Thread for all your vampire or otherwise "classic" monster needs. Originally intended for humans/Equestria Girls but all blood sucking and spooking is allowed.
Current writers:
TheAutistocrat:
http://pastebin.com/4cXgVdED Insanebow Dash -
http://pastebin.com/u/Insanebow_Dash Vampon -
http://pastebin.com/u/Sleipniiir Treppahcs -
http://pastebin.com/2BATbQp0 twiligh/tg/ame_night -
http://pastebin.com/RPhhri1s You let the previous one die overnight, you faggots.
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Anonymous
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>>25239677 Glad someone remade the thread
Insanebow Dash
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Just got on and realized last thread died holy shit. Thanks for the remake friendo
twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
Had an idea for a sequel to the green I just wrapped up. Question is, does anyone want a sequel?
Anonymous
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>>25240040 Pls. Need more green.
Anonymous
Bumping for interest in vampire orgies.
Anonymous
Insanebow Dash
>>25240379 I'll attempt to write today if I have time. I just don't know how to really continue past what I wrote. Maybe an awkward breakfast with tons of sexual tension. Idk man. But I'll try
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>25240729 The girls compete to make breakfast for there master. Some have rather unique ideas on how to serve it. Also, there's only one apron, but none of them want to get there clothes dirty.
Anonymous
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>>25241459 *their
Sudoku time!
TheAutistocrat
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May be starting later but I will definitely get some of my story done today.
Anonymous
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>>25239677 Im honestly supprised we dont have more traffic in these threads
Anonymous
TheAutistocrat
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Getting started shortly.
Summary of the last thread's events.
> You managed to help AJ defeat the wolves. > Though she basically tortured you after. > After some time you finally get to have a conversation with the girls that wasn't threatened by a life or death situation. > Shortly after it became a life or death situation. > You were split into two, one half dealing with digging deeper into the mystery while the other just conversed and dicked around. > Eventually the Anon investigating came back to the original, dragging a pissed off army of monsters with him. > After you met your doppelganger the two of you, with the help of the girls try and fight your way out. Do not read the next part if you are not caught up, or not following this story.
There's already been two casualties. Part 4 here:
http://pastebin.com/A5QiwusW Part 3 here:
http://pastebin.com/skFa2NSN Part 2 here:
http://pastebin.com/Ury4hS6J Part 1 here:
http://pastebin.com/Ury4hS6J It's a rather long read and a slow story, so if you're just now joining us I suggest trying it out only if you have the time, but if this story isn't your thing than /tg/ and Insane will be posting later on, as well as some other writers.
Anonymous
TheAutistocrat
>>25234834 > The two of you walked in silence, Pinkies and Flutters sobs fading in the background. > Celestia stared at the upturned earth solemnly. > A grim look over-fell her features, pretty fitting for the mood everybody was in. > Rarity tried her best to comfort the deflating Pinkie while Dash just stared blankly at the ground. > "Damn, she was a tough girl." "Mhm..."
> You continue to scan the forest line, the darkness behind it hiding whatever else was in there pretty well. > "Do you think..." "What?"
> You had a feeling what he was hinting at. > "She might be, you know..." He seemed to turn silent, afraid one of the girls might hear him. > You knew what he was hinting at. "Yes, yes maybe... If it was planned... But if it wasn't then she's gone for good."
> He nodded silently, turning away from you. > The two of you stared at the sky, the realistic moon sending shivers up your spine. > You knew it was fake but it looked too real to be anything but the moon. > Oh well... > It didn't take long for the two of you to find a way out. > The forest was shallower than it had seemed, and with the both of you searching it was exceedingly easy to find your way out. > You had found another pair of double doors, these ones covered in vines and shrubbery. > You waited for the girls to finish politely. > You had been in the game for awhile, so naturally this didn't affect you as much as it should've. > Like you had said before. > Sometimes it can't be helped. > Especially not in the upside down world that you lived in. > You dealt with the reaper every single day. > How you had survived this long amazed even you to be honest. > By the time the girls finished they just moved on silently. > Dash had a hard look plastered on her face. > She looked about ready to take on whatever else came her way. > Rarity seemed to be hurt as well but she was trying her hardest not to show it. > Fluttershy let the water gates flow freely, no-one wanting to shut her up despite the attention. Anonymous
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>>25242883 RIP in peace AJ
TheAutistocrat
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> Pinkie stared at the ground angrily. > Her skin seemed darker than before. > Er... scratch that. > All of her features seemed more darkened than before. > And her hair was flat again. > It looked so bad on her. > The two of you open the doors for the girls; letting them through. > Normally you would have cracked a joke revolving around 'M'lady', but you felt as if it would fall flat right now. > You stepped in after them. > You were in the REAL gym now, the glossy floor shining in the fake moonlight. > Hm.... > You step in fully, scanning the rafters over head. > Nothing suspicious so far... > Rarity walked in after you, her arms folded over her chest. > She peered at the rafters for a second. > "There's something up there..." She muttered. > Before anybody else could react a chuckle came from all around. > A figure flipped from the rafters, hovering in the air. > "So you have figured it out? Bleh, I vill be vith you shortly." > It was a guy that sounded like the generic movie vampire. > You peel away the ghetto shield. > You tossed it to Celestia, her frame much more suited for it than yours. > Other you did the same, giving her an effective body guard. > She dropped your spear and kicked it over. > You stopped it with your feet and leaned over picking it up. > The girls were staring at you, most likely surprised at your communication. > Hey, Hunters had to communicate. > She readied the 'shields' peering through them. > A man in fashionable dress touched down a couple feet away from you. > He adjusted his blood red suit and gave you a toothy smile. > "Velcome! Velcome! I vill be taking care of you tonight." > Uhg... > This guys was terrible. > From the way he was making Rarity fume you could tell she was already at her point. > "Y-You foolish, slobbering dolt!" She shouted. "You're a disgrace to our kind! None of us would and ever will act like that!" > "Vell..." > "Shut up!" Rarity rushed him. > "Fledglings!" The generic vamp shouted taking to the air.
TheAutistocrat
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> All around you at once bodies piled from the bleachers. > There was more than you could count, most of them clawing forward. > Most of them looked relatively normal, save for the glowing eyes. > Celestia grimaced. > "They're under his control. Do not kill them." > You shut your trap upon seeing her glare. > "Fine..." Other you groaned. > You both flip the spears, holding the brunt ends forward. > Bashing them with a metal pole won't kill them right? > Ehhhh, as long as you don't hit anywhere vital or hit them multiple times. > Rarity let out an uncharacteristic scream from up above. > She bounced off of a rafter, giving chase after the Generic Vamp. > He let out a low chuckle. > "This is not your night, no?" > "Shut up you stereotype!" > "I vill cease my wisdom vonce I suck yur blood!" > You roll your eyes. > "Booo!" Other you shouted. > "Shit!" He jumped away as one of the Fledglings fell forward, slamming on top of where he had just been. > Celestia rushed forward, sending one of the table halves into a stray fledgling. > It soared through the air, it's body spinning like an out of control firework. > She followed up with another bash to ones head, sending it falling to the ground. > She upper-cutted, sending three bodies flying backwards. > One of the Fledglings grabbed your shoulders, pulling you back. > You hiss a curse and send an elbow into its gut. > As it doubled over a burst of distorted air appeared in front of its face. > It burst like a bubble, sending the Fledgling soaring backwards. > What? > You glance over at Pinkie; her eyes glowing with an intense fury. > Ah... > Dash took to the rafters; on her way to assist Rarity. > "Red-delta-two!" Other you shouted. > With a sickening crack his table leg connected with one of the beefier Fledglings. > He spun on his heel briefly; teetering as if he was about to go down. > Then suddenly he righted himself, re-adjusting his dislocated jaw. > "Oh..." Other you muttered. > "Help!"
TheAutistocrat
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> All around you at once bodies piled from the bleachers. > There was more than you could count, most of them clawing forward. > Most of them looked relatively normal, save for the glowing eyes. > Celestia grimaced. > "They're under his control. Do not kill them." > You shut your trap upon seeing her glare. > "Fine..." Other you groaned. > You both flip the spears, holding the blunt ends forward. > Bashing them with a metal pole won't kill them right? > Ehhhh, as long as you don't hit anywhere vital or hit them multiple times. > Rarity let out an uncharacteristic scream from up above. > She bounced off of a rafter, giving chase after the Generic Vamp. > He let out a low chuckle. > "This is not your night, no?" > "Shut up you stereotype!" > "I vill cease my visdom vonce I suck yur blood!" > You roll your eyes. > "Booo!" Other you shouted. > "Shit!" He jumped away as one of the Fledglings fell forward, slamming on top of where he had just been. > Celestia rushed forward, sending one of the table halves into a stray fledgling. > It soared through the air, it's body spinning like an out of control firework. > She followed up with another bash to ones head, sending it falling to the ground. > She upper-cutted, sending three bodies flying backwards. > One of the Fledglings grabbed your shoulders, pulling you back. > You hiss a curse and send an elbow into its gut. > As it doubled over a burst of distorted air appeared in front of its face. > It burst like a bubble, sending the Fledgling soaring backwards. > What? > You glance over at Pinkie; her eyes glowing with an intense fury. > Ah... > Dash took to the rafters; on her way to assist Rarity. > "Red-delta-two!" Other you shouted. > With a sickening crack his table leg connected with one of the beefier Fledglings. > He spun on his heel briefly; teetering as if he was about to go down. > Then suddenly he righted himself, re-adjusting his dislocated jaw. > "Oh..." Other you muttered. > "Help!"
TheAutistocrat
> Fluttershy backed away from a group of Fledglings grasping forward. > The others were too busy with their own thing to notice. > With a sigh you whirl around and run forward, pole grasped tightly in your hand. > Time to- > Something snagged your feet. > With a yelp of surprise you went down, your bar skidding across the ground. > Shit. > You look back at what caught you. > One of the Fledglings laying on the ground. > Her enchanted eyes stared into your own, all thoughts overtaken by one. > Serve him. > Welp... > You send your foot into her face, her grasp tightening around your ankle. > You do this again. > And again... > And again... > She wasn't budging... > If you just wore the combat boots like an edgelord this would already be done with! > You whirl around; seeing her getting overrun. > You hiss a curse and send out another kick. > Suddenly Flutters screamed. > It was deafening, the sound enough to disorientate you. > The world pulsed as her scream echoed among the walls. > Everybody came to a stand-still, trying to protect themselves from the piercing screech. > The Fledgling holding your ankle let out a shout. > She collapsed on the ground, the glowing in her eyes fading away. > Other you dropped his pipe; backing away from the Fledgling. > His eyes stopped glowing as well. > Hm... > You take the opportunity to stumble to your feet. > You doubt she could hear you over her own scream. > Speaking of which, she was still going... > The world began to fade in and out, your senses becoming overwhelmed. > You hate Sirens.... > Fluttershy stopped. > As fast as she had done it, she stopped. > The prior Fledglings fell forward, most of them unconscious or just not wanting to get up. > Rarity let out a shout, followed by a surprised scream from Dash. > The Generic Vamp held them by the necks. > "You are of no use." he said, tossing Dash. > Her body rocketed into the bleachers, accompanied by the sound of splintering wood and screeching metal.
Anonymous
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>>25243399 >Her body rocketed into the bleachers, accompanied by the sound of splintering wood and screeching metal. ouch
Anonymous
TheAutistocrat
> You didn't know how durable Harpies where. > But you hoped they were durable enough... > "As for you..." the Generic Vamp said with a sinister smile. > "Pure bred, I vill enjoy this." > He sunk his fangs into her neck, earning a pathetic mewl of protest from her. > Shit... > You and the Other you stumble over unconscious bodies to find some way to help. > Essentially this douchy vamp dude wasn't going to get any stronger or really anything from drinking her blood. > But if you remembered correctly, one of the few things that could kill a vampire was another vampire. > If only you had some guns. > Or garlic. > Or had some damn powers yourself. > You turn to Fluttershy. > "I can-" > You stop in front of her, pointing at Rarity. > Fluttershy cleared her throat. > "Cover your ears..." She said softly. > You and the others comply. > She frowned and readied herself, glaring at the Generic Vamp. > Fluttershy took a deep breath. > And then the world began to rock and pulsate once more... > You covered your ears, still hearing her powerful voice breaking into your skull. > Pinkie hovered into the air, throwing out a blue fireball at the Generic vamp. > Which he deflected with ease. > Now that you thought about it he didn't seem too notice Shy's scream either. > You gesture for her to stop. > She went silent. > You watched in shock as the Generic Vamp gestured with his hand. > Pinkie stopped hovering suddenly. > Like a cartoon she looked down briefly before gravity took effect. > Other you rushed over, sprinting as fast as he could. > Luckily he managed to tackle her out of the air, keeping her from harm. > The rest of you watched helplessly as he drained Rarity, letting out a satisfied sigh. > She tried her hardest to fight, eventually slowing down. > She muttered something before going limp. > You pick the bar back up, glaring at the Generic Vamp.
Anonymous
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>>25243810 damn
the teams dropping like flies
TheAutistocrat
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> Dropping her body as if it were a used napkin he pulled out a rag. > Flipping it open he wiped his mouth. > "I got vhat I vant, you can have the rest." > Before you could say anything he slipped back into the darkness. > Suddenly the double doors behind you burst open. > An orc trudged in, followed by a herd of giggling, manic elves. > Following behind them slowly was a shuffling Mummy. > It moved towards you with outstretched hands. > Up above a clawed hand punched through the gym roof. > A gargoyle poked its head in, letting out a deafening roar. > Soon after holes were being punched in the roof all over. > The laughter of multiple harpies followed the Gargoyles deep, boisterous roars. > Celestia was the first to reach the door on the other end. > She flung it open, greeted by a wisp of shrieking smoke. > Banshee.... > The Banshee let out an ear-piercing shriek, reaching for Celestia. > She slammed the door shut, backing away. > The door frosted over slowly. > Suddenly the Banshee passed through it as if it were air. > It let out another screech. > Shit... > What was left of your group backed together, watching the dying chances of escape. > Was this it? > Pinkie sniffled, leaning on your shoulder. > Well... not yours, but the Other you. > "Well..." Other you said with a gulp. "This is certainly interesting..." > "Figure something out, there's two of you." Celestia shouted. > The monsters all surrounded you, some of the more articulate ones taunting you. > The Mummies hollowed eyes peered into your own as it reached out. > It's decayed jaw clacked softly as it came closer and closer. > This was it... > The Elves howled with laughter, each one saying something over the noise. > "Come on then!" > "Righto mate hurry up then!" > "Come on, end these chavs!" > Uhg, you hated everything... > Suddenly a burst of white light filled the room. > All at once the creatures stopped moving.
Anonymous
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>>25243810 Man, this is getting depressing.
TheAutistocrat
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> The Mummies accusing finger hovered just inches from your face. > The Orc stood over the others, his club raised and ready to come down. > The Elves were frozen in place, their faces twisted up in psychopathic blood lust. > The Gargoyles were just crawling through there holes, their hungry eyes staring down at you. > "Uhhh.... What?" Other you said. > You reach forward and poke the mummy, retreating your finger back instantly. > Huh... > You poke it again, getting no response. > Other you stepped forward, peering at the Elves. > He tapped the tip of their shivs. > "Nothing..." > "W-What just happened?" Flutters asked, leaning down to examine the Elves. > "Well it doesn't matter. Get to the door now!" Celestia shouted. > The rest of you stepped over the monsters carefully. > Celestia led while Flutters hooked onto you. > If it wasn't for this whole situation you would be exhilarated right now. > Pinkie clung to the Other you. > He tugged at his collar lightly. > Huh... > By the time you reached the door you were weary of anything moving. > But nothing did... > Everything stood frozen in place... > What just happened? > Oh well... > The others pushed past the door; leaving as fast as they could. > There was no point in checking on Dash you knew her outcome. > Same for Rarity. > Your 'team' was getting plucked like flowers and you couldn't do much except run and watch it happen. > And throw some banter with yourself but that was it. > You were the most useless person here, hell the second version of you even had more information on this whole deal than you did... > One of the Elves eyes flicked to you. > They were coming back... > You flip him the bird and head through the door with the others. > As you walked in you stopped. > Something wasn't right...
TheAutistocrat
> The others stood in front of the pool, staring at it. > It would've been a nice sight if not for your predicament. > The water was somehow illuminated by the moonlight, letting its reflection dance across the roof. > You stop behind them. > "We heard something." Celestia said. > "I don't know, Fluttershy heard it first." > You turn to her. > "I don't know it sounded like... laughter." > You peer into the dark water. > You must be standing at the deep end... > "I think we should back away righ-" > Suddenly something burst from the water. > A girl with leathery skin gripped Fluttershys ankle. > She giggled softly before pulling her into the water. > You went to dive in after her but Celestia grabbed you. > She pulled you away from the pool, struggling against your squirming. > Another girl burst from the water, soaring into the air. > She spread out her arms, the droplets of water dancing around her. > With a sound akin to a bear she opened her maw, revealing something close to sharks mouth. > It fell on top of the Other you. > He let out a shout as it pinned him down, letting out a terrible laugh. > Pinkie hopped away from the pool just in time, one of the girls popping up to snatch her. > The one pinning the Other you slapped its tail fin against the ground. > Another girl burst from the water, grabbing her fin. > She began to pull the two into the pool. > "Fuck, fuck, fuck, Do something!" He shouted. > Before they could complete the task the one halfway in the pool let out a screech of pain. > Blue fire burned at her face, forcing her back underwater. > Other you managed to pry the creature off of him, sending it back into the pool. > He scrambled away from the pool, just barely getting grabbed again. > Celestia let you go. > You glare at her. > You glance at the pool. > Fluttershy was somewhere under there.
twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
Before I get started on the sequel, I need some input.
Anonymous
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>>25244326 Welp, Flutters is dead.
TheAutistocrat
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> Luckily, she was a Siren. > You had a feeling something was happening. > And if you were right then all would be fine in the end. > Luckily there was a wide enough berth around the pool for your squad to pass through unharmed. > Unless one of them jumped out of the pool again.... > You lead the others to the left; pressing against the wall. > You still wanted as much distance between the pool and you as possible. > Pinkie and Celestia followed, grimly watching the water. > Your heart was pounding in your chest by the time you reached the end. > You lead the others out into the hallway, catching your breath. > Other you leaned in next to you. > "I hope that we're right..." he muttered. > You stand up. > Brave face. > With a clap of your hands you turn to the girls. > Pinkie and Celestia shared a confused look. > Pinkie wiped the tears from her eyes, looking you over. > "What are you talking about?" > You shrug. > Pinkie cringed at your use of awesome. > You twirl on your heel, heading forward. > "That's not true. I can tell you right now that with the way things are going you will most certainly not-" > The doors down the hall flung open, twisted creatures of all kinds spilling in. > You turn and sprint down the hall, making a sharp right instead of left. > The others made a left. > "Dammit Anon!" Celestia shouted back. > "Running as fast as we can! Oh look at us, we're so fast. Our meat must be really firm!" > Other you took place next to you, matching your speed. > "Helping idiot!" > "Helping NOT get ourselves killed!"
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>>25244391 horror, its that time of year after all
Occultist should be Sunshit
can yiu taste the salt? Make Scoots the dame, that should proove interesting
Supernatural entities? Your choice man
CMC Detectives? With Scoots as a vampire? Hell yeah!
just make sure Applebloom and Sweetie don't know Twilight is meddling in the affiars of Yanderity. No good can come of this.
TheAutistocrat
> The two of you skidded around the corner, taking off down the hall. > A majority of the monsters were coming your way, or at least you hoped. > The two of you kept on turning corners, dodging overturned trashcans and running past anything that moved. > You skid to a stop, peering at the closest in front of you. > The Other you threw his arms out; halting. > You threw open the door and gestured for him. > He hopped in with you, the two of you pressed together tightly in the closest. > You slam it shut and click on the light briefly. > "Hey, we're in the closest." > "We gonna come out?" > "That's what I thought." > The door creaked inwards, bending from something behind it. > Oh no. > Multiple entities stood just beyond the door, their shadows dancing across your feet. > You had been hoping they wouldn't see you run in. > But then again there was their impeccable sense of smell and hearing. > Wonderful. > "I swear this isn't the first time your idiocy has nearly gotten us killed." > A howl followed the door banging again, this time nearly splintering in. > Other you gulped. > "Though this time may be the last..." > He turned to you. > "Okay, answer me this. Why did you run off like that? It was kind of cowardly." > "What?" > "What!?" > The door banged again. > "Correct." > He paused. > "Correct...." > "Yes..." > "Is real."
TheAutistocrat
"But how can it not be real Anon?"> He reached into the raincoat, producing the amulet. > He held it up, letting you examine in. > The door banged again, the hinges loose enough to let it bounce in the frame. > It was a small green gem encrusted with some sort of black rock. > "So... when did it stop being real?" > "You mean..." > "You know we could just be very, very, wrong and they could still be dead." > The door nearly caved this time. > It was holding longer than it should've. > "Of course I can, I'm you." > The two of you share a laugh, standing over Garolds corpse. > Just seconds ago you had been mourning his loss. > "That is true... It's like our brain is telling us it doesn't matter." > You nod eagerly. > The door pushed forward, a beefy, blue arm jutting through it. > You and the Other you work to right the door, pushing both of your weights against it. > "And back in the Gym room!" > You study the frozen creatures. > Shooting a glance over at the bleachers you saw nothing there. > No body or anything. > The others rushed out. > "The pool!" > You stare into the pool. > Even with this darkness you should've seen the shallow end. > But instead you could see nothing. > You glance at the pool sign, a mish-mash of numbers instead of the single number followed by 'FT'. > You would remember that... > "Okay, so this is one big illusion. Casted by an incredibly powerful Witch." > "Okay..." > The bodies pushing against the door caused the two of you to lose ground. > "Am I real?" > "Hah; Though I'm real in a sense, correct?" > You frown. > "True..." > The door gave away, everything piling into the closet. > "I hope you're right." > The swarming mass of teeth and claws overtook the two of you.
Anonymous
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>>25244659 BWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM
TheAutistocrat
Okay, that's it for tonight.
Anonymous
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>>25244958 Thank you. You were fucking with my feelings there, for a moment.
Pretty good stuff, can't wait for the rest.
Anonymous
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Really hope we don't get a repeat of last night...
twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
Don't worry lads, I won't toy with your emotions like our good friend here. My Fluttershy is dead.
Anonymous
>>25244958 Did you like LibreOffice?
AutistAhoy
>>25245836 Yes I did friend, though I'm still playing with it and basically getting a grasp on the stuff in it.
Thanks for the help.
>>25245831 Quiet you, Flutters deserved better.
Speaking of which, when is that sequel coming? I eagerly await it.
Anonymous
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>>25245945 No problem; glad you like it. I personally like the web layout option.
Anonymous
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Make sure we don't die tonight bois.
twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25245945 She did deserve better.
My poor waifu. Sequel will start tomorrow, though I'd like more input on what folks want to see before I really get going. Aside from a few subplots and scenes, I don't know what the story will be or where it will go.
Anonymous
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>>25246308 Maybe Pinkie knew all along and it was her attempt to see if getting the D would cure the blood hunger?
That or she wanted someone to dirty their hands with resolving the Fluttershy problem. What better way than to get dress horse(girl) to get mad jealous. After all she can't be held responsible for something her love sick friend would do in a fit of enraged jealousy.
Anonymous
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>>25244391 >CMC Junior Investigators a go or no? Only if Sweetie's a witch...
Anonymous
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>>25244391 >Horror or Fantastical? I'd personally prefer horror
I'm not 100% on what you mean by Fantastical >Who is Canterlot High's resident occultist (or their leader, if there are several)? With something like this my mind jumps to Twi but seeing as she's already established I'd say Trixie could be a good choice.
>Who was Fluttershy's sire/dam-in-darkness? I'm guessing this means who turned Flutters but I can't say I have any thoughts on this.
>In addition to vampires and ghosts, what other types of supernatural entities exist in this world? I think we should carry on the trend of classic movie monsters and folklore monsters whilst staying clear from the more fetish type ones.
>CMC Junior Investigators a go or no? CMC Junior Investigators could lead to some wacky hijinks and would probably need saving at some point.
>Who gets the worst ending? If you're carrying on from Rarity going off the deep end I'd say she could be in line for bad end.
Also I'd love to see some cute and/or sexy Sunset/Rainbow Dash in the next part.
A bit of a selfish request but hey you asked for input. Looking forward to the sequel, keep up the good work.
Anonymous
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>>25250115 >Little werewolf by the prairie FTFY
Anonymous
Anonymous
>>25250426 Is it a monster?
Anonymous
>>25250433 i think so. its like an alchemical Frankenstein type thing if i remember correctly.
Anonymous
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>>25250447 Well, Frankenstein is considered a monster, so I don't see why sub classes of it can't be.
Anonymous
>>25250426 >You will never create your own qt homonculus pone to cuddle Anonymous
>>25250505 I didnt want those feels
Durnk anun
crosspostan>Moondancer fucks up a spell >All of a sudden seasame street is vomited out of a portal >"ONE PONY, AH AH AH" >Vampires errywhere >Anon has to fight them off with mathematics >Chooses the more practical branches of combat-maths >Smacks ponies around with textbooks >Such violence is unprecedented >Is arrested for warcrimes >Well, more like the ponies try >Then they get book-to-the-face-itus >Hey, i said it was combat-mathematics, not combat-linguistics >Although some might argue that there is some overlap >And get smacked down with books from both sides for being annoying gits >But back to equestria and Anon's struggle >Now since ponies are vampies now, they want blood >And as we all know, the tastiest blood comes from humans >Ponies really want Anon's B >But Anon's enthusiastic caution towards vampires prevents any of them getting near enough to ask if he would be so kind as to let them have some >They wouldn't take it without his permission, that'd be mean >Ponies are sad as a result >Then i guess something interesting happens, but you'll have to hire some other writefag for that
Anonymous
Anonymous
Gentle reminder that real vampires sparkle in sunlight.
Anonymous
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>>25250890 I missed your green durnk
Anonymous
>>25251511 Call me sparkle cuz I sparkle in the day!
Wait that isn't what I meant to say!
Uh, u keep my flow I call it super fluidity
No don't call it stupidity!
Anonymous
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>>25249479 >cute and/or sexy Sunset/Rainbow Dash Since the story is from Anon's POV, wouldn't that end in death? You know, what with the yandere girlfriend and all.
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>>25252395 I got that reference
TheAutistocrat
Okay, I think what I might do with this story is pull a Stoker, go until a certain part and put it on hiatus until next autumn. I just don't see it getting done with good quality any time soon, and I don't wish to muck up the threads.
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>>25253129 From what I've seen, when this sort of things happen they normally pause the story and move on to a different one then return when they're back in the groove. Anyway I'd if you're not feeling the story go off and do whatever you want, if you return that'd be great if not don't force yourself to write for the sake of writing.
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>>25253222 Well it may be that. But I told myself to not be '
'That guy' when I started my write-faggotry.
You know the guy who never finishes their stories?
I will be back next year as I have no intent of leaving /mlp/ unless I either die, it dies, or I'm supreme world commander by then.
Two of those are not happening.
So yeah, once I get the bug for this story I will gladly start-up again, it's just I usually commit to these things to the end.
I just see everything going downhill from here on out if I try and finish the story by now.
On a side note, I'll start writing soon. I've just got some homework to finish up.
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>>25253129 >Returning to Ubermensch/Anon the Titan Really? Cool!
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>>25244835 > You were greeted with the hard surface of a table. > Peeling away you look around. > The girls were slumped all over the lounge. > Not a single scratch on them... > Oh thank goodness..... > You rub the sleep out of your eyes, flashes of how horribly your 'team' was wrecked going through your mind. > Hmm... > There were some things still left unresolved... > But for now... > A figure moved back and forth among the girls, sprinkling some kind of golden dust over their faces. > It wore a tattered robe that had a hood to hide its face, but did nothing for the long white hair spilling from its hood. > It muttered something, sprinkling the dust over Twilight. > "Sleep well, dream dread, when you wake from your dream, I will have been fed." > That didn't sound good. > Luckily it hasn't noticed that you were awake yet. > Celestia let out a groan; stirring in her forced dream state. > Seems as if she just died... > You push out of your chair, stopping the figure dead in its tracks. > It slowly turned to you, it's chant stopping right there. > "Oh dear..." > You adjust your jumper; looking around the room. > It was night time but it wasn't currently filled with monsters of all kinds awaiting to tear into you. > Which was good! > "How did you awake?" > You shrug. "A hunch?"
> Back.. > Internally laughing at your own joke you begin to pace in and out of the tables, staring the strange creature down. > Rarity and Fluttershy lay face down in their game of chinese checkers, un-moving. "Gotta say, you had me there for a second."
> "When did you realize it wasn't real?" the figure asked. > You shrug. "Realistically when the second me came into play. I mean really? That's just stupid."
> You could feel a cold smile forming under the hood. > "You're smarter than you look." > You nod, scratching your chin. "Say, what are you anyway? With that hair style I would say Carrot tops great grandmother."
> Another frown hung in the air. > "You're funny." It simply spat. TheAutistocrat
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> You shrug nonchalantly. > A low brush of air came from the figure. "I'm what your children call the 'Sandman'. I don't have a real name, Mother never gave me one." > The Sandman? > Hadn't fought one of those before... > Which could prove problematic for you right now. > A low chuckle came from the figure. > "I guess you're not smarter than I thought." > Wow, rude. > "Don't you get it idiot? Eyes have been on you since you asked about... 'him'..." > "Shhh!" > This creature seemed legitimately scared. > "We do not speak his name, it is forbidden by Mother." > "To what? You can't do nothing to me! I've seen you commence your little investigation Hunter, you're as useless as all of your kind." > One thing you noticed was that there was a lack of Sunset and Luna here. > So how were they with you in the dream? > Oh well, you weren't getting anything from this guy. > "As if I would tell you." > A smirk came from under the robe. "I'll never tell you, Mother wouldn't allow me too." > "No." It said strictly. > "NO!" > Suddenly the door burst open, jolting your attention. > "ME!"
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> Other you stood in the doorway, both girls slumped over his shoulders. > Wait... > What the fuck? > The Sandman glared at him. > "You..." > "Me!" > He roughly dropped the girls. > "Honestly this should've been seen coming." > "Can we please not do this now." he said. > "You, Mother needs her amulet back." > "Come and take it then." > "Dude, what did I just say?" > "You're both idiots! I'm ending this now!" > The Sandman waved his hand, sending Other you rocketing into the wall next to him. > You found yourself rushing forward; leaping over the tables. > The Sandman turned to you. > The floor suddenly jumped from you vision. > You slam into the ceiling. > The plaster cracked, harmonizing with your grunt of pain. > "Don't worry. He's not tough!" Other you said getting back up. > He slammed back into the wall with a grunt. > "Okay, maybe he is a little tougher than he looks..." > "I'm just going to kill you both! Mother will be proud of me then!" > It let out a maniac laugh. > A pressure suddenly found its way on your chest. > The air slipped from your lungs. > At first it was fine until the burning came. > Every cell in your body burned with pain. > You head pounded against your skull, a visible pulsing taking your vision. > Okay, any moment now you would wake up... > No... > Okay... > You gasp for air, fighting the instinct to claw at your throat. > "Say your prayers, little one~" > The Sandman stopped laughing, snapping his head to the Other you. > He picked himself up from the wall slowly. > "Don't forget, my son~" > "W-What is this?" > Other you spun on his heel, hopping up on one of the tables. > "To include everyone~!" He finished this with a grandiose toss of his arms. > "Shut up you idiotic.... idiot" > Oh real clever there sandy. > "Tuck you in, warm within!"
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> The pressure lightened. > Gravity took effect of your body again. > Oh hey look, the floor was getting bigge- > BANG! > You grunt in pain as your body connected with the floor, the rug luckily softening the landing quite a bit. > Picking yourself up wasn't an easy task after that. > Other you was struggling to breath now, trapped in some sort of force choke by the Sandman. > Time to do what you do best. > He glared at you, throwing his hand at you as well. > The ground left your feet, your back meeting with one of the tables resting among the area. > Wonderful.... > You roll over like a stiff log. > With a pathetic cough you lay on your belly now, trying your best to move past the pain. > An unconscious Pinkie lay in front of you, her expression twitching in fear of something. > Well that was good, earlier when you got up they were all comatose. > A shuffle from Dash rouses your attention. > They would wake up any moment now. > All you had to do was keep the guy busy... > "I can't wait too see the two of you annoying fools sleep forever." > Edge! > You sit up, letting out a pained sigh. > This business wasn't an enjoyable one to be honest. > You slowly get off of the table, all of the Sandman's attention on Other you. > Moving low you sprint forward. > Just as you got close enough you sprung forward, taking the two of you down. > His grip on Other you released with a surprised shout. > "Get off of me disgusting human!" he shouted. > "You're not even Russian!" > "Nyet." > "Nyet!" > "Ahhhhhgggg! Shut up!" > ..... > "Nyet."
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>>25254816 In my head, I'm picturing the two Anons as Riggs and Murtaugh.
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> With a surprising burst of strength he tossed you clear across the room. > You slammed into the wall, your vision going black for a brief second. > As you fell forward you heard some shuffling coming from the table nearest to you. > That's where AJ was sitting... > So close, had too keep him distracted a little longer. > The Other you let out a shout as he was thrown across the room. > You right yourself. > With a pop you straighten your spine. > Okay you had to do a little more than annoy this guy. > You look around the room for anything that could help. > Well a lot of stuff could help but they were unconscious. > The Sandman threw his hood back, revealing a withered face covered in liver spots. > His old, filmy eyes flicked between the two of you. > "Enough is enough of you foolish, slobbering apes." > Oh there's the pressure again. > You clutch at your chest, keeling over in pain. > He got the Other you with the same trick, the two of you miming each others pained and sporadic movements. > The Sandman began to laugh again. > Throwing his head back the laughter filled the room. > "Love me Mother!" He shouted among the inconsistent laughter. > Lungs burning... > Ribs cracking. > You cough up a warm liquid, most of it getting stuck in your mask. > This was it... > And then.... > The Sandman let out a shriek as blue flames burst from nowhere. > He ran into the nearest wall, flinging his arms wildly while he screamed in pain. > The girls were awake.
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> He ran about the room, crashing into the counter. > He reached up, grabbing hold of the cabinents. > The blue fire spread all around him. > The room was lit up by the sole source of the fire, the blue glow spreading over your group. > You backed away from the flailing mess, watching as he slammed into a wall. > The Sandman fell to the ground, the flames engulfing him entirely. > Pretty soon he stopped fighting and screaming. > The flames just took him over... > You watched silently, feeling AJ take a spot next to you. > "What happened?" > Oh, where did you even begin?
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> The two of you explained the situation to the group as best as you could. > Which basically consisted of a lot of hand-motions and paper puppets. > That amused Pinkie. > They didn't remember dying horribly in their dreams which was really good because they were incredibly realistic. > You were just glad it was all over with. > Most of them were happy too see each other, seemingly having a memory block of the whole problem. > But they still somehow felt the sorrow, Pinkies eyes were a dead give away to that. > Sunset and Luna were up eventually, fine save for the bruises, concussion, whip marks, and cuts. > Which... > They weren't fine. > But that didn't apply to you. > While the girls chattered among themselves you turn to the Other you. > He nodded silently. > "But uh... what now..." > You fold your arms over your chest. > You peer out of the corner of your eye, seeing something flinch away from the door. > The two of you slip past the girls, most of them too busy with each other to notice your departure. > You push past the door, earning a squeal from the other side. > The two of you peered down, spotting Garold cowering. > "Get up wuss." Other you said helping him up. > "I'm sorry..." > "I was no hel-" > You look up and down the hallway. > Cracking the door open you peer in, seeing the girls still distracted among themselves. > You turn back to the two. > "If you finish that, I'll curse you." Garold said. > The two of you shared surprised looks. > You lead the two down the hallway.
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> The three of you stood in front of your RV. > Other you had his hands in his pockets. > Well, SexMachine. > He insisted on the name now. > Garold's hunched form stood among the two of you, rather pathetic with your statures. > "I know what you want." > You quirk a brow. > "Yes..." > "No... But we both know I'm going to do it anyway." > You blow a raspberry. > "What's going on?" Garold asked, craning his neck to stare at the two of you. > Well... > What little of a neck he had. > "He want's me to go do what we couldn't do before." > He turned to you. > "But we know I'm not gonna do it." > You frown. > "I don't thin-" > ".... Anon." > With a sigh head reached up and pulled away the mask. > You froze at the sight before you.
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> The three of you stood in front of your RV. > Other you had his hands in his pockets. > Well, SexMachine. > He insisted on the name now. > Garold's hunched form stood among the two of you, rather pathetic with your statures. > "I know what you want." > You quirk a brow. > "Yes..." > "No... But we both know I'm going to do it anyway." > You blow a raspberry. > "What's going on?" Garold asked, craning his neck to stare at the two of you. > Well... > What little of a neck he had. > "He want's me to go do what we couldn't do before." > He turned to you. > "But we know I'm not gonna do it." > You frown. > "I don't thin-" > ".... Anon." > With a sigh he reached up and pulled away the mask. > You froze at the sight before you.
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> You had forgotten what you looked like before. > No scars. > No burns. > No tears, bruises, missing teeth. > He looked like what you should. > You nod solemnly. > "You're... fine Anonymous. Why do you even bother wearing the mask." > You turn to Garold with a grunt. > "Neither am I." SexMachine said, pulling the mask back on. > "We're this." He gestured to the mask. > You give a bitter smile under your mask. > "Anon, even if I tried I couldn't. Chrysalis is still chasing after this amulet and that's the only thing keeping me alive." > You shake your head. > Chances are you were very, very wrong. > SexMachine groaned. > "It's not happening." > You sigh. > The two of you stood there silently until Garold began to speak. > "I don't know who you are guys. But you're the madmen that saved me and are this towns only hope. If you ask me, that's better than some normal life." > You didn't agree but you fake a nod, trying to avoid an argument. > SexMachine caressed the RV. > "I must go though, if I stay here, wherever I go will be in danger." > He stared at you silently. > You reached into the pocket of your jumper. > Pulling out the keys you toss them at him. > He caught it, staring down at them like a newborn receiving its first gift. > You lean against the RV, folding your arms. > He chuckled. > "Of course."
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> He popped open the door, moving up the steps. > "You know it!" > You push off of the RV, pocketing your hands and strolling back towards the school. > A soft tug at your pants leg alerted you. > You peer down at Garold who looked back and forth between the RV. > "Anon before I go." > You frown. > "Of course." > "I can't do much here... and Chrysalis would really want my hide after all of this." > "But could you do one thing for me." > "Recite poetry to Sunset and feed the goddess grapes for me." > Your eye twitched. > Was this guy for real? > Before you could say anything else he scrambled to the RV, hobbling up the steps. > SexMachine let out a boisterous laugh and started up the vehicle. > It sputtered to life pathetically. > "Listen to that purr!" he shouted. > It jerked forward for a second, seemingly stuck in place. > Then slowly it began to move out of the parking lot. > As you watched the RV leave you sighed. > Maybe you should have left while he dealt with this mess... > The schools doors swung open, revealing an excited Dash. > "Yo! Dude come and look at this!" > You shrug and stroll back to the school. > You don't know what was going on. > But if you could trust yourself. > You now knew a little bit more than before. > Some crazy plan about Resources and Conversions. > Oh well... > Right now you were focused on one thing. > You had no friggen place to sleep. > And you definitely weren't going back to the Asylum, too many bad memories. > and AJ's farm was absolutely wrecked... > This was a predicament....
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> As you head through the school doors you stop suddenly. > Slamming your foot down you let out a frustrated shout. > That faggot took your only change of clothes! > Now you were stuck in this shitty jumper! > You run your hands down your face and sigh. > Whatever, whatever, it was good. > You'd bum some or steal some more later on. > Heh; the suit was torn anyway. > Jokes on him. > Besides... > You reach into one of the jumpers pockets, producing a red crystal and the folded check-in list. > This was all you needed right now for the case. > You pocket them again, making a right. > You came out to the hallway. > "Just come on!" She moved ahead of you, eerily cheery right now. > What was wrong with he- > Wow! > You focused on her bottom. > Her firm cheeks pressed against the spandex shorts she wore, her muscles rippling with each bounding step. > When did she make the wardrobe change? > Suddenly she stopped. Twirling around. > "Got ya'" She said cheerily. > "Got ya silly~!" > Her form began to melt, changing into something else. > Crap. > You ready up, looking around the hallway for anything to defend yourself with. > It still wasn't over? > "Containment procedure five Miss Harshwhinny." The changing mass said into something. > "Understood." > All at once multiple soldiers flooded around the corners of the hallways. > You watched as they circled around you, guns trained on you specifically. > "Hands up!" One of them shouted. > He was rather big. > And then there was the guns...
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> You comply, holding your hands in the air. > You never got a break did you? > The clacking of heels on the floor caught your attention. > You turn around, seeing a single figure break through the circle. > A tired middle-aged woman looked you over. > Her features were rather bland, the only thing noticeable was the purple suit she was wearing. > She lowered her walkie-talkie, giving you a tired smile. > "Good evening Anonymous. I'm afraid you're currently on the list of suitors." > Her voice was haughty, refined but cracked quite a bit. > Okay, you would bite. > "Our SCP unit, do not worry about your friends. They were rather brash but they were taken care of, AIM!" > The guns raised. > The woman rolled her eyes. > "I might as well explain. You're not a monster after all. Actually, we're not entirely sure of that. Check!" > "Unit check!" One of the soldiers shouted. > "Checking!" Another one shouted back. > He lowered his gun and held up a silver rod shaped like a lava lamp. > It let out a light 'ding' then a low beep. > "Human, signs of deteriorating sanity, possible chance of skin cancer later on." > The was great to know. > "Sociopathic behavior, Apathetic behavior, prone to bouts of laziness." > That was accurate. > "Estimated IQ... 100." > "Suspected life expectancy..." > The soldier back away, raising his gun. > "Do not try it sir, I'm order too shoot if attacked first!" > The woman smiled again. > "And just a faint trace of magical residue... like the schools principals... you're tied in with them aren't you?" > You narrow your eyes, not like they could even see them. > The sound of a blow gun filled your ears before a stinging sensation prodded at your neck. > You clasp your hand over it, pulling away a small, silver dart. > The world started to fade. > "Take him to the others, he may be our only hope."
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> You comply, holding your hands in the air. > You never got a break did you? > The clacking of heels on the floor caught your attention. > You turn around, seeing a single figure break through the circle. > A tired middle-aged woman looked you over. > Her features were rather bland, the only thing noticeable was the purple suit she was wearing. > She lowered her walkie-talkie, giving you a tired smile. > "Good evening Anonymous. I'm afraid you're currently on the list of suitors." > Her voice was haughty, refined but cracked quite a bit. > Okay, you would bite. > "Our SCP unit, do not worry about your friends. They were rather brash but they were taken care of, AIM!" > The guns raised. > The woman rolled her eyes. > "I might as well explain. You're not a monster after all. Actually, we're not entirely sure of that. Check!" > "Unit check!" One of the soldiers shouted. > "Checking!" Another one shouted back. > He lowered his gun and held up a silver rod shaped like a lava lamp. > It let out a light 'ding' then a low beep. > "Human, signs of deteriorating sanity, possible chance of skin cancer later on." > That was great to know. > "Sociopathic behavior, Apathetic behavior, prone to bouts of laziness." > That was accurate. > "Estimated IQ... 100." > "Suspected life expectancy..." > The soldier back away, raising his gun. > "Do not try it sir, I'm ordered too shoot if attacked first!" > The woman smiled again. > "And just a faint trace of magical residue... like the schools principals... you're tied in with them aren't you?" > You narrow your eyes, not like they could even see them. > The sound of a blow gun filled your ears before a stinging sensation prodded at your neck. > You clasp your hand over it, pulling away a small, silver dart. > The world started to fade. > "Take him to the others, he may be our only hope."
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That's it for tonight. I will continue tomorrow, but at a way later time. I've got homework piling up boys.
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>Vampires exist. >The supernatural is real. >It's a testament to how fucked up your life has been that it has taken so long for that realization to really hit. >Your steps falter for a second as the thought strikes you, nearly tripping up the girl hanging from your arm. >Still, in the grand scheme of things, it doesn't seem very important. >For all you know, it isn't. No one else seems to know, not even the one that was there with you. Or more accurately, she doesn't seem to care. Those are other things. Things not you, and you're all she cares about. >Rarity's attitude would be flattering, if it didn't terrify you. >"What is on your mind, darling?" she asks, tugging on your arm. "You look a little lost." >She would be the perfect girlfriend, if she hadn't... >"I highly doubt that." >She pouts slightly, but doesn't press the issue. Nor is she trying to guilt you into opening up; you had that conversation yesterday. >No, she's not being passive-aggressive; she actually *does* care. >Everything about you is important to her, even your stray musings. >Perfect girlfriend. >You're not too surprised. With not even - not ever - a stray hair out of place, everything about the girl practically screams perfection. Only it's not screamed, more like... smugly whispered. >Everything, that is, except her choice in boyfriend. >That still puzzles you. >What makes you so special? >What makes you worth... worth killing for...?
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>>25256533 >Someone died because of you, because she accidentally stepped between you and Rarity. >A sudden gust of wind makes the trees above you dance and sending orange and red leaves tumbling gently to the ground. >Out of the corner of your eye, you watch the shadows and sunlight play across your new girlfriend's face. >This could have been Fluttershy hanging on your arm as you stroll down the sidewalk. >Instinctively, you reach over and pluck a fallen leaf from Rarity's hair. >It just looks so out of place on her, even if its pale orange did look stunning set against the purple curls. >"Oh! Thank you." "No problem."
>Would have looked better on Fluttershy, but you'll never get a chance to see that. She was a vampire; she would have burned in this light. >You still hear her screams. >Another gust of wind makes Rarity squeeze your arm tightly. >"A little chilly, isn't it, darling?" "Yeah."
>The cold front had come in yesterday morning, shortly after the girls had left your place. Actually, it was part of the reason they had left so quickly, without questioning Fluttershy's absence too much. Everyone wanted to beat the heavy rain home. >Besides, the girls all knew that Fluttershy had wanted to leave the night before. Twilight seemed pretty sure she must have slipped out in the middle of the night and walked home. It had taken some talking on her part, but eventually she convinced the others. Something about her probably needing to get home to her animals before the storm hit. It made perfect sense, really. twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25256544 >You hadn't corrected them. >But when Fluttershy hadn't shown up for school the next day - today - they began to worry. >When she didn't answer her phone, they began to panic. >Except AJ - she seemed furious. After a moment of shock, you realized that was natural; different people show fear in different ways, after all. >It has been two days since anyone had seen Fluttershy, and now you are walking towards her home, arm-in-arm with the girl who made that happen. >The others had been visibly relieved when Rarity had suggested the two of you look in on their friend. At first, you had been confused, but after some thought, it all made sense. It'll give her a chance to hide Fluttershy's disappearance for a little longer, after all. >But no, that wasn’t why, Rarity had explained patiently when you brought it up. >”Someone needs to look after her animals,” she had said softly. “It’s the right thing to do.” >You had difficulty arguing with that. How could you? >Her reason is far more pure and innocent than yours. >From the way she frowned, you suspect that it had never even occurred to her, nor would it have. >For the first time, she actually looks disappointed in you. >Just yesterday morning, you helplessly watched as Rarity cracked open Fluttershy’s ribcage and drove a stake through her heart, and you’re starting to wonder if you might not be the sane one in this relationship. Anonymous
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Last bump from me tonight.
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>>25256555 >If it can even be called a relationship, that is. >How can you possibly date a monster like her? >You glance over at her again – and she smiles. >What a stupid question to ask yourself; you’re dating her because you don’t know what else to do. >Kill her? Turn her in? Confess to everyone else that you simply watched as she butchered their friend? >You don’t have the heart to tell them that; you’re not a brave enough man to fight back against Rarity, even though you’re not sure she wouldn’t slash her own throat for you if you said the word. >She’d do it, and you’re pretty sure she’d do it with a smile. >Anything to please you. >But you can’t – you just can’t – you can’t be the cause of another death, even if she deserves it. >You’re not even sure of that, anymore. >She did save your life, after all, and she was the first of the girls to think of Fluttershy’s pets. >And the date last night, coerced though it was… >Well, you haven’t been on many, but you think it went pretty smoothly. >Some of your friends had even asked about it earlier today. You have no idea how they had known, but Rarity was right – simply publicly going out someplace was enough for word to get around. >You had told them it was alright, that no one died. >They laughed at your joke, and you hated yourself even more, because you actually had been joking. Anonymous
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>>25257498 >It was your standard, humble go-to joke. It was never supposed to be an actual relevant response. >Anyway, the truth was it went better than alright. >It’s just guesswork on your part, but you doubt many first dates end with watching the sun come up. >You’re hoping Nightmare Night was all your imagination, that you will knock on Fluttershy’s door and she’ll be there, sick as hell, but alive. >Because… >You glance over at Rarity again. >”Almost there, darling,” she says, misreading your look. “It’s just at the end of the block.” >… you’re starting to like this. “So, will her parents be there?”
>”I do not believe so,” Rarity answers, before starring off into the sky. “You know, in all the time I have known my friends, I do not believe I have ever met any of their parents.” >Yeah, you know the feeling. Sometimes, you wonder if you’re living in one of those Chinese cartoons where everyone is in middle school and has their own apartment. >Still, once you reach the house, you motion for Rarity to knock on the door. If someone is home, they probably know of her, even if she hasn’t met them. >She doesn’t question it, immediately releasing your arm and skipping ahead two steps to rap daintily, eschewing the doorbell. >”Too noisy,” you can imagine her saying. “It just lacks that essential human touch.” >After a minute, Rarity knocks again, slightly harder. >There still isn’t any response. “We might as well go, I guess.”
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>>25257718 >You both know she won’t be answering the door. >”But the animals,” Rarity whines softly. “We cannot just –“ >Right. >You step up beside her and pound the door with you fist. >Nothing. >Not even barking. >Well, you don’t know if she actually has a dog, but you expect to hear something. >From what you’ve heard, there should be dozens of critters scampering around. At least one of them should react to the noise. “Well, what now?”
>Maybe there’s a spare key hidden in one of the bushes. If not, maybe you can rely on some good Hollywood staples. You take a step back and look to both sides of the house. The fence is low enough to climb without too much difficulty, and you might get lucky with an unsecured back door. Fluttershy seemed like the kind of trusting soul to leave her… front… door... totally… unlocked. >”Shall we?” Rarity asks, waving a hand towards the open door. >Deep down, you knew that would happen as soon as you started looking for a more complicated solution, and so you feel no embarrassment at all as you walk through the doorway. >The smell immediately hits you, sending you back out the door gagging. >You had expected something – the usual pet smells – but not this. >Not the sickly sweet stench of rotting flesh. “I think we’re too late.”
>You cover your mouth with your arm as you speak, trying to keep the smell out. >It doesn’t work. >You can *taste* it. twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25258095 >”Nonsense, it has not even been two –“ >Rarity’s attempt to enter the house fares no better than yours, leaving her retching as she retreats to the street. >”Impossible,” she gasps. “Whatever is in there smells like it has been dead for days!” “Weeks.”
>A little over a month, you suspect. >With a heavy heart, you walk back into the house. >You can’t just leave. >She deserves better than this. end for tonight have a decent outline for the overall plot now, though - much like our cast - I doubt most of it will survive to the end unscathed. Still hoping for more responses to >>25244391 to flesh things out. twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
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>>25244391 Horror with a twinge of humor. Think Evil Dead 2.
Canterlot High? PHOTO FIINNIISSSHH because she's determined to catch this crazy shit on her camera, with whats his name as her sidekick. The foal with the camera. (plus nobody ever writes about Photo Finish)
Butterstutter's sire was
Scoots who was turned by
Spitfire (the latter doesn't have to show up).
Keep it classic supernatural. Werewolves and Igor and so on.
CMC Junior Investigators a GO!
Scoots uses them to keep the other super-misfits in line as she'll expose them to the outside world and they'll be obliterated by angry townsfolk Worst Ending?
Fluttershy because they try to bring her back and instead of slightly apologetic vampire they end up with a completely mindless monster (think nosferatu) that just wants to feed and turn everyone Anonymous
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>>25258907 page 10?
TIME FOR PANIC!
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Going to work boop
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>>25260226 At the Disco?
.....I'll just see myself out.
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I think I can accommodate most of the suggestions so far, in one form or another. For example, Photo Finish as head of the Paranormal Photography Club, Trixie as head of the Occult Studies Club, and Sunset as the only one who actually knows a damn thing. Not entirely sure about making the CMCs monsters, but we'll see how that goes. I've already done that once and I'd hate to repeat myself, after all.
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>>25239677 NOW THATS WHAT I CALL EDGY
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>>25250804 >>25250505 I know this is super late, but I just want you to know that
we'd never be separable. Anonymous
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>>25261230 Carlos, tu perra
mi negro Anonymous
>Trixie as head of the Occult Studies Club
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>>25263311 checking your dub dubs you dirty spic
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For Academic Purposes
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>>25264090 >DXD in Equestria Anonymous
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Anybody have any monster comedy green they could link?
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>>25258350 >You have a fairly good idea what you will find inside, and it shouldn't be how Fluttershy is remembered. >"Anon! Wait!" “I have to do this, Rarity.”
>You don’t want to. In fact, between the stench and your nerves, it’s a wonder you don’t run screaming all the way to your own home, but you can’t. You can’t let anyone find out what Fluttershy did. >You owe her that much, at least. >There isn’t much time to spare. The wind does nothing to sweep away the stench; it simply *spreads* it. >A few of the neighbors are starting to look suspiciously towards the house. One even cuts the motor on his lawnmower and approaches slowly. >Everyone knows something is wrong. "There... might be someone inside that needs help!"
>Someone is going to call the police. In fact, one of the onlookers pulling her phone from her purse right now. >You can't let them find her victim. >Fluttershy wasn't herself; it wasn't her fault. >"Don't touch anything!" Rarity calls out as you charge in. "Please!" >You immediately bash your shin against something thin and wiry. >"What was that!?" "Don't know!"
>The house is pitch black. With all of the lights off and curtains pulled tightly shut, the only illumination is the afternoon sun shining through the open doorway. >It's just barely enough for you to find what's left of the light switch. More of a hole in the wall, really. >Common sense tells you not to touch the bare wires, and for once you listen. twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25267691 >"Anon!?" "I CAN'T SEE ANYTHING! THE LIGHTS ARE BUSTED, SO I'M GOING TO TRY FOR A WINDOW!"
>After a few more bruises, you stumble into a wall. You follow it, feeling blindly for a curtain or other hint of a window. It’s only a few feet before you feel cloth. >You pull at it - nothing. It doesn’t give. Fumbling around the edge, it’s not hard to figure out why. >Grabbing on with both hands, you heave with all your strength, tearing the curtain free from the wall in a hail of staples, nails, and torn duct tape. "... the hell...?"
>The tape you knew about, but the rest seems a little excessive just to keep the light out, even for a vampire. >"ANON!?" "Found it!"
>The light pours in, revealing shredded furniture and - from the outline - what you assume are cages beneath heavy cloth. >Her pets. >That would explain the lack of noise. If she covered the cages, they're probably all sleeping. >Or does that only work on birds? >Whatever. It's not important right now. >You shrug mentally and look around the room. Empty tubes of sunscreen have been thrown haphazardly in one corner and a wide-brimmed hat hangs from a hook by the door. Stains mar the carpet and discarded clothes litter the floor, enough to remind you of your bedroom. >Aren't girls supposed to be cleaner than this? >But no body, no sign of the person she killed. >You have to go further in. Anonymous
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>>25268004 >The stench – and the destruction – grow more and more prevalent the deeper you go. Light fixtures have been torn from the ceilings, piles of filthy clothes and sheets cover the floor. The kitchen walls are covered in rotting food – it looks like the entire contents of the refrigerator had been hurled about by a localized tornado. >You tear down the curtains as you go to give yourself enough light to see, but it slows you down. >Sirens are wailing in the distance; your time is running out. >You don’t even know what you’ll do with the body once you find it, but that’s fine. You’ll figure it out then. >There are only a couple more rooms to search – the first is an immaculate bedroom, clearly untouch for weeks. There’s one window high on the wall, the curtains pulled open and sunlight streaming through. >Her parents’ room, you assume. >The last, then, must be Fluttershy’s. >It would… it would make sense for the body to be there, as much as the idea disgusts and pains you. Considering how you felt when she was feeding on you, though, it’s probably the first place you should have looked. >You shudder just thinking about what you might find, about what she might have done. >Slowly, you push open the door and look inside. >Nothing is as you expected. >No body, no blood. The bed is made, the clothes are all out of sight – presumably neatly put away. twiligh/tg/ame_night !u9y.Yl1Law
>>25268426 >To say it’s not as you expected isn’t quite accurate – more like, it’s exactly how you would have expected Fluttershy’s bedroom to look like, not what you were assuming it to be after seeing the rest of the house. >The only thing that really stands out is a small pink book set on the pillow. >Her diary. >What else would it be? >Hesitantly, you reach for the book. >You shouldn’t, but all of the answers will be there. You just know it. >Who turned her into a monster, who she killed… how she actually felt about you… things you need to know. >Your hand is hovering over the cover for who knows how long. You have to know. >”Please don’t.” >FUCK! >You nearly jump out of your skin as you whirl around. >”I’d really rather you didn’t read that,” Fluttershy mumbles softly, her eyes avoiding yours. “It’s… personal… you know…?” Anonymous
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>>25268718 FUCKING PLOT TWIST. NIGGA WHAT.
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>>25268718 “You’re alive!?”
>You’re so happy, you could almost cry. >This is impossible, but – >She shakes her head sadly, and you have the feeling she’s sad for *you*. >Fluttershy shifts uncomfortably at your silence – her eyes flicker up to meet yours. >She’s been crying. She still is. >”Please,” she begs, just like she had begged you to let her die with dignity, “please don’t read it.” “Of course I won’t.”
>The sirens are cut off suddenly and Fluttershy’s head snaps around to stare at the window. >You have to get out of here. >”You have to get out of here,” the girl mumbles, looking back to the floor. “The police will ask you a lot of awkward questions if they find you here.” >The window is the obvious escape route – and you’re halfway to it when you realize how pointless that would be. “People saw me come in, so they’ll be asking awkward questions anyway.”
>”But –“ “Anyway, it doesn’t matter. You’re alive!”
>You hug her – and touch nothing. >”No,” she sobs quietly. “I’m not.” end for tonight Anonymous
>>25268918 are you taking lessons from Autistocrat?
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>>25268918 You are an absolute dick
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>>25269013 The last story just didn't really have enough tension for these kind of cliffhangers. This one will be different. Besides, cliffhangers promote speculation, and speculation helps the story.
if someone's ideas are better than mine, I'll go with those instead Anonymous
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>>25271283 I simultaneously love and hate your cliffhangers, man. Looking forward to another solid ride.
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Winnie the Pooh
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>At work >Finally have inspiration to write
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>Might as well be Halloween thread >No one posting spooks
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Autistocrat here, will be on to write in the next 2 hours or so. I felt as if the last bit of story was a little hard to follow so I've been re-approaching the story whilst lurking the thread.
