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Anonymous Sat 04 Jul 2015 19:14:46 No.1807478 View Reply Report Delete

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Continued from >>1755900

Welcoming any translators, typesetters, quality checkers to help bring more translated yuri into the world.

Incomplete translations (need moonspeakers to fix incomplete/uncertain parts):
http://pastebin.com/CWBVjERS
Complete translations, ready for typeset (though QC is always welcome):
http://pastebin.com/QZ0cF84B

KanjiTomo, useful, albeit sometimes finicky, Kanji reader tool: http://kanjitomo.net/

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Gulf Standard Fri 23 Oct 2015 14:24:12 No.1897583 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1897817 >>1898045

>>1897455
>Any suggestions on how to translate "Giri-"?

grit, gnash, grind

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!!g46065MZr+/ Fri 23 Oct 2015 23:54:10 No.1897817 Report Delete

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>>1897583
Grit works. Thanks!

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!!g46065MZr+/ Sat 24 Oct 2015 05:08:27 No.1897954 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1898010

Not sure about the SFX translation at the bottom.

スキャッ (sukyaa)

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Gulf Standard Sat 24 Oct 2015 07:47:18 No.1898010 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1898015

>>1897954
Where it says "slide"? Can I see the original effect?

I don't know whether it's intentional, but the bag says "Poteto Chips."

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!!g46065MZr+/ Sat 24 Oct 2015 07:50:51 No.1898015 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1898026

>>1898010
This.

"Poteto Chips" is intentional. There was a scene in the anime where Ichigo opened a bag with the Engrish "Poteto Chips." Thought it'd be funny to reference that.

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Gulf Standard Sat 24 Oct 2015 08:09:52 No.1898026 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1898030 >>1898924

>>1898015
It's スチャッ. Seems to be associated with a forceful action that you consider cool/important? So maybe just "thrust" or something similar.

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!!g46065MZr+/ Sat 24 Oct 2015 08:14:58 No.1898030 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1898238

>>1898026
Not sure about "thrust", given this scene (no form of thrusting, she just showed how she understood the pocky game). I went to the usual guides and see no entries on "sucha(a)-."

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!!g46065MZr+/ Sat 24 Oct 2015 09:09:27 No.1898045 Report Delete

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>>1897583
see >>1898016

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Gulf Standard Sat 24 Oct 2015 14:05:20 No.1898238 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1898782

>>1898030
Well the idea was her sort of holding it out for inspection. I think the effect pairs with the action lines around the edges to suggest the stick and band kind of appearing impressively. Take-your-pick of action words or "da-dan!" style effects should work.

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!!g46065MZr+/ Sun 25 Oct 2015 05:57:06 No.1898782 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1898821 >>1898858

>>1898238
>da-dan
Or tada? SFX translation isn't really my forte, unfortunately.

Also any Aikatsu fans around? Ran in these shots have this yaiba kanji ( 刃 ) on her. I have no idea why the author put that on Ran. Ran's nickname is the "Beautiful Blade (yaiba)" though.

Should I just go for "blade" or just "Ran"? I think I'm missing the point of the joke here.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 08:20:25 No.1898809 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1898923 >>1898924

>>1897455
1. Typeset it normally.
2. At the bottom of the layer palette click on "Add layer mask"
or
Select the layer with the text and go to Layer > Layer Mask > Reveal All
3. Remove the text with Eraser tool.

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Gulf Standard Sun 25 Oct 2015 08:52:44 No.1898821 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1898858 >>1898926

>>1898782
>Also any Aikatsu fans around?

I'll ask my Korean friend who's a fan of the series. I don't know Korean and she doesn't speak English so should be interesting.

>Or tada? SFX translation isn't really my forte, unfortunately.

da dan, da dun, ja jan, ta-da, bam!, dun!

Forte is pronounced "fort" everyone, don't be fooled

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Gulf Standard Sun 25 Oct 2015 09:59:46 No.1898858 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1898926

>>1898782
>>1898821
She said go with "Blade." I might amend that to "The Blade", but it's up to you. My theory was that it's used when her facial expression is particularly "sharp," but I wasn't sure what her take was on that exactly.

Her interpretation of スチャッ was basically like mine, that it's like her "equipping" the Pocky stick. So any of the abovementioned options should do fine.

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!!g46065MZr+/ Sun 25 Oct 2015 11:29:44 No.1898923 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1898926 >>1900316

>>1898809
I did exactly that, but erasing the text made the outline reform to match the erased text. Same as >>1897455 Or maybe I'm using an ancient version of PS?

[1/2]

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!!g46065MZr+/ Sun 25 Oct 2015 11:30:47 No.1898924 Report Delete

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>>1898026
>>1898809
Also I just used a font with a transparent body to bypass.

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!!g46065MZr+/ Sun 25 Oct 2015 11:32:12 No.1898926 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1899417 >>1900316

>>1898923
[2/2]

>>1898858
>>1898821
see >>1898923

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Gulf Standard Sun 25 Oct 2015 21:21:09 No.1899417 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1899460

>>1898926
I could probably translate one of your stories, but I'd need to look at it first

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!!g46065MZr+/ Sun 25 Oct 2015 22:15:49 No.1899460 Report Delete

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>>1899417
Would be great, but conditions do apply though, since, well, I own these books.

Let's do the usual protocols. Please send me your info like groups you're affiliated with, how experienced are you, recent works, etc. [email protected]

I don't publicly share my stuff (unfortunately) and you'll be working under my group Lazy Lily

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!!g46065MZr+/ Mon 26 Oct 2015 01:00:58 No.1899537 Report Delete

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>>1896787
Are you still interested in working with that doujinshi? I haven't heard a word from you.

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!!g46065MZr+/ Mon 26 Oct 2015 09:12:26 No.1899686 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1899695

What's with the パロ (paro) here? Maybe it's "pal(s)" and the author misspelled パル (paru)?

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Anonymous Mon 26 Oct 2015 09:24:44 No.1899695 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1899699

>>1899686
"Paro" is a commonly used short form of "parody". The context for it is similar to how we might use "AU", in your image, for example, it's used in the sense of "this is a grade-schooler parody" or "AU where they are grade-schoolers".

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!!g46065MZr+/ Mon 26 Oct 2015 09:29:11 No.1899699 Report Delete

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>>1899695
Thank you very much for the interesting tidbit, Anon!

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!!g46065MZr+/ Mon 26 Oct 2015 09:59:57 No.1899713 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1899716

Anyone here knows Spanish?

Juri said "Taevo" and Hinaki translated it as "Atarashii". When I googled the word, the Spanish for "new" is "nuevo".

Am I missing something?

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Anonymous Mon 26 Oct 2015 10:16:14 No.1899716 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1899717

>>1899713
Um I think that's ヌ (nu), not タ (ta).

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!!g46065MZr+/ Mon 26 Oct 2015 10:17:51 No.1899717 Report Delete

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>>1899716
Well that was stupid of me... I really should review my kata...

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!!g46065MZr+/ Mon 26 Oct 2015 12:53:10 No.1899791 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1900015

Man, typesetting is real hard work. But fun.

One thing that bothers me is this line:

95話のスタライinセイラちゃん

Not sure why the author didn't just write "Sutaraito."

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Goggled Anon Mon 26 Oct 2015 19:29:44 No.1900015 Report Delete

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Glorious KarasumaxKusshi
http://pastebin.com/4nJu8y0P
http://exhentai.org/g/865638/4f075c2d79/

>>1899791
Japan has a real fetish for shortening things down to four syllables or less, usually in the context of shipping pairings or making anime committee meetings go quicker. It's why we have names like Watamote and Kinmoza (though I can't say it doesn't occassionally get annoying when English licensors carry these names over when the full name is good enough.)

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Goggled Anon Mon 26 Oct 2015 21:12:28 No.1900079 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1900095

More IchiAo
http://pastebin.com/GD0CKm3T
http://exhentai.org/g/866589/098920d9fc/

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!!g46065MZr+/ Mon 26 Oct 2015 21:30:30 No.1900095 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1900110

>>1900079
Aw, was going to do that next using my own scans... Oh well.

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Goggled Anon Mon 26 Oct 2015 21:53:40 No.1900110 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1900112

>>1900095
Well, it's a rough translation so you can always see if it can be improved. Wasn't sure how to phrase some of the phrases.

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!!g46065MZr+/ Mon 26 Oct 2015 21:55:52 No.1900112 Report Delete

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>>1900110
Oh sure, thanks! Having a rough script is always nice. Saves the hassle of starting from scratch.

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Anonymous Tue 27 Oct 2015 01:59:11 No.1900242 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1900307

So....now that payapaya scans looks to be gone for good, does anyone feel like picking up YuriCam? Raws can be found here if needed: http://rawcs.net/4517.html

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!!g46065MZr+/ Tue 27 Oct 2015 02:38:55 No.1900260 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1900277

Refresh my memory, please. What's らりるれ (Rairure)? I know it's a contraction of something, but I'm currently clueless.

The only Rock Fes found in the anime was the Loli Gothic Rock Fes in season. Rarirure is certainly not short for Loli Gothic.

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Anonymous Tue 27 Oct 2015 03:20:32 No.1900277 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1900278

>>1900260
I'm no expert in this, but a-i-u-e-o is how the Japanese order vowels. So らりるれRock is like how the ra-series is ordered, with the ろ being part of 'rock' there.

It might be a series specific thing though.

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!!g46065MZr+/ Tue 27 Oct 2015 03:24:12 No.1900278 Report Delete

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>>1900277
I thought so. I got nothing from my initial search for the name and the a i-u-e-o does make sense and it matches the situation of the doujin (Seira and her lalala, "if you're do, I'm re"). Thanks, Anon.

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Anonymous Tue 27 Oct 2015 05:25:14 No.1900307 Report Delete

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>>1900242
Payapaya scans is dead? We didn't even hit half of the manga, fuck. Who will pick it up?

Anonymous

Anonymous Tue 27 Oct 2015 06:36:28 No.1900316 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1900422

>>1898923
>>1898926
I guess that was limited to simple typeset. I just posted what I read before.
This should work http://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/How-to-edit-manga-with-Photoshop/rawr/editguide/2.html
Search using the keyword "behind" and it should bring you to what you need.

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!!g46065MZr+/ Tue 27 Oct 2015 11:27:56 No.1900422 Report Delete

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>>1900316
I'm working on it...

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!!g46065MZr+/ Tue 27 Oct 2015 12:04:57 No.1900438 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1900465

What's a good SFX for strumming an electric guitar?

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Anonymous Tue 27 Oct 2015 12:36:16 No.1900465 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1900470

>>1900438
Da-daaan?

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!!g46065MZr+/ Tue 27 Oct 2015 12:39:22 No.1900470 Report Delete

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>>1900465
That works. Thanks!

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!!g46065MZr+/ Tue 27 Oct 2015 12:55:58 No.1900480 Report Delete

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Placeholders for now. Things would have been a bit easy if we didn't bother translating every SFX.

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!!g46065MZr+/ Wed 28 Oct 2015 02:58:34 No.1900919 Report Delete

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Test

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Goggled Anon Wed 28 Oct 2015 08:04:12 No.1901000 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1901808

Some Aikatsu goodness from based Heebee
http://pastebin.com/LUn30rmD
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=53157588

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!!g46065MZr+/ Thu 29 Oct 2015 03:32:12 No.1901797 Report Delete

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Suggestions for 絶対食感?

We came up with "Has texture sense" or "Can tell by texture alone"

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 04:05:41 No.1901808 Report Delete

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>>1901000
First check'em, second thanks.

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!!g46065MZr+/ Thu 29 Oct 2015 09:14:59 No.1901910 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1901915 >>1901921

Translation suggestions for にかーんっ (Nikaann)?

Something like Otome presenting Seira to the audience. I'm thinking of "point" or "present" here. Any other suggestions?

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!!g46065MZr+/ Thu 29 Oct 2015 09:18:43 No.1901915 Report Delete

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>>1901910
Hold on, I think that's にゃーんっ

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Goggled Anon Thu 29 Oct 2015 09:46:30 No.1901921 Report Delete

Quoted By: >>1901922

>>1901910
Definitely nyaaan
Also typo on 'Seira'

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!!g46065MZr+/ Thu 29 Oct 2015 09:48:37 No.1901922 Report Delete

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>>1901921
Thanks for that!

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