>>532242Much better. The Super Mario scenario you did earlier was a cool idea (I like how you added the lucky star, and the flag), but man, it really was quite sloppy. Don't worry though, my own first kirigami experiments didn't look any better either.
Try to get your hands on thicker paper, at least 120-160gsm, for even better results. If your paper is too thin and wobbly, you're bound to get tears even with sharp blades (if it's too thick, it's hard to fold the creases without damaging the paper, too). And pre-score the creases with a metal ruler, meaning you cut ca. 1/3 into the paper, for best results (even better when you score the right side for the type of crease).
