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>You're walking toward the bridge to kill yourself. >Its pouring down raining. >Someone today told you that you should jump off a bridge. >For once, you thought it was a great idea. >What better way to end this sad lonely existence? >You get on the bridge and get over the railing. >You take a deep breath. >Rain soaking your face. >However you catch something out of the corner of your eye. >A girl. >She turns to you as you turn to her. >She's frowning but somehow it turns into a grin. >"I, guess I'm not the only one who decided to jump." >It's contagious, you must be mad because you smile too. "Yeah, guess so. Uh, so why are you killing yourself today?">"Well, I guess It won't matter after this.. I'm always alone, every day after work I come home alone, my supposed friends all moved away, and this world is just too cold and bitter for me to want to carry on anymore." "Wow, same here. You know, you're pretty cute. I'm surprised you don't have anyone. I know I've never been very attractive..">"I think you're attractive, and, thanks. You know, it's a shame, you seem like a really nice guy. It's too bad we have to kill ourselves now, I would have liked to have gotten to know you.."
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>>25245791 >Then they both jumped. >The end. Anonymous
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>>25245791 Can you make a actually good story out of this or is it going to be a stupid 1 or 2 post thing ending in suicide?
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>>25245791 Shit
Feels forced
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>It's too bad we have to kill ourselves now fucking lel and it's shimmer so who even cares. DO A FLIP
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>>25246088 >A girl finds Anon attractive. It feels forced guys come on no girls ever would like Anoymous, zero out of ten downvoted.
>>25246121 This pretty much, Sunset Shimmer is a 1/10 would not bang under any circumstance, she is not even worthy of being in the same ROOM as a supreme gentleman such as myself.
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This isn't a terrible prompt but it's just fucking stupidly written.>we're both solving sudoku together due to crippling loneliness >we're both fairly attractive >wow what a coincidence >welp bye
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"Bet you I can do a double back flip before I hit the water."
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>>25245791 >>25247099 >"Anon..." >"ANON!" >You wake up from your autistic daydream It's Sunset trying to get your attention...
>"Did you catch what the teach-- huh?" >she's now staring at the paper you are holding >"You're playing Sudoku in the middle of class?" FulLR3tarD
>>25245791 >>25247099 I can't do green for this, but I really like the idea and thought I might polish up the prompt in case someone wants to give it a shot. >you threw the pills down your throat an hour ago >as they take effect, any second thoughts are drowned out >as you check your computer one last time, there is no remorse >you walk outside and start your green mile >it's dark outside; unusually so >the clouds block out the sun as the rain starts to hit your body >you like the rain; welcome it, even >the last thing you needed was Mother Nature's efforts to make you happy with sunshine >there isn't a soul on the sidewalk to your destination >you reach the bridge and walk to the middle >where it had the highest drop >pull out your phone >your mom and a few friends have left worried messages, asking how and where you have been >you place the device on the ground, so everyone will know where you spent your last moments >you look up to the sky, rain hitting your face >you step over the railing >but before you jump, your eye catches something to your right >it's a girl, and she's looking at you too >the despair on her face is obvious; she's about to do the same as you >except her grip on the railing seems far tighter than yours >normally, you would never initiate conversation with a girl if you didn't have to >but it wouldn't matter in a few moments anyways "I guess I'm not the only one..."
>both of your faces are wet from rain >but her sharp and staggered inhale lets you know that she's crying >"N-no, I guess not." >you look away for a moment in a careless fashion "Before I... go..."
>you look down >you're ready for this >look back at her "...what's your name?"
>she looks like she's trying to smile >but her efforts are futile >"M-my name... is Sunset. Sunset Shimmer." >your interest satiated, you let go of the railing, preparing to jump >but before your legs lift off, you say "For what it's worth.. it was nice to meet you, Sunset."
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>>25247795 Not bad my friend, not bad
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>>25247795 Looks better than the prompt OP had.
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>>25247795 Much better writing but the premise still kinda feels awkward.
Maybe Anon could be upset that someone is doing it on the same day as him. It could ruin the impact his death has. Plus she seems like too nice of a girl to be that sad. Then again that sounds awful too.
Also thread theme:
https://youtu.be/49Gz0Jfp-jI FulLR3tarD
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>>25247901 Tried to leave it vague so the next writefag could really make it his own story.
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>>25245791 *Sigh* can some nigga please tell me why people make these depressing things?
I mean i kinda get it i have aspergers and suffer from depression myself but darn it guys cant we just have happy pony!? Is that not the reason so many of us are here, to celebrate and discuss something that makes us happy?
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>>25247943 Yeah sorry im an elegan/tg/entalman. role play talk is kinds a habit.
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>>25247795 >You begin to plummet to the gray ice water below >The speed of the drop causes you cheeks to pull back >Your eyes burn from the wind >But you can see your eyes lining up with the horizon >Then the water dashing up your spine and knocking your head forward >Then white >Sunset watches in absolute horror from above >Still holding her hand out >The words "wait" still stuck in her throat >Her breaths have become shallow and empty >She grips the railing hard but crouches down, mentally broken >It's not the impact, it's what you've left behind >Those words in that short time, Sunset wonders if that's what it feels like to lose someone you desperately needed >He would have never known that >Good thing Anon is a professional bridge jumper and is now coming back up to the bridge for a second jump fuck you this prompt is gay Blowtorch
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>>25248208 Nice reply though. Kudos anon.
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>>25245791 >horribly written >fails even the most basic of grammar >adverbs, adjectives, what? >dialogue written by a a five year old >cringey as fuck premise Greentext has never particularly been good nor have I payed much attention, but good fucking god, have you no pride at all?
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>>25245791 >Anon and Sunset leap to their deaths. >Both wake up in Equestria. >Fuck. >Sunset makes the best of a bad situation, moves in with Twilight. >Anon tries to kill himself again. >Wakes up back on Earth. >FUCK.