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Anon, The Lone Lunch Eater

Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 18:06:09 No.25167179 View Reply Report Delete

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>Hey anon, you wanna come eat lunch with us?
>You just looked so lonely always eating alone... In the corner... Every single day.

Stories:
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Anon - http://pastebin.com/CMWvkPDT

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Anonymous Wed 21 Oct 2015 18:08:53 No.25167219 Report Delete

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>>25167179
Take it to Fingerbang

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>>25167219
Take it up with the authors when they post.

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>>25167179
Hoping Anon returns to continue his crazy mane 7 story

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This

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>>25168199
Same

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>Take it up with the authors if they post.
fixed

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>>25168199
Which one is that

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>>25170128
They invite him to eat with them, tells them everyone's scared of them and calls them freaks, mane 6 or 7 think he's a villain from equestria

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It sucks how the only Scilight thread is /nst/ and yet the shimmerfags are rampant.

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Anon-no-mouse Wed 21 Oct 2015 23:24:34 No.25171530 Report Delete

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>http://pastebin.com/spJpuWq3

>>25167179
>Be Twilight (born human).
>Shortly before Anon shows up at lunch.
>You received a call early this morning that Sunset needed your help with something and to meet her at the usual lunch table.
>And that's exactly what you did, but something was off. Only sunset had shown up.
"What's going on, Sunset? Where are the girls?"
>"Oh, right. I asked them to eat outside for lunch, I need you alone to help me with something."
"Is this a friendship thing, or a magic thing, or a friendship magic thing?"
>"Friendship, no magic. There's this guy named Anon, he's been alone with no friends for so long. We've been trying to help him, but I think he needs someone to relate to come out of his shell."
"You want me to be that person?"
>"Yes, you have first hand experience being without friends, as well as overcoming that. I think it would be beneficial if Anon met you personally."
"U-um alright, if it means helping someone who was like me before... THAT happened."
>"He'll be here any second now, be rea-Oh, hi Anon! I was just mentioning you..."

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Oh good, you're back!

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>>25171530
>Be Anon.
>The bell rings, signaling the end of the school day, as well as the school week. Not as bad as usual, but that encounter at lunch was a bit strange.
>Exiting through the schools front doors, you see now 7 girls, waiting by the statue.
>Well, let's get this over with.
"H-hello again."
>"Oh, hello Anonymous. I'm terribly sorry for us leaving you 3 alone at lunch." Rarity said.
"I-it's fine. Are you girls planning anything today?"
>"Actually Anon, we are each busy tonight, and our schedules don't meet up until Monday."
>So I'm free? They're just letting me go? YES.
"That's fine, I have plenty of things to keep me busy for the weekend."
>Or forever.
"Thanks for giving me the heads up. I guess I'll see you all on Monda-"
>"WAIT!"
>About to walk away, you turn back around to face them.
>Pinkie is pointing at her phone enthusiastically.
>"We all need to exchange info, Anon! We might free up some time during the weekend, if we're lucky."
>Lucky me.
"Alright, what info do you need, cell phone?"

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Anon-no-mouse Thu 22 Oct 2015 00:14:42 No.25172303 Report Delete

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>>25171947
>After giving the girls your cell phone, home phone, address, instant messaging username, as well as getting measured by Rarity, you headed home.
>Even when you're told you're off the hook, there's always something.
>Once again, your house is dark. Again, you opt to head straight for your bedroom.
>Pressing the power button to your PC, you sit at your desk.
>NOW you were home.
>You log in, then open the various usual applications and web pages you frequent. You've been jumping between boards lately, nothing catching your attention.
>*Bleep*
>1 new message from: 3Id PnVW
>It simply read 'Hey.'

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>>25172303
>3Id PnVW
Who?

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>>25172310
Maud

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Anon-no-mouse Thu 22 Oct 2015 00:24:32 No.25172421 Report Delete

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>>25172310
>>25172373
I know you're going to hate me for this but
>>25172303
Updated pastebin:
>http://pastebin.com/spJpuWq3

after this short break, I need to get back into the groove of writing more. I'll try to make the next bit longer.

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Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 00:25:36 No.25172436 Report Delete

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>>25172421
>realistically a one-post update
You're a cunt but I love you anyways

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Anon-no-mouse Thu 22 Oct 2015 00:29:22 No.25172480 Report Delete

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>>25172436
Yeah I feel like an ass for doing that, but I'd rather write better than churn out a massive pile of crap.

Also trying to write a big group of characters talking with each other in my greentext format is really jarring, so I'm making a future focus on groups of 2-3 more often.

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School Bump.

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Writefag summon

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Ackbar

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Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 22:47:28 No.25182896 Report Delete

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can a /b/rother get a lurk count?

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Anonymous Thu 22 Oct 2015 22:54:51 No.25182980 Report Delete

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Sound off!
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>>25182980
This was for you, btw.

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Red!

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Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2015 06:51:21 No.25186301 Report Delete

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Keep this thread alive so I can write again later

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Waiting for Anon

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Laugh

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after school bump

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>>25190062
>underage

>>25167179
bump

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>>25190232
college exists

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>>25168199
I'm back!

>The next morning, Rarity couldn't help but be nervous
>Twilight and Sunset skipped school to stay and the lab and listen to everything the wire picked up
>They also gave her a walkie talkie in case something went wrong
>As she went through her day, she noticed pretty much everyone was staring at her
>Students, teachers, and even Principal Celestia
>And no one said a word to her
>A little before lunch, she asked to use the restroom, and used it as an opportunity to get in touch with the girls back at the lab
>"Girls, this is getting scary, Anon's magic must be getting stronger. Everybody's staring at me, it's like they know I'm planning something. Do you think they know I'm wearing a wire?"
>*crackle* "No way, there's no way Anon could find out about that. But his plan must be closer to completion. You have to track him down, Rarity, we don't have much time!"
>"I know Twilight, but I haven't even seen him!"
>*crackle* "So look harder. Twilight out."
>"Ugh, Twilight can be such a bitch sometimes" Rarity mumbled to herself
>*crackle* "We can hear everything you say. That's the whole point in having you wear the wire. You dumb idiot."
>Rarity was really beginning to think that she hated this world's Twilight.
>She left the bathroom, and finally spotted Anonymous
>She couldn't believe her luck, it would be much easier to talk to him without his brainwashed flunkies around
>"Oh, Anonymous!~"

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Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2015 16:24:00 No.25190399 Report Delete

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>>25190307
Ten bucks says the wire is cartoonishly large and very noticeable.

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>>25190307
>Fuck
>"Anonymous, may I have a few words with you?"
>You turned around to see Rarity running towards you
>And your attention was immediately drawn to her shirt
>But it was for the wrong reasons
>Because there was a big rectangular box where her tits should be
"What do you want Rarity"
>She looked down and sighed
>"I just want to know if what you said was true. Does the school really think I'm a freak because I hang around Sunset and Twilight? Because I can ditch those girls if I need to, I can't bear to see my social standing take a hit because of them."
"I don't know what to tell you. Yes, people think you're a freak, and it's not just because of who you hang out with. It's because you have magical powers too.
>"B-but surely if I stopped hanging around them I'd stop being a total loser right? Please, let me join you Anon!"
"You mean, like, for lunch or something>"
>She started walking closer to you, pushing her chest out, bring whatever she had in her shirt closer
>"We can start out at lunch, but I want to be more help to you than just that"
"Help me? With what?
>"You know, Anonymous, your plans."

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>>25190450
"Plans?"
>This was starting to get weird
>"Why your plans for the school of course!"
"I don't have any plans for the school."
>Rarity looked around nervously
>"O-of course you don't!"
>She leaned in closer and whispered "You're right, it probably isn't safe to talk about this here, we can meet up after school and talk about it later."
"Look, I have no idea what you think I'm up too, but since you're obviously recording everything we're saying there is no way in hell I'm meeting you after school.
>*crackle* "Shit! RARITY! He has mind reading powers too! GET OUT OF THERE BEFORE HE CASTS A SPELL ON YOU!!"
>Rarity looked up at you with a panicked expression on her face.
>Then she started screaming and ran away.
>You just stood there for a moment, trying to process what just happened
>You knew things were about to get fucked up again, but this time you were caught in the middle of it

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Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2015 16:43:39 No.25190667 Report Delete

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>>25190554
I haven't laughed this hard in a while and I'm too exhausted right now. keep it coming

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Full Retard Writefag Fri 23 Oct 2015 17:00:08 No.25190879 Report Delete

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>>25190554
>Rarity got outside the school, and stopped for a moment to catch her breath
>There was no way in hell she was finishing the school day now that Anon was onto her
>She wasn't about to become another one of his puppets
>So she boarded the bus and headed to Twilight's lab
>When she finally got there, the Sunset gave her a bottle of water and let her sit down
>"They were staring at me on the bus to. Anon's taking control of people outside of the school now too."
>Sunset and Twilight exchanged worried looks
>"Outside the school too? Fuck Twilight, what are we gonna do?"
>"I don't know, but it's not safe to go to school anymore. I'm going to text the girls and get them to leave at lunch, we can't risk letting them fall under Anon's spell too."
>Rarity shifted uncomfortably in her seat
>"Twilight, can you help me take this wire off now? Please?"
>"Alright, alright" Twilight sighed, lifting Rarity's shirt
>"I don't get why you're whining about this Rarity, it's barely notica-"
>Twilight was interrupted by a loud tearing noise
>Rarity looked down, wide-eyed
>Twilight had just torn her shirt on one of the wire's corners
>"Um, oops" she said, blushing
>Rarity just sighed and closed her eyes
>So many things had gone wrong today, the sooner it ended the better

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>>25190879
Alright guys, I'll be back in a couple of hours.

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>>25190879
Man they're mane 7 are stupid. I love it

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>>25190270
my apologies

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>>25190879
kek
this story man

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Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2015 21:58:31 No.25194330 Report Delete

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>>25190879
>That night, they had another meeting at Pinkie's house
>"Alright girls, today made it clear that we can't wait to expose Anon at the party a couple of weeks from now. If we want to save the world, we have to do it now."
>Twilight paused, and turned to face her friends
>"Do you remember the device that I accidentally drained your magic with when we first met? I believe a more powerful version of that machine is what's going to save us. I think I can build it in a couple of days. But we absolutely can not go back to school until this is done. If one of us falls under Anon's spell it could doom us all."
>The girls nodded in understanding.
>"With the news that Anon's spell has spread to people outside of the school, we have no idea who we can trust. We must keep what we know to ourselves."
>"We don't know how much of our plan Anon knows. Earlier today he read Rarity's mind and found out about our wire. Since we hadn't planned to far ahead at that point, he may not know much. But we also have no way of knowing how strong his mind reading powers are."

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Anonymous Fri 23 Oct 2015 22:10:09 No.25194456 Report Delete

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>>25194330
and lo, the prophecy has been fulfilled. THE WRITEFAGS ARE BACK. THE GODS HAVE NOT YET FORSAKEN US

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>>25194330
>"So girls, I must make an unusual request: think as little as possible during the next couple of days. The more you think, the more chances Anon has of finding out what we're going to do to him. When a problem presents itself, just do what comes naturally. I know for girls like Pinkie this will come much easier than for the rest of us, but you have to try."
>The girls stared blankly at Twilight
>And Pinkie was sure Twilight had just called her a retard in the strangest way possible
>"I've invented a mind reading blocker for my lab so my work can go undetected. However, Anon already knows where it is. So if you see anybody loitering around my place, please, scare them off. If we fuck this up then the world we be full of mindless zombies who only exist to serve Anonymous. Wish me luck girls"
>Twilight sighed and left Pinkie's house
>For the first time, the fate of the world rested on her shoulders
>And she was determined not to let everyone down

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>>25194461
>After two grueling days of work, Twilight called Sunset and Applejack to her lab
>"Alright girls, this is the device that will drain Anon's magical powers. I used a clock as the base, and the clock's battery powers the unit. These colorful wires will transfer the magic into this red containers. I have enough of them to wrap around your entire body, so we shouldn't have to worry about him having to much power for the device to contain. Unfortunately, I didn't have time to figure out how to get it to stop making that ticking noise, but we've got more important things to worry about."
>Sunset and Applejack stared at the device for a few moments before Applejack spoke up
>"So, uh, which one of us is going to wear this doohickey?"
>Sunset smirked
>"Remember when I said I had big plans for you AJ?"
>Applejack's eyes widened.
>"B-but"
>"You're not a whiny bitch like Rarity, are you Applejack?"
>Sunset moved closer to Applejack
>"Because if you are a whiny bitch like Rarity, I feel like that's something the school should know. After all, you've always bragged about how much of a big, tough girl you are. You don't want anybody to think you're a hypocrite, do you?"
>Applejack bowed her head
>"You're right, I ain't no whiner like Rarity. So how do I put this thingy on?"
>Twilight smiled mischievously
>"Well Applejack, the first thing I need you to do is take your shirt and bra off."

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>>25194718
Sorry for the short update guys, but I should be able to finish this story tomorrow. I have to say that I'm way happier with this version than the one I had in the old thread though.

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>>25172310
read dat shit upside down

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>>25194718
>Unfortunately, I didn't have time to figure out how to get it to stop making that ticking noise
fucking kek
its obvious where this is going

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glad to hear it and can't wait

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>>25194718
>>25194899
Is this going to end up like that kid who brought a clock he made to school, but a teacher thought it was a bomb?

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I can see it and keep this thread alive

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Don't touch me there!

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>>25198208
touch

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>>25198671
Naughty

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 13:26:33 No.25202752 Report Delete

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bumping for more of Anon-no-mouse's glorious greentext story. Also, take all the time you need to continue the story. I'd rather a million times read a good written story by your own pace than a rushed in one.

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Is Anon-no-mouse kill?

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 14:54:36 No.25203826 Report Delete

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>>25203014
No. He's just taking a short break.

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waiting for the bomb to drop

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>>25204662
me too

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Betting that AJ gets arrested

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 19:12:28 No.25207432 Report Delete

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>anon before Sunset showed up

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>>25194718
>The next morning, the girls met up in the courtyard before school
>"Boy, you look exhausted Twilight, what happened? And what's with the tinfoil hat?" Pinkie asked
>"It's so Anon can't read my mind stupid! Even if he finds out about our magic drainer, he'll have know way of knowing about my plan B."
>Twilight giggled maniacally to herself, making the rest of the girls uneasy.
>"So, when's all of this going down?" Rainbow asked
>"When the most people will see it happening. At lunch."
>Sunset smiled and turned toward the school.
>"All of the students will be free of Anon's mind control, and they'll see that we're the ones who rescued them again! Then we'll be popular like we were before Anon tried to rule the world!"
>The girls entered the school together, ready for the confrontation ahead.

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>he'll have know way of knowing about my plan B.
*no*
God dammit

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>>25207623
>As the hours dragged by, Applejack noticed how strong Anon's mind control had become.
>Everyone in the school was going out of their way to avoid her
>And she heard them whispering about her behind her back
>And as if all of this wasn't bad enough, that fucking magic drainer's ticking seemed to get louder and louder
>Applejack told herself to stop being a pussy, she was just imagining it
>After all, Twilight assured her there was no way anyone could hear it from beneath the thick, pitch black trench coat she was wearing that day
>And though she wasn't normally one for making sure the things she wore matched, today she also wore a black hat and black boots
>Since she was about to save the school, she figured she might as well look badass doing it
>When she was finally on the way to lunch, she noticed students starting to run away from her
>They knew she was up to something
>And the puppets were on their way to warn their master
>So she realized she had to catch Anon by surprise

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 19:39:03 No.25207774 Report Delete

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>>25207623
Anon, the one-man bomb disposal unit, wrecks the day.

At some point, I think it would be funny if Anon just started stirring shit for his own amusement, realizing that they're way off their rockers.

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 19:42:42 No.25207821 Report Delete

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>>25207768
SHES GOT A GUN RUUUUUN

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>>25207768
>She didn't have time to actually buy lunch, she waited in the bathroom across from the cafeteria, waiting for Anon
>And sure enough, it seemed the other students had plenty to say to him
>As he nervously took his usual seat, Applejack grinned to herself
>Even if he DID know what was going on, there was nothing he could do about it
>She would be too quick
>She burst out of the bathroom, sending students screaming in every direction
>She jumped onto a table a few rows away from his and looked him dead in his eyes
>"YOUR REIGN OF TERROR ENDS NOW, ANONYMOUS!"
>As she shouted, she opened her trench coat, revealing Twilight's device
>Chaos immediately took over the cafeteria
>Applejack took the device's control out of her pocket, and pushed the big red button in the middle

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 19:50:33 No.25207942 Report Delete

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>>25207623
>literal tinfoil hat
fucking kek

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>>25207898
And then anon punched her in the cooter.

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Full Retard Writefag Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:03:00 No.25208112 Report Delete

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>>25207898
>Anon was frozen in place as Applejack stared him down, waiting for the device to do its work
>And she waited
>And waited
>Those few seconds were starting to feel like ages
>"What in tarnation?" She looked down at Twilight's device
>It had lit up, but nothing else had happened
>As she started furiously pressing the button, Anon seized his opportunity
>He tackled her, knocking the controller out of her hands
>"FUCK!"
>The two of them struggled on the floor for a moment, but the years Applejack spent on the farm gave her a significant edge over the kid who could barely lift his own bookbag
>The students who hadn't left rushed to Anon's aid, pinning Applejack down
>"NO! Y'ALL HAVE TO COME TO YOUR SENSES!"
"WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING BITCH!"
>"Y'ALL DON'T HAVE TO LISTEN TO HIM! AH CAN FREE YOU! TRUST ME!"
"WHY IN THE WORLD WOULD ANYONE TRUST YOU?!"
>"AH KNOW SOME OF YOU AREN'T UNDER HIS CONTROL, YOU HAVE TO LET ME STOP HIM!"
"I'M NOT THE ONE WHO JUST TRIED TO SUICIDE BOMB THE SCHOOL!!"
>"DON'T LET HIM CLOUD YOUR MINDS! LET ME DRAIN HIS MAGIC POWERS SO AH CAN SAVE YOU!"

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Full Retard Writefag Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:14:32 No.25208271 Report Delete

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>>25208112
>The cafeteria suddenly went completely quiet
"Drain my magic powers? The fuck are you-"
>"DON'T WORRY APPLEJACK, I'LL SAVE YOU!"
>Twilight shouted, holding her own controller
>She pushed a big red button, and the school began to shake
>Something punched a hole through the floor behind her
>As the students all stood frozen in fear, a gigantic robot rose from the ground
>Your jaw dropped so fast it seemed to hit the floor
>"We tried to save you from yourself Anonymous. If you had let us drain your powers we could have reformed you. But now.."
>Twilight paused dramatically hitting more buttons on her controller
>"YOU MUST DIE!!"
>The robot arm transformed into a gigantic spike
>As it lurched towards you, an idea crazy enough to save you popped into your head

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Full Retard Writefag Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:23:49 No.25208433 Report Delete

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>>25208271
>Pulling you wang out you windmill with the fury of an angry wasp-nest.
>The amount of rotations per second you dingdong is doing forces all 8 pints of blood into the tip. Creating the finest mace and flail the world had ever seen.
>Twilight lunged forward, intent on popping the blood filled appendage, only to find the 10lb tip crashing into the side of her head.
>Consciousness began to fade as your brain, starved from the precious oxygen filled blood starts shutting down.
>With a final thrust to thwart any challenger you ram the now 2 foot meat ballast into the heart of the robot
>This causes a cataclysmic meltdown, forcing all nearby to watch in awe as the sheer light of the event, burned the shadows into the walls.

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Full Retard Writefag Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:24:15 No.25208441 Report Delete

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>>25208271
"Oh my God! I'M FREE! PLEASE STOP TWILIGHT, I'M FINALLY FREE!"
>The robot stopped in it's tracks, and Twilight gave you a puzzled look
>You didn't have time to think about what you said, you could only hope she was stupid enough to buy it
"You were right Twilight! Someone is brainwashing people at the school! But it's not me, I was just the first one to fall under his spell!"
>"W-who is it? Who's trying to control the school Anon?"
"It's... HIM!"
>You shouted, pointing at the one kid in school you hated more than the girls who had turned your life upside down in the past couple of weeks
>The entire school slowly turned to face the one you pointed out
>He was a yellow skinned punk with spiky blue hair who stood in your way every single time you mustered up the courage to ask a girl out

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Full Retard Writefag Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:35:34 No.25208617 Report Delete

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>>25208433
lol no

>>25208441
>"W-what the fuck Anon?"
>Twilight gasped and covered her mouth
>"Of course! It makes perfect sense!"
>"W-what! NO!"
>"That's why you're constantly harassing me! You've been trying to put me under your control this entire time!"
>Twilight gasped again, even more loudly this time
>"YOU'VE GOT PRINCESS TWILIGHT UNDER YOUR CONTROL DON'T YOU YOU SON OF A BITCH!"
>"Twilight please, just hear me out! I'm not evil, I swear!"
>With fear in her eyes, Twilight began furiously hitting buttons on her controller
>"YOU'LL... NEVER... TAKE... CONTROL... OF... MEEEEEE!!!"
>The robot turned and thrust it's spike at Flash
>Before he could react, the spike pierced his chest and lodged itself into the cafeteria ceiling
>The students watched in shock as Flash Sentry's impaled corpse slowly slid down the robot's spike
>When it reached the bottom, the cafeteria erupted in cheers
>People rushed towards Twilight, fighting to get the chance to hug her
>The students who had struggled to pin Applejack down before were now lifting her above their heads
>They even came for you, patting you on the back, shaking your hand, and congratulating you for your newfound freedom

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:38:49 No.25208666 Report Delete

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>>25208617
>>25208441
>>25208433
All of my wat

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Full Retard Writefag Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:42:11 No.25208723 Report Delete

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>>25208617
>When school finally opened back up the next month, you took your place at your table
>Alone
>You had gotten used to people liking you
>But now that Twilight and her friends had "saved" them again, people didn't seem to be afraid of them anymore
>They were finally the popular group they thought they were before
>And you were right back where you started
>You sighed, taking a bite out of your sandwich with your head down
>After a few minutes, you heard someone coming toward you
>Looking up, you were surprised to see Sunset Shimmer standing before you

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:46:39 No.25208790 Report Delete

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>>25208723
What?

At least you live up to your name, I guess.

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Full Retard Writefag Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:48:50 No.25208831 Report Delete

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>>25208723
>"Hey Anon, you wanna come eat lunch with us?"
>You gave her a confused frown
>She rubbed the back of her head and bit her lip
>"Look Anon, we had no idea that you were under Flash Sentry's mind control when we were saying all those mean things about you. We all feel really shitty about it, and we'll understand if you don't want to sit with us, but we really want to make it up to you."
>You considered her offer for a minute
>Sure, crazy shit happened a lot because of these girls
>But whether you were directly involved or not, everyone always had to deal with the aftermath
>And it was kinda cool being in the middle of it for once
"Okay Sunset, I'll sit with you."

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Full Retard Writefag Sat 24 Oct 2015 20:52:22 No.25208885 Report Delete

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>>25208831
And that's a wrap guys, I hope you enjoyed it. This post >>25208433 wasn't actually me, but I did get a chuckle out of it.

>>25208790
I always try.

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treppahcs Sat 24 Oct 2015 21:36:59 No.25209447 Report Delete

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>>25208885
The ending was ok. I thought they were gonna get arrested and expelled once they find out they were wrong

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boop

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Bumparoni

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 00:52:53 No.25211764 Report Delete

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>>25202752
>this
Still waiting on Anon-no-mouse

pls don't abandon us

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bump

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bump

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 04:42:19 No.25214155 Report Delete

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>>25208885
kek'd/10
Name well deserved.

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bump

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 10:16:52 No.25215959 Report Delete

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>>25208831
You absolute madman. The first story was shit, and this one was gold. I want a sequel. I bet it'll make everyone platinum mad.

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treppahcs Sun 25 Oct 2015 11:54:11 No.25216707 Report Delete

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>>25215959
Not a bad idea would like to see an Epiloge at least

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Bump

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 15:51:23 No.25219206 Report Delete

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>>25167219
They're having a drama fit right now.
Someone needs to break it up

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 15:56:57 No.25219253 Report Delete

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>>25219206
Believe me, I've tried. It saddens me that the general has sunk so low since it started.

I might write something here later.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 16:02:29 No.25219314 Report Delete

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>>25219206
This kind of shit is exactly why generals are cancer.

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Bump

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treppahcs Sun 25 Oct 2015 19:30:43 No.25221796 Report Delete

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no one else gonna write?

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bump

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 22:09:34 No.25223761 Report Delete

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Bumping for when Anon-no-mouse comes back to continue the story.

Also, like I said before. Take your time. Don't rush it in.

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Anonymous Mon 26 Oct 2015 01:07:21 No.25225774 Report Delete

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>>25223761
This.

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treppahcs Mon 26 Oct 2015 07:28:37 No.25226994 Report Delete

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>>25225774
agreed

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bupm

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Bumping

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page 10 bump

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"thinking that this tread is dead" bump

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