>>43347463Let's take it from the top, in addtion to everything
>>43349780 said.
Equipment is terrible. The numbering on weapons is silly, and you fucking start them with studded leather, which doesn't happen, or chain shirt, which is shit. Who the fuck would pick fucking chain shirt in this scenario?
Greatness is suicidal at low levels, and given 1d12 or 2d6, a player will take the 2d6. The option is needless clutter. However, as Greatness does require getting your shit slapped, it could be alright maybe with a lower cap.
Except for that whole Inspiring Greatness thing. Unless you can only gain Greatness by HP damage, this makes you virtually unkillable at low levels, and also at high ones since fucking 15 THP every time you're hit is pants on head retarded.
The fluff of Greatness is also terrible. What's so fucking great about getting your shit slapped? Do better.
Fighting Style: Missles? Are you fucking serious? Did you reword this just so it could stack with Archery? No. Also, Protection without shield proficiency. Good job.
Ability Scores equal to fighters? No, man, that's their thing. Stop.
Impossible Resolve: Well, at least you can still be petrified and restrained! But no, is too much.
Voice of Legend: Did you just give them a feature equal to a 9th level spell, as a non-caster, on a fucking ASI level? Yes you did.
Celestial Hold - MMMMMMMM, LEMME GRAPPLE THIS HERE TARRASQUE. YOU RESTRAINED NOW, BOY. Next time you try to kill a man, you best get the job done. Now you’re my bitch forever.
Eclipse Shot - Two fucking features at seven? Stop that. Also, lemme throw this here Ogre, still does 1d4+Str though!
Skyblade - OK so now they have four attacks, huh? At 10? BUT THEY HAVE TO SPEND A RESOURCE ON IT! A resource they will always have.
Catapult Throw - And now the Ogre is a fucking boomerang? Why would you think this is balanced? Oh wait, right, better than fucking fighter at being a martial. GOOD JOB THERE.
