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Senki Zesshou Symphogear GX

Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 09:11:57 No.1898047 View Reply Report Delete

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Only few more days until BD vol.2 on sale and only one more month before the Zesshoushinai.

More fanfics:
http://archiveofourown.org/works/4948906
http://archiveofourown.org/works/4995706
http://archiveofourown.org/works/4940938/chapters/11508415
http://archiveofourown.org/works/5010934
http://archiveofourown.org/works/5029114
http://archiveofourown.org/works/4837511/chapters/11581780
http://archiveofourown.org/works/5063335

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 09:52:39 No.1898082 Report Delete

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>>1898050
This intrigues me.
I want some Chris and Maria interactions in the Zesshoushinais.

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 10:26:09 No.1898094 Report Delete

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 15:27:03 No.1898295 Report Delete

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>>1898082
When they get more comfortable with each other, I'd like to see Maria join the rest of the Gears in being unable to resist hugging or rubbing Chris's head and giving her tsundere fits.

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 15:28:57 No.1898297 Report Delete

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>>1898097
Is this a "Tonight, /u/ " Pic?

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 15:33:17 No.1898300 Report Delete

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>>1898297
I saw one for S1 but I don't have it.

and it's weird getting use to find the Symphogear screncap folder since I added IBO and OPM screencap folders

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 15:55:40 No.1898316 Report Delete

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>>1898094
Maria looks a bit scared/worried there. Maybe because Chris is on her like a koala on a tree.

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 15:59:40 No.1898319 Report Delete

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http://www.symphogear-gx.com/products/GXpackage02.php
戦場の姫巫女、絶えず命を唱いあげる(絶唱)

So the gear users are miko, not valkirie.

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 21:34:20 No.1898583 Report Delete

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 21:52:54 No.1898600 Report Delete

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>>1898591
Is Kiri-chan being dumb again?

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 21:53:12 No.1898601 Report Delete

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>>1898583
Great now I want some ChrisMaria interactions even if I know the probability of getting them is on the negatives.

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 21:54:17 No.1898603 Report Delete

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>>1898600
Is water being wet again?

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 21:58:59 No.1898604 Report Delete

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>>1898601
Don't lose hope anon! There's still the Zesshoushinais.

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 22:38:33 No.1898621 Report Delete

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Anonymous Sat 24 Oct 2015 23:05:56 No.1898632 Report Delete

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the ending of gx really gives me mixed feelings.
on one hand I'm happy with how gay it ended.
on the other hand the entire second half of the season makes me want to burn all my merch.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 00:33:15 No.1898671 Report Delete

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Hey there again, /u/. I come from /m/ bearing another /u/ Symphogear fic.

http://archiveofourown.org/works/5063722

This time it's Hibiki and Miku's three friends, Itaba, Terashima, and Andou. Femdom, light bondage, and I guess what technically counts as exhibitionism.

Also I'm not gonna link it since it's not /u/ but on my user page there's two more futa stories since I last posted here - a HibiMiku one I wrote and a TsubaMaria one someone else on /m/ wrote and asked me to host

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 01:15:14 No.1898684 Report Delete

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>>1898671
Wow, that is long and I like it so far. Nice, dude. Now how about some lewd MikuBiki without a dick? It looks like there is none of that yet, at least among the crop of new fics.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 01:16:15 No.1898685 Report Delete

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>>1898684
Crap, these are in the wrong order. This one goes before that one. /m/ said that Miku is asking what Hibiki wants for dinner, and you should be able to recognize what her response is.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 01:20:03 No.1898686 Report Delete

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>>1898684
I REALLY want an excuse to call something "A Fistful of Zenbus" and you can't have Hibiki without Miku, so it'd be a HibiMiku x Chris three-way. I hadn't decided on futa or pure yuri yet, but I was leaning towards pure yuri.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 01:29:03 No.1898694 Report Delete

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>>1898686
Of coursr it should b pure yuri. Futa is a crime against yuri.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 01:35:00 No.1898698 Report Delete

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>>1898686
Chris was going to be my next request. Just for an idea, maybe do it in a different setting or with a different dynamic than that Plum doujin, which is a pretty vanilla threeway. Or do the vanilla, that's fine too. And yeah, my vote is for yuri.

Also DLA should illustrate some stuff from the three friends fic.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 01:38:35 No.1898699 Report Delete

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>>1898684
>Miku's nails
Well that's interesting.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 01:44:09 No.1898700 Report Delete

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>>1898694
But I like futa

>>1898698
See, the problem is I have a hard time writing things that get too kinky since most of my fetishes are fairly vanilla, or at least I look for more vanilla options within them which leads to the inherent problem of not really wanting to put fisting in something I want to call "A Fistful of Zenbus". If you read Sheathe for Spears, that's about as hard femdom as I can tolerate. Hell, if you've noticed my writing, you'll see that I get a little repetitive because I don't like to use certain words for certain body parts and I don't really like the idea of dirty talk.

Maybe I could do something with heavier exhibitionism or something.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 01:48:49 No.1898701 Report Delete

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>>1898700
Maybe make them bang at school? Bathroom, the roof, empty classroom or nurse's office would work.

Though I can't see a school fucking working for any more than two people and that would have to just be Hibiki and Miku.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 01:59:12 No.1898705 Report Delete

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>>1898700
I don't read a ton of fanfiction, but your prose seemed perfectly fine. Being moderately repetitive is better than being way too creative with terms, especially in a straightforward sex fic like that. And there weren't any glaring typos or grammar fuckups to ruin the flow.

As far as kinkiness, stuff like the one you just posted was to my liking- assplay, exhibitionism, and any other stuff that can be done with love. Maybe Chris is in a swimsuit and they're fucking her in and around a pool, or it's Chris and Hibiki teaming up to take Miku on after she just got done running and is all musky.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 03:13:57 No.1898732 Report Delete

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>>1898700
Would you ever consider writefagging Carol domming Elfnein? Looking at /a/'s previous futa drawfag makes me suffer from the lack of material.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 04:06:06 No.1898750 Report Delete

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 04:08:55 No.1898753 Report Delete

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>>1898751
THANK YOU

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 04:34:00 No.1898766 Report Delete

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>>1898750
I actually really want to see some of the gears getting longer lasting damage from their battles. A few cuts and scratches so they have to wear bandages in their off-time, reacting to pain when they accidentally touch their wounds and having ro clean them and changing bandages. Or maybe even a broken bone so they'd have to wear a cast for a while.

It would be really interesting.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 08:30:41 No.1898813 Report Delete

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>>1898732
I was trying to come up with something for Carol. Original plan was a "I've been around for 400 years and never known the touch of anyone but myself... Leiur, get over here" but doing something based on those Elf9 futa drawings would work pretty well too.

>>1898766
I'm still mad Shirabe didn't get a permanent scar from Kirika's zesshou.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 08:48:49 No.1898818 Report Delete

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>>1898813
>"I've been around for 400 years and never known the touch of anyone but myself... Leiur, get over here"
I'm pretty sure Phara "my tongue is longer than yours" Suyūf was the designated sex doll, but I can see this working too.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 08:57:22 No.1898823 Report Delete

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>>1898766
DMJii, Maria, Hibiki and Tsubasa they all wore bandages and were hurt this season. Hibiki even spend a bunch of the time at the hospital recuperating and not fighting, which was one of the most frequent complaints about this season, and you want more characters to be in that position?

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 08:59:58 No.1898826 Report Delete

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>>1898823
They all magically heal without permanent consequences. No scars, no injuries.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 09:00:59 No.1898827 Report Delete

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>>1898823
None of the gears ever bled outside of JAM time.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 09:05:50 No.1898831 Report Delete

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>>1898826
Phonic gain. It can even bring people back from the dead.
>>1898827
During G, Maria bled when Tsubasa tried to gut her, and Shirabe did when Kirika impaled her. They won't ever get scars or lasting damage, unless the plot demands it.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 09:06:14 No.1898832 Report Delete

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>>1898826
When do you see Precure gets scars or injuries?

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 09:15:08 No.1898834 Report Delete

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>lasting damage in mahou shoujo anime
Sailor Moon -> no
CCS -> no
Precure -> no
Nanoha -> no
Madoka -> no
Vividred -> no
Yuyuyu -> no

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 09:19:17 No.1898835 Report Delete

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>>1898834
Nanoha kinda does. Her serious injury and subsequent rehab happen offscreen, but the damage she does to her magical core in Strikers is the reason she's playing the homemaker role in Vivid.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 09:32:12 No.1898841 Report Delete

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>>1898835
We also know that physical damage depends on type of injury, especially since there are actual magic healer around. It doesn't compare to sticking Hibiki into hospital bandaged all over and not having anything to show for that, especially since she got hurt outside of Gear. The other examples don't match since they usually dont get hurt outside transformation or actually end up hospitalized. Apso just because ither shows do it doesn't make it better or safe of critic/wishes. I always like the explicit mention that for example Precia deliberately whipped and hurt Fate without leading to scars for "love" (no fate that is not a proof of love she just doesn't want to scar a body that looks like Alicias but whatever helps you sleep at night).

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 09:32:15 No.1898842 Report Delete

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Lasting damage doesn't have to be permanent.
More than one episode counts too.
Like a chipped arm bone so they have to fight onehanded for a couple episodes, as well as having to be fed because they can't eat properly without their dominant hand. I want to watch the healing process.
>>1898823
Hibiki didn't even have any injuries, she was just put into hospital for no reason for "health checkups" just to keep her out of action.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 09:43:20 No.1898846 Report Delete

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>>1898835
And that is only played into because the plot demanded it. They needed Nanoha in-base playing the less demanding role of instructor so she could form bonds with the new cast, otherwise how could you explain having an S+ mage constantly stationed.
And then in Force (lol) they forgot all about it and transformed her into a full time Gundam because again, she needed to interact with the new cast.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 09:43:32 No.1898847 Report Delete

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>>1898842
>I want to watch the healing process.
I think that will be very boring. A flashback is enough.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 13:30:19 No.1899007 Report Delete

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>>1898835
yes but her physical injuries left no permanent scars

>>1898841
Same with Fate, we see the marks of the whipping in season one but in a's they are fully healed and with no scars

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 13:34:00 No.1899013 Report Delete

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>>1899007
The TSAB has far more advanced technology that Earth, so that would also apply to their medical science. Also magic.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 13:41:07 No.1899018 Report Delete

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>>1898684
Translate?

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 13:49:07 No.1899020 Report Delete

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>>1898813
>I'm still mad Shirabe didn't get a permanent scar from Kirika's zesshou.
I was in that thread when /m/ was talking about it. You have no idea how happy I was to see you guys share the same sentiment I do. And I was also the anon who asked you if she'd have a scar in "Duet in Jii". I enjoyed that; gave me such a massive heartboner.

I'd be grateful for Carolnein anything, to be honest. I'm fairly certain me, the futa drawfag (whom I'm friends with), and one other writer are the only people in the English-speaking fandom who have ever produced any content for it. It's hell.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 14:47:13 No.1899066 Report Delete

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>>1899020
I was in on that too. I'm actually both the first and last post in that image. I'm glad you liked Duet in Jii, and yeah, the only reason I didn't include an actual physical scar was because we've been clearly shown in the show that she DOESN'T have one. That's why I pointed it out like I did in the beginning, too.

Carolnein is definitely something I can work something out for. Futa, pure yuri, maybe a little of column A and a little of column D alchemizing a dick on in the middle of sex, but yeah. I wanted to at least get one fic with each of the main girls before I started repeating partnerings (and I'm one of those gigantic clods who doesn't like to deviate from specific ships), so Carolnein and/or Carol+Doll(s) could certainly spice things up before going back to TsubaMari, HibiMiku, or DMJii. Just need to get Chris involved somewhere, too. Probably with HibiMiku since I was thinking about it this morning and I find myself liking the idea of Chris being an exhibitionist.

>>1898818
I was thinking Leiur because she's got to have especially dextrous fingers for all the shit she pulled with her coins.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 15:05:11 No.1899079 Report Delete

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>>1899066
Why not Chris joining Carolnein?

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 15:10:45 No.1899087 Report Delete

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>>1899079
Wait, when you say Carolnein do you mean Carol AND Elfnein, or the Elfnein-in-Carol's-body we have as of the end of GX? Because if it's the former I'd have a hard time justifying them getting into that sort of situation without someone breaking character horribly or rape being involved. The former I try my best to avoid and the latter I absolutely refuse to write.

If it's the end-of-season "Carolein" then yeah, I could probably work that in. Whether I do or not, eh, we'll see, since I'm probably gonna take a short break from writing fics as homework has started to pile up, but we'll see what happens when I get back into things.

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 15:25:10 No.1899108 Report Delete

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>>1899087
I mean Elfnein in Carol's body but now that I think about it, why noy both?
It could start with Elfnein and Chris and then Carol's spirit could join, or watch, or some shit like that

I am just throwing random ideas please don't feel forced to write any of this

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Anonymous Sun 25 Oct 2015 15:37:33 No.1899122 Report Delete

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>>1899108
>It could start with Elfnein and Chris and then Carol's spirit could join, or watch, or some shit like that
That could work, definitely.

>I am just throwing random ideas please don't feel forced to write any of this
Well I mean I am only gonna write what I want to when it comes down to it, but before starting on lewd Symphogear fics I'd only ever written porn once before and it was pretty meh. I'm not an idea factory and I greatly appreciate other people's input and suggestions. So don't be afraid to throw stuff out there, something just might stick.

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Anonymous Mon 26 Oct 2015 12:32:30 No.1899777 Report Delete

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How gay do you expect the Zesshoushinais will be?
Blushing faces tier?
Soft cuddles tier?
Lots of lewd innuendo Tachibana "Let's sleep together" Hibiki tier?

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Anonymous Mon 26 Oct 2015 13:04:31 No.1899795 Report Delete

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>>1899777
I'm hoping for all of the above.

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Anonymous Mon 26 Oct 2015 13:08:00 No.1899796 Report Delete

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>>1899777
Anything Tsubasa and Maria in London. Particularly if we get Hikasa and Nana brand engrish out of it.

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Anonymous Mon 26 Oct 2015 13:21:22 No.1899802 Report Delete

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>>1899777
Hibi/Miku cuddling for warmth
Maria saying her bed feels empty without Shirabe and Kirika in it and Tsubasa joining her
DMJii cheek and forehead kisses

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Anonymous Mon 26 Oct 2015 14:52:36 No.1899864 Report Delete

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>>1899796
I'd like to see Maria helping Tsubasa with her concert dress, and she can't stop thinking about how slim and muscular her body is while they're about to go on.

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Anonymous Mon 26 Oct 2015 15:08:03 No.1899868 Report Delete

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>>1899864
Ogawa teaches them how to slide on water and Maria slips and falls with her tits on Tsubasa's face.

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Anonymous Mon 26 Oct 2015 15:09:38 No.1899869 Report Delete

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>>1899864
>Maria getting all hot and bothered during the concert
>as soon as they're off-stage she practically tears Tsubasa's dress off her
And there's another fic in the queue.

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Anonymous Mon 26 Oct 2015 16:54:06 No.1899937 Report Delete

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>>1899777
I want Elfnein to call Chris "Yuki-nee" or "Yukinee-san" and see Chris get super flustered over it

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Anonymous Mon 26 Oct 2015 18:18:03 No.1899977 Report Delete

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>>1899777
HibiMiku stuff
Some of the events from the B-tracks like Afterschool Keychain and Pure White Innocent.

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Anonymous Mon 26 Oct 2015 19:44:11 No.1900029 Report Delete

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>>1899977
>Afterschool Keychain
I need this.

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Anonymous Tue 27 Oct 2015 13:42:34 No.1900515 Report Delete

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The OST from BD 2 is out on nyaa.

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Anonymous Tue 27 Oct 2015 20:21:26 No.1900691 Report Delete

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>>1900515
YES! It has that Wild Arms as fuck track in it

>18. 抜剣――ダインスレイフ
is the song

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 00:30:39 No.1900863 Report Delete

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So I recently finished this anime and Im happy theres at least a small community of it, even though I feel kinda out of place here. I like most ships but I prefer TsubaMari. It seems like symphogear does well in japan, so I hope we get another season. I read something about ovas (?) are we getting ovas?

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 00:32:22 No.1900865 Report Delete

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>>1900863
There was two little OVAs set at the beginning and end of G.

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 00:33:50 No.1900868 Report Delete

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>>1900863
There's two OVAs that were made with G, and we are expecting four with GX. The G ones are already subbed.

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 00:35:27 No.1900869 Report Delete

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>>1900863
Symphogear is typically accompanied by OVAs called "Zesshoushinai" that release with the BDs. They typically do a bit of world building and some SoL stuff. They're also in a chibi art style and have pretty minimal animation, cobbled together with leftover budget scraps and the love of the people working on them.

There is currently one for S1 and one for G (both of which can be found on Nyaa, though I believe G's Zesshoushinai is only subbed by [Anonymous]). With GX, however, we're getting four - one with each of the BDs 3-6.

Here's a sample of the art style used in them, though sadly Kanade does not appear at all in the Zesshoushinai.

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 00:40:47 No.1900872 Report Delete

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>>1900869
>Here's a sample of the art style used in them

and another

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 08:06:40 No.1901002 Report Delete

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Oh I see, thanks everyone for the information.

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 13:42:16 No.1901259 Report Delete

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Hey, /u/. Got another one for ya from your pal on /m/.

http://archiveofourown.org/works/5096315

Exhichrisionism! Yes, that's a stupid pun, I'm bad at naming things. As the title implies, it focuses on Chris and exhibitionism, featuring a bit of yuri with Elfnein later on. This story's a bit longer than the other ones I've written and, unlike the others, isn't just one long sex scene, but rather several shorter explicit scenes linked together.

Hope you all enjoy it.

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 13:54:25 No.1901277 Report Delete

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>>1901259
>i should be doing this at ho-
10/10

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 14:59:02 No.1901320 Report Delete

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>>1901259
Cute and good, anon.

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>>1901323

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Mugino Wed 28 Oct 2015 16:39:58 No.1901358 Report Delete

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>>1898047
I just notice that Hibiki can be our equivalent to Saitama, or maybe Geno?

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 16:41:31 No.1901359 Report Delete

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>>1901358
Fuck off with your fujoshit/shounen shit.

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 18:07:43 No.1901426 Report Delete

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>>1901359
>implying there's no yuri to be found

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 18:27:36 No.1901438 Report Delete

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>>1901426
Fubuki is cute as fuck in Murata's redraw.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 18:43:56 No.1901443 Report Delete

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>>1900863
>I like most ships but I prefer TsubaMari.
Don't be too loud about it, some anons might have an aneurysm.

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 18:50:02 No.1901448 Report Delete

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>>1901443
TsubaMari is the new darling pairing in Symphogear threads.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 18:51:55 No.1901449 Report Delete

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>>1901448
Well it is canon as of GX.

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 19:38:28 No.1901495 Report Delete

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>>1901448
I like them alright, but they're sort of unexciting to me in terms of personality and physically. Hibiki and Miku have been uniquely devoted to each other since the beginning of the show, and their dynamic is more unique and cuter.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 19:55:25 No.1901516 Report Delete

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>>1901277
>>1901320
I'm glad you guys liked it. Anything particular I could do to improve? Weirdness with my writing style or anything that just feels off?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 20:10:36 No.1901542 Report Delete

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>>1901516
Each scene felt a bit short. You could probably fill them out a bit more, fluff them up a bit.

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 20:13:31 No.1901549 Report Delete

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>>1901516
I'm going to have to second >>1901542

You need a bit more filling for your work. Like the end could have done with a bit more of emotion between Chris and Elf9.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 20:20:59 No.1901565 Report Delete

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>>1901542
>>1901549
Yeah, the ending was definitely a little rushed. I added that in after I wrote everything else, actually, since I realized I'd gotten to the end and didn't have a real sex scene. I just wasn't sure what I could do with the exhibitionism besides more Chris masturbation scenes, though I probably could have fleshed those out more, especially the one where she was fantasizing about Hibiki watching her.

If you've read the other things I've written, was it a problem specifically with this or with my writing in general? I'm just asking because this one could have suffered a bit because it's not just one big sex scene like the others, and it took place over a long time frame, so I jumped around a little.

I'll definitely keep that in mind when I write the next one, though.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 20:29:27 No.1901584 Report Delete

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>>1901565
As the second anon, I have read all your work and I can see that you're going for a more emotional approach over a straight fuckfic and that is really nice. However you do need to work on your build up a bit as I kinda feel like Chris went into embracing her fetish a bit too full tilt. A little more focus on the emotion in places you don't quite hit like with the finale of your latest fic would also do you some good.

However I am one who typically goes for longfics so my ideals for pacing may not be too ideal for your oneshots. However I will give your fics another lookover and come up with a more coherent critique after I shit out a rough draft for my english class.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 20:51:02 No.1901600 Report Delete

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>>1901584
I appreciate it, anon. My next story was actually gonna be a bit more on the straight-up porn side, but I could certainly try to put a more emotional spin on it.

I've written longer fics before (not for Symphogear), but they kinda took the wind out of me and killed my motivation to work on stories for a while after that. One-shots mean I have less set-up to worry about, and I don't have to worry about handling a long, consistent story. I just enjoy writing shorter stories more. I've also never had any formal training/instruction with writing fiction past a high school level, so any apparent skill is just practice and pretending I know what I'm doing. I'll appreciate any critiques you can offer me.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 20:52:30 No.1901604 Report Delete

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>>1901565
The only other thing I read was Beef Strokin' Off, which was pretty great. I think the problem is you jammed a story that could easily be multiple chapters into a single page.
Also, I wouldn't have had anyone besides Ero Elfu find out about Chris not doing these sorts of things at home.

As for more ideas:
An elevated walkway with large windows is closed for maintenance. Chris does a strip show and poledance for the audience far below.
A trip to the hotsprings gives Chris the perfect excuse to flash her goods at the other Geahs, with Elfnein the only one who knows doing so is turning her on. The two hang back after the others leave and do some fisting in plain view of the entrance.
Genjuuro interrupts an alchemy experiment and gets himself temporarily blinded. While he can use martial arts techniques to maintain combat effectiveness, he could use some help around the home. Chris and Elfnein volunteer; and if he can't see them anyway, what's the point in wearing clothes?
HALLOWEEN BONUS: There's a spooky ghost haunting the Geahs, stealing their pantsu (sometimes while they're wearing them, even). Elfnein declares herself and Chris immune to this poltergeist's influence but doesn't explain the specifics. The ghost is Carol, who is bored.

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Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 20:54:00 No.1901605 Report Delete

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>>1901600
I've not had any training past high school either. Hell the class I'm writing for right now is a prereq for the class that does offer training. I've just read a shitton of fanfiction and before that a shitton of real books.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 21:42:43 No.1901629 Report Delete

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>>1901600
>I just enjoy writing shorter stories more.
This works for me since I happen to enjoy reading shorter stories more.

What I'm saying is, no matter what you do there's always going to be someone who wants you to do something differently, so you might as well just keep writing the way you want. Concrit is one thing but don't let people pressure you into a writing style you're not comfortable in.

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 21:46:49 No.1901632 Report Delete

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>>1901600
>One-shots mean I have less set-up to worry about, and I don't have to worry about handling a long, consistent story. I just enjoy writing shorter stories more.
I know this sounds crazy, but have you considered writing a series of one-shots that are really only connected in very small ways?

Anonymous

Anonymous Wed 28 Oct 2015 22:03:37 No.1901644 Report Delete

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>>1901629
Oh no, for sure. I'm not gonna completely alter how I write, I more meant I was looking for general stuff. Like a couple people mentioned, something I could work on was fluffing up my stories, making them a little longer and more emotional is definitely something I can do. In fact, fluffing them up too much was what I was most worried about, since the last time I wrote porn before I started Sympholewds the biggest critique was that I got too wall-of-texty.

>>1901604
Yeah, Beef Strokin' Off could pretty wasilt be adapted into a longer story if I wanted to expand on the romance developing between the three. I like the hotsprings and Genjuuro ideas, but I don't know if or when I'll expand on Exhichrisionism though.

>>1901632
Well I mean technically at the moment the only two stories I've written that absolutely can't occur in the same universe are Sheathe for Spears and Visiting Hours since Hibiki's got a dick in one and not in the other. Next one would be incompatible with Sheathe as well since it's gonna be TsubaMari yuri. I could do a series of interconnected stories which would allow me to keep doing porn without having to focus too much on a story, but I could still hit major plot points like a proposal or a wedding.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 02:39:28 No.1901778 Report Delete

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 10:16:29 No.1901938 Report Delete

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I went and did a little fluff about HibiMiku. This is the first time I ever wrote something like this, I hope it's at least readable.
http://archiveofourown.org/works/5101769

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 10:46:39 No.1901967 Report Delete

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>>1901938
Occasional grammatical issues aside that was adorable. Now I want to see art of her wearing the collar.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 12:50:44 No.1902088 Report Delete

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>>1901938
god dammit that is adorable.

I need more jealous Hibiki.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 12:53:31 No.1902091 Report Delete

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>>1901443
You are not oppressed, anon. Stop it with the persecution complex.

>>1901448
For good reason. Yuri wise, it easily stole the show.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 15:12:41 No.1902175 Report Delete

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>>1902091
I mean TsubaMaria are more interesting to me outside of the show, but I think that these two were the strongest in terms of yuri this season. Not in this episode, but the other one where they inject each other with linker and have the cute hand holding. That shit was outright devotion to each other, while the stuff with Maria blushing was just cute flirting.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 15:53:01 No.1902197 Report Delete

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>>1902175
No kiss!
0 kiss!
Also Korean quality.
Hopefully BD fixes it by putting in a kiss.

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Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 18:46:41 No.1902282 Report Delete

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>>1901967
>Now I want to see art of her wearing the collar.
Drawfag, please.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 19:20:08 No.1902302 Report Delete

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>>1902197
>Hopefully BD fixes it by putting in a kiss.

Might as well give up hope on that now. It will never happen.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 19:24:22 No.1902304 Report Delete

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>>1902302
Even if you tell me it's wrong to hope, I'll tell you you're wrong every time.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 21:04:34 No.1902381 Report Delete

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>>1902175
But the process of flirting and all that is so fun.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 21:27:15 No.1902400 Report Delete

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>>1902091
I don't think I'm oppressed, it's just that the last thread is the first time I ever saw somebody get that frustrated over fellow fans liking certain characters too much, and I think it's funny, doubly so since I'm usually the person that vocally likes the main character over the side characters.

Anonymous

Anonymous Thu 29 Oct 2015 21:31:09 No.1902403 Report Delete

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>>1902400
You've clearly never been in a Madoka thread.

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Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 03:35:00 No.1902605 Report Delete

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>>1902304
>I'll tell you you're wrong every time

To each their own I guess. You're free to hope all you want. I just prefer to not set myself up for disappointment for things that are 100% never going to happen.

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 20:28:28 No.1902909 Report Delete

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Anything new on the writefag front? /m/ has been pretty productive, it seems, but what about our natives?

Anonymous

Anonymous Fri 30 Oct 2015 20:41:07 No.1902912 Report Delete

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>>1902909
I've been writing gay metals for another /u/ thread and working on the buddy-cop AU for /sgg/, so I'm mostly just lurking here for now.

Though one of my friends is trying to talk me into writing a Kanade/Serena thing sometime.

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