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Marital Problems Thread #25.1

Anonymous Sat 17 Oct 2015 02:24:56 No.25103472 View Reply Report Delete

Quoted By: >>25103756 >>25158572 >>25249568 >>25264684

I leave for a couple hours and look what happens edition.

Previous thread: >>24943683

The premise of this thread can cover a multitude of issues. Maybe you and your wife are fighting over something insignificant. Maybe the spark just isn't there anymore. Either side is welcome to have issues with the other.

If cuckoldry is your thing, this isn't your thread.

New content is welcome, and discussion encouraged.

Pastebin of previous threads and current stories thus far: http://pastebin.com/ARKY1Kny

Featured Stories:
Fife's Two Sides of the Same Coin - http://pastebin.com/1hJfr9Qs
Without_Aname's Twilight's Secret Pt. 2 - http://pastebin.com/qdN0mAxX
Loki's Prince Anon & Young Celestia - http://pastebin.com/ML51EaaS
ActuallyMarriedPone's Redheart x Doctor Anon - http://pastebin.com/8p820zkE
ChocolateBiscuit's green - http://pastebin.com/3kupSxsx
BrandNewWritegag's short - http://pastebin.com/yGm6vA7n
Sorry if I missed anyone's pastebin

Pastebin for aspiring writers (general concepts and techniques):
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http://pastebin.com/whCQ2GpX
http://pastebin.com/bnMmZ2T3

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Anonymous Sat 17 Oct 2015 02:59:17 No.25103756 Report Delete

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>>25103472
kay mate we'll keep it alive till the writefags return

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 17 Oct 2015 03:41:33 No.25104078 Report Delete

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We keep it alive thru a fucking week of nothing, then we get 3 big updates in short order and it all goes to hell.
Y'all are as pathetic as a cuck.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 17 Oct 2015 10:08:10 No.25106303 Report Delete

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pg 9 bump

I ain't takin' no chances nigga.

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LokiLorien !0hx39rQsqI Sat 17 Oct 2015 11:25:00 No.25107188 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>25107395 >>25109529 >>25109811

Dayum, it died? Right when I started updating frequently?

Sad times.

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Anonymous Sat 17 Oct 2015 11:32:20 No.25107395 Report Delete

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>>25107188
>Dubs confirm this are sad times.
>Just when I just ended watching 24 and and look when the next Season is going to be.
>"Jack Bauer will not be on the series anymore"
Sad times indeed.
Anyway, Loki, we need you m8.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 17 Oct 2015 12:57:02 No.25109529 Report Delete

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>>25107188
It's already page 10!

Not WaN maybe

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Not WaN maybe Sat 17 Oct 2015 13:17:04 No.25109811 Report Delete

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>>25107188
> Sad times confirmed.
>Mfw.

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Anonymous Sat 17 Oct 2015 13:21:02 No.25109860 Report Delete

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>>25109529

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Anonymous Sat 17 Oct 2015 15:07:23 No.25111202 Report Delete

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Anonymous Sat 17 Oct 2015 16:46:06 No.25112920 Report Delete

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>>25109811
Come back, we need you!

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 17 Oct 2015 17:12:11 No.25113224 Report Delete

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I watched the entirety of season 4 and 5 and the thread is archived.

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Anonymous Sat 17 Oct 2015 17:53:18 No.25113672 Report Delete

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Anonymous Sat 17 Oct 2015 18:32:49 No.25114139 Report Delete

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waiting for updates

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Anonymous Sat 17 Oct 2015 19:40:59 No.25115130 Report Delete

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Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 00:02:20 No.25118314 Report Delete

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Ok, so last time I tried to write for this thread I never finished my story and I have been having a want to write a new one but I have no ideas. anyone have any ideas?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 00:15:27 No.25118474 Report Delete

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>>25118314
Something about other problems in a couple than cheating would be good.

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LokiLorien !0hx39rQsqI Sun 18 Oct 2015 00:35:31 No.25118727 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>25119028 >>25119042 >>25119120 >>25120275 >>25124396 >>25131267 >>25133302 >>25156753

>>25118314
Here's a few I've thought of over the course of the life of this thread.

>Sunset Shimmer, she wants to go home to Equestria but can't take Anonymous along.

>Starlight Glimmer, Anonymous has become unhappy being treated equally with all the other ponies and feels that he ought to be treated better than she treats others as her spouse.

>Luna, abusive spouse, stuck in Ye Olde Fashioned school of marriage. Anonymous too embarrassed to admit it.

>Pinkie, substance abuse, tearing apart their marriage in numerous respects.

>Fluttershy, spark has fizzled out. Everything Anon used to find adorable about her has become grating.

>Applejack, financial difficulties; risks selling the farm. Anonymous contemplates crime and/or suicide for life insurance to keep it afloat.

>Rarity, often far apart due to very demanding jobs between the business and fashion sectors, almost never see one another, tears at the marriage.

>Rainbow Dash, accidental pregnancy and forced marriage. Neither loves the other, but they stick together for the sake of the kid.

>Spitfire, reputation issues because she married a non-Pegasus. Anonymous is universally despised by her friends and coworkers because he can't fly, tears at the marriage.

>Daring Do, both are mutually in high-danger, life-risking lines of work. One gets cripplingly injured, and the other isn't sure if they love them without that aspect of danger to them. (I envisioned Anonymous as a privateer in my original sketch of it, but that's discretionary of course).

>Chrysalis, she replaces Anonymous' genuine wife and feeds off of him, though eventually falls in love with him, and tries to live a false life as his actual wife, stumbling over issues.

>Nurse Redheart, dying for foals but can't have them with Anonymous. Regrets marrying him when she figures this out, having not expected it given there are so many hybrids in Equestria.

I've had a few others, too.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 00:59:28 No.25119028 Report Delete

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>>25118727
>>Starlight Glimmer, Anonymous has become unhappy being treated equally with all the other ponies and feels that he ought to be treated better than she treats others as her spouse.

Me like

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 01:00:13 No.25119042 Report Delete

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>>25118727
>>Daring Do, both are mutually in high-danger, life-risking lines of work. One gets cripplingly injured, and the other isn't sure if they love them without that aspect of danger to them. (I envisioned Anonymous as a privateer in my original sketch of it, but that's discretionary of course).
You can add/change this to not knowing if they love them enough to leave their thrill seeking life behind to take care of them.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 01:02:02 No.25119065 Report Delete

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>cuck the general

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Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 01:07:12 No.25119120 Report Delete

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>>25118727
Those are all pretty good.
>>25119065
That's my job,m8.

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Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 01:11:56 No.25119175 Report Delete

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Stay alive, faggots.Good nights, I love you all, full homo.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 01:57:18 No.25119802 Report Delete

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p.8 bump

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Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 02:09:03 No.25119974 Report Delete

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To other anons following in these stories and fics in general, how do you deal with the troubling fact that reality is so dismal in comparison? Does it not effect your motivation?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 02:35:49 No.25120275 Report Delete

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>>25118727
Care to share the rest of the ideas

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Nexus !FzHC.Nexus Sun 18 Oct 2015 03:31:28 No.25120939 Report Delete

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alright I think I got a new idea for a story

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Nexus !FzHC.Nexus Sun 18 Oct 2015 04:54:42 No.25121684 Report Delete

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>>25120939
>It has been a long time since you, Anonymous have seen your wife.
>A long time of depression, drinking, and almost resorting to suicide to end the sorrow.
>But, you have remained faithful to her in her absence.
>Mares and even one stallion tried to court you over the years, and each one you declined.

"It has been almost one thousand years," you say looking up at the night sky.
>You stare at the shadow on the bright face of the newly raised moon.
"Almost one thousand years being married to a myth."
>Suddenly a voice from behind you makes itself known.
>"But, you and I know she isn't just a myth<" says the voice, "and one day she will return to us."
>You turn your head around to see the voice's owner.
>The tall, white, and regal form of Princess Celestia enters your vision, but you can see her eyes are puffy and red.
"Have you been crying Celestia," you ask as you turn around.
>She just nods and lowers her hed.
"And here I thought you," you say making your way over to her, "kept the hope up."
>Pulling her into a comforting hug, you feel your once dry eyes start to tear up.

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Nexus !FzHC.Nexus Sun 18 Oct 2015 04:55:43 No.25121690 Report Delete

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>>25121684
>As the time passes you hear her start to sniffle as she pulls back.
>She clears her throat before she speaks.
>"Anon," she says quietly, "I want to ask you something."
>Ohherewegoagain.png
>She as asked for your forgiveness around this time every year.
You shush her with a finger as you speak, "Celestia, you already know I forgave you. So please, you can only get better if you forgive yourself!"
>She smiles for a second before she shakes her head.
>"That isn't what I came to ask," she says at the questioning look you give her.
>"I came to ask if you wouldn't mind going out to Ponyville in two days with Twilight and Spike. She is going out there to oversee the Summer Sun Celebration is set up
accordingly, and I wanted you to go as well."
>You can feel she has another reason behind asking you, and she could see it on your face.
>But she smiles and begins the hug anew as you slowly begin to nod your head.
"But," you say with caution entering your voice, "you are going to tell me the real reason why you sent me there when I get back. And it better not be another damn chase
to get me out of Canterlot for the weekend!"
>She shakes her head as she breaks the hug and starts to walk towards the door.
>"Don't you worry Anon," she says looking back at you, "don't you worry."

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Nexus !FzHC.Nexus Sun 18 Oct 2015 04:58:27 No.25121705 Report Delete

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>>25121690
That is all I got for tonight
and shall I contu=inue?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 06:08:49 No.25122104 Report Delete

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>>25121690
I would continue with it, the premise seems good

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 06:15:42 No.25122139 Report Delete

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>>25121705
yes

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Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 09:43:04 No.25123122 Report Delete

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>>25121690

Celestia cheated? ;~; S-sent anon away while...

Or am I reading this wrong?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 09:44:50 No.25123133 Report Delete

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>>25119974

You could just fuck a horse.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 09:56:00 No.25123206 Report Delete

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>>25123122
Anon is married to Luna, Celestia sent him with Twilight cause she knows Nightmare Moon/Luna is returning.
How Anon is alive after 1000 years is my question.

For some reason, I kinda want to see that Luna is effectively dead, and all that remains is Nightmare Moon even after getting hit with the EoH.

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Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 11:35:58 No.25123989 Report Delete

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>>25123206
He coeld have used the bond thing from Loki.
That or Anon is god.

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Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 11:39:51 No.25124022 Report Delete

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>tfw you come home an your bae give you this look

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 12:08:30 No.25124267 Report Delete

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Has the green where Twilight and Anon go to humanland to be with Anon updated any in the past two months? A link would be appreciated because I forgot the name of it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 12:22:04 No.25124396 Report Delete

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>>25118727

>Chrysalis, she replaces Anonymous' genuine wife and feeds off of him, though eventually falls in love with him, and tries to live a false life as his actual wife, stumbling over issues.

I really like this one.

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Nexus !FzHC.Nexus Sun 18 Oct 2015 12:48:20 No.25124672 Report Delete

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>>25123206
>>25123989
Everything shall all become clear soon

>>25124267
and do you mean Fife's story?

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 13:03:41 No.25124875 Report Delete

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>Sunday
I hope WA will make update today.

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LokiLorien !0hx39rQsqI Sun 18 Oct 2015 13:13:42 No.25124951 Report Delete

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>>25120275
Sure.

>Octavia, her and Anonymous are in different, competing orchestras. Competition is fierce, and their fellow orchestra members try to divide them to weaken the other side.

>Nightmare Moon, the EoH fail to reform her and instead badly wound her. Later, Anonymous and her are on the run from agents of Equestria, trying to get by together wherever they go but unable to effectively hide her identity.

>Twilight Velvet, after Night Light dies Anonymous marries her. Twilight and Shining don't accept him as a replacement father-figure, and try to break them up. (I envisage this as an alt-history type deal, where they're still foals.)

>Ms. Harshwhinny, Anonymous is substantially younger. Tons of public pressure on each of them as Anon is perceived as eye-candy for an older mare.

>Diamond Tiara, married Prince Anon for more status., is generally a manipulative bitch who none of his friends like but he's really attached to her.

And a few silly ones.

>Apple Bloom and Anonymous accidentally marry in Las Pegasus after a crazy drunk night. Trying to annul the marriage is difficult.

>Muffins, she keeps getting lost and Anonymous needs to go save her from all sorts of shenanigans, like out of volcanoes and from Dragon nests.

>Mayor Mare, in the midst of a mid-life crisis, Anonymous tries to dissuade her from that motorcycle she wants to buy among other things.

>Celestia, a silly little issue (i.e. toilet seat) starts escalating into a country-shaking catastrophe as they continuously one-up one another in revenge.

>Twilight Sparkle, while experimenting she accidentally turns Anonymous incredibly gay. Flaming metrosexual Anonymous produces marital hijinks (i.e. trying to hook Twilight up with Rainbow, despite them being married) while she tries to find a spell to turn him back.

>Maud, Anonymous isn't sure if she loves him, or Boulder more.

>Bloomberg, their love is forbidden by Applejack, but they marry behind her back.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 13:53:32 No.25125456 Report Delete

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>>25124951
>Maud, Anonymous isn't sure if she loves him, or Boulder more
I'd read it

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 14:06:24 No.25125641 Report Delete

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>>25121705
yush

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 14:08:36 No.25125673 Report Delete

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>>25123206
You're going to choke on that despair Anon.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 14:10:27 No.25125695 Report Delete

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>>25125456
Me too.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 15:20:55 No.25126632 Report Delete

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Is it okay if I write about my self insert OC, Devin Brighton?

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 15:21:49 No.25126649 Report Delete

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>>25126632
Go back to Fingerbang, Disco.

Justin Trudeau

Justin Trudeau Sun 18 Oct 2015 15:23:04 No.25126667 Report Delete

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>>25126632
Don't forget to me write me in, together, we can make Canada great again!

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LokiLorien !0hx39rQsqI Sun 18 Oct 2015 15:29:11 No.25126759 Report Delete

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>>25126667
Justin, pls.

>You're just not ready.

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Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 16:38:57 No.25127732 Report Delete

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>>25121705
You have my attention.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 17:15:46 No.25128258 Report Delete

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>>25124672
Probably. Anon has a daughter he's taking care of as well in the story.

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Nexus !FzHC.Nexus Sun 18 Oct 2015 17:23:29 No.25128370 Report Delete

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>>25121690
The next day---
>Walking around the castle you try to find Twilight and Spike, but all morning you are not having any luck.
>Until you remember that Twilight is the biggest book worm you had ever met, well next to Starswirl she isn't.
"Well," you mumble to no one inparticular, "looks like I have to walk all the way to the library now. I hope she is actually there and not leaving early."
>Picking up your pace, you begin a power walk to the other side of the castle to find the purple unicorn.
>As you walk you hear ponies wispering about their suprise you have broken your nocturnal sleep cycle, you ignore them and continue on your "mission"
>After ten minutes of walking and ignoring the staff you finally reach the library.
>As you enter you see Spike just falling off of a ladder as the book in his hands is yanked away by a purple aura.
>You instantly break into a run and dive to catch the small dragon before he hits the ground, but you came up a foot short.
"Spike!" you say rather loud for in a library, "Are you alright, is anything broken?"
>He slowly opens his eyes and you can see he is dazed.

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Nexus !FzHC.Nexus Sun 18 Oct 2015 17:24:30 No.25128383 Report Delete

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>>25128370
>"Huh, wh-" he starts then he realizes who is talking to him, "Prince Anonymous, when did you get here?"
>"And more importantly," asks a female voce to your right, "why are you awake at this hour? You are usually asleep all day."
>You turn to the voice to meet Twilight Sparkle, standing a few feet away giving you a puzzled look.
"And why are you Twilight Sparkle, pulling young dragons from high places?"
>She looks at the dragon in question as he gets to his feet.
>"It is alright your highness," he says dusting himself off, "my scales keep me safe, so it is all good!"
>You look at him as he gives you a thumbs up and a smile.
>You shake your head, and noted you will have to read up on how dragons are able to resist falling off ladders.
>Twilight goes back to reading the book Spike had pulled off the shelf as you pull over a chair next to a table.
"Hey Spike," you call, motioning him over, "can you do me a favor?"
>Yes, your Highness>"
"Just call me Anon, I don't want formalities between friends."
>He smiles and nods as you wait for Twilight to finish her book.

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Nexus !FzHC.Nexus Sun 18 Oct 2015 17:25:32 No.25128395 Report Delete

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>>25128383
>After time passed you fell asleep.
>"Anon wake up" Spike says loudly as he shakes you, "Twilight wants to talk to you!"
>You quickly open your eyes as you raise your head off the table to see Twilight looking at you.
>"Well," she states holding up a letter, "I see you are coming with us to Ponyville. I still don't know why the Princess is having us go!
She is completely brushing off the urgency of the situation!"
>She began a rant that was directed at the not present Sun Princess.
>"She is the one who can stop her from returning, and she is just ignoring the si-"
"Twilight!" you say firmly, "what are you talking about? What is going on, and who is returning?"
>She gives you a look of 'how do you not know' and she quickly blurts out what you were hoping she would.
>"Nightmare Moon is returning tomorrow Anon," she shouts flailing her forehooves in the air.
>Your eyes widen at the realization of what she just said.
'Luna is coming back!' you shout in your mind 'My wife is coming home at long last!'

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Nexus !FzHC.Nexus Sun 18 Oct 2015 17:26:33 No.25128410 Report Delete

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>>25128383
I am going to go back to lurking and writing for tonight. tomorrow should yield another update

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 18:51:40 No.25129889 Report Delete

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>>25128395
I want to hear Twilight's reaction to what Anon just said.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 19:10:17 No.25130262 Report Delete

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>>25129889
he didn't say it out loud

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 19:14:45 No.25130358 Report Delete

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>>25130262
S-she can read minds. Shhhhhh.

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Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 20:02:18 No.25131193 Report Delete

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Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 20:05:29 No.25131267 Report Delete

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>>25118727
>Sunset Shimmer, she wants to go home to Equestria but can't take Anonymous along.

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Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 21:08:14 No.25132322 Report Delete

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>>25128410
Sounds gud mate. I'll keep this green on watch.

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Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 21:37:24 No.25132756 Report Delete

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Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 22:11:30 No.25133178 Report Delete

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Keep it alive guys, stay based.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 22:22:18 No.25133302 Report Delete

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>>25118727
The Fluttershy one was already written of sorts by Darf on Fimfiction. Was a great short.

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LokiLorien !0hx39rQsqI Sun 18 Oct 2015 22:29:26 No.25133392 Report Delete

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>>25133302
I had completely forgotten about that filthy fic and it's adorable predecessor, I do remember them from ages ago. I suppose I must have been remembering it subconsciously, or something.

>Sadness that Darf now only writes by exorbitantly expensive commission.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 22:56:07 No.25133774 Report Delete

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>>25133392
>Sadness that Darf now only writes by exorbitantly expensive commission.
I hate when people do that kind of shit.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 23:01:18 No.25133841 Report Delete

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>>25121690
Yes Definitely continue

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 18 Oct 2015 23:09:59 No.25133958 Report Delete

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>>25128395
Can't wait for more

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 19 Oct 2015 00:15:36 No.25134903 Report Delete

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bada boom

Nexus !FzHC.Nexus

Nexus !FzHC.Nexus Mon 19 Oct 2015 02:14:31 No.25136108 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>25136119

Update because I cant sleep

>>25128395
>You politely excuse yourself from the group saying you will see them tomorrow and make your way to your and Luna's room.
>The whole way there you could barely contain your smile.
>Once the door closed, you let out a cheer andjumped in the air.
"THIS IS THE HAPPIEST DAY OF MY LIFE IN THE PAST THOUSAND YEARS!"
>After a few more seconds of celebrating you hear a knock on the door.
>Anon," comes Spike's voice, "is everything ok? I saw you tense up when Twilight mentioned Nightmare Moon, is something wrong?"
>You open the door and look down at the little purple dragon.
"Everything is fine," you say as a tear falls from your eye.
>He looks confused and you tell him to go get Twilight, you are going to tell them something only Celestia and you knew.
>While he went to get her, you went and got Celestia and filled her in on your plan.
>"Anonymous," Celestia says after you finish speaking, "if you tell Twilight how you have been around for this long she will want to know how."
"I planned on telling her the truth," you shoot off defensively, "I have known her and Spike for most of their lives. I trust her enough that she won't
look for the scroll."
>"I want you to promise me she won't go looking."
"I pormise she won't."

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>>25136108
>As you make your way back up to your room you see Twilight and Spike waiting for you at the door.
>Twilight gives you a puzzled look, while Spike looked anxious.
>"Anon," Twilight said confusion evident in her voice, "what do you want to talk about?"
>When you approach them, you push open the door and motion for them to enter.
>As you look out the window you see the sun is starting to sink below the horizon.
"This seems fitting," you say as you chuckled, "pull up a chair you two, I have a secret to tell you. But before I do, I want you to promise you won't tell
anypony this."
>They look at one another and nodded.
>"We promise not to tell," they say in unison.
>You nod and pull up a chair from the old desk Luna used to sit in and plan the stars for the night sky.
"Do you two know how Equestria had two Princesses?"
>"You are talking about Princess Luna right," asks Twilight, "She turned into Mightmare Moon, if the ledgend is believed."
"Yes I am," you continue, "and one thousand years ago she was banished by the Elements of Harmony. But there is something the books don't tell you about before."

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Nexus !FzHC.Nexus Mon 19 Oct 2015 02:16:33 No.25136125 Report Delete

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>>25136119
>They both look at you with confusion plastered on their faces.
>You see Twilight's righ eye twitch, the finding out that there is information she doesn't know is getting to her.
"Now," you interrupt, "I want you to know that this is the truth and if you want to confirm it you can ask Celestia."
>They nod again.
"Five years before that," you begin as tears form in your eyes, "a strange creature appeared in Equestria. And the Lunar Princess took a liking to it, over the months
after they deemed it not a threat."
>"But the only th-" Twilight began to say but you cut her off.
"But the liking tunred into somthing stronger, it tuned into a relationship that none could get between. And two and a half years after I arrived in Equestria Luna and I
were married." Twilight and Spike's expressions changed from confused to disbelief, "It was only a small celebration that only a few attended. We had close friends there, like
Starswirl the Bearded and one of your ancestors was there too."
>You could see Twilight had a question ready to ask, and you motioned for her to ask.
>"How could you be there," she asked quickly, "you told us that your kind live for only feventy to eighty years if they take care of themselves so you can't be over one thoousand
years old!"
"The way around that," you say smugly, "is to know a bery powerful unicorn who, will help keep love between a lonely human and an immortal Princess stay happy together for all of time.
To this day I never regret asking him to cast that spell on me."

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Nexus !FzHC.Nexus Mon 19 Oct 2015 02:18:43 No.25136143 Report Delete

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>>25136125
so that is it for it being 2 am, but I am going to finish the first part of the next update. Then it will be time to pass out so keep the thread alive!

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>>25125673
>despair
I revel in it, and have always preferred tragic, hopeless endings over happy ending.

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Anonymous Mon 19 Oct 2015 02:34:35 No.25136299 Report Delete

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>>25136119
>Mightmare Moon
>Mightmare
>Might

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Nexus !FzHC.Nexus Mon 19 Oct 2015 02:52:11 No.25136445 Report Delete

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>>25136299
tired at 2 am I don't mean to have spelling errors. Thanks for pointing it out I will try to catch it next time.

Anonymous

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Bampper

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Anonymous Mon 19 Oct 2015 06:24:36 No.25137475 Report Delete

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If Queen Nightmare Moon cheats on Anon with an astronaut, i will be pissed owf.

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Pls be to telling more green

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Anonymous Mon 19 Oct 2015 11:29:24 No.25138998 Report Delete

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>>25136445
>off by one
Any pastebin?

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Without_Aname !Zm/HdH8Fq2 Mon 19 Oct 2015 11:47:35 No.25139108 Report Delete

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>>25073879 #

> Twilight flies upward behind the partially formed specter.
> With a grunt he turns his attention to the exhausted yet determined young Alicorn.
> 'Haven't you done enough already?!' He snarls stomping a heavy, forming hoof to the floor.
> The thick curling smoke swirls where his hoof lands.
> Twilight's eyes glance from the abomination, to Anonymous, then to you quickly.
> Anon!
> Now is your chance to try to get him.
> "It'll be enough when Anon is free!" She rears her front legs while she struggles to stay airborne.
> Her horn flickers a radiant lavender.
> She seems like she is giving her all with her eyes shut tightly and teeth grit, but even you can tell she is weak.
> She must be trying to buy you the time to get Anonymous out.
> Turning your attention to him, you notice the advance of the smokey entanglement has stopped.
> He seemed to be coming down from some sort of daze.
> You continue to back towards him while facing the iminant conflict infront of you.
> Twilight leans her forehead towards the shadowy body, as the aura on her horn shrinks to a small sphere before projecting in a narrow beam at her grinning enemy.
> With a light tap of his hoof, unflinching, a wall of jagged onyx crystals raise from the shadowy floor.
> The beam from Twilight's horn is haltedalmost effortlessly.
> 'You've done more harm to Anonymous than anypony could have ever done young Princess... I have seen it myself.. I am the strength he needs now. You will just have to accept that. Accept that you have broken him... Driven him away..' He speaks with an almost emotionless expression.
> Twilight seems to pause at his words as they seem to hurt her more than any counter attack he could have done.

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Without_Aname !Zm/HdH8Fq2 Mon 19 Oct 2015 11:54:42 No.25139144 Report Delete

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>>25139108

> Your flank bumps into Anon as you watch intently, causing you to jump and almost squeal.
> You raise a foreleg in defense as you turn, momentarily forgetting he's behind you.
> Yet you begin to relax as you see his expression.
> Defeat.
> Misery.
> Exhaustion.
> It's as if you forget what's going on around you for the moment as you recall everything that's happened to this poor Prince.
> Utter betrayal, lies, deceit.
> Your heart truly aches for him.
> But now is not the time for pity. "Anonymous. It's time to go. It's not safe here." You glance back to the squall between Twilight and the ghoul.
> Concentrated auras of lavender and Onyx crystals summoned by red auras hue the darkness.
> "...It's not safe anywhere..." he barely whispers as his eyes stare into nothing.
> You withhold your impatience from that reply .
"Sweetie.. Even if that is true, it's definitely not safe right here right now. We need to get you out of here. Come on." Your voice is as gentle as your desperation will allow placing your hoof to his icy feeling body.
> "It's just going to happen again and again.. If it's not today, it's tomorrow... if it's not a fire, it's Flash.." he turns to you, eyes watery red as if he's just finished crying.
> "They're right you know.."
> Your eyes soften at the sight.
"Who's right? About what?.."
> "All of them. I'm a monster.. a Beast.." he motions towards the occupied Sombra.
> You glance back toward Twilight who's knocked out of the air by a quickly rising crystal.
> Her inexperienced flying was very apparent as she's unable to recover from the strike.
> Biting your lip, you turn back to Anon. "You are not a monster Anonymous. You are a terrific, noble Stallion." You try to reassure him.
> "..Man.." he quietly corrects you.

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Without_Aname !Zm/HdH8Fq2 Mon 19 Oct 2015 12:07:02 No.25139218 Report Delete

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>>25139144

"Man!.. But right now we need to think about more than ourselves. That's how life is. You need to focus on those you still love, because I promise they're thinking about you still. Right now I'm thinking about how I want to see Shining, to let him know I'm alright ..I know what happened with Twilight. I've seen it. And i don't support it." You glance quickly back again to see Twilight struggling back to her hooves.
"I'm sure you want to, at the very least, go see the Apples. Big Mac, Apple Jack, Granny Smith, Apple Bloom. Your family Anon. Think of them. They still need you. Spike still needs you too." You manage to rouse a reaction from him as his stare turns to the floor.
> With a small inhale he quietly and simply responds, "Yeah..."
> "Luna is probably worried too.." you over hear as he speaks to himself.
> You involuntarily flinch at the statement, also sensing his feelings for her surface.
****
> You are Spike.
> Frantically running down the hallway pumping your tiny arms, you approach the room your two escorting guards were left at.
"GUYS! Hey guys!" You yell between breaths.
> Approaching the door you slam it open, or at least try to, with the momentum of your run.
> They both wake from their beds with with a loud snort and clear confusion.
> "Wha-What?! Master Spike are you alright?" The brilliant bodied crystal ponies fall clumsily from their beds.
"Anon and Cadence are in trouble we need help!" They both seize as you mentioned Cadence being in trouble while you rub your shoulder you used to ram the door.
> Geez those things were solid..
> The Crystal Shield intended as a gift catches your eye as it glistens.
"Hmm... You! Grab that and let's go!"
> "Y-yes sir!" One of the guards awkwardly tosses the shield on his back, as you jump on the back of the other.
"C'mon!" You impatiently cry ignoring their clear confusion, yet determination to help their Princess.

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Without_Aname !Zm/HdH8Fq2 Mon 19 Oct 2015 12:13:18 No.25139260 Report Delete

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>>25139218

> The Crystal Pony your ride almost knocks you from his back from the initial lurch of his dash.
> You squeeze his neck tightly trying to hold on.
> The sprint that only takes a few moments feels like an eternity as they gallop down the hall.
> What have Twilight and Anon gotten them selves into now?
> You begin to approach the door.
" That one!" you point your clawed finger.
> They say nothing continuing their sprint, huffing and snorting.
"Uh.. guys.." you let out timidly as they do not slow, approaching the door.
" Guys!.. Woah!" You raise your hands to cover your face as the door is slammed into by the other Crystal Pony, causing it to splinter slightly and violently fly open.
> The shield flies from his back, along with you from the others back.
> With a clank and scratchy screech, it hits the floor under you.
> Landing on top of it on your bottom, you slide across the floor on it coming to a slow halt infront of an eyebrow raised, unamused Princess Luna.
> You sit wide eyed in shock for a momemt before the guards cry out seeing the condition of their Princess.
> "P-Princess Cadence!" They sprint to the side of Shining, who still cradles his love with care.
> You look from them to Princess Luna who still stares at you inquisitively.
"I uh.. I brought this!" You pat the shield you sit on, uncomfortably smiling.
> "We see that... Noble spike..." she seems hardly impressed.
> This mare still scares the scales off of you...
> "Spike... now isn't the time to fool around..." a dismayed Celestia chimes in.
> You hop off of the shield.
"I'm not! Princess Luna's plan doesn't seem to be working, so what's the harm in trying something else!" You say as you begin to drag it to Twilight and Anon.
> "And what do you intend to do young Spike? Shield them from something?" Luna replies seeming annoyed by your interruption.
> Your shoulders drop feeling somewhat embarrassed.
> But you have to try something.
> Anon would..

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Without_Aname !Zm/HdH8Fq2 Mon 19 Oct 2015 12:24:29 No.25139315 Report Delete

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>>25139260

"Well uh... not exactly..." you hop up on the bed they were laying across and reach down to the floor to drag it up with you.
> Your short arms have difficulty reaching though.
> "Then what?" Luna seems confused.
> You feel a blush form in your cheeks thinking your idea sounds worse out loud than it did in your head.
> "Spike?.." Celestia chimes in as well.
"I thought.. maybe.. I could use the shield to.. pry..Them a~... " you speak low fading to a mumble.
> "Excuse us?..." Luna blankly stares.
> You give up reaching for the shield and sit up with a quiet frustrated sigh.
"I thought... MAYBE.. we could use the shield to separate them.." you bluntly lay your idea out feeling foolish.
> Celestia's face seems to sadden at your words of desperation while Luna seems more impatient.
> Celestia picks up on the shortening patience of her sister.
> She quietly walks beside her and whispers, "He's just trying to help Luna.. He loves them both, don't lose sight of that.."
> Luna brings a hoof to her face to hide her shortening temper, "We are well aware dearest sister... But now isn't a time for coddling. We need to save Anonymous..." she speaks through gritted teeth in her last sentence.
> Celestia narrows her eyes slightly before replying with a quiet dominance, "Correct...And Cadence... And Twilight.."
> Luna matches her sisters gaze.
> Before she has a chance to respond a Crystal Pony chimes in.
> "Master Spike, that's a wonderful idea! The shield was specifically crafted for Prince Anonymous. It's supposed to nullify magic, just like Prince Anonymous naturally does! If in fact a magic bond is what holds them perhaps the shield can sever it!"
> Both sisters glance from one another to the Crystal Pony,then to you.
> You can't help but look surprised yourself, not really knowing that in the first place.
"R... Right! O-Of course! Thats what i was trying to say!" You proudly placed your hands on your hips.
> Sell it Spike, sell it!

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Without_Aname !Zm/HdH8Fq2 Mon 19 Oct 2015 12:31:45 No.25139361 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>25139398 >>25141098 >>25230281

>>25139315

> "It wont hurt to try Luna..." Celestia steps toward Spike while illuminating her horn with brilliant gold.
> "Here Spike.." her aura encases the shield in attempts to lift it, yet only manages to rock it slightly on the floor.
> "Erm.. P-Princess... it nullifies Magic..." the Crystal Pony nervously reminds her.
> Celestia does her best to conceal a blush, "Indeed it does.."
> Luna approaches it picking it up with a foreleg, "We will help you Spike."
> Her determined expression is a welcome change from her doubtful one.
"Thanks Luna!"

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Without_Aname !Zm/HdH8Fq2 Mon 19 Oct 2015 12:37:16 No.25139398 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>25139539 >>25148185 >>25151357 >>25160221 >>25163495

>>25139361

Dat short post end post. Also dassit.

>>25138998
> off by one is off by one.

I didnt get to reply to the comments on my last update. But thanks for the re-welcome/ kind words. I'll keep working on it when I can. Hopefully we stay alive. Hope it's enjoyed.
> lurking ninja mode active.

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Anonymous Mon 19 Oct 2015 12:58:27 No.25139539 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>25140991 >>25142610

>>25139398
>off by one again
>>25139144 check'd
I really enjoyed this update, although another cliffhanger is too much for muh heart dude. Can't wait to see more from you.
write faster faggot

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Nexus !FzHC.Nexus Mon 19 Oct 2015 14:55:54 No.25140421 Report Delete

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here you go hope this helps and my next update should be out in the next two days

>>25138998
http://pastebin.com/ngH7HQMW

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Without_Aname !Zm/HdH8Fq2 Mon 19 Oct 2015 15:42:19 No.25140991 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>25143257 >>25151357

>>25139539
Thanks friend. I'll try to write faster.

Also the bin is updated, and I threw those shitty little one shots up there too.
...also bump.

Anonymous

Anonymous Mon 19 Oct 2015 15:50:16 No.25141098 Report Delete

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>>25139361
I wonder What everyone reaction will be when they learn Sormbra is living inside of anon.

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Fapman !!q/8pd+yX2Hn Mon 19 Oct 2015 17:49:36 No.25142610 Report Delete

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>>25139539
>>25139539
this

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>>25140991

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t9eybY9qFfY

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Anonymous Mon 19 Oct 2015 21:41:15 No.25145511 Report Delete

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Come on, cucks. Don't leave me here alone.

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Anonymous Tue 20 Oct 2015 01:39:29 No.25148185 Report Delete

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>>25139398
>Dat regular updates

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 20 Oct 2015 02:41:28 No.25148723 Report Delete

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p.8 bump

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Anonymous Tue 20 Oct 2015 02:46:10 No.25148744 Report Delete

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Good night, people. Stay safe. Keep it alive

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 20 Oct 2015 03:45:56 No.25149116 Report Delete

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>>25148744
night

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 20 Oct 2015 06:36:48 No.25149854 Report Delete

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>>25144658
Problems abound

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Anonymous Tue 20 Oct 2015 10:05:16 No.25150678 Report Delete

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Problems are what wes looking for

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Anonymous Tue 20 Oct 2015 12:18:18 No.25151357 Report Delete

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>>25139398
>>25140991
Waiting for glorious writefag to return I need more of your Luna

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Anonymous Tue 20 Oct 2015 12:19:38 No.25151370 Report Delete

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W-where is muh Fife?

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bump

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bump

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Anonymous Tue 20 Oct 2015 18:11:56 No.25154910 Report Delete

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>>25154828
Please, anon, delete your bumps.

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Anonymous Tue 20 Oct 2015 19:24:15 No.25155787 Report Delete

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For the record, these two were mine:
>>25154047
>>25155402
I hope that Chinese Moot takes out the limit of deletions.

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>>25118727
shit man some of those are heavy. but i guess that is hardly surprising coming from you :|

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Anonymous Tue 20 Oct 2015 23:17:50 No.25158572 Report Delete

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>>25103472
I never come into these threads, but I laugh every time I see this picture, so thanks for that. Free bump for y'all.

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>>25158572
Well, thanks a lot, anon.

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>>25158620
I always find this picture equal to pic related.
Good night people, stay based.

Anonymous

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>>25159024
Save bump

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Nexus !FzHC.Nexus Wed 21 Oct 2015 01:23:56 No.25160175 Report Delete

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>>25136125
>You could tell they both still didn't believe you.
>But you had planned for this, and you had an answer already prepaired.
"Now I know both of you still don't believe me," you say looking at the floor, "but there is a way to convince you."
>Getting up, you make your way over to the walk in closet next to your and Luna's bed.
>Swinging the door open and activating the crystal lamp, you see the proof you were looking for.
>A painting of you clad in a suit of dark blue armor emblazened with Luna's cutie mark standing next to the Princess of the night.
>The more important thing about the painting was the artists signature on the back.
"This is the proof that I have to show you," you say as you re enter the main room again.
>Twilight gasps as she sees the beautiful painting of you.
>You turn the painting around so the pair could see the writing on the back
>It read:
>A gift to the newly wed Prince Anonymous and Princess Luna, I hope you two live happy long lives together. If you both need somepony to talk to,
my door is always open for you. -Silver Streak
>"B-b-but h-h-" Twilight starts to stutter as Spike just stares in shock.
"That isn't the only thing I have from all of those years ago," you say as you can finally see they are starting to believe you, "I also still have the
same armor set from in that painting. It is sitting in that chest at the foot of the bed!"
>You gesture for them to open the chest you spoke of.
>They both get up slowly and make their way over to it.
>When they finish oipening up the lid, they both instantly turn around to look at you.
>"Anon," shouts Spike as he holds up the dragon scale under layer, "why is this made up of dragon scales?!"

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Nexus !FzHC.Nexus Wed 21 Oct 2015 01:24:57 No.25160190 Report Delete

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>>25160175
"Spike," you say as he stares at you, "I don't want you to go about thinking I killed a dragon for that."
>He gives you a 'don't lie to me' look.
"I was given that by a friend many years ago, right from the scales on her back to be correct. And in fact she should still be in that cave in the Everfree forest.
I will have to take you to meet her one day."
>His face goes from horror to amazed in a matter of seconds.
>Then they both ask the same question in unison, "You knerw a dragon?"
"But that," you tell them as you take the armor and return it to its place, "is a story for another day. And I think you two are finally starting to believe me!"
>Spike looks at Twilight and nods his head.
>Twilight on the other hand, glares at you with a question on her mind.
>"If all of this is true," she asks doubt entering her voive, "then were is the spell that was cast on you? It obviously has to still be around so it can be removed."
>Prepared for her asking this question, you had a response pre-loaded.
"Well Twilight," you say lowering your gaze to the floor, "I know you are probably going to hate me for what I am about to tell you."
>"What do you mean?"
"About nine hundred and eighty five years ago," you say making eye contact, "Starswirl asked me to do destroy that spell and all notes involving it."
>As she gasps at the knowledge you destroyed something she could learn, you continue.
"He asked me to so it would not be the last thing he would be remembered by. And if you don't believe that, Celestia can confirm that I completed my task all of those
years ago."

Nexus !FzHC.Nexus

Nexus !FzHC.Nexus Wed 21 Oct 2015 01:25:58 No.25160199 Report Delete

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>>25160190
>Twilight sat there half angry and half shocked that Starswirl would ask anyone to do that, but the truth is the truth no matter how much it hurts.
>Spike has fully closed the chest and has made his way back to his sitting position next to Twlight.
>"If I can ask," he almost whispers and you nod, "what kept you from leaving over the years?"
>You laugh, and motion to the moon with your thumb.
"Because I know she will come back," you state proudly, "and when she does everything will go back to normal. Now, we have a long day ahead of us tomorrow so off to bed with you two!"
>They let out an unsatisfied 'aw' instantly following your sentence, but get up to go.
>You put the cushions they used as chairs back on the bed, but as you put Luna's chair back you stop and open the top drawer of the desk.
>Inside, you see the scrolls you promised to burn all those years ago.
"I'm sorry I failed you old friend," you say as you close the drawer and look down in shame.
>With your happy mood killed from the drawers contents, you make your way back to the queen size bed and fall quickly to sleep.

Nexus !FzHC.Nexus

Nexus !FzHC.Nexus Wed 21 Oct 2015 01:27:55 No.25160221 Report Delete

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>>25160199
and on dubs I am back to lurk mode.

>>25139398
And you! You are killing all of us with the cliffhangers!

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 03:00:30 No.25161205 Report Delete

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>>25160199
>>25160221
So the scrolls were just for immortality?

If he is already immortal why would keep the scrolls.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 03:39:38 No.25161526 Report Delete

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>>25160199
a suggestion: anon is sounding pretty Gary Stu. i wouldn't write anon so perfect and planned. tho if he did plan everything out cause, you know, 1000 years old and all, shouldn't sound quite so desperate to show of his clever plan.

Fapman !!q/8pd+yX2Hn

Fapman !!q/8pd+yX2Hn Wed 21 Oct 2015 06:56:02 No.25162335 Report Delete

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>>25160199
I like it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 10:01:49 No.25163024 Report Delete

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>>25161526
I got the feeling even if gary stu, he coming Nightmare wont be pretty

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 11:34:21 No.25163495 Report Delete

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>>25139398
Still waiting.

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Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 11:44:27 No.25163584 Report Delete

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>>25161205
Why wouldn't he?

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Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 11:50:38 No.25163623 Report Delete

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>>25163584
Risk, that very spell could be his undoing. If its able to be reversed then someone could use it against him.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 12:10:48 No.25163765 Report Delete

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>>25163623
And if he disposed of it someone else could use it.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 12:33:34 No.25163936 Report Delete

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>>25163765
How would they use a spell that doesn't exist?

Nexus !FzHC.Nexus

Nexus !FzHC.Nexus Wed 21 Oct 2015 14:44:29 No.25164908 Report Delete

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wow I got some explaining to do now

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Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 15:40:47 No.25165400 Report Delete

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>>25164908
Well I supposed you were going to explain that anyway

Nexus !FzHC.Nexus

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>>25165400
checked, and yes yes i was

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Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 21:14:40 No.25169673 Report Delete

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Good night, keep it alive, people.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 22:50:18 No.25171111 Report Delete

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Bump

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>>25171111
Good nighs, Anon.
Also, nice dubs.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 00:51:13 No.25172691 Report Delete

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>>25171453
yeah, his dubs go all the way up to 11

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Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 02:25:11 No.25173537 Report Delete

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>>25171111
quads

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Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 09:51:59 No.25175473 Report Delete

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Must save filed marriages

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Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 11:42:47 No.25176099 Report Delete

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>>25174395
celestia pls

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bump

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Bampers

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Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 20:37:18 No.25181426 Report Delete

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>>25177481
Celestia gave a sick burn there

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Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2015 03:12:01 No.25185412 Report Delete

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>last post 3 hours ago
Where my bamppers at

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2015 05:06:03 No.25185977 Report Delete

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>>25185412
Sorry I got sleep, and now I go back to that again

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2015 09:20:38 No.25186961 Report Delete

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bump

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Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2015 09:41:06 No.25187057 Report Delete

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My dick is still hard, it's waiting for Loki's next post.

Anonymous

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>>25187057
>If you have an erection that lasts more than four hours, seek medical attention.
At this point, you might as well hit up the Guinness Book of World Records.

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Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2015 13:43:39 No.25188703 Report Delete

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And here I am, Still waiting for Without to update

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Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2015 15:32:44 No.25189714 Report Delete

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>>25188703
This.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2015 16:39:58 No.25190612 Report Delete

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bump for litiriy any content.

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Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2015 17:34:53 No.25191369 Report Delete

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I waiting for a nexus update as well

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Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2015 20:42:02 No.25193457 Report Delete

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>>25189714
idk why but this picture always pisses me off. Its weird cause Celestia is my waifu too.

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 00:07:59 No.25195854 Report Delete

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>>25194650
calm down!

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 02:05:29 No.25196955 Report Delete

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G'night y'all. Stay based, keep it alive

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 05:49:17 No.25198376 Report Delete

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Welp, going to sleep, for realzies this time.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 11:54:01 No.25200799 Report Delete

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Without, Fifen, pls.

I need more evil Twiggles suffering.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 12:18:55 No.25201611 Report Delete

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>>25200799
>>25189714
>>25188703
Come back guys, we need your green

Anonymous

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>>25201611

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 14:05:34 No.25203246 Report Delete

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>>25200799
>evil Twiggles
No
>Twiggles suffering
Yes.

Anonymous

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 14:44:42 No.25203691 Report Delete

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I wish we had a new adulterous Twilight story, maybe some crazy combination of Fife's and Without's stories.
Where Anon would be less "muh soldier" and doesn't start new relationships even before divorce.
Where Twilight actually loves Anon but her lust, carelessness from her new royal status and curiosity pushes her to cheating with Flash without any feelings for last one. Where there's more of her POV where she trying to fix the damage.
Where Flash maybe wants to be prince and trying to seduce Twi and kill Anon.
Where Luna/Dash slowly helps Anon and only then starts to make relationships with him.
Where pones treat Anon like a person and not some kind of monster.

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 14:50:52 No.25203777 Report Delete

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>>25203691
Have you read Loki's adulterous Twi story? It seems to fit your criterion for a story, apart from Flash wanting to be prince or being from Twi's POV.

Anonymous

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Bump

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 15:12:14 No.25204071 Report Delete

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>>25203777
Nah, I don't like all this politics.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 16:13:39 No.25204913 Report Delete

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bomp

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 17:31:28 No.25205962 Report Delete

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>>25204913

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 18:33:49 No.25206866 Report Delete

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All these problems, no greentext

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LokiLorien !0hx39rQsqI Sat 24 Oct 2015 19:11:12 No.25207417 Report Delete

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>>25187057
Apologies, friendo. It's the week before mid-terms and my first Moot, so I've had very little time with all the work preparing for all this stuff.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:17:23 No.25208322 Report Delete

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>>25203691
I'm having a hard time differentiating your wants from the 2 stories you described. they both cover pretty much all that already.

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>>25207417
>My first Moot
Make sure he doesn't cuck you, Loki.

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 22:37:45 No.25210137 Report Delete

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>>25209614
Sorry guys, I was merely pretending to be retarded this will not happen again.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 01:56:09 No.25212573 Report Delete

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>>25207417
What type of moot is it?, Is it just an extra curricula comp or is it assessment?

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 02:35:47 No.25213059 Report Delete

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Good night, people. Stay based.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 04:05:27 No.25213910 Report Delete

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>>25213059
I will bump it for you

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 05:16:05 No.25214354 Report Delete

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>>25208322
But both their writefags don't know what to do with their stories, and because of that they are (almost?) kill. Also it would be really amazing to see this in one story, plus with fixing of writing problems of Fife and Without.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 08:27:11 No.25215306 Report Delete

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Bump

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 11:36:11 No.25216582 Report Delete

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>>25215306
That makes me happy in Without's story point of view

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 12:58:08 No.25217315 Report Delete

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>>25214354
What writing problems?

Based on the criterion you've outlined you want:
>An Anon with no character;
>A Twilight which is identical to the Twilight in both of the stories (I honestly don't see a difference, Twilight seems to 'actually love Anon' in both cases but have been lusty and careless, and is trying to fix the damage);
>Flash to want to be Prince, and try to kill Anon. (Happens in both stories.);
>Luna/Dash slowly help Anon and only then starts to make a relationship with him. (Luna and Anon was a little quick, which is intrinsic to their character arcs, but Dash and Anonymous are not in a relationship.);
>Pones treat Anon like a person (Don't they do that in both stories, apart from Flash and his allies whichever ones those happen to be? Why would Flash's allies treat Anon like anything but garbage?)

I don't really get how what you want is any different, apart from you don't like Anon having any character, or for the characters to have any flaws. You want a cast of bland, featureless mary sues to fill both stories. 'Muh soldier' is sort of intrinsic to his identity in Fife's, and one of his greatest strengths and weaknesses at the same time, and for Without's his rushing into situations without thinking things through seems to be core to the character, and a key part of what he's trying to overcome.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 13:28:41 No.25217629 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>25218137 >>25218485

>>25217315
>What writing problems?
For example Fife's story. He made a lot of plotlines which was pointless because he killed Anon after all(and tried to do this several times(!)).

>>An Anon with no character;
If a character has only one feature and nothing else - it's not a good character.
>I honestly don't see a difference
In Without's story she's in love with Flash tho.
>Flash to want to be Prince, and try to kill Anon. (Happens in both stories.);
It's optional.
>Luna and Anon was a little quick
>little quick
It's like they started dating several days after Anon found out Twi's secret.
>Pones treat Anon like a person
In Without's story almost everyone thinks Anon is a monster. In Fife's Celly and Shining didn't like Anon because he's an alien and "too dangerous".

>I don't really get how what you want is any different, apart from you don't like Anon having any character, or for the characters to have any flaws. You want a cast of bland, featureless mary sues to fill both stories.
Yep, you truly didn't really get it.

Also, bump.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 14:08:41 No.25218081 Report Delete

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Bumping from the cinema.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 14:14:25 No.25218137 Report Delete

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>>25217629
>For example Fife's story.
Fair enough, it was a little odd. I'm holding out hope that those plot-points may come up again in some way in his earth-life, assuming he returns from the grave, but we'll see.

>If a character has only one feature and nothing else - it's not a good character.
Those character features touch a number of their other portions of their identity, but they are the central flaw underpinning the plot; they're not the entirety of their character, but they're the most important part for the sake of the story.

>In Without's story she's in love with Flash tho.
She was, emphasis on the past tense, in love with Flash, unless I've missed something that seems quite definitely over at this point as she's made a choice, just she made that choice too late.

>It's like they started dating several days after Anon found out Twi's secret.
I recognize that it's morally wrong that Anonymous jumped into a new relationship so quickly, essentially 'rebounding' as it were. But why is this bad for the plot? It seems like something a lot of people do in real life when they feel hurt and betrayed in that way, and is the root for more problems.

>In Without's story almost everyone thinks Anon is a monster. In Fife's Celly and Shining didn't like Anon because he's an alien and "too dangerous".
The Apple Clan certainly doesn't think Anon's a monster in Without's, and in fact if I recall correctly all of the Mane 6 turned on Twi to side with Anon on what happened. In Fife's, yes, Celestia and Shining disliked Anonymous; peoples' in-laws (A qualifier which roughly fits Cel) quite often dislike them, nor do their partner's exes. But the regular city-folk seemed by and large indifferent.

>Yep, you truly didn't really get it.
Apologies.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 14:15:29 No.25218149 Report Delete

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>>25214354
I sorta agree here. I wasn't like prepared to wait out months for a trickle of a storyline. At first i was strangely obsessed with withoutaname's story, but now i couldn't really care less. Its gone on for so long and I realized it just isn't my thing. The entire story seems so drawn out over so long that I can't follow it anymore. My prediction is that flash dies and twilight commits seppuku and then anon regrets it and fucks luna cause she's now best pony and blah blah blah I'm bored of this shit 3 months after starting it. Its not a song of ice and fire. I'm not going to wait a year to hear a story this short be finished. I'm surprised this general is still around as it is. It'd be easier to name it "cuck general", at least you'd have a bigger base of people.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 14:46:01 No.25218485 Report Delete

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>>25217629
He killed Anon after making plotlines to prove a point that some writers don't do. You can create branching arcs that will never have answers, because of premature death.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 16:17:39 No.25219467 Report Delete

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>>25218081
save bump

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Drunk waiting on food to be done in the oven bump

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 19:13:04 No.25221584 Report Delete

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>210 posts
>only 17 of them are green

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LokiLorien !0hx39rQsqI Sun 25 Oct 2015 20:58:46 No.25222953 Report Delete

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>>25212573
It's extracurricular, but as I'm planning to work for the Crown once I'm practicing it's pretty important that I have good oral advocacy credentials which are typically evidenced by engaging in mooting activities.

Gotta build up that CV, The Ministry is apparently pretty exclusive about hiring. And I'd hate to not get to wear that bitchin' robe Crowns get to wear all the time.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 21:01:36 No.25222989 Report Delete

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>>25218149
You can always leave anon.

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>>25222953
Those robes look pretty good.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 23:34:30 No.25224780 Report Delete

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>>25218149
>. At first i was strangely obsessed with withoutaname's story, but now i couldn't really care less. Its gone on for so long and I realized it just isn't my thing. The entire story seems so drawn out over so long that I can't follow it anymore.
> I'm bored of this shit 3 months after starting it. Its not a song of ice and fire. I'm not going to wait a year to hear a story this short be finished.
This. That's why we need a new writefag.

Anonymous

Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 23:39:16 No.25224833 Report Delete

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>>25218149
Wow Anon, you just put into writing exactly the way I'm feeling right now.

I think I'll do an archive search in a year, maybe the story will be finished by then...

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>>25224780
>>25224833

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Anonymous Mon 26 Oct 2015 00:26:20 No.25225384 Report Delete

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>>25224780
Joking aside, yes, we need another writefag.
Also, can someone find BNW, he said he had something for us in the previous thread.

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Anonymous Mon 26 Oct 2015 01:22:10 No.25225934 Report Delete

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Man, people on Gamefaqs are so fucking retarded.

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Anonymous Mon 26 Oct 2015 06:16:26 No.25226719 Report Delete

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>>25222953
>>25222953

>It's extracurricular, but as I'm planning to work for the Crown

You are a braver man than I am, Crown law is brutal still If you ever become a judge I will relish looking back on your delicious greens as you churn out dry judgments.

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Anonymous Mon 26 Oct 2015 08:31:56 No.25227257 Report Delete

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>>25203691
I think Anon can be 'muh soldier' only if it pushes the story forward. In Fife's it worked. Not perfectly but it worked.

Twilight cheating for anything but manic curiousity is already out of character. Lust isn't her thing. She's already OOC in that regard in the first place; I still love her going off the deep end for the sake of the 'relationship'

Flash is obvious villain and is obvious. What if Flash were on Anon's side? Be a guard, and get pulled into this fling because your earth-self flirted with her while she was desperate in a new environment? Get reassigned by Prince armor or somepony else who orders you to fuck twilight; you disobey, sister fucks you anyways.

Anon's a FUCKING ALIEN. Can't expect much better.

Most importantly, not in these stories, but in most, Anon is too forgiving. In Without's it's better, but isn't it reeeeealy Gary Stu to have attempted to forgive/live with/ be around cheating wife in the first place? I mean, what if he got violently defensive if ever around her when the trust is broken?

What if Pinkie Pie detected his wife's lust for another and told him before he even caught her?

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>>25139361

> You are Twilight Sparkle.
> Your head hurts..
> Your back hurts..
> Your wings hurt..
> By Celestia, everything hurts..
> But you'll keep going to buy Cadence time to free Anonymous.
> Pushing your hooves to the floor, your achy body rises as you continue to take in deep breaths of air.
> 'He doesn't love you anymore, you know that right?.. He avoids the very thought of you..' the bass in his voice grips your heart as your head rises.
> You stare straight ahead, where he stood only moments ago, now peering into nothingness.
> 'I think you do.. But you can't accept it.'
His voice comes from just beside you echoing slightly.
> 'Because if you had to accept it.. It would mean that you failed. Not only as a wife, but as a Princess as well. What would the ponies think?... Your friends?
.. Celestia?.. All the nonsense you represent, everything that everypony believes you to be, gone..' it feels as if a rusty knife twists in your heart.
"That's enough!" You turn to the direction of the voice while your horn illuminates, shooting off a weak beam in it's direction.
> You hit nothing as it fades into darkness.
> Your horn dims as frustration grows in you.
> 'And your parents?.. What would they say?.. How ashamed they must be to have raised such a selfish little~' the voice that came from behind you is cut off by your about face and scream.
" I said that's enough! " You rise with a few flaps of your wings firing another weakly charged shot in the direction of the voice, once more hitting nothing.
> Your breathing becomes more erratic as you scan the area frantically and wide eyed.

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>>25230281

> 'You were so accustomed to having such absolute control over everything and everypony. Always with a plan. Always with your little friends to follow your orders.. Everything to go your way all the time. And then you made your mistakes.. your choices with Flash... Now you're not in control anymore... Now you're the bad one in all of this. And it's driving you mad. This has little to do with Anonymous, and more to do with you saving face.. Saving your grip on control.. It's clear as day..' The voice explained with slow intentional pacing.
> You continue to look around trying to locate a source as it speaks.
> His words were maddening as you searched.
> They weren't true.
> They couldn't be...
"You're wrong!" Is all you're able to muster.
> 'Heh.. of course. That's why you are here fighting with me. To give your poor Anonymous a chance to escape with Princess Cadence. Like a good little filly trying to make things right.' It responds sounding humored.
> You lower down to your hooves trying to mask your look of shock while the chilling realization settled.
> He knew what you were trying to do..
> You turn your head to Cadence and Anonymous some distance away.
> 'Oh? You really think I didn't know?.. How adorably naive!' He chuckles lightly.
> 'Would you like to know what they're talking about? ' He begins to take a vague smokey form beside you facing them as well.
> You don't answer as your eyes remained fixed on Anonymous.
> 'Well I'll let you know anyway... He just told Cadence that Luna must be worried sick about him..' His smile remains as he watches you fight your devastation.
> Your lungs forget how to take breath for a moment as your eyes begin to sting and well.
> 'That's right Twilight.. Luna..'
"B-But..." Your mouth moves, wanting to speak.
> Wanting to say anything at all.
> But the weight behind the crushing statement robbed you of the ability to.
> You were here risking your life fighting with... A ghost? A demon?..

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>>25230367

> And he was worried about Luna?..
> 'So who's protecting who, young Alicorn. Are you protecting him from me?... Hmm I wonder..' the sharp tooth grin crosses it's faint features.
> A feeling of isolation, of complete solitude begins to invade you as your desperate stare remains on Anonymous.
> A chill takes you at the thought of not being able to change his mind.
> A cold slap of reality, that you truly may have lost him.
*****
> You are Anon.
> Your brow furrows as faint familiar voices enter your ears.
> "We will help you Spike.."
> "Thanks Luna!" The unmistakable voices of Spike and Luna clearly rings.
> Spike!
> He must be trying to help Luna get you guys out too.
> Your heart aches knowing what's awaits you when you wake.
> More pain..
> More disappointment..
> "Anon?" Cadence's concerned voice snaps you out of your thoughts.
"Huh?.. Oh.." You notice she glances back once more.
> She has to have noticed by now.
> There's no way she didn't..
> She probably thinks you're some type of monster too..
> Saying what needs to be said to escape.
> Your hand rubs your sore chest uncomfortably.
"Listen, Cadence.. I've been having some real trouble understanding this. With what's happening to me and all.. It's not my doing." Her attention fixes back on you as you clumsily trip over your words trying to find some kind of explanation.
"I guess what I'm trying to say is... I guess.. Try to have some understanding.. Some ~" A nauseating pull from your core halts your words.
> You stagger slightly trying to keep your balance as you feel the world around you spin.
> "Anon?!" Cadence offers a hoof to balance you.
> 'It seems our time here is being rudely interrupted. Before they try to get in your head.. Before they turn on you.. Remember our words. They will hurt you. They will hurt us.. They will fear what they don't understand. And understand us, they will not.' He speaks with a sence of finality, a sence of pleading.

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>>25230396

> No smugness, or humor that usually accompanied his tone.
> For some reason, it made you believe him to a point..
> In your clouded mind, you still knew he was right.
*****
> You are Luna.
> You have not a clue what the tiny dragon is doing, but if the efforts are to help your dear Anonymous, you'll help.
> "I uh... I guess.. let's get the thing between them?. Ya let's do that!" His obvious doubt makes your expression involuntarily drop.
"Are you quite sure that is how this works?.." You do your best not to sound too doubtful.
> "Doesn't hurt to try!" His motivation picks up as he tries to wedge the crystal shield between your love and the brat.
> You can't help but to glance back to Celestia and Shining in disbelief of this plan.
> Shining watches curiously as his two Crystal Empire Guards watch with a determination and belief in their own home town hero.
> Celestia simply nods to you calmly.
> With a quiet sigh and stare to the floor, you raise your foreleg to help Spike wedge the shield between them.
> With a few wiggles and repositioning, it begins to slide between them.
"What are we supposed to be looking~"
> Your words become caught in your throat as the shield flashes light blue and maintains its own aura.
> "Woah!" Spike falls back.
> By the stars is it working?!
> A slight groan comes from Anonymous as his brow furrows.
> It has to be working!
"Anonymous!" You accidentally yell desperately and wide eyed, scanning him for further response.
> "Cadence! Hun?!" The sound of Shining's emotional outburst turns your head in their direction.
> You notice she turns her head into his chest a little as well with a grimace.
> When you turn back you notice Celestia took to Spikes side scanning Twilight with worried eyes.
> "Twi? C'mon! Wake up!" Spike pleads.
> You notice a tear or two spill from her closed eyes, adding to her already unkempt appearance.

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>>25230513

> You start to become impatient, expecting them to wake up, or at least give some sort of indication sooner.
> Drawing a long inhale you make up your own mind.
"We are going to try something. The spell should have weakened enough!" You speak loudly and sternly to be heard over the humming tone of the shield that still produced it's own aura.
> "Sister! Do not rush into what you do not understand!" Celestia tries to warn you.
"We understand that he needs help! That is all we need to know!" Your expression says you're determined to do it anyway.
> Celestia turns back to Twilight with a sence of defeat, knowing she will proceed regardless of her opinion.
"Ok Anonymous, come back to us.." Your horn illuminates a deep midnight hue as you focus on him once more.
> Finding what you focused on to teleport him from the burning barn, and to your room, you try once more enveloping him in your aura
> You use the spell gritting your teeth slightly as the aura pulses slightly.
> "Unng.." is heard from him as his back arced away from Twilight a little.
> Though he failed to teleport, he did move!
> An excited exhale leaves you noticing this.
> Oh stars! It's working!
> You try once more.
> Another grunt leaves him as a space opens between them.
> "You can do it Luna!" The unexpected cheer from the small dragon encourages you.
> Emboldened by his cheer you give it one final effort.
> Your jaw muscles clench your teeth tightly as you concentrate.
> The aura around him contracts tightly around him before~
> SNAP
> A few gasps from the room enter your ears.

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>>25230573
A-another cliffhanger? Muh heart cannot take it anymore, mighty writefag

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>>25230573

> Followed by a loud clank of a crystal shield falling from the bed.
> It had nothing to hold it up as Anonymous was no longer there to support it.
> He now laid on the floor at the foot of the bed, face down.
> You couldn't hear or see anything else besides for him, even though a commotion was occurring on both sides of you.
> Scampering like a filly to his side you drop to the floor next to him.
"Anonymous? Dear?.." you say with a sence of both excitement and fear, placing a foreleg around him attempting to turn him in your direction gently.
> It already felt better that you were able to touch him now, though you were having trouble moving his deadweight.
> He was still very out of it.
> A small pat from little green feet jumping from the bed distracts your efforts.
> Spike stands at the corner of the bed holding a pillow from it.
> "Why are you calling him dear?" He approaches you with the pillow.
"Well.. uh.. um." You're not ready for this.
> "Here, let me help!" He puts the pillow under Anon's head with care.
> "I have a little experience with this." He grunts as he begins to roll him from his stomach to his side.
"Experience?.."
> "Yup!.. It's called guys night out, heh." He seems to be holding a nostalgic smile, forcing the weight of the severity of the situation away.
> "Every now and then. He tries to keep up with Big Mac. Well, tries to anyway." He fixes his pillow keeping Anonymous on his side facing you.
> Spike stands beside you facing Anonymous with a small smile.
> Placing a small clawed hand atop his head he speaks to you while facing him.
> "I knew you could do it Luna! I don't know what me and Twi would have done if we lost him" he turns to you with a warm genuine smile.
> It feels like it's breaking your heart.
> As much as you didn't care for Twilight, you could clearly see how much Anonymous meant to Spike.
> As bold of a front this dragon put on, he truly was an innocent creature.

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Without_Aname !Zm/HdH8Fq2 Mon 26 Oct 2015 16:29:53 No.25230791 Report Delete

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>>25230662
>>25230672
Nao dassit. Sorry I'm losing people/people aren't enjoying it. I know my update rate sucks. I'm doing what I can when I can.

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Good update, Without, as always. Keep it up, fagget

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Anonymous Mon 26 Oct 2015 17:50:50 No.25231627 Report Delete

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>>25230791
Thanks brotato.
Gotta say though, you've got a bad habit of just showing up, dropping green, and disappearing without a word.

Speaking of niggas MIA, where the fuck is Fife and AMP?

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Without_Aname !Zm/HdH8Fq2 Mon 26 Oct 2015 17:57:55 No.25231682 Report Delete

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>>25231084

Thanks friend. I'll keep trying.

>>25231627
I don't mean to. If I had more time to post it would be with updates. I try to pop on with a quick lurk daily. I'll try to let that be known more if you want. Weekends are tough for me because significant other is always around.

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>>25231682
Nah, you ain't gotta do all that. I'm just saying it's just a bit disorienting, you know? Like when a friend you haven't seen in a couple months shows up unannounced on a weekend off with several two-foot hoagies and two cases of your favorite beer, you both binge on Top Gear and Parts Unknown for the weekend, and he leaves for an unspecified amount of time with a simple "later, bro".

I gotta stop doing that shit to my friends.

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Uh, oh.

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>>25230791
Woohoo having a rough day and jump on to see Without posted.
Not that bad a day afterall.
So we finally moving out of the dream part and into the scenes where we see Spikes world shatter cause of Twi and execute Flash for treason?

Anonymous

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>>25230791
Honestly, at this point I'd rather the thread just die and pop up once a month or so for large dumps, cause these short sporadic updates are pretty much killing my interest in the stories.

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>>25230791
>I'm losing people/people aren't enjoying it
Trust me, we still enjoy your green, Without. It's always good to see your work after shitty day.

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>>25230791
Good update, still cant wait to see everyone's reaction to sombra

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Good night, people, stay based.

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>>25233503
uh... then most people would never find it tho. i know i would miss them.

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Anonymous Tue 27 Oct 2015 04:51:12 No.25238217 Report Delete

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>>25237602
HA
I actually like that show though.
A few of the seasons were a bit shit because they were trying to go for a lighthearted tone but that came off as cringy as fuck. I'm glad they got more serious.

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>>25238217
Didn't the ghost hunter people get in a shootout in Arizona or something?

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>>25238362
Ghost Adventures did go to Tombstone, Arizona and reenact a shootout as part of the shot for tourists.
I live 2 hours from Tombstone and they do cool stuff like that on a daily basis.

Anonymous

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>>25238369
>as part of a shot
show*
I hate touchscreen keyboards.

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>>25230396
>> A cold slap of reality, that you truly may have lost him.
Jealous Twi is best Twi.

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>>25240837
> A cold slap of reality, that you truly may have lost him.
She took this fucking long to realize that.

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>>25240837
>>25241433
I hope she won't be just like: Oh welp, I've lost Anon. It's time to find new bf.

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>>25241951
Why not? Anon did

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>>25230791
wellyou keep udating atleast. but you should update once a mounthwith a huge one rather than small (well done but could use a bit more work) a week or so

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>>25243637
broken keyboard and on another note i got the feeling twi is becoming something "discorded" Pic related

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>>25243661
If Twi's getting discorded, then where's Chrysalis in all this?

>>25230672
>>25230791
I just hope that NMM and Sombra aren't a coordinated effort. That would be SO corny. Coincidental villains who see each other as threats and wouldn't touch each other- accidentally helping each other is kinda cool.

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Anonymous Tue 27 Oct 2015 22:20:09 No.25246038 Report Delete

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>>25241951
>"Oh Flaaaaaash..."

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Anonymous Tue 27 Oct 2015 23:20:49 No.25246742 Report Delete

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Good night, my lovely faggets. Stay based.

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Anonymous Tue 27 Oct 2015 23:23:33 No.25246776 Report Delete

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>>25243531
>Anon did
And I goddamn hate it.

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Bump b4 bed. 4 real this time.

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>>25246776
You see the problem was that the comfort from luna was alright. but when it dived into romance territory, it got me all kinds of awkward.

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 01:39:06 No.25248225 Report Delete

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so this thread is still alive

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Undead, just in time for Halloween!

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Why am I so addicted to heartache? I've read maybe 3-4 twi stories back to back now.

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 15:12:55 No.25252464 Report Delete

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>>25246038
>in the midst of flash pounding her now-single ass, twilight made a follow-up realization
>she can fuck Flash all she wants now
>there's nothing wrong with it
>nothing taboo
>she promptly teleports him outside without even waiting for him to pull out
>leaning out the window
"don't come here anymore"
>without the excitement of cheating, it just wasn't interesting to her
>twilight pondered what she could do to get her off now?
>cucking her husband was her go-to thing
"i know!"
"spiiiiike, get your underage butt over here"

why did i do this?

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 15:37:35 No.25252673 Report Delete

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>>25252464
>why did i do this?
I don't know m8, but that was fun.

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 18:58:00 No.25254820 Report Delete

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twi as wanton deviant

>>25252464
>spike wouldn't have any of it
"damnit, what will I do now?"
>goin out every evening to find a new one night stand doesn't work. pones are too sexually liberated for that to be taboo
>twi tries to seduce a few of the married stallions in town but finding one that will cheat is almost unheard of
>getting desperate to get off, she spends every day looking for a new husband she can cuck
>but word got around, and no stallions will have her
>despite her royal standing and promises of wealth, exciting and easy living and alicorn poon
>finds "The Big Book Of Fetishes" in the library, but nothing written in it is taboo either
>well, almost anything
>only taboo fetish in the book is scat
>but no-one in ponyville is that fucked
>has to go to germaneigh, home of the poop fetish, to find a stallion to partake
>finally cums
>but she quickly finds out they're all perverts there so it isn't taboo either
>comes home smelling funny and working on another case of blueclit

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 20:43:55 No.25255980 Report Delete

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>>25254820
I could get used to this funny shorts.

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 21:58:11 No.25256668 Report Delete

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>>25255980
well i'm happy to hear that, cause i thought the second one kinda lost the plot no pun intended

>a few weeks later, salvation literally showed up on her doorstep
>long before she met anon, before she was a princess, she had secret slam buddy
>a member of Equestria's greatest enemy
>a changeling
>no-one even knew about changelings yet since they hadn't attacked canterlot
>but purplesmart figured it out
>oddly it wasn't the idea of having a sexual partner who could look like anyone
>no, she wanted to fuck the changeling as himself
>not only harbouring the enemy but giving it a shag
>oh treason got her off even more than simple taboo
>but then they attacked, and were blown away
>twilight spend a hellish few months desperate for release
>it was in this time that she met anon
>fucking an unknown creature from another world wasn't quite as hot as an enemy of the state, but it was good enough
>his proposal came just in time
>pones had gotten used to anon and learned to like him
>they were no longer weirded out by him
>so the attraction was fast disappearing
>she actually started to turn down the proposal
>the idea of cheating on him came just in time
>she could still backpedal out of it
>cheating, even with just a coltfriend, was an abhorrent idea to virtually all pones
"yes, this will do nicely" she thought

>but those days were long past now
>her post-anon salvation came in the form of her old changeling pet stumbling back into ponyville
>things were actually pretty good for several months
>she'd get her rocks off once a week, then her secret fucktoy would slink back into the everfree
>but alas, once again her bean was living on borrowed time
>because this wasn't the only changeling that had come back
>turns out canterlot saw a number return, openly, to ask for forgiveness and help
>pones being terribly nice creatures, agreed
>granted they're skittish creatures too, so it took a while

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>>25256668
The Misadventures of Taboo Twilight

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>>25256668
>when twilight saw an open changeling at the Donkey's wedding she had a moment of panic
>thought her stupid little love slave had developed feelings for her, and followed her to canterlot
>and in his love-starved she only just managed to keep him alive by concentrating on how she loved how he made her feel, she didn't actually love him stupor forgot a disguise
>how was she supposed to know it wasn't hers? they all look the same
>once things were cleared up, and she heard they were now accepted, she deflated immediately
>that wasn't gonna get her off no more

sorry, that turned more sad and mean than funny :|

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>>25256723
Her suffering is funny.

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Good nights, thread, stay alive.

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>>25256723
>being one of the most gifted pones ever to live, twilight decided to study her own behaviour, find out what was causing this destructive need, and address it
>except she is also a fucking moron, so instead she took the most obvious route of looking to replicate the conditions of her last bean party
>thankfully for her, relations with the diamond dogs were still strained
>they weren't nearly as evil an enemy as the changelings had been, but still enough that she figured taking some doggy D may be good for a maregasm
>unfortunately for her, the pack that had been near ponyville had worked that mine dry and moved on
>even more unfortunately, the long walk back from their new home was especially hard with a sore rear end
>turns out diamond dogs have pretty rough sex
>and that knot fucking hurt
>she wondered if Rarity had lied or was just a massive, stretched out sub
>to add insult to injury, she now had an extra bad case of bluebean
>she had been SO close to cuming when that knot got pounded in and put a prompt end to that idea
>all those stories she had read that talked about "pain and pleasure" were written by inexperienced basement dwellers, she decided
>she would remove all of those from the library as soon as she got back to her castle
>she considered writing her own, accurate, clopfic based on her experience
>but last time she distributed one of her works to other libraries, several of them were burned down in the ensuing cleanse

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>>25257128
stayin'

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>>25258485
>a couple weeks later she couldn't take it anymore
>made another attempt with her backup plan, the griffins
>political tensions were running high with the griffins threatening to annex some land along the border
>she really had to work hard to actually get a griffin interested though
>they just weren't randy like dogs
>when she finally got one going, she was relieved to find no knot
"all this pent up hormones must be affecting my cognitive norm, i should have researched pone/-nonpone penile compatibility before I left" she thought
>actually finds catbird cock kinda small, but that's fine with her
>still kinda sore from the dog anyway
>everything going good, getting a good (if noise) pounding from this almost-enemy
>yeah, this is good. almost there!
>griffin cums... and the claws come out
"YEEEEEOUCH!!"
>horsepussy ok this time, but her back not so much
>6 nice long scratches starting to ooze blood
"oh dear"
*thunk*
>purple smart may be ok with just about any weird fetish the equestria and beyond
>but she don't do so well with blood
>has to stay in griffonia for a week while the scratches heal enough that they aren't visible through her thin fur anymore
>she may love fucking the enemy but doesn't want to trigger a war
>and she can't admit how it happened because she's already on the edge of being ostracised in equestria due to her cuckoldry
>thinks when she's done dealing up she'll give it another try, just making sure her partner has his talons wrapped first
>but 2 days in she gets word that her friends and the princesses are worried about where she's disappeared to
"fuck"
>has to send a message to cover her ass
>says she went to griffonia to attempt diplomatic relations
>Celestia is relieved and proud of Twilight for taking on this princessy role
"ugh, if she only knew"
>unintentionally, this spurs on new talks between the capitols and relations quickly improve
>so much so that by the time she's healed, the griffins have been taken off the enemy list

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>>25260127
Twilight, uniting the world through her taboo fetish.
These are fun, m8.

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BumpING

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 08:00:13 No.25261032 Report Delete

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Gas twilight, sparkle war now

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>>25260849
thos

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WHOOOOOOOO!?

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>>25261032
Bad joke, tbh

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>>25260849
bumpenandinando

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>>25260127
>twilight was running short on ideas
>she had taken a second trip through the book o fetishes and tried a few of the more extreme ones
>none really worked.
>diapers... nah, she'd already tried shit once, and some things were just too gross to be sexy
>vore... only creature that could pull that off were the dragons, but they weren't about to eat an alicorn
>they may be the biggest, most fearsome creatures there are, but they knew not to risk the wrath of the sun and moon goddesses
>she tried pleading, but none were willing to take the risk
>besides which, was it really all that sexy if the creature eating her wasn't into it?
>there was one item twilight thought had promise: rape
>not to rape somepone, that would be horrible... but to be raped
>this was an odd one among pone kind
>at once about the most terrifying idea for a prey species, and yet, if a particular pone's mind were bent just the right way, incredibly alluring
>problem was... how do you get raped in equestria?
>no-one would do such a thing
>she tried anyway
>but given how recognizable she was, nopone would even send bedroom eyes her way
>she tried a disguise, but frankly nopone was buying it
>other species though... she new pones all looked the same to some creatures
>a hairdo that covered her horn and a casual saddle that covered her wings would work
>she thought better of trying diamond dogs again
>griffins could work though

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>>25103472
pastebin.com/6z5kcvTM
Why isn't this in the OP yet?

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>>25264339
It's reallly fun and sad toread this. Keep going, m8.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 20:14:10 No.25265886 Report Delete

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>>25263095
>Muh waifu

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>>25265886
It's a bad joke bacause of the play of words. And purpleshit isn't my waifu.

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>>25266220
Stop being Tsundere about your waifu

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>>25266617

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>Brony
>Disgusting
I am a horsefucker, lad.

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Good nights, faggots. Stay alive.

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Bump

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>>25264339
>their aggressive culture ought to mean rape wasn't out of the question, and she knew from her last excursion that they were down to have sex with a pone
>she'd just have to make sure her saddle had good coverage on her back
>and not to use one of the saddles from Rarity since she'd have to explain where it disappeared to
>confidant she wouldn't be gone for a week this time, twilight was able to just sneak off one evening for a quick flight to the border unannounced
>arriving in the large griffin city as the sun went down, she looked for the seediest area of town
"this is perfect!"
>a few bars and other entertainment venues lined the street
>a couple places boarded up, and several stores closed for the night
>and lots of dark, dead end alleyways
>twilight began walking, as daintily as she could, up and down the street
>she got one cat call from a rather intoxicated catbird on a patio but he didn't follow through
>after a half hour, finally a griffin approached her, threw a couple lines her way
>twilight may not have been a trained actress but she thought she played the part of timid, not-out-looking-for-D mare #1 well
>but once her character had indicated she wasn't accepting his advances, he wished her a good night and moved on
"...what just happened?"
>hours later, the last patron had been kicked out of the bar and stumbled off the block
>she was alone, and unraped
>a few others had approached her, including one ladybird (not her thing but she would take what she could get at this point) but the pattern was always the same
>sitting alone on the street going over the night's events in her head twilight finally realized the awful truth:
>when she triggered the recent peace with equestria, the magic of friendship had come with it
>griffins had, almost overnight, become a far kinder species
>not so much that rape was gonna disappear from their ranks, but nogrif was gonna risk the newfound, and so far profitable, peace by victimizing a pone
>foiled again

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>she was alone, and unraped
Kek'd

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bumpa

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 13:12:55 No.25272749 Report Delete

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>>25269922
running out of ideas here
loki, wan, ...fife? we need all three of ya. cause if this thread dies i suspect the chance of your stories continuing just in PB or AiE is slim. death of a thread almost always means death of the story.

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>>25272749
I just finished midterm week, so I can start writing again. I have a citation test on Monday, but that's a bit different to Crim, Torts & Constitutional law.

I'll see if I can't squeak out the lewds today.

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>>25272848
Oh, you fag.

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>>25272848
HYPE

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>>25272848

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MOAR

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good, cause u my fav writefag though i really like the others too. sorry but our relationship cannot be exclusive. i hope you are ok with that. signed, your readslut

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