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>>24305222 Check out the catalog for a directory of fics from fellow writefags,
>https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1PtN4D_9CSw8JJ9uO6v0oQqdtKEkS8aFAvfxqI96XfSE/edit?usp=sharing >Can I post NSFW fics? Absolutely! There are no rules against NSFW text links.
>How should I post my fics? Please, for the convenience of everyone involved, link to a host like
Fanfiction.net , Pastebin or Google Docs rather than dumping your fics in text posts. This not only keeps the thread tidy (and keeps you from getting an infraction for spam), but it also provides a more permanent place to store your work.
>Can I add a fic I wrote to the catalog? Sure! Check the catalog for the submission link. In there, you can find a link to a Google Form - fill out all the necessary information and it will be submitted for review automatically. Technology is incredible!
We're also looking to collect ideas for fanfics as a resource for stumped writers. Feel free to throw an idea out there; someone may choose to use it themselves!
Ideabin:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1X072SSWulcC6RJRrPA6v9XtyohRybvMBl6Fh49wHsRw Topic of the Thread:
How much do you take Pokedex entries into consideration in stories? Factual, historical, or just made-up shit?
Anonymous
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>>24538957 So force the bump limit, right?
Anonymous
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>>24538957 Moth could just add it to the recap.
Besides, at the pace this thread is going, I doubt that there's going to be enough time to announce it in new thread, especially when bump limit was boosted to 310 Anonymous
>>24444571 Pls link best lesbian fan fics.
Anonymous
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>>24542029 This one is pretty cute and involves Courtney and Shelly from ORAS.
SFW
http://archiveofourown.org/works/2324615/chapters/5119592 That Guy with that One Ashfic !latXRxVvNs
>When a fic has good writing and pacing >But dies on the dialogue and characterization Welp another one into the trash
Anonymous
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Geb strolled into Cerulean gym with his eye firmly fixed on the red haired girl at the back. He took a few steps forward before a swimmer in the water swam a few strokes towards him. "hey, you can't get to Misty without beating me first." The man called out, before launching his Pokeball into the air. A flash of light burst from the ball before a Horsea appeared in the water. Geb grabbed his own Pokeball off his belt and clicked the button releasing his Pikachu onto the boardwalk that stretched over the swimming pool. The swimming trainer smirked before calling out - "Horsea, bubble!" The Horsea surged backwards before shooting a stream of bubbles towards Pikachu. Geb: "Pikachu, dodge it and use thundershock!" The Pikachu side flipped and jumped into the water narrowly avoiding getting hit by the bubbles. There was no movement for a second before suddenly Pikachu launched out of the water and jumped infront of the Horsea who was noticeably surprised. "Pi...ka...CHU" The Horsea took the brunt of the Thundershock and fainted. Geb: "Nice one Pikachu. Hey sorry guy, you should really try getting stronger if you work in a gym." The swimmer wiped a tear from his eye and returned Horsea to its pokeball before swimming off.
cge0361 !Xatu./qcKY
>>24540832 >>24541889 >Anonymous member of the peanut gallery shouting hoping to bully himself some free stuff to read a few days sooner. Patience.
Anonymous
>>24542250 guess it couldn't be looked over, huh?
Anonymous
Kuronata !!DgWI7MwW7Xw
>>24544361 As a matter of fact, I just whipped one up
http://pastebin.com/u9A0jQsk Enjoy
Anonymous
>>24544361 he just did. This one involves Serperior (yes, two anons made something involving the same mon).
http://pastebin.com/VzTsLcgZ Anonymous
>>24545234 >bullying the snek your kind ain't welcome 'round these parts, pardner
Anonymous
>>24543336 Poor characterization and dialogue tends to make for the least memorable stories that you can endure.
I find that it comes in two forms:
1) Characters all talk and behave the exact same way.
2) Characters who exist solely in emotional/mental extremes or are one dimensional. See: motherly mothers, asshole fathers, "strong" female protagonists, weak female sidekicks, apparently omniscient founts of (questionable) wisdom, damsels in distress (almost always a gardevoir/lucario), antagonists who somehow make it through day to day life despite being purely defined entirely by their puppy kicking interests, and so on.
That Guy with that One Ashfic !latXRxVvNs
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>>24545518 I was talking more about taking a Canon character and misrepresenting them.
Like for what I was reading it was Ash after realizing he really should visit latias after so long then immediately going completely robotic. Completely plain and stiff dialouge, non sensible actions like buying two tickets to alto mare, and just seeming like a pile of actions rather then a character.
Anonymous
>>24536179 Oh hey I wrote those. Except for the WIP though. That was a different anon.
>>24536330 Actually I had a great childhood. And I don't want to hurt pokemon.
>>24536628 I actually like writing these because it makes me want to comfort the pokemon in them.
I don't get off on this.
>>24545234 Oh i see that already got posted here.
>>24545324 Sorry. It was a request. I love the snek. In my top 6.
Anonymous
Vulpsis
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>>24545234 Ironically I recently wrote a fic involving grass snakes on my FF page
... But I won't post it here because
it's basically gay lazy smut cge0361 !Xatu./qcKY
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>>24546182 I suppose I was off of the mark.
I don't have the correct mix of degrees to handle this case study. :)
(Sighs.) I was speaking of the genre through the sample, not of the sample itself, but I knew better; that it would be taken as the latter, and that it wasn't specific enough and read too much like an example to apply to the notion I had in mind. C'est la vie. >>24546827 It will not be long.
All of yesterday's free time was invested in one of the many projects that have been of higher priority than writing fun fiction. Preliminary results are encouraging and quite nearly satisfying, and I will have more time today and tomorrow to play, so likely the project will soon begin. Anonymous
Anyone have that Frillish lewdfic from a few months back?
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So what do you guys think is more interesting, a slice of life fic about the underlings at a gym or an adventure fic about a sailor on one of the cruise ships? Got pretty fleshed out stories for both of them but can't decide which one I really want to commit to first. If it helps the sailor's main pokemon is a krabby and the gym in the other story would be a bug type one
Anonymous
>>24545324 it could have been meaner, y'know.
slightly NSFW
http://pastebin.com/TpdwpvxG heads up, someone else made this piece.
>>24547698 I think a sailor in the cruise ships would be more interesting to read personally.
Anonymous
>>24546182 so after you're finished with the sneasel fiasco, what's next on your list?
Anonymous
>>24549090 I'm not too sure. One anon suggested a fic about teasing a male Kirlia. But I'm open to ideas.
Anonymous
>>24549101 before that thread 404'd, I suggested the Illumise piece where Illumise flirts with other mons and trainer. Trainer, used to being a bit annoyed, decides to stop paying attention altogether, causing problems. I don't mind waiting if you choose the other idea though.
Anonymous
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>>24549127 Oh yes, I remember. I like that idea so I plan to try it out after the Kirlia fic.
Anonymous
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>>24485605 I don't mean to pester you, but how goes the writing process?
cge0361 !Xatu./qcKY
Attention Participants: Before I begin shouting out due dates, admit which weekdays are best as writing days. I'm assuming one unit per week, but two may be plausible.
Anonymous
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>>24550950 Need to know the topic first fam.
Choroy
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>>24550950 Shouting out due dates for *what*? We don't even know what's this about beyond "write".
Butler !!vQF061dDoa/
Anonymous
Anyone know any good dark Pokemon stories?
Anonymous
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>>24552911 This one dabbles in it from time to time, what with the story revolving around Hunter J from the anime.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10416023/1/Blood-In-Blood-Out Anonymous
>>24550950 Saturdays are usually ideal.
cge0361 !Xatu./qcKY
>>24557476 That's stereotypically informative, but it doesn't go into my project file because Anonymous isn't a participant after which I can indicate Saturday as a writing day. That's the whole point of asking; to know who writes when so that IRL schedules may be accommodated.
ToD !7GgavlwaS.
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>>24557529 I can write any day, but we seriously need to know what the topic is before even planning to choose a days to begin writing on.
Anonymous
Krouscht !!z8uXdT+pD7i
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>>24557529 Well I mean if that's the case, I'm really only open on Saturdays and Sundays, with Wednesdays and Fridays being Subject-To-Being-Randomly-Filled days.
That being said, that's about the best [ estimate ] I can give. The bigger the project, the more time I gotta dedicate, the more time I gotta displace. That's more or less why I'd like to know what the hubjub is, too.
Vryheid !!lz6U2pXS44Z
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>>24557529 any day before November 3 is fine with me
Anonymous
Unown
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Helping to speed this thing along to the bump limit with a new chapter of fic. One where there's a few more loanwords than normal this time:
>FFN https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11084689/21/Fledglings >AO3 http://archiveofourown.org/works/3465593/chapters/11747795 Anonymous
>>24552911 I know good dank Pokemon memes.
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>>24545145 0/10 needs a bad end
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This thread must DIE So we can start up a new fresh one and force CGE to tell us what he's got.
cge0361 !Xatu./qcKY
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>>24563583 310.
IT'S HAPPENING.