake." >That sounded more like a "Fuck me hard" than a explanation of how she can take it >You take the hint and do away with the small thrusts and begin your full thrusts into her >Be Rainbow Dash >You and your friends were making breakfast with Anons stuff that he had in the kitchen >It would have been alright if in the background you didn't hear the slapping of hips and http://vocaroo.com/i/s0yKaaLkG0cH "Seriously guys, how did Fluttershy get the drop on us like that?"
>R:"I would have expecting something like this from you Rainbow, but not her. It seems she truly has feelings for Anonymous. How do you want your eggs dear?" "Scrambled. But yeah, I even might have expected this from Twilight."
>Oh hey, the sounds have stopped >Oh wait. Nope they were just probably changing positions Insanebow Dash
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>>25216738 >TS:"And why would you have expected this of me?" "Because I can totally see you trying some stupid science experiment in sex."
>She scowls at you >TS:"I'm not that bad. Am I?" >AJ:"Of course not sugar cube. Dash is just playing." >SS:"I'm just upset that I'm not up there with Anon. She just had to lock the door." >Admittedly, you kinda felt the same way... >Be Anonymous >Fluttershy seemed to be in absolute bliss by the sounds she was making >Add the light tail pulls you've been giving her and she's in heaven >Currently you were pounding away in the missionary position >Last night must have increased your stamina or some shit because you could just keep going >Fluttershy continued on with her flurry of moans and calling out of "Master!" >And you just continued thrusting completely in and out of her >After last night's tender session, she seemed to want more >She even wanted a spanking after seeing Sunset like it >Needless to say, Flutters liked it quite a bit too >The two of you were covered in sweat and carnal juices >You both just kept going >But you were beginning to tire >And your balls gave you the heads up that you were gonna blow soon >Then no more sex for like, a week at least >Suprised you even were able to do this session >You bend Fluttershy over again >As you pound into her you grab on to her tail some more and give some light tugs >Not enough to pull it out but just enough to move it a bit "I'm getting close pet. I hope you're ready."
>FS:"Sh-Shoot it all inside me! Please master!" >You are now thrusting as fast as you can in and out of her >Drops of juices are just falling to the floor at this point making a small puddle >Then with a Final thrust and pull you dump your load while simultaneously pulling out her tail >She lets out a legitimate scream before just collapsing >Before you is her gaping ass and her overflowing pussy with your cum >And she's just shaking >FS:"T-Thank you master." Insanebow Dash
Pastebin is updated! Also need to find out where I'm going from here... maybe a foot job under the table from Rarity or something.
Anonymous
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>>25215192 Appreciate the tips.
Anonymous
>>25212357 >>25212263 >>25212020 Why is there not more of this? There seriously needs to be more of this.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Fellow writefags; what programs do you use(if any at all) to save and/or spell check your work?
I have a shitty computer so using things such as Microsoft Word put to much strain on my computer. If you're looking for something light and easy like WordPad or Notepad but with spellcheck and other functions; I highly recommend LibreOffice. It is basically a clone of Microsoft Word but free and barely puts any strain on your computer. You can even set it to web mode so your green appears as it will when you post it here. I'll leave a link below. Also curious as to what others use or if you use any at all.
https://www.libreoffice.org/download/libreoffice-fresh/ Anonymous
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>>25217025 Sunset or Dash. I don't think they've had all that much loving, especially Sunset.
Though footjob under the table does sound hot as hell. Anonymous
Anonymous
>>25218559 Never heard of it; how well does it work for green? It seems to just enhance the ease of programming.
Can you set it so ">" lines appear green? Something like that would be really helpful.
Anonymous
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>>25218580 Maybe? Never needed to do anything like that.
TheAutistocrat
>>25218498 This will come in handy, Thanks Anon!
As for your question, I run a bootleg windows so I don't have word, or anything like that. I just type it up in the quick response window in the corner.
Anonymous
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>>25218730 That's what I do, I write it in the quick response window until word limit and then I copy and paste it into LibreOffice, then save. I'm the one who said I wouldn't post unless my story/scene was complete.
Also, if you're going to use Libre, go to view and click Web Layout to get the more 4chan-like format. I also recommend unchecking a lot(if not all) of the pre-checked boxes. Ah, you're smart, you'll figure it out.
twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
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>>25217111 >>25218042 Because as amusing at it would be to write a story for each -dere, it was just a short - didn't have anything planned after the punchline. Even if I didn't need to wrap up the other story, I haven't seen any of the EQG movies, so I don't really know Sunny's character well enough to write a longer piece.
If someone wants to continue it, they're more than welcome to do so.
Carlos tells me I should name this short "Sundere." Anonymous
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>>25218730 Did you try LibreOffice? If so, do you like it?
Spacewolfe
Would it be okay if I were to move my story from the annual stoker's werewolf thread to here?
( Pastebin here :
http://pastebin.com/44CYRs7z )
Anonymous
>>25220125 I'm not sure and I don't have the time to read your story but if it's about monsters(werewolf's, vampires, etc), then I'd say go for it. From what I can tell; both human and pony are accepted here.
Anonymous
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>>25220125 Yeah I'd say so. It fit's the 'classic monster' theme so go for it.
Spacewolfe
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>>25220337 Thanks!
I'll try to deliver more tomorrow.
Anonymous
What monster should get the OP pic next thread?
Anonymous
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>>25220492 Haven't had any mummies, have we?
Spacewolfe
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>>25220492 Werewolf. Only fair optin since last one was vampire.
Anonymous
Anonymous
Anonymous
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Need new thread
Insanebow Dash
At work so can't make new thread. Someone pretty please make it for me? I'll love you forever.
Anonymous
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>>25222054 I'll do it. Are their any more pastebin's that need to be added and does anyone want to change the header image?
Anonymous
>>25222054 Should I use
>>25218498 or
>>25214005 or
>>25128284 as header; those are the only pictures I have that fit the theme.
Anonymous
>>25222165 since its a monster thread, you could use any monster pic really
Anonymous
>>25222211 Alright; I'm more in favor of using the Vinyl one. Give me a minute and it'll be up.
Anonymous
Anonymous
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>>25222297 Seems I did the thread right, so everybody can head on over to the new one.
